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“Come on, Snowshoe! Let’s show these apprentices who’s the best at catching rabbits!” Marshrunner purred, already haring after the fleeing prey.
He sighed, knowing his friend too well, knowing it was a ploy to goof around, but gave chase anyway. At first he only jogged, figuring Marshrunner would swerve in front of the rabbit, making it turn and race right into Snowshoe’s paws. But the tom turned back, calling “Race me!”, a smirk on his jaws as he sped up.
The wind buffeted his face as Snowshoe picked up the pace, extending his legs further with every bound, his breathing speeding up as he made every effort to catch up. Marshrunner had the advantage, having started first, but Snowshoe was already gaining. He was sure the apprentices on their patrol were already far behind, and soon the river came into view. The rabbit swerved, and so did the two toms.
They were running along a small stretch of field, bordered by the river on one side and the forest on the other. Snowshoe was alongside Marshrunner now, his muscles aching as he tried to pick up the pace and surpass him. The strip of field got thinner and thinner, their pelts closer and closer. Snowshoe clenched his teeth as each bound made his legs scream more and more, everything, except his prey, seeming to blur.
Until he heard a screech.
He stopped, his momentum making him fall as the rabbit hared away into the forest. He looked around, his eyes slowly but surely landing on the river. Brown fur flailed in the water. White eyes flashed. A desperate “Snowshoe!” Echoed through the air, before the water grew still.
It all hit him at once. Snowshoe had knocked his best friend into the river. Marshrunner couldn’t swim.
He clambered up, desperately trying to get to the water on wobbly legs, before he collapsed. The patrol caught up to him, and he cried out, “Marshrunner! He’s in the river, please, please help me get to the river, I-”
He was silenced by another warrior on the patrol. “You’re too tired to swim- you can hardly stand. Stay.” Before he could protest, they leapt into the water, leaving him alone on the shore.
Marshrunner was never found. The clan felt his loss horribly, though no cat, besides himself, ever blamed Snowshoe for the accident.










eldritch hound wrote:Username: angel bugs
Cat Name: scorchchaser
Gender: agender
Rank: fighter
Clan: mothclan
Age: thirty two months
Prompt: ,,six hundred and seventy five words,,
scorchpaw was so excited, they couldn't contain their anticipation as they hopped from one paw to the other, standing in front of their young leader, as she stared down at the two calicos before him, eyes gleaming with pride. it was the day these mirrored cats became warriors. they had both reached the age of twelve months and had excelled at their exams with flying colours and were ready to be given their warrior names (it also helped that this was carrionhornets first time hosting a ceremony since his ascension) so tensions and exhilaration was running high with everybody.
it was that evening when the moon was high and the winds were calm, when the newly named scorchchaser and maplewing ventured out of the camp and into the dark surroundings of the forest encompassing them. it was cold and the pair wasn't paying much attention to their environment, bouncing around each other in excitement and exhilaration of being beyond the confides of the camp without the supervision of an adult because THEY were adults.
the pair were out giggling and wriggling and jumping around, oblivious to the approaching dangers of a four legged friend. it wasn't until a particularly loud snap of a branch broken caught their attention that they looked around and by then, it was already too late: standing above them, drool slipping from the great beasts lips like a waterfall over rocks was a giant galumphing dog, deep brown, almost black, eyes glared down at the two cats with a crazed fervour that screamed danger
the siblings were frozen in place, staring back up at the beast as it stared at them.
there was a blur of movement,
a flurry of white and black and brown and orange as everybody moved at the same time.
and three things happened at once, complete with a harsh cacophony of sound:1) the lunging of the dog, yellowed teeth bared and jaws snapping towards the last whispers of a cats tail fleeing the scene,
2) the scraping of claws against an oak trees trunk as somebody tries to gain purchase of bark hugged in ivy
and 3) a spattering of crimson against the green foliage of a forest in summer
all of this was punctuated by a gut-wrenching scream of agony and fear. all while scorchchaser watched the scene. their eyes as wide as the moon as they watched their brother get ragdolled around the forest clearing, spraying the green with a dark liquid that glistened in the star light. it took a couple of minutes before the dog got fed up with its new toy and having thankfully forgotten all about the second cat that had scampered off.
it was a few heartbeats more before scorchchaser found the courage to creep back down the ivy covered tree, their white fur picking up stray splotches of red, not that they cared, their eyes trained on the limp body that was their brother. they didn't move until morning when the hunting patrol was sent out.
they weren't blamed for their siblings death, although, even if she didn't say it, they were pretty sure their mother held a strong resentment towards them for not at least trying to help their twin, even if it had meant scorch chasers death too.
but it didn't really matter what other people thought about their actions. its was always there. under the surface and at the back of their mind. especially when they sleep, where her brother lays in wait, in a pool of glistening wet, where it twitches with the last morsel of life leaves his body, with a croaked 'you' and a narrowing of eyes and a glare of resentment.
when they're out on patrol, which they often do alone, to try and spare the lives of the rest of their clanmates, they still feel the eyes of their brother out in the forest, between the foliage and leaves of the underbrush, taunting them, blaming them, making sure they *know* that he's no longer there because of their cowardice.(( -- this is much longer than I thought it would be, sorry, ^^ ))







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