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Rise | #0095

Postby Neah » Sun Feb 11, 2018 4:21 pm

Welcome to Rise!
Rise is an adoptable based on Warrior Cats and focused around world building and character development.
Please make sure that you read the main thread so that you understand limits and levels!


    Username: Sanara
    Cat Name: Fallingbirch
    Clan: HillsideClan
    Rank: Warrior

    Gender: Male
    Age: 43 Moons
    Description: Ticked tabby with yellow-green eyes.

    Other Features: None
    Siblings: None

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    Sire: Foundation
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    Dam: Foundation
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Re: Rise | #0095

Postby anxiousethologist » Sun Feb 11, 2018 6:09 pm

THIS IS SO CUTE THANK YOU I LOVE HER!!!!! <33333333333 I'll start world-building asap :3

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Cat Name: Harestar (warrior name was Hareleap)
Clan: Tunnel Clan (uses a set of rabbit warrens as territory)
Rank: Leader

Gender: Female
Age: 24 moons
Description: Ticked tabby with yellow-green eyes.

Other Features: Scar over her mouth.
Siblings: None
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Re: Rise | #0095

Postby Neah » Sun Apr 08, 2018 8:48 am

This cat is going up for readoption!

rules wrote: ► (Applies to cats after #0010) If you do not make a thread for your clan and get to level 1 within a month, your cat will be rehomed


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Re: Rise | #0095

Postby Placebo » Sun Apr 08, 2018 9:30 am

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Re: Rise | #0095

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Re: Rise | #0095

Postby tynahi » Sun Apr 08, 2018 10:18 am

Pulling out. Ran out of time. Good luck to all who entered!! c:
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FireFlight

Postby StormSerpent » Sun Apr 08, 2018 11:16 am

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Name
FireFlight
Clan Thread
LotusClan
Rank
novice warrior
Gender
male
Age
17 moons

Prompt

FireKit was so excited, he was about to become an apprentice. He was going to be the best apprentice EVER! He rushed over to the pond the second EmberStar had started talking, he skidded to a halt soaking the small figure of EmberStar. He dipped his head in shame. when the clan had gathered their leader began the ceremony, "FireKit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as FirePaw. Your mentor will be FrostBite. I hope FrostBite will pass down all she knows on to you" she said, her voice ringing clearly through the camp. FrostBite looked up in surprise, and FirePaw sighed in disappointment, FrostBite was not the sort of cat he had wanted a mentor. FirePaw had wanted someone young and strong like himself, not lousy and old. He scolded himself, FrostBite was only a few moons older than EmberStar, and she was nice enough, just kind of ... dull. The ceremony continued on "FrostBite, you are ready to take on another apprentice, you have shown yourself to be wise and passionate. You will be the mentor of FirePaw, and i expect you to pass on all you know to FirePaw" the warrior dipped her head as FirePaw reluctantly touched noses with her. Well maybe this won't be so bad, he thought contentedly, looking into her warm hypnotic gaze. His original thoughts came back as they "learned" the territory borders. Seeing a FirePaw had snuck out many times as a kit he already knew all of the borders. He didn't dare tell her this, because she had no sense of fun and would just tell EmberStar. FirePaw endured a long, boring day of walking around. Sullenly following his mentor, they arrived at Tall-tree, but he was severely unimpressed. He had already been to the top and down again. After ages of walking the finally came back to camp. His legs ached and he started heading towards the nursery, he shook himself, he slept in the apprentice den now. This made him uneasy.

After about a moon he was assigned to care for the elders, ugh elders. This just meant another day of old, boring cats, he had already done so much for them in his apprenticeship. His eyes glazed over as his mentor taught him where to find the dryest moss, and how to remove all of the thorns. He just followed her to the moss and started doing it his own way, he soon pricked himself with a thorn, drawing blood. But he ignored it knowing he might look weak if he told his mentor, then maybe she wouldn't think he was strong enough to ever learn how to fight. He brought the moss to the elders den, and set it in a corner. He started removing the old moss, the elders were nowhere to be seen. Soon he was done and he turned around, only to see the elder, GoldFinch standing in the entranceway. FirePaw rolled his eyes "and what do you want?" he groaned, the elder smiled "that depends on you, i could help you with your hunting crouch if you're up for it" he offered kindly, FirePaw shook his head. He wanted to learn from a warrior, even a dull one was better then some random elder. He went over to where he last saw FrostBite. She was waiting patiently for him, he looked up at her, waiting for what annoying unimportant thing he should do next. FrostBite looked cooly at him "i would recommend you go to the medicine den for you paw." He looked down at his foot, wincing he went over to the medicine den. FirePaw glanced around, then the medicine cat came out of a corner, he had never seen her before. He looked into the medicine cats wise eyes, holding out his paw. She started by rinsing it off, and she spoke. Her voice reminded him of a thousand shards of ice cracking and melting into the pond, it was crisp and clear, ringing out, but also haunting and shattered from loss. He shivered and missed what she had actually said, she looked at him "oh, uhh" he stammered with a feeling her voice would haunt him even in starclan, she sighed "how did you hurt you paw?" she inquired. FirePaw didn't want to tell her, as it was foolish but something about her compelled him to explain. And once he started speaking it all spilled out, everything from his dislike of his mentor, to his sneaking out of camp. She listened patiently, then simply asked "why?" and continued doing her medicine stuff, but she mostly seeming to be wrapping and unwrapping cobwebs on his paw, was she even doing anything, or just having a conversation? He then focused on her question. Why what? He wondering going through a million possibilities, then decided to answer what kept coming back to him. Why was he telling her but not his mentor "i don't know, i just, well trust you?" he says not at all knowing why, and he knew it sounded stupid. The medicine cat barked a sharp laugh that rang through the medicine den "and i haven't even told you my name" she said with a cold gaze. Her expression softened as she saw the look of terror on his face "don't worry i'm CrystalClear" she said, then wrapped the cobwebs back she looked at him sharply "now go tell your mentor" he left to go look for her pondering what to tell his mentor. In the end he told her how boring he thought she was. FrostBite smiled sadly at him, then brightened "well why didn't you just say so?" she asked. Looking much more youthful she dashed into the forest, he ran after her puzzled. Was there really a friendly playful cat buried under all that lameness? He followed her scent trail to talltree then lost it, he scanned his surrounding spotting a tuft of her fur on a thorn, it smelled fresh. He soon picked up the trail again and found her in the training clearing, he arrived panting. She looked up to greet him "good job, you managed to follow me here, on only your second day of training!" she told him enthusiastically. This caused FirePaw to swell with pride. FrostBite told him to collect 4 feathers, he wondered why for a minute. Then deciding just to focus on getting them, he thought about where to look, he decided to start at tall-tree, and headed that way. His mentor called after him "be back here by sundown!" he jumped in alarm, he didn't have much time at all. He bounded forward at great speed, he made it to tall-tree panting very hard. he examined the forest floor, but he only saw one feather. FirePaw grabbed it in his teeth, and leapt up the trunk climbing fast. But his lack of caution caused his back leg to slip out from underneath him. He managed to catch himself, barely, but the sun was setting fast now. He scrambled back up the tree, finding an abandoned nest he, set his feather in it, and grabbed it in his jaws. And so he half fell, half slid back down the tree, and he raced back to the clearing dropping it there, only then did her look at it, he only had three feathers, but better than nothing he supposed. Then cleared his mind, no! Not good enough, this was a test, one that he couldn't fail, he dashed back into the forest, franticly scanning the ground, he looked up at the sky, and through the canopy of leaves he could see that the sun had set. he looked around in defeat, and trudged back to the clearing his head hanging low, but when he got there, he couldn't find FrostBite, he couldn't trace her either, she must have left him, left him for another apprentice. FirePaw looked up through the thick darkness, and spotted her crouching nearby, "i failed!" he cried into the darkness, and as she came out and looked into the nest she smiled "you did much better than most apprentices could do in their first moon" she pointed out, "but i still failed" he whined. Then FrostBite crouched before him "no, look again" he slumped over to the the small next, his mentor took the three feathers out, and he saw a pearly gleam, a feather was hidden between the twigs. FirePaw gasped in delight. Soon for the next moon he was put through many trials, and at first he usually failed, but his mentor always had a way to fix it, he learned many tips and tricks from her, and started to "pass" these tests. He enjoyed training with her very much, she was clever, kind and helpful, he started coming to her for advice on just about everything. And however strange this sounds, he was sad to become a warrior, as he would miss training with her. And EmberStar named him FireFlight, after the feathers that had started his bond with FrostBite. But he soon came to realise they still had a strong mentor-apprentice bond, and they are still the best of friends.
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Re: Rise | #0095

Postby ajax. » Sun Apr 08, 2018 1:56 pm

Username: Ajax.
Name: SandWillow
Clan Thread: ThistleClan
Rank: Nomad
Gender: she-cat
Age: 26 moons

Prompt:
SandWillow absolutely hated her mentor, ColdGaze, who wasn't even a nomad(probable custom in the future), they were way too aggressive with her training, even if she was tired she was forced to keep running to get better with her stamina. when she was learning combat, he unsheathed his claws and she ended up always coming back with scratches, though her fur helped make them blend in so many didn't notice.
eventually she went to AdderStar to complain and her leader gave her instead to WhiteBriar(another custom in the future), who was much sweeter and easier on her and she greatly excelled after switching mentors. though her warrior ceremony was slightly delayed since she had to take a few breaks at the medicine den to help recuperate from her sparring injuries. long story short, she hated her first mentor, who she only had for three moons and then she completed her other four moons with WhiteBriar, who she enjoyed much more.
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Re: Rise | #0095

Postby mewmew. » Mon Apr 09, 2018 4:01 am

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Name: Dustwind
Clan Thread: Muleclan
Rank: warrior
Gender: tom
Age: 58 moons (4.10yrs)

Prompt:

Dustwind loved his mentor with all his heart. Many would forget that they weren’t related because they acted more like father and son than a mentor and apprentice. Dustpaw grew up fatherless which was a role Coyotepelt took upon himself. Many of the other apprentices ended up shunning Dustpaw because they were jealous of his relationship with Coyotepelt, who was a very heroic figure in the clan. This actually made his relationship with Coyotepelt a lot stronger.
Dustpaw would often be found hanging around his mentor. They had a trusting friendship where they would open up with each other and always told each other the truth. Coyotepelt didn’t see a point in trying to sugar coat things. He would always tell Dustpaw what he thought who would then take it to mind and work on trying to better himself as a cat. They spent the first 4 moons of Dustpaws’s apprenticeship training constantly.
One day they were out training with another mentor and apprentice when a bushfire hit. Coyotepelt sacrificed himself to save Dustpaw. Dustpaw tried to take Coyotepelt’s body back to camp but wasn’t able to get to in through the roaring flames. Dustpaw was the only one to survive and was made a warrior that night.
The loss of Coyotepelt took its’ toll on Dustwind. He became very solitary after the whole event. The death of his mentor shaped the rest of his life. He felt guilty after Coyote’s death and felt like he had to serve Mulestar, Coyotepelt’s son, in order to start paying his mentor back. He is forever in debt to him
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Re: Rise | #0095

Postby Sanara » Mon Apr 09, 2018 7:31 am

Username :: Sanara
Name :: Fallingbirch
Age :: 43 Moons
Gender :: Tom
Rank :: Warrior
Clan Thread :: HillsideClan

Prompt

Back when Fallingbirch was simply named Frecklepaw, he was absolutely stoked to begin training! His mentor was the very own clan’s deputy! Per clan tradition, usually a deputy’s past apprentices were usually chosen to become deputy in the case of succession or a deputy’s death. Of course, Frecklepaw had stars in his eyes at the very though of becoming deputy, and eventually leader! Imagine; Frecklestar of Gristleclan! He was thrilled!
That is, until his very first day of training. His mentor, Runningblaze, was very no-nonsense. Immediately, the deputy took him to an out of the way, secluded space to teach him various stances, hunting and fighting, and demanded to see what Frecklepaw could do. Already he was nervous, add an examination on top of that and Frecklepaw was a downright mess!
Tripping and second guessing himself all through the forest, Frecklepaw scuttled down to the river, where he saw a scrappy squirrel milling about on the bank. Instantly Frecklepaw crouched, readying himself for the leap, only to loose his footing as he launched himself in the air. With arms and legs flailing through the air, He caught hold of a tree who had obviously seen better days. The trunk was rotted and the roots were sticking out painfully from under the mud. A sticky, sickening sucking sound filled Frecklepaw’s ears as those very roots let go of the bank. Frecklepaw fell with the tree, and before they knew it, they were pinned helplessly under the rushing water and the deadened log. Fear and water filled Frecklepaw’s senses, and he began to panic. One arm was useless, being jammed between the stony riverbed and the tree, with all the water now pouring over the log creating a backwash that threatened to steal Frecklepaw’s breath. His back legs splashed in the water ineffectively. Already he began loosing his breath, praying for a few more moments to free himself. Things became fuzzy just as a shadow swam into Frecklepaw’s vision.
With a arm-wrenching tug, Frecklepaw’s leg was free and he was hauled up to the surface where he took panicked breaths, sucking in the cool air to calm his burning lungs. He flopped helplessly on the muddy bank and turned his eyes up at his savior- Runningblaze, backdropped by a stripe of sky and greenery.
That was the very moment that Frecklepaw made up his mind, and after a short resting period, Frecklepaw set to the rigid training schedule that Runningblaze set. He would train until all he could do was flop into the nest at night dripping with sweat and crawl back out in the morning glistening with morning dew. He followed Runningblaze’s every orders, and in time, developed quite a relationship with the deputy; he admired and respected the cat who soon grew to become the leader. He followed every order without qualm, and once he was promoted to Warrior’s status, he took on the name Fallingbirch, in honor of his first day as an apprentice.
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