
Main Criteria wrote:1. Equal work between both partners.
I looked to see if both partners completed their own section of their forms. Forms that had a better work distribution and effort between both partners were ranked higher than those that were one sided.
2. Story consistency and flow.
I checked to see how the story flowed and mended with each other. I looked to see if there were any inconsistencies present in each side's story. Partner forms that featured their story told by both viscets' point of views and did not feature any inconsistencies between their views were ranked higher.
Shout Outs wrote:-Shaded- + Xelinator
Unfortunately one post of your off thread form had an edit done after the close time. Due to this, I'm unable to award either of you for your combined efforts ><, I sincerely apologize, as your group's form showcased tons of effort and great partner work. I really do adore the format you chose for your group's form too. I do hope that there'll be another viscet or character, whether it be a partner competition or not, that you both will be able to connect and apply your ideas to! Once again, I'm terribly sorry ><,
Gadgetrocks + Animal345
The beginning to Birch's and Cypress' story seems like it would have made for an interesting read though ^^ I do hope that both of you will be able to apply the story you had planned out for these two visclings for other characters in the future though!
Honorable Mentions wrote:Surroundingcrystals + ~Prophecy~ - x2 Stubs
Spiro's and Ceorra's story was a cute take on the adventure prompt! While I have never gone camping or attended camp, I always viewed it as a grand adventure out into the wilderness; Spiro's and Ceorra's stories were just that. I did enjoy that you took their story a step further by adding a sense of the supernatural through the story Aphrodite told them, as well as the immense sense of discovery that the two experienced finding the crystal viscets. Even though the scary legend wasn't true as the crystal was actually plastic, their story was quite the adventure to read all the way through.
I also appreciated how both Spiro and Ceorra were able to make new friendships while still being able to maintain their own. Even though Ceorra began to doubt who he was to Spiro at the very end, her reassurance that she still truly cared about him spoke greatly of both of their characters; that, regardless of what may happen, who they may meet, etc. they will always stay true to each other.
Additionally, the art that both of you did was a nice addition to the story. The emphasis of their special friendship locket really helped defined their close relationship with each other. By creating art of what was in this locket, as well as art featuring the characters wearing it, both of you were able to put importance on their bond with each other. This compliments the story nicely, as all throughout they both wanted to spend more time with each other.
Runner Ups wrote:Barnes&Rogers + Steampunkvale
Anuket's and Arwood's story is filled with exciting twists! Their story read like a true adventure story, despite their original plan was to just have a peaceful hike through the woods with each other. The unfortunate mishaps the two encountered as they continued on their hike kept me on the edge of my seat, especially when Anuket slipped and fell into the cold river below the waterfall. Both visclings displayed a wonderful sense of courage as they were thrown to face various different situations nature would throw at them.
The art that Steampunkvale did is absolutely lovely as well! The images featuring the separate viscets really do convey their own personality in a cute and simple way. Likewise, the image that features both of them together before the story hints to what may come from the story; the uncertain expression on Arwood's face and the nervous, tense expression of Anuket's relates back to events that unfold in the story very well.
I appreciate that you both took time to code and pretty up your forms while keeping a similar layout and style. This made your forms easier to pair up and read. Likewise, you both were able to still personalize the coding to the viscets you tried out for with different colors and fonts.
If you would like to claim a RU design, please message me with the following:
- 1 general color of your choice (besides blue and green)
- 1 uncommon trait from the following list:
(Lion Mane, Mammal Ears (your choice of what animal), Smooth Horns, or Unicorn Horn)
If you would like stubs instead, you can trade in the RU for x3 stubs ^o^
Both participants do not have to choose the same choice. However, if you both want the RU, you both must choose different colors for your design. You may choose the same trait.
Winners wrote:.kaede + Lex
Cordelia's and Cecil's story is both unique and superbly well done! The coding made both forms look fantastic and ultimately helped in reading through both forms a breeze. I was able to flip flop between both of them without worry of getting lost in either of their point of views.
I love how you both went along with the RPG theme that originally inspired the creation of these two visclings and incorporated that into their story. I enjoyed how their personalities were reflected in the way they typed in the game. And despite the two being completely opposite characters in terms of behavior, the relationship that they were able to slowly create between them on the game is well written and believable. Their interactions online felt real, and I had a pleasant little giggle when Cordelia broke out of her formality and responded with a simple "lmao" to Cecil.
The end bit of extra writing in which the two meet each other at a convention was a very lovely addition as well. It especially demonstrated how much the two had grown in terms of their characters. Both Cordelia and Cecil learned how to loosen up and to have fun during their time playing together. By having the two meet and befriend each other in real life, it added extra depth to their friendship together.
Likewise, I really also adore the extra art that was added to the form. Inksky did a wonderful job on the two pieces featuring both visclings. I adore the sitting/laying poses that they're in, as it reflects their personality in a way (with Cordelia being rigid and formal while Cecil is informal and more laid back). The piece Lex did for their character, Cecil, is also stunning ^^ The smile he has on as he logs onto the game really does emphasize how much he enjoys and cares about it.
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