[Noodle boi Kudanori]

this guy doesnt look to christmasy o.o

to win this marra please tell me what he may be based off of? and tell me a story on how he'd punish naughty cubs or how he punished your naughty cub!
you may only have 1 guess at who this is! if you change your guess your form will not count

prettying up and extras are aloud

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username;
marra name;
gender; alpha male
based off of?;
story; (no word cap)

marra rarity; legendary

edits
uncommon; colored eye whites, accessories
rare; no wings
vary rare; custom lines, odd shaped horns
legendary; extra large body size (this marra is 5 1/2 foot), extra large custom horns

end date will be in a week 1/1/18! no extensions!

[koegami]

username; alavii
marra name; Bastion
gender; alpha male
based off of?; krampus
story; (no word cap)
- scares cubs
- cubnaps them for a few days
- returns them after scare

[lumy]

username; lumy
marra name; Wrath
gender; alpha male
based off of?; Krampus I guess?
story; (no word cap)

resing :')

[SmileChild]

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ᴜsᴇʀɴᴀᴍᴇ;;
SmileChild

FNFJIENIUEUFUFEBUEFIBEFPBIUFE
ᴍᴀʀʀᴀ ɴᴀᴍᴇ;;
Dearg //
Irish/Scottish Gaelic for 'Red One'


ɢᴇɴᴅᴇʀ;;
alpha male


ʙᴀsᴇᴅ ᴏɴ;;
Krampus


sᴛᴏʀʏ;;
Waking up from a wonderous nap, a young cub stretched happily. The young cub yawned loudly, hoping his mother would hear. After a second, he yawned again in hopes of his mother hearing to come in and welcoming him good morning. "Mother!" He yelled, starting to get angry, since every morning she would come in and kiss his cheek and offer him breakfast, but instead was treated with silence. Finally getting up, he huffed and left his room. He could hear the faint 'jingle, jangle' of bells coming from the dark hallway. Looking out from his room, he once again yelled, "Mother!" Hearing yet nothing once more, but a piercing silence, a cold shiver ran up his back as he left the doorway of his room, and out into the hall. Heading to the kitchen, turning the corner to head into the room. As if slow motion, his eyes widened in surprise. To his complete disbelief, what he seen was a dark kitchen, with a tall figure sitting in the corner with the faint swishing of a tail, large horns protruding from its head, and the fierce red glow of two eyes. Unable to move his little body, the cub . Seeing the slits in the eyes diolate, the cub gasps and inhales sharply. Without moving its mouth, the creature spoke in a raspy and hoarse voice. "I see you when your sleeping. I know when your awake..." Opening his maw slightly, his tongue flicks out, like a snakes and flicked in the air, before crouching down into an attaching stance. "I know when you've been bad or good." Stringing out that last verse, he licks his lips with a large toothy grin on his face, as his eyes tranced on the boy. "You haven't been good, for your sake." Frozen in his tracks, the little cub couldn't move, and watched as the deity and shadow of bad children lunged forward, its eyes piercing his soul as the feeling of dread and complete fear over took the young cub for his wrong doings.

[Gigimon]

Username; Gigimon
marra name; Jack Smith
gender; Alpha Male
based off of?; Krampus
story;
Twas the night before Christmas, when all thro' the house
Not a creature was stirring, not even a mou--Wait whats that?
In a tree over wonder sitting beside a house, laid a creature so devious even the Grinch would be jealous. The creature sneered and chuckled darkly its birch branches curled in its long tail, its hooves tapping against the trees bark, its radar-dish ears twitching excitedly. For this creature prey was near, a naughty boy by the name of Tim who had been real naughty indeed,stirred in his cozy little bed. The kid was guilty for during the holidays he had open his little sister Marys gifts and then blamed her for opening them, thus poor little Mary was in trouble and sad.

Jack was displased with the boy and quietly tip toeing over the branch and lifts up the window and slides on it closing the window quietly ad greeted the boy with a WHAP of the birch branches and before the boy could scream he silenced the boy with his paw.

"Now now little one! why the rush, si back, relax lemme tell ye whats gonna happen next!"Jack sneered pulling off his sack from his back,"actually Ill show ye instead!"

With that Jack jumped the kid shoving the kid into his sack sending the kid falling endlessly though horrors and nightmares of various other naughty childrens memories Tim started to scream but no one came, no one heard, no one listened.

"Im sorry! Im sorry okay ill tell the truth, and only the truth!" Tim wailed at the top of his lungs.

And then. silence Tim jumped awake having been seemingly in a nightmare checked his now very much wet bed and leaped up running out crying which made his parents rush out to him, Tim confessed everythng and the boy got a scolding and Mary went on the brag her 'i told you so's'.

Jack grinned a cheshire grin watching from now outside the home on a hill. The devil jumped up clicked his heels together and strode off happily, "now ye may think im evil, but theres a lesson here ye see. Theres dark and light in all situations and not everyone is 100% Light,or good to say the least. As for myself I walk the grey-line! Sure i could kidnap the snapped heads and teach'em a wee lesson but what good would that be? Id jsut have parents Harrassing me! Instead me thinks teaching one a lesson now and him to repent here is a big victory for me."he stretched and yawned,"thy nights still yung and plenty other misbehaved kiddies abroad, see ye later kiddos! and Remember...Im always watching."

[Rescue2001]

username; Rescue2001
marra name; Krampus
gender; alpha male
based off of?; krampus who is supposed to be Santa's brother or evil half lol
story;

Krampus loves scarring little ones and he has a couple different ways to do it. One thing he does is stuffs them in his bag then goes off into his cave and ties them up in the deepest darkest part of his cave, he even made little "cages" out of rocks dirt and sticks in which he uses if the cubs start acting up. He only usually takes 2-5 at a time cause that's all that he has room for. He usually lets the cubs go after about 2-6 days. Another way he does things is that he goes out in the middle of a big forest and drops off the cub, but first he clumps their wings, they can't fly now but after about a week the feathers heal. He never really hurts the cubs but he does teach them a lesson in which they all seem to learn.
But there is 1 cub that doesn't seem to learn my boy Shot Glass. For some reason he never learns and it never fails krampus always comes back for him. I think shot looks up to krampus and gets in trouble on purpose so he can learn krampus's ways. I think ktampus likes shots company to be honest sense everybody else is scared of him.


He is such an interesting boy he looks so awesome

[ChickenPopper]

username; ChickenPopper
marra name;
gender; alpha male
based off of?; Krampus
story; (no word cap)

[sanitizarium]

username; daves
marra name; frigidus
gender; alpha male
based off of?; krampus?
story; (no word cap) frigidus crept around the warm cave, his eyes glinting with interest. his heartless smile spread across his face. frigidus was obviously anticipating punishing this naughty, thieving cub. he glanced through the small holes carved in the side of the humble burrow, spotting his target. a young marra cub whom he would nickname 'nick', was sleeping in bed that night, waiting for christmas the next morning. little did he know, he would be kidnapped and punished for his naughty, thieving ways. he had stolen prey while hunting and told his mother he had caught it, and had destroyed bird's nests. he truly was an evil cub, but frigidus was much more evil.
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nick awoke in bed, the taste of newly killed mouse still fresh on his tongue. he yawned, got up and went outside to see if santa claus and his reindeer had flown by yet. "mmm, reindeer...' nick thought, obviously not thinking it through that he couldn't jump high enough to snatch a reindeer from the sky, let alone a bird. he yawned again, and turned around to go back inside. when he turned his head, though, his tiny green eyes met cold, crimson eyes full of malice. the figure's tongue was stuck out through his jagged, sharp fangs and twisted horns stuck up between his large, ragged ears. it had a large, burlap sack with bells on its back with straps and more bells attaching it to its body. it was a horrendous sight, and nick immediately knew this figure meant business... and pain. nick chirped, his voice shrill and full of terror. he turned and ran into the forest, but the figure was too fast. fridgidus had caught his prey,
and there was nothing nick could do about it.
nick woke up under a metal structure, what seemed to be a small hole dug under an apartment building in a large city. nick was terrified, his pupils dialated and his eyes stretched wide. the figure appeared again. it tilted its head, and crept closer. tears filled nick's eyes. "w-what are you going to do with me..?" nick whimpered. the figure shot back into the darkness. frigidus was surprised.
this cub was braver than most, but still not very brave. not trying to scare the cub, he padded back into the faint light. "why,
i'm not going to hurt you," he whispered softly. "i'm just going to teach you not to steal prey and destroy bird's nests. no pain involved." he smiled maliciously. nick obviously took this better than most young cubs, as he did not shy away nor did he sob. he merely sat down and said, "i'm listening." frigidus liked this cub. he was smart and very calm. "now, let me show you what happened to other cubs. i didn't do this, their mistakes led to this. this is what happened to a cub who stole from a fox." he said, pointing to the skull of a long-dead marra cub. nick's eyes widened slightly, but he nodded understandingly. "and this is what happened to the cub who was knocked out of a tree by a bird while trashing it for eggs," he said, pointing to the broken leg of a larger marra cub. nick shuddered. frigidus smiled. "have you learned your lesson?" he asked sweetly. "y-yes," nick stuttered, still staring at the femur and skull. frigidus slipped nick into the now backwards sack, and ran towards the park they came from. he dropped nick, and ran back home. nick nodded to frigidus, and ran inside. nick tucked himself into his bed, and fell asleep. frigidus ended up lecturing nick for the next 5 years until he finally learned his lesson.

[Noodle boi Kudanori]

this was hard to choose! all the forms were wonderful!
but i have to choose a winner! so SmileChild congrats!

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ᴜsᴇʀɴᴀᴍᴇ;;
SmileChild

FNFJIENIUEUFUFEBUEFIBEFPBIUFE
ᴍᴀʀʀᴀ ɴᴀᴍᴇ;;
Dearg //
Irish/Scottish Gaelic for 'Red One'


ɢᴇɴᴅᴇʀ;;
alpha male


ʙᴀsᴇᴅ ᴏɴ;;
Krampus


sᴛᴏʀʏ;;
Waking up from a wonderous nap, a young cub stretched happily. The young cub yawned loudly, hoping his mother would hear. After a second, he yawned again in hopes of his mother hearing to come in and welcoming him good morning. "Mother!" He yelled, starting to get angry, since every morning she would come in and kiss his cheek and offer him breakfast, but instead was treated with silence. Finally getting up, he huffed and left his room. He could hear the faint 'jingle, jangle' of bells coming from the dark hallway. Looking out from his room, he once again yelled, "Mother!" Hearing yet nothing once more, but a piercing silence, a cold shiver ran up his back as he left the doorway of his room, and out into the hall. Heading to the kitchen, turning the corner to head into the room. As if slow motion, his eyes widened in surprise. To his complete disbelief, what he seen was a dark kitchen, with a tall figure sitting in the corner with the faint swishing of a tail, large horns protruding from its head, and the fierce red glow of two eyes. Unable to move his little body, the cub . Seeing the slits in the eyes diolate, the cub gasps and inhales sharply. Without moving its mouth, the creature spoke in a raspy and hoarse voice. "I see you when your sleeping. I know when your awake..." Opening his maw slightly, his tongue flicks out, like a snakes and flicked in the air, before crouching down into an attaching stance. "I know when you've been bad or good." Stringing out that last verse, he licks his lips with a large toothy grin on his face, as his eyes tranced on the boy. "You haven't been good, for your sake." Frozen in his tracks, the little cub couldn't move, and watched as the deity and shadow of bad children lunged forward, its eyes piercing his soul as the feeling of dread and complete fear over took the young cub for his wrong doings.

i decided to choose a runner up as well! Gigimon you win 10 MD's!

Username; Gigimon
marra name; Jack Smith
gender; Alpha Male
based off of?; Krampus
story;
Twas the night before Christmas, when all thro' the house
Not a creature was stirring, not even a mou--Wait whats that?
In a tree over wonder sitting beside a house, laid a creature so devious even the Grinch would be jealous. The creature sneered and chuckled darkly its birch branches curled in its long tail, its hooves tapping against the trees bark, its radar-dish ears twitching excitedly. For this creature prey was near, a naughty boy by the name of Tim who had been real naughty indeed,stirred in his cozy little bed. The kid was guilty for during the holidays he had open his little sister Marys gifts and then blamed her for opening them, thus poor little Mary was in trouble and sad.

Jack was displased with the boy and quietly tip toeing over the branch and lifts up the window and slides on it closing the window quietly ad greeted the boy with a WHAP of the birch branches and before the boy could scream he silenced the boy with his paw.

"Now now little one! why the rush, si back, relax lemme tell ye whats gonna happen next!"Jack sneered pulling off his sack from his back,"actually Ill show ye instead!"

With that Jack jumped the kid shoving the kid into his sack sending the kid falling endlessly though horrors and nightmares of various other naughty childrens memories Tim started to scream but no one came, no one heard, no one listened.

"Im sorry! Im sorry okay ill tell the truth, and only the truth!" Tim wailed at the top of his lungs.

And then. silence Tim jumped awake having been seemingly in a nightmare checked his now very much wet bed and leaped up running out crying which made his parents rush out to him, Tim confessed everythng and the boy got a scolding and Mary went on the brag her 'i told you so's'.

Jack grinned a cheshire grin watching from now outside the home on a hill. The devil jumped up clicked his heels together and strode off happily, "now ye may think im evil, but theres a lesson here ye see. Theres dark and light in all situations and not everyone is 100% Light,or good to say the least. As for myself I walk the grey-line! Sure i could kidnap the snapped heads and teach'em a wee lesson but what good would that be? Id jsut have parents Harrassing me! Instead me thinks teaching one a lesson now and him to repent here is a big victory for me."he stretched and yawned,"thy nights still yung and plenty other misbehaved kiddies abroad, see ye later kiddos! and Remember...Im always watching."

[SmileChild]

aa thank you so much!

congrats t the runner up as well! i really liked your story gigimon ^^