[kiwi;;]

good luck all (:

[T h e M a r t i a n]

same. Good luck to everyone. X3

[Wolves of Rain]

Good luck!

[Lillybear]

never got to finish, oh well. good luck all!

[Cryptz]

aww snap! I finally had my art tablet working, and was gonna make art XD

oh well. good luck!

[SilverSamurai]

Okay guys- because this had so many great forms, I've decided to try something
different and give feedback to all completed forms! If your name/form wasn't
mentioned, then it didn't meet the requirements. I will be writing out critiques
as I am reading down the forms, so each sentence will be super fresh in my mind.
So, without further ado, here I go~

PikachuTori25 - MY HEART ASDFGLJ;LJDSF I loved her relationship with Milo and Nebula! I really am a sucker for cutesy/sweet stories and ships... It's kinda cute they they met by digging through the trash? #trashshipftw. aw Nebula tiny bab hhhh too cute. Everything was neatly placed and it was overall really nice, but I wish there was more about her as an individual.

Kiwi;; - Your introduction/top story really drew me in, and it was well placed. She is a very interesting character and I found myself enjoying the story as a whole. She gives off a mysterious aura and I'm intrigued by her. She seems like a very wise and trustworthy viscet, but not one who I'd like to meet in a dark forest as mentioned! V calm and gentle bab.

~IceFang~ - the beginning was a bit tough for me to grasp onto, but very creative. Oh boy, finishing it I feel like I've just finished a murder novel. I really liked the perspective and twist you put on it! I also liked the pirate setting, and I with it had a little more detail in it c:

T h e M a r t i a n - !!! another story with ships! okay maybe not... oH DEFINITELY NOT NEVERMIND WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO THE SHIP - I really enjoyed reading through your form, it felt complete and I was waiting for it to finish but you left it on a cliffhanger, leaving me really wanting more. Great character development too!.

Dalgony - the first thing I noticed was the coding you did, it really adds to the character of the form. aw poor hungry bab, the gifs are really well chosen and placed. Would it be inappropriate to say 'He shall hunt, Nevermore'?? I'm sorry not sorry BIRD FRIEND YUS - very neat! I loved the concept of it and the story as a whole, but I wish you would have mentioned something about finding/receiving the items?

Rainbow Noivern - A fed-ed plane pilot? They have those? o.o aaaah a castaway situation. Though short, I got a sense of completeness, but I really wish it was longer?

Wolves of Rain - oh no this one is gonna be rough, I can feel it. Poor scared bab be careful. Sneak level 50, go quietly. yay family reunions! ??? this story?? suspicious mom what are you doing? !!! That was such a great story and I honestly have no idea how you managed to think of it or write it out so perfectly.It was very well through out and complete!

aecian - aw ye you go. oh wait. om that poor bird, such a cute tale ;u; again, i wish there was more to it, but I feel like the story completed itself and there wasn't really need for more? well done!

Squeez -whoa whoa chill Almandine, so destructive. but they cute though. Again, I wish it was longer, but I see that you had a great idea going c:

iBrevity - The first thing I did was clink the song link- and it really says a lot about them and I liked how you incorporated it into your form. More crowwssss~ oh no this one's lonely. aw I'm glad she decided to help him. Your story was cute and had a friendly tone that I rather enjoyed c:

whew... That took forever e.e But it was kinda fun doing something different!
It's really hard for me to pick just one of these, so I'm forced to give an RU or two...

But narrowing it down, I have to pick one winner for this bab....


So congrats Wolves of Rain!
Like I said, your story was really well thought our and had a nice air to it, and I really feel like I just
sat down and read a novel or something. Really nicely done, and I felt drawn in from the beginning.
It progressed nicely and I really felt character development there. Congratulations, take care of Gypsy!



BUT I have been given permission to give out 2 RUs this time because i really feel like you deserve it,
so congrats Kiwi;; and T h e M a r t i a n! PM me with a bird of prey and items you would
like them to have, and I'll get to work if you accept the offer!


Again, really great work guys, and I wish you all good luck on future adopts!

[Cryptz]

enjoy em

[PikachuTori25]

Congrats Wolves of Rain! You may have the art in my form~ <3
And Congrats Kiwi;; and T h e M a r t i a n on your RUs! If you ever need relationship or friends to round them out as character, feel free to pm me! <3
And Silver, I'm just really glad you liked my story~ <333

[T h e M a r t i a n]

Ah! I am so glad you liked my form!! X3

Congrats to Wolves of Rain! Your form was beautiful, and I really liked it. If you want to be friends with my RU babe (( bird of prey buddies XD )) you just let me know. ; )
(( also, feel free to use my art. Purchased from MotherMothers ))

And, thank you so much, Silver, for the RU. And congrats to you too kiwi;;. As always, I absolutely loved your form. X3

Everyone else, this was a great compeition with someuch work from everyone. Great job!

[Wolves of Rain]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! I worked so hard on that, I was literally up 'till 11:30. THanks you thank u omg thx!!! Congrats to the rest and good job to all! I felt I had really tough competition with that one! And yes, for Martian!