by Ivara » Mon Apr 30, 2012 3:40 pm
Nice story, though I don't exactly get who the first people were, I see some of the different aspects of his personality in it. You certainly did finish it, you did an amazing job. c:
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by Stripey » Mon Apr 30, 2012 3:41 pm
Ivara wrote:Nice story, though I don't exactly get who the first people were, I see some of the different aspects of his personality in it. You certainly did finish it, you did an amazing job. c:
They were just some random abusers ^^" Sorry, would you like me to make it more clear in the story? c:
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by Ivara » Mon Apr 30, 2012 3:42 pm
Yes please, it would help if you could really tell who they were, did they take him from the wild and do that to him, only to then turn him over to who I assume is the vet to be sold afterward? Or did they hatch him?
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