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This weeks (and I'm late on that) 'Fears' theme I loved and wanted to share my childhood fear of the dark XD
Rules:
1. Follow the limits.
2. 4 extras (Either 250 words each extra, or 1 piece of art (for comics each panel = 1 piece), animations are allowed but one would take up all 4 extras)
3. Prettying up is allowed.
4. Lets get spooky!
5. No offsite or off topic forms please. If the story is too long (shouldn't be) then you can link to it.
Username:
Name:
Gender:
Gender for breeding purposes:
Personality: (300 words or less)
Story: (500 words or less, tell me about their fears. What are they afraid of? OR are they the thing that everyone else fears? Are they the creature that goes bump in the night? Tell me their story and why they are afraid of the dark or why are they the reason people are afraid of the dark?)
Story 2: (500 words or less, tell me a scary story they were involved in)
Extras: (See rules)
Mutations:
Lion mane - Uncommon
Tail drapes - Uncommon
Slit pupil - Rare
End Date:
7/30/17
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Opera Of The Ripper wrote:I Am The One Hiding Under Your Bed... wrote:Username
Amxen no.XV
Name
Jack
Gender/GFBP
Male/Male
Personality
(300 words or less)
WIP... Teeth Ground Sharp And Eyes Glowing Red wrote:Story
(500 words or less, tell me about their fears. What are they afraid of? OR are they the thing that everyone else fears? Are they the creature that goes bump in the night? Tell me their story and why they are afraid of the dark or why are they the reason people are afraid of the dark?)
Fear is such a trivial word compared to what I do. I am terror.
WIP
Story 2
(500 words or less, tell me a scary story they were involved in)
Ever wonder where the Virtuoso got his start? Look no further than me, the Ripper.
WIP
Extras
(See rules)
WIP

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xNemo wrote:"I'm not a bad guy, am I? I mean, I have a short temper and can't control my anger sometimes, but that doesn't make me bad. Just as everyone, I have dreams and passions. Nobody notices, but I'd do everything to lay my finest goose feather on an old, yellowish piece of paper, just like now. My mind is a storm of words and expressions - they can't wait to go out, to be written, to be remembered. To spread across the world, all nations knowing my name... That was my dream. I wrote poems, love stories, drama... But most of all, I love fairy tales. Don't you know how it feels when your word, your book, you - made a kid laugh? That small, silent smile coming from such a pure heart... That's how you know you won. And in that matter, I've lost. Smiles were replaced with horror, laughs with screams, and hugs... I never wanted to have blood on my hands. I never asked for this! All I wanted was to be remembered, to live forever in my works of literature. Not to be doomed with some curse that took it all away. I'm the reason they fear the darkness, but I'll prove them wrong! For I still cannot control myself once the Sun sets, but I will be able to! I'm persistent at making things right, the way they once were! I would give anything to go back in time and stop this mess before I even accepted that deal. None of this would have happened. Maybe I wouldn't be remembered as the best writer the world has ever seen. But maybe, just maybe, at least one soul still holds my stories firmly and read them with the same passion they were written. And for me, that's enough."
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xNote; wrote:Two stories
are not connected,
they happened
as two different
eventsRhythmed, quick, nervous steps around the room. He could make a song on this beat, but it was not the time to be that childish and reckless. The Sun was about to set for what seemed the millionth time. The furniture around him was broken, the floor filled with scratches and splinters that didn't seem to matter to him at all as he circled through the room. "I tried everything, locking, tying... IT doesn't work! There must be something to keep me..." The feather laid nicely on a blank piece of paper caught his attention. He pulled some ink from the bottom tray and put it in the corner of his table. He took a deep breath before putting ink on the paper, with long and slow strokes becoming more swift and sharp with every word.
"Please, I'd like to apologize beforehand for any harm I caused to your family. It's me, Nemorosum, or as you people call me, the Bringer of darkness. I'm the reason you lock your houses, leave the lights on and fright the dark. All the mysterious disappearances of your kind - that was all me. I write to whoever gets his hands on this letter- please, I need help! I'm desperate! Only during the night, I'm the monster you know. While I was young, still alive, I was normal. I loved writing more than everything in life. But my foolishness made a great mistake. On dying bedding, I called out the name... It came, skull on his face, cape covering his body. I said I don't want to die, I want to live until I've reached my dream. I couldn't die without leaving anything behind me. It said it can make me immortal. It said people will be screaming my name. All that for nothing in return. Except for one little thing- he asked if I could walk children to their homes for it. Of course I said yes, I couldn't pass on such an offer. That day was just as same as all others. It disappeared, but I couldn't stop thinking about it. What did he mean by that? As soon as yellow rays of Sun stopped dancing over my table, I found out. Skull on my face, covered with hood, Only my slit, shining red eyes visible in the darkness. I was conscious of my deeds, but couldn't stop them. Kids left alone in the dark, they were its target. Bringer didn't care who they were, did they had a family... Once their time was up, someone needed to walk them home. To the heaven."
His eyes teared up. He felt like it was a stupid note to leave. It said nothing about how can someone help him, but he felt like he needed to write it. He felt like those were the right words to get to someone's heart. He rolled the tiny piece of paper, his biggest hope, and tied it firmly around his neck. The Sun set, but he was ready.
(500/500)"I ain't no mama's boy." The young boy's voice could be heard as he wondered in the middle of the night. "Pffft. No crybaby, that's for sure. I'm gonna show them." He pulled some papers from his backpack. He researched beforehand about the creature he wanted to encounter. And as he checked more and more boxes on the list, so did the fear within him grew. "C'mon Chad, you can do it, you need to show those losers who's the boss..." He wanted to sound brave, but he couldn't even convince himself. As he walked through what seemed an abandoned road in the forest he didn't notice the slit red eyes lurking in the dark. The Bringer was already there. Chad sat on a rock near by to clear his head for a bit. He turned on a camera he had around his neck. He loved taking landscape photos with it. "Ok, just, one, picture..." He shivered and sweat uncontrollably. He could sense someone was watching from the distance.It was a cold winter night, but he sat there- he waited. That one photo could change his life. People would see who he really is. But the monster didn't show up- not after 10 minutes, not after half an hour. It was time to go even deeper into the darkness of the unknown forest he was surrounded with. Dry branches broke beneath his feet but he pushed himself further. Red' eyes followed. Foolish, isn't he, for sneaking out. Don't they know what happens with rebellious children around these parts? Obviously no, because their bodies are never found. "Ok, that's far enough. I should hide somewhere." He whispered, hoping that there was no one else to hear it. And then he froze. His heart started pumping like crazy. Someone walked behind him. Someone with steps so heavy it could not have been human. He desperately wanted to raise his camera, click that button and run. But he couldn't move a muscle. Shivers became unbearable as he fell from the spot he stood on. The ground was so, so cold. "You know, I was hoping for more blood this time. At least I will not have to get my hands dirty." A deep voice spoke. All other sounds muted for the boy. Was this the end? He turned his head slowly, revealing a black silhouette contrasting the pure snow. And it's red eyes just gazed for what seemed forever. "Wh-who are you?" The boy spoke, still on high alert. The bringer twitched his head before he spoke. "Aw, such a naive child. Nemo, what do you say that I give you a chance to shine today? You're already familiar with my work." The kid was now just more confused and scared. He couldn't find an exit to the situation as this one no matter how hard his neurons worked. The silhouette flew around a meter above the ground.A loud bump took the kid by surprise. He immediately realized that, while the cape and the mask were still levitating, a black, hairy monster was laying in the snow. "Wow. Ouch." Another deep voice called, but with a much warmer tone than the previous. The monster raised from the ground. To the boy, it seemed gigantic. It stretched its back and reached for the boy. He screamed in fear, trying to crawl back from the creature confronting him. Nemo could sense the fear in youths eyes. "No, no, no, don't run! We're not here to hurt you..." Nemo backed off trying his best not to appear hostile. But the boy was still terrified. "Look, we need to talk. You see, now that you're." Nemo sat down as he tried to explain his appearance to the boy, but Chad had something different in mind. He tried to reach for the camera around his neck but with no success. He transposed his view from the monster he was dealing with to his chests when the expiration of surprise left his body. He... He was transparent. "No, no, no, no, no" The boy stood up and examined his hands like they belonged to someone else. "It can't be..." And the final detail caught his attention- his body, already covered in snow laid on the ground. Motionless.He couldn't bread, he couldn't think. "No, but my family, my friends..." He couldn't face the facts. "Listen, boy, they will be fine. Everything will be fine. You're dead now."
"No! I can't be! This must be a dream! C'mon, wake up Chad, wake up!" He shut his eyes as the tears finally found their way through. "Hey, Chad, right?" The boy just nodded whipping his tears. Nemo got closer in an attempt to comfort him. "I'm here to help you.You froze to death. What on Earth were you doing so deep in the forest at this time of night?" He hasn't spoken with a kid for a while. It felt nice, overall. The boy sobbed. "I wanted to prove that I'm brave by taking a photo of this stupid Bringer... What happens to me now? Will I stay like this forever?" His eyes widen as he searched for an answer. Nemo couldn't bare not to hug that child. "No, no, no! Don't cry, my boy. We'll set you up a nice place in heavens..." The pain this boy felt broke his heart over and over again. "Hey, you know what we could do to put a smile on your face? Whoever you were about to prove your braveness seems like a stupid guy, to ask something like this from you. What do you say to give them some spooks?" A laugh escaped between the sobs. "They were pretty mean, but they don't deserve that. Maybe just a little spook?" He gestures his hand. "Hop on my back. Be kind enough to show old Nemo the directions. It's been quite a while since my last visit here." The boy listened. It was a great night for both of them.
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