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Name - Fagan
Gender - male
funderful;; wrote:
username - funderful;;
name; fagan means "little fiery one" || originated from scotland
gender; male heterosexual || bi-curious
five word personality; dauntless - sassy - charming - ironic - fiery
story;*this is an exerpt of the whole story*
"All right, half-pint. Hand over the bag, and we won't hurt you." The viscet said, lashing his long tail, as he took one threatening step towards Fagan.
Fagan snarled and set the bag down onto the ground, then shoved it aside with his hind paw. "No, but I will hand over a broken neck."
The grey-furred viscet grinned, "Oh really? Quit bluffing, flea. Mind you, I'm going to have that sack of whatsoever, whether you like it or not."
Two of the viscet's followers chuckled and sneered, but a green-furred viscet piped up from the group. "Talon.. I think you should.. err.. back off. That viscet has a reputation, ya'know. I've seen him do countless-"
"Shut it, Frederick!" The grey-furred viscet called "Talon" rounded on the green viscet who'd spoken, snarling visciously. "I don't care what you say! He is going to regret-"
Fagan chuckled, which had a dangerous tone to it, and his snarl became a smug-looking smirk on his face. "This 'half-pint' does have a reputation. Yeah, I'm talking to you, bub. You can't walk over here all willy-nilly and take my sack, because that sack is mine, and if any of you mange-ridden pieces of dirt try to take it I will teach you a lesson- and it will be slow and painful. GOT THAT?"
Talon scoffed with a skeptical look on his face, but his three followers were hesitant to take one tiny step forward. The grey-furred viscet narrowed his eyes and wrinkled his nose, both in disgust and hatred, his ears erect and his body poised to strike. With a flick of his tail, he growled to Frederick.
"Alright, Fredrick. If you know this flea's repuatation, why don't you DEMONSTRATE?" Suddenly, Talon whipped around and sank his teeth into Frederick's scruff and pulled him from the group, flinging him towards Fagan.
Frederick yelped and skidded on the ground, slipping on dead leaves that crackled when pressure was placed on top of them. The green-furred viscet quickly got up to his paws, and fearfully glanced at Fagan, then at the group behind him. Their battle was quick, with Fagan pinning Frederick to the ground. He raised a paw, his red claws glinting in the sun, and let it dive downwards, striking flesh.
A shrill cry was heard from the trees, followed by crows flapping away from the scene.
Talon stared at Fagan, and ran away from the scene, followed by his two followers. Fagan watched them leave, his eyes grim, then padded towards the sack. With his forepaws, he opened the sack, and peered in it. Inside the sack, there were many items, but there was also a picture frame with photo of a viscet.
"It's okay, Mother. They won't hurt you now. I am going to keep you safe, no matter what.."
He turned his head around, then looked up at the blue sky, gazing at the clouds with a small smile.
"May you rest in peace, Mother."
done!
also, in case if you were wondering, fagan was born one foot shorter
than a normal viscet- basically, he's seven feet tall.
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sibreal checked his watch.
11:40
he's late.
eyes shifted back and forth, scanning the room with a sense of knowing. the familiar hum of a truck buzzed closer. his legs shifted slightly, not out of nervousness, but of apprehension. this was his work, day in and day out, getting supplies for a friend and returiniing to them with it. sibreal sighed when the truck pulled up, headlights on low beam flashing, signalling that the driver sees him. tightening the gold painted brass bracers on his hands he walked towards the target.
he was to get the supplies and return without problem.
the driver, from experience, was the problem. he was always late.
sighing softly, his earring dangled and flashed in the headlights as the man stepped forward. shaky and apprehensive. "here you are, everything he ordered." the driver's voice was shaking and breaking. sibreal narrowed his eyes and took the box from the shaking driver. still narrowing his eyes, he opened the box and checked everything over. coffee beans, creamer, sugars, the normal delivery. sibreal wondered why anteiku even waited until nightfall for the deliveries to come it. it's safer in the daylight hours, even in this part of town.
the quiet part of town.
sibreal shook the drivers hand, satisifed that everything anteiku ordered was inside. but it wasn't over. he still needed to return it to the man before midnight. it was 11 and midnight was when the baddies roamed the night. sighing, sibreal pulled the hood of his sweatshirt up and walked passed the driver, being sure to eye the truck out of the corner of his eye as he passed.
~
he arrived at 12:20.
he was late.
all because of that damned driver.
sibreal entered the building, and sat at the bar. sliding the box of goods to a busy anteiku. "here, the things you ordered are inside, if there are any problems, call me." sibreal muttered robittcally, seemingly bored as though the conversation was something they did routinely. anteiku finished cleaning the coffee cup in his hands and turned to face a bored sibreal. "thanks, i couldn't-" anteiku started before sibreal cut him off. "why do you need me to do this?" sibreal growled. his voice held an undertone of anger.
anteiku smiled. "your all i have Sib. everyone else chickens out. and the prices are better at night." anteiku mused as he opened the box to smell the fresh ingredients. sibreal rolled his eyes. "yes, but you miss understand. i'm no dog." sibreal sighed. anteiku looked up. "no, but you are a dealer. your job is to make deals so the rest of us dont pay as much. your my key to keeping this shop running." anteiku whispered as he handed him a large sum of cash.
"consider it a thank you."
*this is an exerpt of the whole story*
"All right, half-pint. Hand over the bag, and we won't hurt you." The viscet said, lashing his long tail, as he took one threatening step towards Fagan.
Fagan snarled and set the bag down onto the ground, then shoved it aside with his hind paw. "No, but I will hand over a broken neck."
The grey-furred viscet grinned, "Oh really? Quit bluffing, flea. Mind you, I'm going to have that sack of whatsoever, whether you like it or not."
Two of the viscet's followers chuckled and sneered, but a green-furred viscet piped up from the group. "Talon.. I think you should.. err.. back off. That viscet has a reputation, ya'know. I've seen him do countless-"
"Shut it, Frederick!" The grey-furred viscet called "Talon" rounded on the green viscet who'd spoken, snarling visciously. "I don't care what you say! He is going to regret-"
Fagan chuckled, which had a dangerous tone to it, and his snarl became a smug-looking smirk on his face. "This 'half-pint' does have a reputation. Yeah, I'm talking to you, bub. You can't walk over here all willy-nilly and take my sack, because that sack is mine, and if any of you mange-ridden pieces of dirt try to take it I will teach you a lesson- and it will be slow and painful. GOT THAT?"
Talon scoffed with a skeptical look on his face, but his three followers were hesitant to take one tiny step forward. The grey-furred viscet narrowed his eyes and wrinkled his nose, both in disgust and hatred, his ears erect and his body poised to strike. With a flick of his tail, he growled to Frederick.
"Alright, Fredrick. If you know this flea's repuatation, why don't you DEMONSTRATE?" Suddenly, Talon whipped around and sank his teeth into Frederick's scruff and pulled him from the group, flinging him towards Fagan.
Frederick yelped and skidded on the ground, slipping on dead leaves that crackled when pressure was placed on top of them. The green-furred viscet quickly got up to his paws, and fearfully glanced at Fagan, then at the group behind him. Their battle was quick, with Fagan pinning Frederick to the ground. He raised a paw, his red claws glinting in the sun, and let it dive downwards, striking flesh.
A shrill cry was heard from the trees, followed by crows flapping away from the scene.
Talon stared at Fagan, and ran away from the scene, followed by his two followers. Fagan watched them leave, his eyes grim, then padded towards the sack. With his forepaws, he opened the sack, and peered in it. Inside the sack, there were many items, but there was also a picture frame with photo of a viscet.
"It's okay, Mother. They won't hurt you now. I am going to keep you safe, no matter what.."
He turned his head around, then looked up at the blue sky, gazing at the clouds with a small smile.
"May you rest in peace, Mother."
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