Re: SFA - #0027 - Belgian Shepherd

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Re: SFA - #0027 - Belgian Shepherd

Postby /nyx. » Fri Mar 13, 2020 9:06 am

Username - bmkmb
Name - Jun
Gender - female
Storage Thread - Firelight Mansion
Pet or Stray? - Pet
Collar/Harness - dark blue collar with copper buttons
Prompt - She had three pups - three beautiful pups - but something must've gone wrong. She was right there when they took them away from her. They shouldn't have - they were hers - but they did it anyway. They didn't care. It was just wrong, wrong, wrong.

"Dartrix, get over here!" a female pup laughed at her brother.

A male pup grinned at the sound, then turned it into a smirk. "What if I say 'no,' Delphi," the pup teased, rolling a small, red ball under his paw.

Delphi laughed, "Then I'm going to take the toy away from you!"

From the couch in the living room, Jun watched this scene unfold. There hadn't been a quiet day in the house after she birthed her pups, but it was worth it. Dartrix and Delphi went at each other often, but all with good intent.

Her third pup, Mateo, was curled up next to her. Don't tell anyone - Jun loved all her pups, but Mateo was special. He wasn't outgoing like the other two, but reserved.

"Mother, they're being too loud," Mateo said, although a smile was tugging at his lips.

"They're always loud, Matty," Jun pointed out, a similar smile appearing onher face.

Suddenly, the back door opened and Jun stood up. Two unusual humans walked inside, her regular humans speaking to them in hushed tones... Jun narrowed her eyes.

"Mother?" Mateo asked, but Jun hushed him.

Shaking her head, Jun sat back down. The unusual humans approached Dartrix and Delphia, then led them away.

Mateo watched in confusion. "Was today check-up day?"

"No," Jun said, but she wasn't worried. She trusted her humans to keep her pups safe. The she-dog lied down beside Mateo and closed her eyes. Now that Delphi and Dartrix were gone, it was quieter. Maybe she would actually be able to sleep.

It wasn't until the next day that Jun woke up. She nudged a sleeping Mateo with her nose. "Are Delphi and Dartrix up?"

Mateo's eyes snapped open and the pup said worriedly, "Mother, Delphi and Dartrix never returned."

Jun blinked. "What!?"

"Mother, please," Mateo pleaded. "Maybe they just got lost. Give them another day. Maybe they'll return."

Jun nodded reluctantly, understanding how early it was when Mateo yawned. The sun wasn't even up yet. "One more day," she agreed One more day.

One day later, her pups still hadn't returned. She paced the living room wildly; Mateo had his ears pulled back in worry and concern.

"Where are they?" Jun growled, mostly to herself.

The doorbell rang and the shepherd barked. She took a sniff, then stilled. They were the same people who took Dartrix and Delphi away.

In fear, Jun leapt over to Mateo.

"Mother-" the pup started nervously.

An unfamiliar human hand reached out to grab him and Jun saw red. Her pups were gone because of them. They weren't taking Mateo, too.

It was pure protective instinct. Jun lashed out and the human screamed, pulling their hand back. Something stung on her backside and the mother turned around, but the word slowly faded to black...

When Jun awoke, she was at the shelter. All her pups had been taken away. She lashed out whenever a human came close and grew cold whenever she saw a pup. It was their fault her life had broken. She'd trusted her humans, but apparently, it hadn't been the right choice. Her humans destroyed her life.
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Re: SFA - #0027 - Belgian Shepherd

Postby ~HєуRєι~ » Mon Mar 16, 2020 11:44 am

Oh shoot lowkey i completely forgot about this adopt- its closed. Will be judged within the month!
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Re: SFA - #0027 - Belgian Shepherd

Postby ~HєуRєι~ » Wed Mar 18, 2020 3:08 pm

Mythz wrote:Username - Mythz
Name - Sitka (pronounced more like 'sid-ka')
Gender - Male
Storage Thread - Crimson Skies
Pet or Stray? - Pet
Collar/Harness - xx
Prompt - (will probably? end up changing it?)

Sitka’s pawsteps echoed through the small, bare room. A few toys and a towel had been thrown onto the floor but that was it. Back and forth he paced.
Back and forth.
Back and forth.
It was driving him insane!
He yelped, bit, lunged at the door but nothing was getting him out of there.
Eventually, he laid down, nose at the bottom of the door.
He just had to wait.
At a young age, Sitka had had very minimal socialisation – only meeting one or two other dogs and just a handful of other humans. He wasn’t too keen on other dogs anymore and anything out of the ordinary ‘get fed, humans leave, humans come home, get fed, sleep, repeat’ made him incredibly anxious. Boredom and little socialisation can lead to a lot of things – all of them not good.

His ears perked up and he sat up at the sound of the door to the house opening, and he stood, whining and barking frantically.
“Be careful.” A voice came from the other side. “He hasn’t had much time around kids but he’s friendly to us so it should be fine.”
The door opened and Sitka came towards the opening, only to be blocked off by his human’s leg. Once he had sat down, his owner stepped back and in front of him were a few people – two adults and two kids.
Sitka paused, hackles raising. He didn’t bare his teeth or bark, but there was some definite whale-eyeing going on. One of the kids rushed forwards, reaching out his hand and-
That’s how he’d ended up at the shelter.

I liked the way this was written! A sense of suspense even though it didn't drag on too long. Congrats!

Honorable Mentions-
conversett - I liked the way this was written, the story being very good turn for the character.
Chaotic_Affection - This seemed very real and showed a lot in the character for her actions.
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Re: SFA - #0027 - Belgian Shepherd

Postby Chaotic_Affection » Wed Mar 18, 2020 3:14 pm

    Ah congrats !! This dude is absolutely stunning.

    Thank you for the hm Rei !! <3
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Re: SFA - #0027 - Belgian Shepherd

Postby Mythz » Wed Mar 18, 2020 5:59 pm

Oh my gosh thank you!! I love him .o.
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Re: SFA - #0027 - Belgian Shepherd

Postby conversett » Thu Mar 19, 2020 1:50 am

    congrats mythz!
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