[Spare]

It's spam doing such things as "6th post on 5th page"...just sayin'. Mods could come along and lock this. ^^

[~ F o l t i c e ~]

I've been in lots of Equid adoptions like this. Not once have they locked it

[sailorsolarsystem]

I'm really asking people to give me crits and say what they do and don't like about it.

I know they can lock it, but if they do they do. I'm just hoping people wont let the thread get too spammy.

I just haven't got it in me to pick a winner from forms today and I go on holiday soon anyway >.<

[~ F o l t i c e ~]

do you want me to post the same crit over and over? Or do I need to post different crit each time

[sailorsolarsystem]

A different crit otherwise it does get spammy.

I might lower the page count so that the spam stays to a minimum. 5 pages is a bit much no? >.<

But for example people tell me to use different colours together.

How many colours do you rekon would be too many on one equid?

I like the simpler designs but I do think I should have a go at more complicated ones

[~ F o l t i c e ~]

alright then yeah 5 pages IS a lot....


But yes. I'd say you need AT LEAST 2 colors, but no more then 4

[icetea~]

wow he's gorg. you've improved much on the brindling but dont be afraid to really let it show..add them crazy squiggles and short partings.
maybe some patches like this? http://www.wolven.ca/higgins/ratranch/images/ruminant/brindle.jpg...and yes maybe look up some horse coat colors...you'll find such creative and unique coats..try this chart i know it really helped me when in doubt
http://gingingray.wantlesspower.com/Horseys.png A favorite of everyone is always whites,paints, and buckskins...and dont be afriad to shine and let you imagination flow...add some socks and blazes XD

[Zone_Perfect]

Oh yes he is so pretty.but try to have more brindling in small to longer stripes, and as for colors make it wacky and fun. I personally love those types as much as everyone else. Because we all want to stand out of the crowd XD but i personally love this

[icetea~]

wow he's gorg. you've improved much on the brindling but dont be afraid to really let it show..add them crazy squiggles and short partings.
maybe some patches like this? http://www.wolven.ca/higgins/ratranch/images/ruminant/brindle.jpg...and yes maybe look up some horse coat colors...you'll find such creative and unique coats..try this chart i know it really helped me when in doubt
http://gingingray.wantlesspower.com/Horseys.png A favorite of everyone is always whites,paints, and buckskins...and dont be afriad to shine and let you imagination flow...add some socks and blazes XD

[-Firesong-]

I do like him a lot, though maybe myself I would have added a few white brindles to make the design a bit more fun. Good job though.