[SilverSamurai]

[list][list]Username;; not a talking cat
Name;; daki
Story about me;; -cut-(500 words +)

Another FCFS~! But kinda more difficult

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Name;;
Story about me;; (500 words +)

[Synerie]

Username;; lady lightwing.
Name;; Captain
Story about me;; (500 words +) *pant*

[not a talking cat]

Username;; not a talking cat
Name;; daki
Story about me;; (500 words +)
Daki trudged through the dark cave, panting heavily. "Commander, this is a tough mission." He said through a walkie-talkie. "Soldier, you need to get through this one point, then it'll all be over." "But commander-!" "No buts!" Daki took a deep breath, holding it in. "Alright." He said lowly. Sharp pain rose from all over his body but he didn't dare pay any attention to it. He looked to his left for any signs of life, and upon seeing nothing but darkness he looked straight ahead again. This isn't as easy as the other missions I've done.. No wonder it was left for me. Suddenly, he could hear a loud banging. Startled, he jumped back; "Ack!" was all he could say as he fell on his back. He felt an eerie presence around him and he curled up, trying to get away. "Commander," he whispered into his walkie-talkie. "This is soldier one nine four zero calling for back up. Something is very wrong, there's a.. a.." he inhaled and exhaled sharply, fearing for his life as the creature in the dark growled at him. It sniffed at his neck, and the breathing felt warm. Daki sniffled, fearing for his life. Soon, the creature backed off and walked past him. Daki sat where he was at, not daring to move until he was sure the creature was out of earshot. Once the padding of the creature's paws was gone, he got up as soon as he could and pulled out of his walkie talkie. "Chief, commander, anybody! Are any of you there? This is soldier one nine four zero, I repeat solder one nine four zero calling for back up. This cave has some unknown creatures in it... Hello? Hell.. o?" he could hear no sounds, save for the beating of his heart. Daki could only sit there, thinking about what could have happened to his comrades and masters. Had the evil Luken broken out of his cage and attacked them? No, that wasn't possible. There was no sound similar to the Luken's growl or roars. "Daki!" The sudden voice caused the Viscet to jerk up. Gasping, he held his walkie talkie tightly. "Soldier, are you there?" "Yes, I'm here! Soldier one nine four zero is fully functioning!" His heart was beating so fast he was sure it was going to burst. "Are you stable? What are the statistics? Have you retrieved the Silver Kork?" the voice from the other end was rushed and didn't seem all that worried. "Stability is around five hundred. The statistics, not sure. Negative, sir. I apologize but I have not yet found the K-" Daki was cut off by the sound of his oven beeping. "Oh! Cookies are ready!" he grinned, jumping out of his imaginary world and into reality. He happily made his way to the oven, putting on the cooking mittens before taking the cookies out and placing them on the counter. "Maybe tomorrow the Commander will be able to yell at me for not retrieving the Kork. Hm," he shrugged, grinning.

TL,DR; he was imagining everything. the sound of the oven beeping cut off his imagination.
word count; 509

[9-9-999]

506 words.... Just missed it.....darn

gg not a talking cat and congrats

Username: 9-9-999
Name: Terium


Snow fell from the sky as smoke rose in a beautiful contrast of the forces of nature. Silence made the world have an eerie hue as Terium stood in the thigh deep snow, gazing coldly at the breaking world before him. Humans dashed about panicked as their small town burned to the ground.

The strike had been fast. A bolt of lightning shooting from the sky in a snow storm was the last thing anyone would expect to see, but Terium had sensed it. An electrifying buzz that started in his fur and spread around his entire body. Terium had been able to predict the precise location the bolt would strike along with the time. He had that ability since he was a child, the capability to sense something bad before it happens. He did it before the rabies took his fathers mind, he had it before the earth rattled and the trees fell. He had it before the wolves howled ominously as they circled the doe. He had it when the rock tumbled above him before crushing his tail. He had it when the rabbit dashed into the snakes pit on accident. He never had to see any of this happen, he knew precisley how it would. A blessing and a curse, though the way you view it would depend on the situation.

This ability had also kept him out of trouble. The instinct to turn around just before the cougar lept. The sense that something was wrong with the viscling with only one lung before the seizures kicked in. Avoiding the seemingly strong tree seconds before it toppled and crushed a small fox that had been wandering. A quiet screaming sensation as he determined which path to choose. A feeling of which medical herb to use to stop the infection. Knowing to run from the Viscet before it attacked. It was hard to catch him off guard, even harder to harm him when you held the intent for a while. Unless it was on a whim, you had no chance.

Now, he watched the city burn in silence, a buzzing feeling echoing in his bones. With a digruntled sigh, he ran foreword towards the city, towards the child trapped beneath the fallen planks. People shoved passed him, dazed and confused, some coughing up puffs of smoke. Dogs barked in the distance and a building cracked before tumbling down. He approached the planks and threw off the top barrier without hesitation, revealing the small, pudgy hand. Gently, he grabbed the child's hand and pulled them out of the fallen wood before hoisting them onto his back and sprinting back to the woods. The tiny body shook and heaved out smoke as he ran. People stared, amazed that they had not noticed the fallen child. Terium returned to his mount on the snow and laid the child down. He watched the herd of humans slowly make their way to the safety of the woods, and backed away to let the parents find their child in peace.

[Dawnslight]

Username;; Dawnslight
Name;; Beacon
Story about me;; (500 words +) work in progress.

[maritime.]

Darn, I didn't finish in time. Congrats though.

Username;; EverdaleDreamers
Name;; Zephyra
Story about me;; (500 words +)
(not sure if we can specify gender but I'd like Zephyra to be a male, for now i'll be putting they.)

When Zephyra was a young viscetling their parents abandoned them but luckily they were able to spend time with some humans to continue surviving for a bit. Zephyra didn't feel right staying with the humans so they escaped to the wild and not too long after they were able to join a pack. Zephyra did get along with some viscets and liked the pack but didn't feel at home so they left that pack and wanderered about until they discovered shiny human objects which they liked and a few places to stay such as parks and unclaimed territories. Zephyra made it a habit to collect many things they found and would go around the viscet packs' neutral territories and traded with them for foods, water, and other things. They enjoyed doing this for a while but felt really lonely and thought about looking for friends to start a pack/nomadic pack with them. Turns out that they couldn't find anyone who would be their friend and when they did they were not willing to join Zephyra in their attempts to form a pack.

[not a talking cat]

I'm not sure if I won for sure, but congrats to the winner!
and all of your stories started off great, I read about 1/4 of them all ovo

[9-9-999]

I'm not sure if I won for sure, but congrats to the winner!
and all of your stories started off great, I read about 1/4 of them all ovo

You got it (90% sure). Lady Lightwing edited in her story two minutes after you posted yours. I saw it as a wip and yours completed when I posted mine ^^;

[Anxioustora]

I'm not sure if I won for sure, but congrats to the winner!
and all of your stories started off great, I read about 1/4 of them all ovo

You got it (90% sure). Lady Lightwing edited in her story two minutes after you posted yours. I saw it as a wip and yours completed when I posted mine ^^;

agreed, i think you did win. Congrats! (maybe?)

[finifugal ✨]

aw dang, totally missed that by quite a few people! Cx
but, congrats to the winner! <3 i'll have to read through all the stories posted, just to satisfy my own curiousity.