Re: Kalon #222

Postby Takk » Thu Jun 23, 2016 12:41 am

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He didn't have friends, the kind who asked how he was and why he looked that way. He didn't have friends who smiled brightly when he entered the room, only Kalons who kept around not to be alone. It was summer time when he met her, an elegant creator of color and radiance. He met a Kalon with white fur and peach pink markings sitting in the shadows of a willow tree. Her eyes were a deep green and he seemed to lose himself that day. They talked, laughed and shared stories while the day melted away like ice, to this day he'll never forget the experience. At sunset, he'd realized they hadn't yet exchanged names despite spending the whole day together. "Who are you?" He asked curiously, having never seen her before.
"What should I be?" She responded, lifting his paw in hers and lightly touching the trunk of the tree. "I've always wanted to be a painting, one that others admired even if they knew nothing of me." Her voice seemed to trail off track, but it had meaning he didn't quite understand.
Three days later he met her under the same willow tree with a sketch pad and pencil, something about her was different. Her eyes now seemed a sea blue, but she insisted her eyes were always this color. Lifting his paw again, she showed him how to draw gently and smoothly, tracing circles and adding lines into some animal he'd never seen before. "It's called a dolphin."
That was the last time he saw her; having few accepting friends he wondered if she was an angel sent to give him a gift. Drawing opened up a whole new world, other started paying attention and commenting on his work. He gained friends, real friends who asked him how he was doing and laughed with him. Friends who drew with him and showed him new skills; he felt happy for the first time since he met the white and pink angel.
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Postby danheng » Thu Jun 23, 2016 3:32 am

nvm
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Re: Kalon #222

Postby catdoqq » Thu Jun 30, 2016 12:30 am

"oh ms believer, my pretty sleeper! your twisted mind is like snow on the road."
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radi had always had that gut-feeling. to be more specific, a gut feeling that caused
her to feel..rather.. different. radiance wasn't exactly what you would percieve as
normal. she wouldn't spend time gushing over others, or sit around gossiping about
the latest trends.

instead, she'd spend her lack of time on gushing over the lights that would appear
after every single sunset, and disappear after every sunrise. she'd turn to the them.
the bright path of lights that spread out throughout the entire sky, the lights that
were so welcoming. sometimes, she'd just want to dance with them. they were
always so appealing. they somewhat helped radi believe that being differ-
ent was alright, not oblivious to the fact that every star was different, and
even if they were different, every single one of them was beautiful. rather it be a
bright, red star, which had millions and trillions of years spread before it, or it be
a dim, blue star, that would most likely die off in a few hundred thousand years.
it was all beautiful, wasn't it?
"your shaking shoulders prove that it's colder inside your head than the winter of dead"
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Re: Kalon #222

Postby armads » Fri Jul 01, 2016 9:48 am

    username : lumpoff
    name : Aalto, Finnish word for wave
    gender : male
    extra : it seemed silly, really, that a boy named for the sea would be so fearful of it.
      but when the tide washed in and all of the other young Kalons burst forward into the spray, eager to splash about or hunt for shells or cool their sand-worn pads, Aalto stayed behind. he much preferred watching from the safety of the shore, where a force of nature wasn't trying to pull the ground out from under him and sweep him away into a vast blue oblivion.

      as he aged, he outgrew many of his fears, such as thunderstorms, the dark, and the word onomatopoeia, but still his thalassophobia remained. he was never quite sure what exactly made the large body of water so scary to him: the sheer size of it, spanning seventy-one percent of the Earth's surface; the fact that powerful currents could strand or even sink entire ships; the existence of aquatic creatures with beady black eyes, poisonous barbs, and rows of sharp teeth. all were viable and likely contenders. however, the thing that was possibly the most daunting to him, a fact that he tried not to even think of, was just how much of our oceans remain unexplored and unknown to us.

      Aalto, above all things, loves knowledge. useless trivia, fun facts, and extensive histories are among his favorite reading materials. secrets, mysteries, or conspiracy theories, on the other hand, make him incredibly uneasy. on a particularly bad day, you might find him at his laptop with several tabs open and a long-forgotten mug of tea at his side, having spent hours wrapped up in clickbait articles about giant squids or other unusual lifeforms found near the ocean floor. as far as he's concerned, there's no reason for anyone to be worried about what life may or may not exist light years away from us. he's much too busy pondering what dangerous aliens might be lurking a few miles off the coast of his local beach.

      aaaa this is my first time applying I'm so nervous
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because you can't be as in love as we were and not have it invade your bone marrow.
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Re: Kalon #222

Postby Hobbit Geek » Tue Jul 05, 2016 3:20 pm

Closed for judging, will have winner up within the next day or so. No edited please or you will be disqualified
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Re: Kalon #222

Postby Hobbit Geek » Wed Jul 06, 2016 6:09 am

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First; Jakoya (jah-koy-ah)
Last; Calamity (kah-la-mah-tee)


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"I don't know what I had expected... it just wasn't this. She vanished without a word after saving me from... him. He was vicious, abusive, and no good for me. And she put it upon herself to save me. A stranger.", Jakoya looked to a poster on the stone wall. The vigilante of the kingdom had saved him from an abusive ex. And she seemed to be keeping an eye on him, all he knew was that he was alive, and so was she. Her pale eyes under the mask, her golden hair bound in tight braids as she battled. Jakoya twiddled his padded fingers, tapping them on the interrogation table. Because he had been a witness to the crime, he had been dragged in. He honestly didn't know anything, and he didn't want the vigilante to be taken into custody. She was regal, and just. He sniffled at the thought of having to live without his significant other but steeled himself as the questions went on.

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By the time the interrogation was over I was sobbing, I had thrown a tantrum in retaliation, and I was thrown from the building. Sent home with a shock blanket and a box of chocolate glazed donuts. I have ADHD and I can't have any more sugar than I already have today. Jakoya sighed heavily and regretfully pulled himself into bed, alone. He covered his eyes with the comforter and sheet before closing his eyes tight and clinging to the pillow under him. This was going to be a wild ride.

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The next morning, well... it was barely one AM. But the vigilante didn't seem to know the norms of the civilians she protected. There was a sharp rapping on the window panes to his left. Jakoya jerked out of sleep violently, fear clutching his sensitive heart. "Hello?!", he quickly rolled out of bed and lifted the blinds, to reveal his savior and torturer. Jak opened the window and let her inside," Wha-",
"I need to speak with you Jakoya. I apologize for the mishap with Wesley. But he would have broken you. I can't let you be broken of spirit. You're too vital to this kingdom's safety and survival.", the masked woman crawled into the second story window as she spoke. The darker, less clothed kalon stepped aside, letting the braided warrior into his humble abode. "What do you mean? How am I vital, I don't really care that you killed Wesley. I wish he wasn't dead, but he probably would've been sentenced the same in a court case."
"You're being watched by the royal family, you're a candidate for the throne. You, Jakoya are in grave danger, and must survive."
"Well that just breeds further questions, how am I royal blood, how do you know? Who are you?"
"It doesn't matter who I am now, I will be keeping my eye on you, and you need to stay low as possible. Do you understand my prince?"
"Yes... I guess I do."


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Congrats! This story was really interesting and the character idea you had for him was really cool <33
I look forward to seeing what you do with Jakoya <333
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Re: Kalon #222 - Winner Page 2

Postby r.ddler » Wed Jul 06, 2016 6:29 am

Oh gosh, thank you <3
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Re: Kalon #222 - Winner Page 2

Postby catdoqq » Wed Jul 06, 2016 6:46 am

wow, congratulations!!
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Re: Kalon #222 - Winner Page 2

Postby r.ddler » Mon Sep 05, 2016 3:36 pm

new owner is Lucy!
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