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Name;;
Age;;
Gender;; Stallion
Sire;; Foundation
Dam;; Foundation
Herd;; Fung Sotw Jok
Height;;
Rank;; Ceremonial Dancer (was not in the army)
Coat Color;; Dappled Rose Gray (bay base) Tobiano
Genotype;; Ee // AA // Gg // ToTo
Eye Color;; Blind (blue base)
Bead Minerals;; Sunstone
Breeding notes;; 50% Chance to Pass Gray (heterozygous)
100% Chance to Pass Tobiano (homozygous)
Personality;; (100 word minimum!)

'ello! this'll be a little longer of a comp as i'm actually looking for some writing!
this comp will be a personality detail writing comp - with a minimum of 100 words. i really want to see you develop this guys personality. go into detail, have fun, really develop him! i'm really fond of him but i can't keep him, so i want to see him go to a user who will really enjoy and develop him! keep in mind he is blind, maybe this affects his personality??? ;0;

this comp will end:
Friday, January 19th, at 11:59 PM CST.
i may allow an extension if i get enough requests for one.
prettying up your form is a-okay, but no extras please!

[Keen]

My first horse was blind and he was the savior of my teenage years. My best friend and the bravest soul I have ever met. We would ride together for so many hours every day, sometimes galloping over pastures or swimming in the neighbor's pond. He died when he was 7 in an accident involving a drunk driver. I chose Zeneth's age as 7 years old, imagining that Shug really just went to live with the FSJ herd and is dancing with them still. Sorry if this is considered an extra. If it is, I can delete it. I just wanted to share how this guy made me feel. I love him.

Name;; Zeneth
Meaning: The time at which something is most powerful or successful
Age;; 7 years old
Gender;; Stallion
Sire;; Foundation
Dam;; Foundation
Herd;; Fung Sotw Jok
Height;; 14.3 hh
Rank;; Ceremonial Dancer (was not in the army)
Coat Color;; Dappled Rose Gray (bay base) Tobiano
Genotype;; Ee // AA // Gg // ToTo
Eye Color;; Blind (blue base)
Bead Minerals;; Sunstone
Breeding notes;; 50% Chance to Pass Gray (heterozygous)
100% Chance to Pass Tobiano (homozygous)
Personality;; Being blind has done nothing to dampen Zeneth's courage or zest for life. He can often be seen galloping full-tilt over the land in a seemingly reckless race against himself. He revels in dance and the only vision he needs is the one shining in his mind's eye. He knows that others may pity him, but he in turn pities them for their utter lack of inner sight. He is always searching for ways to improve himself and his skill as a dancer. The clacking of the beads is the rhythm that moves him and grass under his hooves is the only thing that holds him to earth. He would soar with the eagles if he could, just to say he has gone the highest. He loves to be the best. He is proud, a bit cocky, and more than a little flashy. He will never turn away another horse in need, always doing what he can, even if that is just to comfort them with a graceful dance and chiming beads. His beads in particular he loves, though he has never seen them. He imagines that sunstone is a brilliant addition to his dance and loves the idea of it shining bright for all to see. None of the other horses have the heart to tell him that the stones do not, in fact, shine. They are beautiful none-the-less.

[Fiern]

Name;; Drishti
Age;; 8
Gender;; Stallion
Sire;; Foundation
Dam;; Foundation
Herd;; Fung Sotw Jok
Height;;
Rank;; Ceremonial Dancer (was not in the army)
Coat Color;; Dappled Rose Gray (bay base) Tobiano
Genotype;; Ee // AA // Gg // ToTo
Eye Color;; Blind (blue base)
Bead Minerals;; Sunstone
Breeding notes;; 50% Chance to Pass Gray (heterozygous)
100% Chance to Pass Tobiano (homozygous)
Personality;;

Some would find it strange that a blind stallion would excel in such a visual art as dancing. To Drishti there is nothing more natural in the world. The drumming of hooves and beads blending into a perfect, tumultuous, moving orchestra of sound and his body moving and rising to match. There is a freedom to Drishti's dancing not often seen, perhaps because he is so utterly self-conscious. Why should he care what others see when he himself cannot see? All that matters is what he feels, and that he communicates more than well enough.

Drishti is often thought of as wise, and he is smart and thoughtful enough it's true. What mostly fuels this opinion though is the way he carries himself and moves when not dancing. He drifts slowly and serenely, often appearing to be staring off into space, deep in thought. This is of course simply because he has to take more care when he moves. He still gallops when the spirit moves him, and gets up gamely enough when he trips, but most of the time he prefers to be cautious.

He is not a fan of physical conflict, outside of dancing, but this does not make him any less a stallion. He quite likes mares, particularly ones with pretty voices, and with the grace of his dancing his is often a favourite among them. He also enjoys the company of foals, possessing an endless patience where the young are concerned, happily answering their questions or dancing with them.

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smol bump , this ends tomorrow ^

[tenturo]

closed !
i'll be reading through these and i'll decide a winner at some point today <33

[Vraska the Unseen]

Judging this for ya Ten! <3

Keen and Fiern, you both presented well-developed characters, however only one of you can win.

After some debate with another staff member it has been determined Fiern wins this beautiful blind boy! We feel that your form was worded a bit better and offered a better understanding of the character.

Keen don't let this discourage you! Your form was great too, we really liked both characters!