Plumerian #490 {Sushi Plumerian} by Syra

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Plumerian #490 {Sushi Plumerian}

Postby Syra » Thu Mar 12, 2015 5:07 pm

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Sushi inspired Plumerian!
With a octopus plushie on his/her head and a "seaweed wrap" vest/bodice!
Also 北海道犬 (hokkaido inu) inspired, with all that fluffiness and loosely curled tails, yes. ouo

About design & edits:
All the shiny on his/her markings is the markings themselves,
not shading, but the reds-oranges are slightly iridescent!
The ears are flexible and fluffy, sometimes flopping over.
The head and neck fur is also extra fluffy.
The tail [yes, extra fluffy] is loosely curled.
The legs are shorter than normal.
The tail feathers are not edits, just redrawn to see better.

To Adopt
This competition is going to be almost exclusively creative writing based
and consist of a series of prompts!

At least one must be done in third person, one in second person,
and one [besides the childhood scene] in first person!

At least one section must be answered in poetry form!

At least one section must be written like a script for a play!

At least one section must be written in narrative format.

Be sure to follow the directions in the form for each prompt!
All sections of the form must be done to qualify. (Including extras)
You may rearrange the elements to your heart's content.
Be careful to follow all the limits and expectations though!

Extras may be used to make any section longer,
but you MUST indicate that you used it in that section somehow.

Yes, this is supposed to be long and a bit of a challenge! >:D
Prettying up is alright, but will not affect judging!

End Date:
Undecided

Basis for Judging
I will judge based off of these criteria, some of them unusual to me since this is writing based.
-Correct grammar, spelling, and syntax.
-How effectively the prompts were used to demonstrate character
-How well the sections addressed their original prompt
-Uniqueness of ideas
-Realism: Does this character feel like they could exist or are they too exaggerated?
-Ability of the writing to hold attention. (basically, not too repetitive or needlessly over descriptive.)

Note: Word limits are hard limits, no changing or exceeding, but you do not have to reach
them either, as long as your section adequately addresses the prompt.


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[b]Username:[/b] [username only]
[b]Name:[/b] [name & short meaning; must be related to sushi in some way]
[b]Gender:[/b] [just the gender, no explanations]
[b]Sexuality & Them:[/b] [identify their sexuality, then describe how it has affected their life or what people it has led them to be interested in or have relationships with. 100 word limit.]
[b]Describe their Bedroom:[/b] [try to show character through this! 100 word limit]
[b]Conversation:[/b] [between them and someone or something else. try to show character through this! 100 word limit]
[b]About the Plushie:[/b] [what's with the plushie? describe it, explain its background, give it a name, whatever! 50 word limit]
[b]Hobby:[/b] [describe ONE hobby they have. 50 word limit]
[b]How they show Affection:[/b] [describe or show how the character acts when they care about another. 50 word limit]
[b]One Quirk:[/b] [look at and define ONE aspect of their personality/behavior that is uncommon. 50 word limit]
[b]Breaking Point:[/b] [describe what it would take to break the character. what scenerio would they be unable to bounce back from? 50 word limit]
[b]Childhood:[/b] [write one scene from their childhood using first person. 100 word limit.]
[b]Irritation:[/b] [describe one thing that the character cannot stand. 50 word limit.]
[b]Goals for the Future:[/b] [describe one thing the character wishes to achieve in the future! 50 word limit.]
[b]Extra #1:[/b] [written only, 150 word limit]
[b]Extra #2:[/b] [anything you want- Limits: written-200 words, art-1 piece, other-PM syra]


Syra wrote:
I Have no Idea if Anyone Was Wondering About this but...
where RU's are concerned, I wanted to say in advanced that there will be
no more than 1 rare, 2 uncommon, & 3 common RUs at the very most!

Also, RU's will be based off of Japanese foods, specifically:
Mochi, Dango, Taiyaki, Onigiri, Konpeito, & Sushi Rolls.


End Date Decided!
This will end The First of May!

Please remember that this contest is looking at the quality of the writing!
Going back and revising, reworking, and otherwise having fun messing around
with your writing can really help to make you form stronger!
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Re: Plumerian #490 {Sushi Plumerian}

Postby Fahloan » Thu Mar 12, 2015 5:23 pm

omg beautiful job on this cutie

i may enter, but i dont have the best writing :')
ill mark just to keep tabs though lmao
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Re: Plumerian #490 {Sushi Plumerian}

Postby rem sleep » Thu Mar 12, 2015 5:24 pm

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Re: Plumerian #490 {Sushi Plumerian}

Postby kayynine » Thu Mar 12, 2015 5:24 pm

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Username: Hello, I'm Tea., I used to be Gone Forever.
Name: Nori - Edible seaweed used in Sushi
Gender: Female
Sexuality & Them: My ears flattened. "H-hey.. I know you're curious but... Okay fine." I stuttered, glancing towards my sister with a look of faint fear. "I-.. I-I'm Bisexual. Don't tell dad, please! Y'know how he is... He could shun me and kick me out... I'm scared.. I want mom.."
Describe their Bedroom: Nori's bedroom is filled with lots of.. squids. Squid plushies, squid pillows, squid themed trinkets. If it doesn't involve squids, it's either a soft orange or an electric blue. She has several game consoles and even a corner prepared for cats or kittens.

Conversation: {with Aurum, when Nori was younger}
Nori; "Hi Miss Aurum!"

Aurum; {Jumps in surprise} "Oh, hello Nori. How's your mother? Is her cough getting better?"

Nori; {Confused look} "What? Momma is sick?"

Aurum; {Look of panic} "Oh, no, she just has a little cough dear. Don't worry about it."

Nori; "Why would I worry? She is okay, right?"

Aurum; "Of course she is! Nori, can you help me take these blackberries back to my shop? You can take your mother some flowers on the way back." {Slightly nervous look}

Nori; "Okay!" {Trots towards Aurum's shop}
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About the Plushie: Nori's mother sewed the plushie out of a shiny, silky material. Her mother never mentioned what material it was, but it was extremely soft and Nori loved it. She still owns it to this day, and never gets rid of it. The plushie's name is Ika, meaning Squid in Japanese.
Hobby: Nori's hobby is more of a job. She volunteers as a helper at a local animal shelter, and occasionally fosters kittens, much to the disagreement of her friend. Her heart is entirely set on kittens, and will even let them touch Ika. No one but kittens have ever touched Ika.
How they show Affection: Nori doesn't show affection in a normal way. She isn't a very touchy person and prefers to leave them gifts and tokens that have sentimental value to her.
One Quirk: When upset or nervous, you count the steps you take. If you lose count, you count backwards. Your attention will be locked only on the task at hand - counting the steps you take and how often you take them.
Breaking Point: Nori would completely break if someone broke Ika. It was a gift from her mother, who she hasn't seen since she left to pursue her dream. Last she heard, her mother was frail and quiet. Ika is the closest thing Nori has to her mother, who's been gone for years.
Childhood: "Umm... Mommy? Why are we going to the beach?" I had asked. What did the beach look like? I had no clue, but apparently mommy was taking me there. "You'll see, Nori! It's wonderful there, with seashells, and the sand, and the dark blue water.. Just wait." And so I waited, asking every few seconds if we were there yet. Mommy would just laugh, calling me silly. And when we arrived... She was right, it was beautiful. I, to this day, love the beach, even though we don't go there as much, like we used to..
Irritation: You hate when others touch Ika. It makes you furious, and sometimes you'll lash out at whoever was touching the plushie. What makes it worse is when their hands are dirty, or sticky, or wet! Poor Ika..
Goals for the Future: Nori wants to work as a game designer. When she was much younger, Nori's father brought her an old game console to play with. Nori found that it bored her with the plain, pixelated graphics and tried to draw another version.
Extra #1: "Nori, dear, come here." My mom's voice rang out through the house, gesturing for me to come see the small pink thing she held in her hand. It looked shiny, but it was soft and silky. "Momma, what is it?" She smiled down at me softly, warmth glowing in her eyes. "It's a toy, dear. It's a little squid. I call it Ika, but you can call it what you want." Nori hugged the plushie, beaming up at her mother. "I like the name Ika!" Nodding her approval, her mother stared down at the young plumie. "So do I."
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Re: Plumerian #490 {Sushi Plumerian}

Postby malarkey » Thu Mar 12, 2015 5:27 pm

whhhoooooaaaaa
oh man
i'm not the best writer but maybe i'll enter hh
syra
this design
i don't even
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さかな

Postby bambi, » Thu Mar 12, 2015 5:27 pm






























































































































さかな

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Username: bambi,
Name: Sakana,
meaning fish in Japanese
Gender: Female


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The Plush
On the shelf he sits, his head to the side
All alone and misplaced.
In his eyes I see the rolling tide
And the beach littered and defaced

I beg and plead, “Mother he’s so sad!
A new home is what he needs!”
But it only makes her mad
And so his little heart bleeds

I can’t bear to see a sad face
So I tuck him in my bag
And take off like it’s a race
Without waving a white flag.
(50/50 + 32 from extra 1)


Sexuality
Sakana found that she had no desire to be with anyone, girls or boys.
Some boys and girls caught her eye every now and then, but she never
wanted to be with them. Sakana began to isolate herself, questioning
who she was. She must be strange, she thought, different from her
friends, who were constantly talking about their latest crushes. Sakana
was embarrassed by her lack of attraction to others. She kept it a secret,
pretending to have crushes of her own, but it wasn’t long before her
friends began to notice. The topic of who-likes-who would make Sakana
shift uncomfortably and change the subject. Eventually Sakana hesitantly
admitted to her friends how she truly really felt. She was scared that they
would reject her, stare at her in disgust, exile her as an outcast, but to
her surprise, they smiled at her with the same friendliness they always
had and reassured her that it was okay. Sakana was relieved; perhaps
she wasn’t some sort of deep sea creature after all.
(100/100 + 71 from extra 1)

















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Hobby
Sakana has many hobbies, but
one of her most prominent ones
is collecting jellyfish themed
items. Sakana has many, many
objects in her collection, ranging
from lamps to pencils to stickers.
There’s no such thing as too many
jellyfish!
(39/50)

Bedroom
Walls surround you, littered with posters and drawings depicting life
under the sea. You rest on the canopy bed, lifting your feet off the
cool hardwood floor. Curtains are gathered on either side of the
headrest, billowing in the breeze. On the bedside table rests a picture
of you and your mother, laughing in the Maldives. The room is
illuminated by the light of your jellyfish lamp. You fall backwards,
sinking into the soft mattress of your bed and reach over, flicking the
lights off. Sea creatures begin to glow across the ceiling, a sense of
deep sea serenity setting into the night.
(100/100 + 3 from extra 1)













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Irritation
Sakana cannot stand being talked
down to. Sakana does not have a
short temper, in fact she’s quite
tolerant of nearly everything,
however Sakana has a deep-seated
disdain for anyone who talks
condescendingly to her or anyone
else.
(37/50)


Breaking Point
The most important thing to Sakana is
trust. She doesn’t trust easily, so when
she does, she feels like she’s giving
away a piece of her soul. To Sakana,
breaking that trust is like telling her that
she is not important or worthy of your time
or thought.
(48/50)

Conversation
]Sakana: [Close door] ただいま! (excited) はは,
did you know a Turritopsis jellyfish can nearly avoid death? Isn’t
that crabsolutely awesome?!

Mother: おかえり! [Puts a plate of dumplings and sashimi
on table]
And where did you learn this from?

Sakana: We’re doing a school project researching an animal
of our choice. So I dolphinately had to choose jellyfish. [Eats a
dumpling]
Who wouldn’t?

Mother: And when is this project due?

Sakana: [Shrug] I dunno, none of the otters know either.

Mother: Well, as long as you actually work on the project
this time, that’s great.

Sakana: (exasperated) Whale obviously I’m going to work
on it. Call me when dinner is ready! [Exits
(100/100 + 22 from extra 1)
























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Affection
Sakana shows affection by doodling her loved
ones in her notebooks. Sakana finds her friends
and family to be inspirational and thus puts
their faces to paper, often followed by cute
messages. She sometimes gives her doodles
away to said friends, but more often than not,
keeps it to herself.
(50/50)

Childhood
I sat in my mother’s lap, the book lay sprawled out open across
our legs. “Look at this hunny,” my mother’s voice spoke softly
in my ear as she pointed to the girl-fish creature on the page. I
stared, eyes wide with wonder as I ran my little fingers over the
shiny iridescent scales of her tale. She stared back at me, waving
her delicately painted hands in still motion, beaming at me with
a happiness that could fill the whole sea. Awestruck, I looked at
my mother, whispering with all the wonder of a five year old,
“I want to be a fishgirl too, はは.”
(100/100 + 8 from extra 1)













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Future Goals
Sakana’s main goal for the future is to become
a marine biologist who is able to travel to many
different bodies of water to discover more about
life under the surface!
(31/50)

Quirk
Sakana occasionally speaks with sea-related puns.
She does more often with her family and close
friends, but every then and again she will sprinkle
them in her everyday speech. It’s a habit that comes
naturally to her, just as the puns do.
(42/50)









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ただいま = I'm home
はは = mom (informal)
おかえり = welcome home
disclaimer: divider by magicalsushi
136/150 words distributed from extra 1
art by me
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Re: Plumerian #490 {Sushi Plumerian}

Postby blueh » Thu Mar 12, 2015 5:31 pm

Hgnnnnnn mark

my reptiles (aka my personal pets)
1.1 Uromastyx geyri, 3.1 Uromastyx ornata, 1.0 Uromastyx acanthinurus nigriventris, 2.0 piebald ball pythons, 1.0 puma ball python

i study lizards & bugs and like animals

Then they came for me—and there was no one left to speak for me.
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Re: Plumerian #490 {Sushi Plumerian}

Postby Traffic » Thu Mar 12, 2015 5:36 pm

mark ; u ;
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I have been inactive for a really long time, but I'm gonna try and start being more involved with this site. uwu
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Postby epimetheus » Thu Mar 12, 2015 5:37 pm

















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username:
glenn rhee
owner of three

name:
wasabi "sabi"
a green, very hot japan-
ese horseradish

gender:
genderfluid
they/their or xei/xeir
sex is unknown


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wasabi is asexual grey-panromantic.
this hasn't affected their life too much,
and almost everyone has accepted it
with open arms. they lost a few friends,
and when they did feel a romantic at-
traction they were always rejected and
let down due to not feeling sexual attr-
action. but since then their focus has
been strongly diverted from any relat-
ionships, so the topic of sexuality doesn't
come up much. it's just... a general thing
that has sort of always been there. and
no one really cares anymore.
(86 words)


your name is WASABI. you have a very CLEAN
and MINIMALISTIC room, including basic fur-
niture such as a WARDROBE, a BED, a few
CHAIRS, a CEILING FAN, and a NIGHTSTAND
that holds a LAMP. some CLOTHES lie on the
floor, and a few BLACK AND WHITE POSTERS
and FIGURINES, matching your MONOCHROME
color scheme, express your interests in ANI-
ME/MANGA. your favorite part of the room
is your PLUSH WHITE RUG. you have WHITE
HARDWOOD floors and WHITE WALLS as well.
there are TWO BLACK DOORS, one leading to
a BATHROOM, another OUTSIDE. a LAPTOP
resides on your MESSY BED.
(100 words)
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stuff here hell yeah
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i'm gonna put in all of the completed stuff below and then code it ye
conversation
[lights dim, WASABI enters]
WASABI: ah, hello zitao!
ZITAO: [grunts] aye. 'sup with you, 'sabi?
WASABI: not much, but i got tons of cute anime merch yesterday. so i'm in a pretty good mood. [smiles]
WASABI: oh, and you?
ZITAO: [shrug] sorta confused on what's going on with me and emmett. but -- but we'll work it out.
WASABI: you'll make it through, buddy! just don't do anything stupid.
ZITAO: [laugh] that's impossible. you know me.
WASABI: ah, true, mx. clumsy-pants! [chuckle and sigh]
[ZITAO'S phone rings]
ZITAO: oh, that's emmett! i'd better go, but it was nice talking!
WASABI: [nods]
[both exit, lights out]
(94 words)
about the plushie
your plushie. the octopus one. the one from your mother, a birthday gift after a tiring day in tokyo. the only memory that you have of her. an object more important than your own life. your best friend.
(38 words)
hobby
a thing you enjoy the most
a talent you like to boast
something quite odd to others
a talent passed down from your mother
gardening gives a sense of release
and plants give you peace
(35 words)
how they show affection
wasabi shows affection in ways that you might not realize at first.
their joking compliments, buying something for you when you're broke, taking care of you no matter what happened. reading you their favorite fairy tale, making you dinner, quick but meaningful gazes.
they show affection through the little things.
(50 words)
one quirk
most likely my most defined quirk is that i constantly hang things from my octopus plush. whether it be notes for later, things to fiddle with in case of boredom, or pens in case i need to write something down. i'm always prepared!
(43 words)
breaking point
"mom?" i call out, coming home from school.
no answer.
i drop my backpack and run upstairs to her room.
the door is closed, i knock.
no answer.
i go in and see her lying on the bed. she's perfectly still.
"mom?"
no answer.
my tears could have drowned me.
(50 words)
childhood memory
i trudge down the sidewalk towards the black car.
how did this happen? how could it? i could have been there for her. but she's gone now and i can't fix it. stupid wasabi.
i climb inside, seeing my father and uncle sitting in the front seat. "suicide... what could've driven her to that?"
tears push through and spill out of my eyes as the image of my mother's dead body flashes in my mind. my hands make fists, bunching up the fabric of my suit pants.
"no one knows. she always seemed so happy."
i don't stop the tears.
(100 words)
irritation
WASABI: [jokingly] if the food doesn't come soon i'm suing this restaurant.
[food arrives]
WASABI: yes! finally! [smile]
FATHER: [bites hamburger] mmm! delicious! [chewing loudly]
WASABI: oh god no dad!! dad please stop it's hurting my ears.
FATHER: [mouth full of food] what? my chewing?
WASABI: yes!! i can't staaand it! [groan]
(46 words)
goals for the future
get a pet lizard. or five.
high-five stevie nicks and tegan quin
crowd surf at a concert
become a sous chef at a popular restaurant
star in an action movie
sleep for three whole days
climb a mountain
visit an actual rainforest
ride on an elephant
name a star
(50 words)
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