Makoatl 256 - WINNER PG 5 by Alkene

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Makoatl 256 - WINNER PG 5

Postby Alkene » Sun Feb 01, 2015 10:20 am

A Makoatl is a terrestrial shark-dragon hybrid recently discovered
off the coast of the Greenland sea. They have the powerful tail
and jaws of a shark, with the body and (occasional) horns of a dragon.
They usually have manes, and are covered in thick coats of fur-
adapted to keeping out the cold in their native habitat.
They live on a diet of mainly meat and fish, and are known to be vicious
hunters! Despite this attitude toward their prey, however, they
are very protective and mothering to their offspring,
as well as to each other the majority of the time.



A baby for chu all ;v; I created a bigger guy and I fell instantly in love with him, so I'm keeping him. This little pup is his child.

This is a Writing contest and will end on February 20th. You may pretty up, but no extras.
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-Very grumpy, strict, but very protective of his child and has a soft spot for them
-Does not want his child involved in monster hunting.
-The red mark on both of their accessories is the family crest
-Is an experienced monster hunter (he hunts vampires, ghosts, demons, anything of the like)
-Lost his wife to a Werewolf
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Re: Makoatl 256 - UFA

Postby Ravendarus » Sun Feb 01, 2015 10:24 am

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Re: Makoatl 256 - UFA

Postby fruitbat » Sun Feb 01, 2015 10:26 am

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Re: Makoatl 256 - UFA

Postby PeanutButterRum » Sun Feb 01, 2015 10:41 am


























































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Username: Meche
Name: Adam
Gender: Male
PPS or growing?: pps
Relationship with Father;

I want us to be friends again. For you to stay for more than a day, and not leave me with my sister all the time.
I have found knifes and guns in your room, you won't say why. I love you dad. I please, let me have another chance.
I will go on trips with you and not complain. What happened to mom. I found her a mess one day,
saying she needed to get away. I next day she was gone. I have tried to stay brave,
for you and Karasu, but I am a kid, I need you to be brave for me.
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Re: Makoatl 256 - UFA

Postby koegami » Sun Feb 01, 2015 10:43 am

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Re: Makoatl 256 - UFA

Postby .sweetypie. » Sun Feb 01, 2015 10:44 am

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::Name::

Jace


::Gender::

Male


::PPS or growing?::

PPS


::The Story of Us::


Chapter 1: Preface

"Papa...? Mama...?"
I felt the hot tears slowly slip down my face as I called pitifully from the darkness.
"Papa, I'm scared..."
I could hear the shrieks of awful creatures, the ripping and tearing of fur and earth, but worst of all the cries of my mother and ferocious growls of my father. A glowing orange came into view and I shrunk back for an instant, before realizing what it was. The familiar glint of my dad's goggles had always been comforting for me, and I think it was imprinted on me in this moment of my extreme youth.
"Papa! Where's mama?"
I shrieked weakly with relief, my father picking me up in his mouth by my scruff. He went briskly through the darkness, almost floating past the trees that were nearly invisible in the darkness. It seems only minutes had passed before we arrived at our cave, and my dad slipped in, still holding me just a little too tight.
"Ouch, papa, that hurts."
He set me down gently on my mossy bed, curling up next to me on the cold stone floor. It seemed like forever to me, the restless little one that I was, and sort of still am. It was like the world had stopped; everything was still, the silence that hung over us was eerie compared to the roar of fighting only moments before. I snuggled up next to my dad, laying my chin on his large paw and looking up at him. I could see my own scared eyes reflecting back at me, one blue, one green, but not the emotions in my father's, the ones I wanted to see most.
"Papa... Where's mama? Is she coming soon?"
He stood slowly, his head hanging weakly below his shoulders, as if it was only attached by bone. He took a deep breath, and I could hear something strange when he did, like his breath got caught in his throat.
"Mama went somewhere else Jace. She isn't coming back."

Chapter 2: Strange Beginnings

I ran as fast as I could, my speed far surpassing that of any adult Mako. It felt like my paws never even touched the earth, I was weightless; I'm pretty close anyways, I'm kinda small. The ferocious and awful screams and howls were diminishing behind me, and I soon began to slow. I fell upon a steady trot and went to thinking for a bit.
Man, I sure hope my dad doesn't find out about this. But what's the worst that could come from monsters? I just destroyed a nest, it's no big deal... I just won't tell him, what he doesn't know won't hurt him, or me for that matter. I could just barely hear the faint crashing of sea waves in the distance, and I turned in their direction, heading for home.
I arrived at our small little sea cave, wading through the shoal in front of the entrance. Upon entering I skipped into the main cavern, disregarding my wet paws. I lost grip, and before I knew it I was sliding across the slick dark rock, slamming right into my father's soft, furry chest. He let out a gruff snort, looking down at me disapprovingly, as well as suspiciously.
"Where have you been?"
I could feel the sweat already begin to bead on my brow; it's very hard to lie to my dad when he asks strait forward questions.
"Uhh.. I was playing with my friends, down the beach near the wreck."
Phew, that was close.
"Then why did you come from the woods, and what friends were you with?"
Shoot shoot shoot.
"I was with Sasha and Jasper. I walked home with Sasha through the woods because she was scared and asked me to."
Everything was going perfectly, I was home free.
"Okay son."
I turned towards freedom, but felt a paw on my shoulder.
"It's a good story, but Sasha and her mother went swimming this morning and still haven't returned. They stopped by to invite you."

Chapter 3: It's Not That Bad

I understand where my dad is coming from, I really do. He's just trying to keep me safe, and his actions are valliant. I just want a little freedom to do what I want. He wasn't angry about me lying, he was just disappointed. But he wasn't angry about the monster chasing either; he was furious.
I've been stuck in the cave for a few days now, my dad won't even let me walk outside. I sleep a lot, and when I don't I lay by the mouth of the cave and listen to the mellow droning of the waves. He wasn't around much; he was out a lot, but always within earshot of the cave.
After about four days, I was ready to just leave the cave. Just as I stood up to stretch, I heard an incredible screech, one that shook the very cave walls. I ducked into a small crevice as rocks littered down from the ceiling, and just as I jumped a large stalactite fell in the place I had been occupying only moments ago. Moments after the piercing scream, my blood curtled when the sound of my father's mighty growl reached my ears. Heavy footfall approached, and I only moved deeper into the recess.
My father's mighty paws struck the floor of the cave, and he turned to face the mighty beast that followed. It was large, almost twice as tall as my dad, its sharp horns scraping the ceiling of the cave. Black scales covered its stout body, a body finished by a short, thick tail, weaved with large spikes the size of daggers. Its head was bulbous and seemed cumbersome, and its teeth glimmered with goo. My father lunged fearlessly, only to be met by a mighty paw, one that sent him flying backwards onto the cold floor. He struck the stone and did not move.
The monster stumbled forward, advancing towards my dad. I stood and lept with all my might, throwing myself between my dad and the monster with a mighty bark. The monster seemed to chuckle, and raised its paw, ready to strike. I did not budge, knowing my dad would do the same. Suddenly my attention was shifted as my dad was flying through the air over my head, landing atop the beast. He conquered the foe with ease, sending it running for its mother. My father turned and embraced me. I think that's the first time he's ever hugged me.
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Re: Makoatl 256 - UFA

Postby Amethysts » Sun Feb 01, 2015 10:59 am

      Username: Amethysts.
      Name: Kainda;
      means, "Hunter's Daughter."
      Gender: Female ♀
      PPS or growing?: Growing ♥


      Relationship with Father:

      Loyal | Caring | Short-Tempered | Love-Hate | Persuasive | Daddy's Girl


      Kainda has a weird relationship with her father since he is very protective of her.
      She respects him in everywhere of it, but sometimes the protecting goes a little
      overboard for her. Kai likes to experience new beings and exciting adventures, and
      being that her father is quite soft on her, she takes advantage of it. Kainda knows the
      crescent is a family ritual or emblem they all carry, and it kind of bothers her that
      'monster hunting'' is in her blood, and her father won't even speak or try for it.
      She understands it scares her father since he lost his wife, also known as Kainda's
      mother, but she wants to be like her mother and take in her footsteps.

      They technically have a love-hate relationship with each other, being she's female,
      She can get kind of out of hand with wanting to go on a monster-hunting with her father.
      Kai is very respectful and doesn't deny a single thing her father tells her about hunting.
      Being that her family knows they are monster hunters, she sticks with what her father
      says and doesn't put her noise within inches of a yes. Kai loves her father very much
      since he is her only parent to live in this world protected and loved.

      Kai tends to ignore her father when he gets too protective when shes out with her friends.
      She knows the reason, but it doesn't cross her mind of the dangers that lurk around her.
      Kainda is used to getting what she wants and when, but she doesn't step outside her
      fathers comfort zone. In her mind, when she grows up fully and has her own family,
      she hopes to teach them monster hunting, because it will then be in their blood to own-up
      to the family ritual and family past tree. Kai hopes to keep the monster hunting going for
      many years, but for now until then, she doesn't bother to do anything but sit at home and
      obey what her father says to her.

      Kai has a personality just her fathers, but more along the lines of a regular teenager until
      she grows up. She loves every piece of her father just not the fact of how controlling and
      grumpy; and mainly bossy he can be.



      I literally have no chance in winning. Too much writers block. Good luck to everyone~
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Re: Makoatl 256 - UFA

Postby yeena » Sun Feb 01, 2015 11:38 am

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    Name: bra'dach
    Gender: male
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    xxxDear dad,
    Hi dad ! Its nice to be talking to you again.. or.. logically talking. Not sure why I'm sending this as a letter when I live with you ! Heh, its who you guessed though- your son ! Only child ! I just wanted to question you.. really quick. You always are so.. mean. In public.. sometimes to the point of which you scare me ! I just don't get it.. could it be because momma went to live with her parents house and she left us ?.. will she come back dad ? I never knew her because she left when I was little.. but I would love to meet her ! I bet she was beautiful right dad ? She was the greatest mom out there right ? Hey, do you know where she lives ? Dad we could go see her ! I know she would be happy to see us ! I would be very happy.. I'm sure you would also. You had to love her a lot to make me right ? Right ! Now.. back to the topic of you. If its not my momma then.. could it be me ? Do I upset you to where you get angry at the public ? If you think your scoldings now are too much well your wrong ! I can handle them, just don't be mean to my friends at school please ! The teacher has already warned me about your attitude and telling me you need to stop or she'll " report you ".. whatever that means.. Honestly dad, I'm fine in school.. the kids that are calling me names still do it but when they do I always think of you ! Just because of the fact that when I told you the one time you came to the school and I was sitting outside of the class.. yet what happened exactly ? All I heard was a crashing sound and when you came out my teacher followed with a red face.. humph. Strange huh ?
    But again, if its not that then.. is it.. how I got attacked when I was young ? I remember those Makoatls ! They were big meanies that wanted to be bullies to me.. They attacked you once I'm pretty sure of it ( of how you fought them when you found them ! ) but they came into the house and locked me into my room ! Two pushed me into it and slammed the door and no matter how hard I tried I couldn't get out. Then all I heard were snarls, whines, yells and crashing sounds.. then you I could smell that you came home and it was really, really loud ! I don't know what happened. You let me out of my room awhile later and after another few hours you cuddled me ! Putting me in your lap and explaining that momma had left. I was just confused.. and I asked more then enough questions yet you only cuddled me more, tears running down your face and that scared me. You were always so strong, so powerful, something that made you cry was something.. dangerous. Something that I was scared of. I for once, wasn't feeling confident in you.
    Dad, if anything, I love you too much and to ever see you becoming distracted hurts. I don't get why you won't just tell me.. why you go away during the days. Why my big sissy is always watching me. Daddy I don't want you to hide things from me- I'm old enough to know things now ! I'm a big boy now.. your little boy. Little man. Dad. I don't know what to do anymore to get you to talk to me.. Your ever so protective yet you always are running off. Away from me. Your all I have left.. I don't have anyone else. I don't like to be relying on my sister.. please don't leave me like momma left us.

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    Leave him ? Was his first thoughts as he put down the letter on the table. What was he doing to his poor son ? The kid that he has let live a life that is a life.. a lie that will break everything. He didn't want his little boy to think he was leaving him with his step-sister too often- was he though ? There had been an increase in werewolves.. and god knows how much he wanted to destroy every wolf that even looked at his.. children. Dropping his rifle on the table he slowly maneuvered around the house with his goggles, going down the hall and to come a few inches from a certain door. His son's room.. er.. opening the door he peeked in to see his son sitting on the floor and doodling something. Hearing the door open though his son looked up and smiled, his shark-like tail wagging behind him and ears perked. He was rather happy to see his dad for once.. " Dad ! " was all he shouted while stumbling up quickly and going to wrap small hands around his fathers waist. Patting his son's head awkwardly he gave a crooked smile at him, " Been up to anything new Dachie ( Dashie ) ? " he questioned, bending down to grab his son under his arms and lift him up to where he was holding him. " Nothing much dad.. just been drawing.. are you going away again tonight ?.. Sissy left and told me I'd be fine. " the child exclaimed in a high pitched voice that would usually kill the elder water wolf-drake yet only seemed comforting right now.. but she left him ? All alone ?.. it could have possibly been because she had been cooped up all day.. he would understand but it depended on how long he left Dach alone. If it were for hours or more he would be furious. Dach didn't know about monsters and he sure as heck didn't know how to defend himself- if some unnatural being came into the house looking for food Dach would be a goner and it- " Dad ? " oh right. " Don't worry kiddo, I'm staying home for the rest of the night. " he responded in a gruff voice, rather tired from trying to hunt down a lone werewolf. Apparently this is what happened to monster hunters.

    But his son suddenly clung to him and he was taken aback. What was with this sudden emotional rush from his only boy ?.. " Dad. Are you okay at all ? You don't see me often anymore.. and you don't ever stay home. Your.. scaring me. More then your grouchy attitude. " again. Taken aback. Nobody ever said he was grouchy, if they did they would find themselves hanging in a tree.. but these words made his heart twist, which never happened usually because of the loss of his wife. Why was his boy so clueless ?.. Oh right. Because he lied to him. He didn't get that his mother wasn't living. He didn't get that his sister wasn't a birth sibling. He didn't get that monsters existed. The ones under your bed did.. all of them. " I'm okay Dach. You don't need to worry.. Daddy just has a busier job in his facility now that requires him more often.. " he replied guiltily. Another lie.. " Oh.. Okay.. " his son sniffled out and he noticed tears were pricking in his son's eyes. The feelings rushing through him were like the one's he felt losing his wife.. not again.

    Walking into his son's room, shutting the door and sitting down on his be he let his son cling to his chest. " Listen. Your my little boy.. but your not just getting upset and scared of me. I'm scared of you. Anything that makes my son cry is something to be afraid of. Your breaking me Dach'.. I don't want to see any alligator tears from mini-me. " he said to his son, pushing the child back a bit to see his red eyes, hands coming up to wipe his wet eyes. He never would do this for anyone else.. perhaps not even his step-daughter. " So stop okay.. Don't make me worry about you. " his son gave him a puppy-eyed look before slowly nodding. " Sure daddy.. "


    Later going into his son's room he found his son asleep and his adoptive-daughter in her own room yet he wanted to check on his son.. and with little investigation he found a new picture on his boy's wall.. and he though it would be something sad and depressing but instead he saw something quite opposite. On the paper was a scratched drawing of what looked to be him with Dach yet what really hit his attention button was the four words beneath the drawing, " I love you dad. "
    ... " and I love you too Dachie. "
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Re: Makoatl 256 - UFA

Postby freybugg » Sun Feb 01, 2015 3:03 pm

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