Re: blank egg?

Postby Pika~Kirby » Sun Sep 04, 2011 12:41 pm

A little girl was walking in the woods one day. It was lovely and sunny and perfect to go pick mushrooms and wild berries. The girl who we may call Ribbon heard a rustling noise. She thought to herself *it must be a squirrel*. But yet she wasn't so sure. For the rest of the day she had the feeling something was lurking somewhere, waiting for her to find it. "I better hurry home"She said to herself and started running. It was not long before she stumbled upon a small grey egg. She stopped and picked it up carefully. It was dark grey with blue swirls on it and two slits in the egg. It felt very cold as if it was dead. "I can't just leave it here! I must take it back home and care for it before it dies!"Ribbon said and put the egg in her rucksack and ran off.

It was a while before the egg had hatched into a small furry, scaley animal. It has a blue made and the end of its tail had a just of fur. It had hooves like a horse and head like a fox yet it was like nothing Ribbon and her mother had ever seen before. As the weeks went by it got bigger and ice started growing on it till it was the size of a mustang or even bigger! Ribbon didn't know what to do with it. It was becoming to hard to look after and was rather violent towards her dog. It was not long before her mum went missing. Ribbon abandoned the horse, fish like creature. No one knows what ever happened after that day.
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Re: blank egg?

Postby eternalglitch » Wed Sep 07, 2011 8:16 am

The scientist stood in the dark room, the light flickering across his face. He bowed his head, watching the life monitor as it's beeps became more slow and jerkier. "I failed you." The scientist looked up again, and watched the girl struggle again, trying to stand up in the observation room. "Help me...." She sobbed, reaching for the glass window. "I'm sorry. I can't." The scientist turned away, tears starting to flow freely down his face. "I had hoped that the fish DNA would help humans survive as global warming sped up, but... I guess the human body can't take it. Even a young one that can adapt." The scientist sighed, wiped his tears, and left the building, leaving the girl to die.
She struggled to breath, and stood up, staggering around the room, and falling into the pool of water. There, she started to transform, becoming more and more fish-like. The creature that got up wasn't human, and leaped out of the room, knocking into the table the scientist had been at, spilling DNA over the creature. Bird, lizard, wolf... The creature kept changing, until the beast stood alone. Help me.....
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Re: blank egg?

Postby Shiko Hayashi » Wed Sep 07, 2011 9:53 am

A long, almost dragon like tail, whipped back and forth. A thick, almost spiky mane dominated the crest of his head and ran down to the base of his neck. He shivered and he arched his rump into the air, going down on his lean, and agile front legs. Paws kneaded the earth, the retractable claws itching to spring forth. His face, A slightly oval like mask with small, unique markings on it, was hidden from sight by the long, leafy fronds that dominated the forest floor.A crack in his mask was visible and beneath it, the barest glimpses of a pupiless eye. The small fox in front of him lifted it's head curiously. It had sensed his large presence around it.

He tensed his muscles, his pure white fur rippling, and he leaped, leaves bursting around him in a dizzying array of colors. The fox started off at a bolt, leaping gazelle through the forest with ease. But it was not the only creature with the ability of speed and sharpness. He kept close behind it, his body weaving between the trees as if they were small sticks and nothing more. The fox began to pant, it's speed decreasing with each minute as it ran. Finally, he managed to swipe at it's rump, sending it sprawling into the leafy ground of the forest. His mask's markings changed, showing a slightly more, almost happy, face made up of simple markings. The fox squirmed weakly beneath him and, with one last small squeeze, he lifted his paw into the air, watching as it raced away.

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Re: blank egg?

Postby Shiko Hayashi » Wed Sep 07, 2011 9:57 am

I hope you like it Sai.
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Re: blank egg?

Postby BlueEyedKite » Sat Sep 10, 2011 5:53 am

Deep in the amazon there is a great stone castle. Within the hulking structure is a great and powerful wizard. A wizard able to fill the eyes of children with wonder at the sight of his fanciful creations. High, high in the tallest tower of the castle there is a room so lined with dust that the dust bunnies have fashioned their own tiny lint town. It is inside this very room that one of the wizard's oldest creations lives.

On an old sofa, with stuffing coming out of two cushions, a great hulking beast stretches itself out in a peaceful slumber. It's a creature that looks like skin and bones with long limbs and a deep chest. The creature has a long, narrow face that could be described as sort of a canine-face but not quite. possible cat? possible lion? It's truly hard to decide. The ears are thin but with long strands of its fur hanging down along the edge. it's tail is also long and thin but with a curtain of long hair that drags down to the ground. It has four legs and massively large paws with long tresses of hair hanging behind the ankles. What's most peculiar is the creature is colored much like a wallpaper you would see in a cozy living room or kitchen. The design has faded some on its long and ragged form. Originally the old wizard meant to use the beast as a friendly sweep for his halls but has since retired the poor thing when strands of hair began falling out of its luxurious tail. It sleeps peaceful in the dustiest room, content to be with its dust bunny friends.

OOC: I left room for you to interpret what you think the faded wall paper pattern on the beast is. The face could be drawn any way you'd like since I was vague. I had in mind this weird creature named Lina from The Princess and Curdie book series. I never specified a gender and if you wanted the sweep-beast to come from an egg and be a baby you'd have to imagine it all up. I just gave you a nice starting place ^-^
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Re: blank egg?

Postby Pika~Kirby » Sat Sep 10, 2011 6:17 am

It was a dark and stormy night in Sigamore village, a place known for its mysteries. A young lad named Ben was walking in the forest by himself. He wasn't afraid of the lightning and enjoyed dancing to its deadly music. It wasn't long before he was struck by lightning himself and knocked out. He lay limp on the forest floor while lightning struck the ground around him.

No one had seen him in a long time so his mother went to the forest during a stormy night. She was careful not to get hit by lightning since everyone said it would kill a full grown adult. She soon came upon a black circle with something white and spikey in the middle of it. She bent down to the thing and saw it was an egg. She picked it up and put it in her pocket then continued searching for Ben.

When she came home that night she had found nothing but the egg.Lilly asked her mother for the egg, believing it was Ben reborn in a new life. She took good care of it and soon the white and spiked egg hatched. At first she couldn't see a thing but soon she saw what was a cloud with golden spikes. She thought it must be blind and deaf but she was wrong. She decided one day she had to throw it out and said to it "I know you can't hear me but this is no longer your home! Get away!". The cloud answered in a raspy high pitched voice "Dance to my deadly music or be fryed like a moth!" and with those words it struck Lilly in the heart with a lightning bolt from one of its spikes. Afterwards it disappeared into the sky and developed into a full grown MonZter. Now when you walk into the woods during a storm you hear that deadly voice singing "Dance to my deadly music or be fried like a moth!"
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Re: blank egg?

Postby Summer Story » Sat Sep 10, 2011 9:52 am

A young girl was out on a trip with her dad. Resantly moved becuse of work and dog and grampa died.Her dad was arege in every thing. Her dads name is Nigle he had short black hair. They were on a black fairy called the Doom. So the girl went out on a tour.“This is the controll room,” the leader said very loud. Right then she saw a twinkle. She over to it a chesnut and gold trimed chest. She opend it up and found a egg wich looked like it was made of jewls! Surrpienly light she put it in her poket .
“Land ho,” the captin yelled.“Shesh poeple need to quit down,” her dad said.“Your right about that Daddy,” the girl said. “Whats your name little missy,”said the captin said.“Missy she giggled,” missy had long strait hair and freckles. She was 4foot 3. “ Oh he giggled back,”“ bye bye,” Two weeks later at her house, CRACK woah CRACK“ what is that,” as she stared at the gold and oppel rubby and perado cardanal. what your name the bird said in telapathy. “Missy what are you,”“I'm Naleen the gomble ,”“ oh are you a boy or girl,”“Girl,”“ ok so would you like to be my companin,”“ shure i like you,” and still Missy and Naleen are companins to this day.
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Re: blank egg?

Postby .Apocalypse. » Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:33 am

Kiara’s eyes glittered with curiosity. After she stepped into this wide cave, she had discovered something……An egg. A huge solid white egg. Kiara picked up the egg. I appeared to be almost ready to hatch. The young girl admired it, before deciding to keep it. Imagine it! Her very own pet! But her mother wouldn’t let her keep it, so Kiara decided to keep it in the barn. The barn was in the middle of the woods, somewhere her mother dare not go. Kiara smiled. She picked up the egg and shoved it in her jacket, which she zipped up and wrapped her arms around before dashing to the barn. She found what she was looking for, the abandoned eagle’s nest. Made of straw and lined with feathers, it would be a perfect bed for her new pet. Kiara pulled the egg from her jacket and excitedly lay it down in the nest. She climbed down from the loft where the nest lay, and decided to try and find more feathers for the nest, because most had blown away. She stepped into the forest, letting the birdsong and crisp air calm her as she searched. She spotted another abandoned nest, this one of a sparrow, but it must have been abandoned recently because all of the feathers appeared to be there. Kiara pulled them out, one by one, and placed them in her jacket. When she had stripped the nest, Kiara ran back to the barn to place the feathers in, only to find them even more necessary. A huge crack had appeared in the egg, and another was forming. Kiara pushed the feather into place and climbed up to the loft. She sat next to the nest eagerly awaiting her new pet. Another crack began to split the egg, but as the shells came apart, Kiara gasped. A small, creature was now sitting in her nest. It looked like it had the wings of a dragon, the body and heads of a hydra, and the tail of a horse. It let out a tiny squeak. Kiara giggled. It was the cutest thing she ever saw! She scooped it up and cradled it in her arms, humming her favorite lullaby. The creature slowly closed its eyes and fell asleep, letting out a squeak every time it exhaled. Kiara smiled and slowly lowered herself from the loft, careful not to make any noise. She slowly stepped ou of the barn and closed the doors. She made sure to wipe her face of emotions so her mother would not get suspicious as she walk home. As she neared her house, Kiara looked to the sky and realized it was already dark. Kiara slipped silently into her house and lay in her bed. Her breathing slowed to sleep as she wondered what was to come.


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Re: blank egg?

Postby BlueEyedKite » Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:45 am

~Chloe~ wrote:Kiara’s eyes glittered with curiosity. After she stepped into this wide cave, she had discovered something……An egg. A huge solid white egg. Kiara picked up the egg. I appeared to be almost ready to hatch. The young girl admired it, before deciding to keep it. Imagine it! Her very own pet! But her mother wouldn’t let her keep it, so Kiara decided to keep it in the barn. The barn was in the middle of the woods, somewhere her mother dare not go. Kiara smiled. She picked up the egg and shoved it in her jacket, which she zipped up and wrapped her arms around before dashing to the barn. She found what she was looking for, the abandoned eagle’s nest. Made of straw and lined with feathers, it would be a perfect bed for her new pet. Kiara pulled the egg from her jacket and excitedly lay it down in the nest. She climbed down from the loft where the nest lay, and decided to try and find more feathers for the nest, because most had blown away. She stepped into the forest, letting the birdsong and crisp air calm her as she searched. She spotted another abandoned nest, this one of a sparrow, but it must have been abandoned recently because all of the feathers appeared to be there. Kiara pulled them out, one by one, and placed them in her jacket. When she had stripped the nest, Kiara ran back to the barn to place the feathers in, only to find them even more necessary. A huge crack had appeared in the egg, and another was forming. Kiara pushed the feather into place and climbed up to the loft. She sat next to the nest eagerly awaiting her new pet. Another crack began to split the egg, but as the shells came apart, Kiara gasped. A small, white dragon was now sitting in her nest. It let out a tiny squeak. Kiara giggled. It was the cutest thing she ever saw! She scooped it up and cradled it in her arms, humming her favorite lullaby. The dragon slowly closed its eyes and fell asleep, letting out a squeak every time it exhaled. Kiara smiled and slowly lowered herself from the loft, careful not to make any noise. She slowly stepped ou of the barn and closed the doors. She made sure to wipe her face of emotions so her mother would not get suspicious as she walk home. As she neared her house, Kiara looked to the sky and realized it was already dark. Kiara slipped silently into her house and lay in her bed. Her breathing slowed to sleep as she wondered what was to come.


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I think this story is precious and sincere. Even if it takes a while I think you should continue to write because the more you write the better you'll get ^-^

As far as this contest though, Sai doesn't want "the monzter to be a pre-existing creature (so no dragons, wolfs or unicorns)" so you might want to edit your creature a good deal if your goal is to win. You have a good start though c: do something with that feather!
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Re: blank egg?

Postby .Apocalypse. » Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:49 am

Fixed. And thanks, If anyone wants chapter two, PM me!
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