here's your ru. If you like something changed slightly, feel free to ask
-I figured her scars would be smaller and more scattered about than the original, due to the wings shattering.
wings

--instead of the butterfly or pixie-like wings, these ones are like floating panels, two layers per 'wing'. they look pretty bird like and are mainly for decoration, and less for flying
-May I ask that you keep your weaknesses please? You may, of course, give her one or two more.
-I figured her scars would be smaller and more scattered about than the original, due to the wings shattering.
wings

--instead of the butterfly or pixie-like wings, these ones are like floating panels, two layers per 'wing'. they look pretty bird like and are mainly for decoration, and less for flying
-May I ask that you keep your weaknesses please? You may, of course, give her one or two more.