Re: Skyes Readoption

Postby Vampire Adam » Sat Oct 06, 2018 4:20 pm

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      Name: Jules
      Gender: Male
      Sexuality: Heterosexual
      Ideal significant other: Jules is looking for someone who can be both his mate and his best friend. She should be able to compliment his own interests and personality while always challenging him to learn and grow. She’s someone he can turn to no matter what, and he’s always there to give her a shoulder to lean on.

      As an introvert, Jules isn’t the life of the party or fond of crowds. It’s important that his partner is able to respect that, both in interactions with others and as a couple. Sometimes he needs his space. Not for lack of love, but for peace of mind and personal reflection.

      He loves nature, literature and all forms of art. Someone creative is ideal, especially if she can listen to his enthusiastic brainstorming. Loving nature and literature aren’t requirements, but a respect for both absolutely is.

      Showing affection comes natural to him. He wants to be able to cuddle with his partner on a regular basis. It’s also a bonus if she welcomes his romantic gestures, such as gifts of flowers or offers to dance.

      Appearance isn’t important to him. It’s what’s in the heart that really matters.
      If asexual/aromantic, ideal best friend:
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Re: Skyes Readoption

Postby mellifluous » Mon Oct 08, 2018 1:02 pm

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Re: Skyes Readoption

Postby Guest » Thu Oct 11, 2018 1:22 pm

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      Name:
Jack
      Gender:
trans nb, masc aligned
      Sexuality:
polysexual
      Ideal significant other:
jack is very dismissive about a lot of things. he tends to be avoidant of his issues and ignores his guilt. for the longest time, he worried he'd be like that in romance, too. he didn't want to mistreat kalons he loved. he was, needless to say, pretty anxious. since he was little, his family put pressure on him to get a partner and carry on the family name. when he came out as trans, they used it as an excuse to ask for grandkids. once he was 15, he was at his wit's end. he was so pressured to find the right partner, treat them right, and possibly have children, that he considered giving up love all together. but, like any good fable, his true love came to save him.
jack was doing his thing online when a new friend request popped up. he absentmindedly accepted, unknowingly sealing his fate.
he started chatting with the mystery kal, growing fonder and fonder daily.
eventually, in his health class unit about relationships, he was tasked to write about his ideal partner. then, that sheet would get passed to the person next to himm, and they'd discuss how healthy those expectations were.
jack wrote:

my ideal partner would listen. they'd always be ready to listen to me and tell me what i'm doing wrong.
my ideal partner wouldn't be ashamed in "us". they wouldn't say to keep it down-low in public.
my ideal partner would support me through hard times. they'd always be ready to help me.
my ideal partner would let me mess up. they wouldn't tell me i'm a failure.
my ideal partner would always be by my side.


he was flushed to hand the paper over, but the activity partner he had was enjoyable. they laughed the same way jack did with the mystery kal.
his heart was set on fire. he was hooked.

he told the mystery kal about his new crush, the looks, the smile, the way his heart pounded!
the mystery kal didn't respond for a while. jack worried he had hurt their feelings.

15 minutes later, his phone went off, with an image attachment from the mystery kal. it was a picture of jack's crush!

the message read, "am i your ideal partner?"
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Re: Skyes Readoption

Postby lovage » Fri Oct 12, 2018 8:11 am

      username; fernmoon
      name; jace perri
      gender; male
      sexuality; demi-polysexual
      ideal significant other; jace perri isn't one to just fall in love at first sight and not knowing who they are. he is one to need a strong bond with someone before even considering them to be an ideal significant other. it's quite easy for that to happen due to forming a strong relationship between someone else in a few days after quite a few long talks. so that's quite easy to come across in an ideal significant other.

      after looking in a large pool of potential ideal significant others, jace at first will always attempt that their personalities balance each other. if he feels as if they would work with him but doesn't balance out his personality, he would adapt a bit to meet that exception. for that personality, the ideal significant other just has to be quite affectionate and a little talkative but not too much. that's just the first part and it gets even more pickier from here.

      looking at possible selections, he tends to find personality and physical traits that are a good booster for him. a height around his is a good start due to not liking being towered over by someone or towering over anyone else. for personality, he doesn't want to have someone who is too hyper and extroverted or who is just not intelligent and lacking common knowledge, so someone who is both introverted and on the smart side of things.

      after that selective search in possible significant other, he had a smaller selection but quite possible to find a significant other. he must at least have quite a bit in common with them. it was in order not to argue as much and to have somethings to talk about with them. another thing is that they must at least be willing to have kits because of how he's wanting to have a few. the final thing is that their is a connection between them both with love being a good chunk of that bond.

      it seems as if he's too picky about an ideal significant other; however, he feels as if it would be the best match for him.
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Re: Skyes Readoption

Postby knifekind » Wed Oct 17, 2018 11:46 am

SUPER late entry because i'm problematic fhghf
Adonis
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"anyone i can get" - he's a really godawful person who CANNOT take no for an
answer, flirts with anyone/anything with a pulse, an honest to god garbage person
his story is gonna be him flirting w each of my kals until he gets to the one person
who genuinely doesnt take his crap (Hildr)
i love jerks i'm so sorry fhghf
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Re: Skyes Readoption

Postby zakuro. » Sat Oct 20, 2018 4:01 pm

    best of luck !
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Re: Skyes Readoption

Postby mellifluous » Sat Oct 20, 2018 4:59 pm

Oof forgot to close this!
This is now closed! I hate waiting so I should have the results up between tonight and tomorrow afternoon, but sooner than later.
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Re: Skyes Readoption

Postby knifekind » Sat Oct 20, 2018 5:04 pm

ugh, i totally lost track of time with this guy and didn't end up actually finishing my form! gl to those who did, he's a handsome lad!!
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Re: Skyes Readoption

Postby mellifluous » Sat Oct 20, 2018 6:04 pm

Alright, so I hate it when I tryout and complete my form and get no feedback, so I'm going to give feedback to everyone's form who was completed!

Lies with Needs
This just wasn't what I was looking for. This was really cute and innocent, but not well written out. Almost as if you just thought of something and typed it down, without connecting the ideas and making a partner that one can imagine? At the end of your response I couldn't imagine or picture in my mind what the ideal partner was meant to be.

MotherMother
Okay, I was really just confused? I searched all your posts for an Anthony, I expected him to be a real kalon, since you specifically mentioned him and gave them a whole story line. I even went through searching for a blonde Anthony kalon? I don't know, maybe I'm confused and missed the point. I just expect that when a kalon is made the center of such a prompt focused story line, that they'd be real or explicitly mentioned not to be real.

Mavryk Company
This was really general to me. Such a broad explanation didn't really pinpoint what Scotch would be looking for. (I love the name though!). I couldn't connect to the idea nor did it seem really personal.

SilhouetteStation
This was such a cute story! I really loved the idea of him and his best friend, and the ladybugs were an especially unique staple of the relationship. I especially love the best friend. It's such an overused cliche but I will never tire of it. There wasn't enough detail about their falling in love though. I really wanted to feel it! I loved the details, but how did his friend come to associate him with lady bugs? Little things like that.

zakuro.
I was very confused. Maurice - dark skinned. I feel very stupid for not understanding that? I also had to read the story a few times to understand and I still kind of don't? Did he fall in love with Albie? Was he shot by a cupid's arrow? Was he shot by Albie? Is Albie a cupid? Is there a cupid? Is Maurice the cupid? Who did he even fall in love with? If you took time to clearly develop these ideas, I'd have probably loved it. I love fantasy and mythology and I really wanted to understand it.

Armuris
Also didn't understand this. Was his significant other the one who was being described or him? This was also a really general explanation and I didn't really feel it. It was more of a what about you do I like than a why you are the one for me. I don't know if that makes sense, but it was kind of what was missing.

hxllxwxxn (11037)
I got really intrigued with Jack's family life honestly. The turn it took into his romance wasn't well transitioned, personally and had me confused at first. I honestly wanted to ask more about his family! Are they rich? Why are they so insistent that he gets married and has kids? Is he an only child. I would have literally loved if his dream SO is someone who can reproduce and be nice and that's it, since it seemed to be such an extreme story line. But the plot twist at the end was so cute! I really loved it and I could imagine a dramatic, "Am I your ideal partner?"

fernmoon
This was such a cute specific one. I loved the thought of them like swiping left or right on Tinder? This is such a dating website or dating show approach? I just wasn't feeling it for him. I really liked it, I just wasn't expecting such a calculating and intelligent approach to it? If that makes sense? I can't picture this guy thinking deeply into who his significant other is and singling it down like that. Perhaps that is just a bias to the way I developed him.

knifekind
Adonis has the same personality as Skyes, and I kind of wanted to change that. I know this slightly contradicts my review on fernmoon, but I wanted him to be different, but not so drastic that I can't picture it. This was just too close, and I want this guy to have a better future than being hated by all kalon-kind for his excessive flirting.

Vampire Adam
This was so practical and well thought out! I really liked it if not for the winner making me feel their's specifically. This one versus the winner is more like methodical versus emotional and you had me struggling to decide between you or the winner! I decided to go with emotional just because there was a specificity in their form and I desperately needed a tie breaker.



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Whoa. I literally got emotionally invested in their relationship? And Kingston is real (and a stunner might I add) which helped me picture them as their love grew. I genuinely want to see them grow old together and have tons of kids! The way Skyler developed, and the references to his personality blew me away. Ximon is best wingman. The relationship gave me so many feels. I hope you actually keep Skyler and Kingston together forever and I can't wait to see what you do with them! I want to see all their little kids and a cute little family with a picket fence and a pet dog.
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Re: Skyes Readoption (CLOSED)

Postby Vampire Adam » Sat Oct 20, 2018 11:00 pm

Mellifluous wrote:Vampire Adam
This was so practical and well thought out! I really liked it if not for the winner making me feel their's specifically. This one versus the winner is more like methodical versus emotional and you had me struggling to decide between you or the winner! I decided to go with emotional just because there was a specificity in their form and I desperately needed a tie breaker.


Thanks so much for the feedback. I've never had feedback on a form, and it's something I really appreciate. :)

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