- username; sky--lines
name; luciana
gender; female
prompt;
Luciana had never appreciated the koi that swam in the pond near the castle, they had company, but neither had she appreciated anything but herself. she was selfish, and hated almost everyone, she was good with being lonely. Luciana knew nothing but herself, and the servants, she barley saw her parents, nor had she any siblings. Luciana was lonely, but had yet to notice it, her parents took her out to the village one day, she say young kalons enjoying themselves in others presence, she was so confused at this, why did someone need anyone other than themselves, it seemed odd at first, then she felt something that she hadn't felt before, jealousy. Luciana ordered them to bring her back at once, she hated the village people, and her constant loneliness.
Luciana grew older, and her loneliness grew, but to her, it faded. Luciana's mother died, and she felt nothing, no sympathy, she was lonely, and she had yet to know the feeling of sympathy, or friendship. Thats when one day she met someone, a boy, the same age as her, he looked like the koi in the pond, she snapped at him, waiting for him to tell her who she was, he said nothing, only laughed and beckoned her to play with him, she was confused as he started to run, waiting for her to chase him. Reluctantly she chased after him, and that day, her loneliness truly, evaporated. The boy began visiting often, and she began to call him 'koi' as he looked like the strange fish in the pond, and koi were a known symbol for balance and accomplishing things, she had accomplished her life dream, to be happy. Koi began to change her, she was more friendly, caring, and people began to not ignore her, or blindly serve her, but they began to like her. Luciana was no longer lonely, no longer a selfish, unemotional girl, she was loved, and happy.
Luciana went to go tell Koi how thankful she was for meeting him, how she had changed, and she was no longer lonely. She went to the small pond with the fish, expecting to see his smile as she arrived, but he wasn't there, neither was his scent, she was heart-broken, and then she finally understood. She started down into the pond, and smiled sadly, "Thank you," she whispered.
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