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Cat Name: Smokepaw (Smokewhisper)
Gender: Tom
Age: 10 moons
Clan: Cinderclan
Rank: Apprentice
Prompt:
"You did well today. You'll be a fine hunter before you know it, but just watch those paws. . ."
Hidden Flame's voice dwindled in Smokepaw's mind as his eyes drifted from their trail towards the forest which lined the clan. The day was reaching it's dusk and the time for the cats to rest would soon come. Anxiety prickled his ears and whiskers as a soft howl of the wind trickled in from the leaves overhead. He paused and looked up, watching them sway in silence. Just ahead, Hidden Flame stopped to watch her apprentice, her eyes grim.
"Smokepaw." The tom's focus snapped back to the she-cat, apology gleaming in his eyes. "Go. I'll cover for you, just be back before the moon rises."
Smokepaw gently set the squirrel carcass on the grass and gazed up at his mentor, his head bowed. "Thank you, Hidden Flame." He turned swiftly and ran, making a direct path to the broad stream. Hidden Flame frowned as she watched him go. She had tried to follow him once, but he was clever - using the stream to mask his scent. She picked up the squirrel's carcass and made her way back to camp, her mind toggling between excuses for Smokepaw's absence.
The wind rushed along the young cats fur, sliding down his back and swirling behind him as he darted through the forest. Without hesitation, he jumped into the stream - which was just deep enough to touch his belly - and wadded along it's current. Above, the sky darkened slightly and a red glow began to pain the horizon. Dusk was here, and night would soon follow. Anxious, he quickened his pace in the cool water, his paws slipping on the muddy and mossy surface every now and then, though he never lost his balance.
He waded in the stream until it broke free from the forest and climbed out before it fed into the great lake. The clearing was lovely - particularly under the red-purple light of dusk - but he did not take time to focus on the beauty of it. To the North was two-leg place, and though he knew Cedarstar had forbidden every moving towards it, he jogged ahead, his sights set on the strange land filled with tall, golden plants.
Smokepaw considered these tall plants home when he was no larger than a squirrel. The tall, swaying leaves and stalks mystified him, and even now as he slipped into their cover it felt as though he was entering a new world.
He had heard the warnings and tales, how a cat cannot live both lives - he must be a warrior, or a kitty pet. There was no in between in the laws of the clan, he had understood an accepted that from the moment he agreed to follow Hidden Flame into the forest to meet her clan mates. He let go of it without a fight - surrendering the easy food, warm fire, soft beds, and company of two-legs for the trials of the clan, but there was one thing that he simply couldn't surrender. It called him back to the field, pulling him from his clan and to the forbidden territory.
He slipped from the fields and took a moment, his blue eyes gleaming as he scanned the land which surrounded the field on the two-leg's side. The familiar, tall wood and brick structure he had once slept within laid in the distance, the window he once sat at glowing warmly. But, he was not here for that.
He moved ahead, slinking to the wooden structure he had grown to know. It was rectangular and partially-complex - raised off the ground a head's length to protect the interior from the rain. From its side, the familiar silver chain which fed into the wooden den glimmered in the dying light. Smokepaw paused, his ears held high and his whiskers twitching slightly as he thought for a moment about the possibility that his companion was no longer there. The weariness was gone, however, as the chain rustled and the familiar warm, dark brown eyes peered at him from within.
"October, you're back." His voice was gruff and deep - a rumbling bark that soothed Smokepaw's anxious heart. "You smell of squirrel."
He walked from the wooden den, his pelt swaying as his large paws hit the ground. The large canine stopped over Smokepaw and lowered his head, sniffing the young tom who purred in response and rubbed his head against his friends muzzle.
"I told you, it's Smokepaw. And I just got back from hunting for my clan."
The dog chuckled and laid down in a heap, his eyes sparkling with play. "And you brought none for me?"
Smokepaw batted the dogs nose with a paw. "Bear, you know I'm not allowed to do that!"
Bear laughed, his chest rumbling and his breath moving the leaves around Smokepaw's feet. Smokepaw smiled and moved in, curling up against the large dog's chin and throat, sighing in relief at the familiar warmth. They were quiet for some time, Smokepaw's eyes closed softly as he relished in the comfort, and Bear's eyes resting on the sky, watching as the sun slowly leaked into the mountains.
"When will I get to meet your new friends?"
Smokepaw's mouth slowly curled into a frown. "I can't tell them about you. . . they wouldn't understand."
Bear sighed softly and Smokepaw followed suit, resting his head on his friends jaw.
When Smokepaw was adopted and taken to this place, it was Bear who took him. The large brown dog taught him the laws of the land, how to hunt, and protected him. When strays would come to hurt him or steal from him, Smokepaw - who then went by October - knew to run to that wooden den, trusting that Bear would always be there to protect him. They were best friends, and to Smokepaw, Bear was an older brother. He saw nothing wrong with their bond - he still sees no flaw in it - but in time, the young tom came to understand the true difference between the two species. The other cats viewed Bear as a monster. They could not understand his words, and they always responded with either fear or hatred to him, some even attempting to attack the chained dog. When Smokepaw joined the clan and learned of the cats strength, and that they feared dogs as well, fear prickled in his hide for his friend. He determined that he would still visit the dog - he could never leave him forever - but he would keep him hidden from the other cats to protect him from them.
Eventually, the sun faded away and the sky darkened. Bear sighed softly and shifted, stirring Smokepaw. "The moon's about to rise, October."
Smokepaw lifted his head and frowned at the sky, wishing he had just a little bit longer. He turned to Bear and the two met eyes for a moment. Understanding his struggle, Bear made the decision for him and stood up.
"You should get back before they worry."
Smokepaw stood and nodded slowly, his eyes hazy. "I'll be back tomorrow, I promise."
Bear gave one of his signature grins - his over-sized mouth opening and his tongue falling out and hanging over his teeth. "Bring me a squirrel next time, okay?"
Smokepaw laughed and bumped his head against his brother's paw. "Maybe. I'll think about it."
Slowly, he pulled away from Bear and made his way back to the field, listening as the chain dragged along the ground while Bear entered his den. Smokepaw slipped into the field, crossing through the barrier and into the other world as he exited near the lake. He reentered the stream - this time plunging his whole body in it to remove the scent of Bear - and made his way back to his clan as the moon slowly rose in the sky.
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