[Mint Chip]

red headed child mmm <3

name; Aatu
gender; female
owner; memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=638027 (10.6.17)
post; viewtopic.php?p=112452490#p112452490

Hatch Day:
Mature Day: 9.15.17

Parent 1

Parent 2

Souhait D'incindie

Pahit Manis

Parent 1 | Parent 2

Grandmother | Grandfather
Great-grandmother | Great-grandfather

none

[Parasitic Rat]

Why must you make a beautiful child I want to keep
Nyeh

Since I'm waiting on a batch this'll go ufa
Even tho they're super cute
Anyway
Naming comp, give me a name that has a meaning behind it!
Exrtras include of max 2 art and max 2500 words
Ends 9-30-17

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Username;;
Name;;
Gender;;
Name Meaning;;

[tenlittlesoldierboys]

Username;; tenlittlesoldierboys
Name;; Salem
Gender;; female
Name Meaning;; WIP

Extras WIP -- probably making her coven buddy of Eleanor unite dem witches

[Soll]

Username;; Soll
Name;; Adiv
Gender;; Male
Name Meaning;; Adiv's name is an Israel name meaning 'Delicate'.

wip extras

[GrimmKitty]

Username;; I'llBeTheMadHaTTer
Name;; Tacheté
Gender;; Female
Name Meaning;; Speckled one

[Vluwu]

Username;; Blukitty53
Name;; Sanu
Gender;; Male
Name Meaning;; " Sanu is an Indian name for boys meaning Peak sun"

[dzo]

if you want me to be completely honest I did not even read the usernames of the people trying out. i may have caught sight of it without realizing it but if I didn't then it is purely a coincidence that i picked red wohlf as the name of the legend when the person below me's username is redwolf466. i swear I didn't mean for that but if there was more time before the end date i would have changed it the name to whateved else i could think of.

Username;; ~Prophecy~
Name;; Aatu
Gender;; Female
Name Meaning;; Finnish form of a german name that means noble wolf.

Extra;;
The morning of September 28th was filled with small gusts of wind and a slight chill in the air. Kelsey walked to school that morning with confidence. She had done her research and was proud of the project she had completed the night before.
Kelsey was young, very young. She had just started third grade only a month ago at age eight years old. This was the first big project of the year for her english class, and she had to research a legend or myth. Kelsey was one of the first to claim a topic, and she chose the small local legend, "Red Wohlf."
Kelsey volunteered to go first, because even though she was a shy kid, Kelsey was proud of her final project and couldn't wait to show off how good it was.
Kelsey started off the PowerPoint presentation she made.
"The story I chose was Red Wohlf!" Kelsey estatically squirmed as she watched her teacher, Ms. Kelley, write that down on the grading paper.
"In case you were wondering, yeah, I spelled Wolf right! The name comes from the.. uh... or- ori- origin... of this lllll.....local legend! The guy who first en-encountered Red Wohlf was not able to spell well so when wrote down his experience he spelled it "wohlf" instead of "wolf" soooo yeah! that's why it is spelled like that!" Kelsey looked to her teacher for approval, and when she got the approval, she moved on to the next slide.
----------------------
Kelsey explains the "Red Wohlf" Legend, which is like bigfoot.
One day a homeless man had been walking thorough the woods, and caught sight of something. It seemed to be at least 6 feet tall. At first he thought it was a human, then Bigfoot, but he caught a glimpse of the face, at it was indeed like a wolf. He ran around yelling that he found a new species, a red colored wolf that can stand on its own two back feet. Reports told him to write down his experience for the paper, and he spelled wolf as wohlf, so he referred to the creature as "the red wohlf." Everyone deemed him crazy, but more people said they thought they saw the same red wolf-creature lurking in the woods. Soon it became a local legend, and since not many actually believed it like they didn't believe in bigfoot, noone took it that serious. There were plenty of fake claims of sighting and attacks for attention, including one where a man put fake bite marks and cuts onto himself to make it look like he had been mauled and came running out of the woods claiming Red Wohlf attacked him. Many people were afraid until reporters said it was fake.

Red Wohlf is Aatu. She roams the woods near Kelsey's home and sleeps in an abandoned barn. Later in the story Aatu meets Kelsey and the two have some fun. Kelsey starts coming back to the spot she found Aatu and Aatu learned to wait. Aatu learned to respond to the name Red Wohlf, but was later given the name Aatu by Kelsey, who had heard the name because she met a dog at the park with that name. The dog's owner explained the meaning to her. Kelsey and Aatu become great secret friends. Yes, secret. Every time she visited Aatu, Kelsey claimed that she was going to her friend's house to play. In reality, Kelsey doesn't have any friends yet and has noone to play with. Plus, she is nearly an only child, only having a problematic few month old baby-brother, who isn't much fun, and parents who aren't super involved anymore as they are taking care of said baby, who always seems to be sick.
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Kelsey is an eight-year-old girl who lives on an Earth in which viscets have not been yet discovered, and they are very rare. The viscets on Earth are a bit smaller, and range from around 6.5-7 feet on average. Not many viscets exist in this world yet, and they know how to hide well. Compared to other animals, they have amazing problem solving skills and rational thinking. If I were to win and could continue the story of Aatu and Kelsey, later along the line Aatu would be discovered and examined for a while. Aatu would be taken away and put in the local zoo for showing. He would be a world-wide craze. Soon after, two or so more viscets would be discovered, and once humans realize that the viscets have only been super gentle and afraid, the people would start to protest and try to get Kelsey's friend back. Aatu and Kelsey are reunited.

[birdbones]

Username;; redwolf466

Name;; Amissa Unus

Gender;; male

Name Meaning;;
Amissa Unus means Lost one in latin. this name means to me that Amissa Unus is lost he's free to do what ever he wants when ever he wants where ever he wants he is completely free because he's lost

Extra:
Amissa Unus was very very young when he got lost, his family and he were very happy together. one day Amissa Unus's mother and father had to go to a work meeting, leaving Amissa Unus at home, by him self. The age the Amissa Unus was at it was an adventurous age wanting to go every where, his mother and father had not Locked the door properly, Amissa Unus ran up to the door charging at it *clonk* *bump bump bump* "Ouch". Amissa Unus had gotten out side he sat up, looking around this huge strange world. hearing a *crash!* he turned his head to hear where it was coming from, "ohh look" he was staring at a cake shop he ran across the road as fast as he could dodging cars. he got to the other side he was out the front of the cake shop. looking back he could not see his home. he made up his mind that he would go for a wonder, see some sights, go new places. Explore, yes that sounded like fun so off he went. after hours of walking he reached the edge of the forest it was forbidden for any one to go in there. but he didn't care so the entered the forest. he heard foot steps that was the last thing he heard before he could hear, see and smell no more. Opening his eyes not remembering much.

he asked "where am I?".
a soft voice answered "don't worry dear child your safe".
"where am I?" Amissa Unus asked again
the soft voice answered again "where you are my dear is in the forest, the middle of the forest"
"w-h-a-t?" Amissa Unus asked tiredly
"you need rest, sleep little one"
after a few more hours of sleeping Amissa Unus woke up, got up and had a look where he was " Hello!" he called out the soft voice answered again "your awake, come, come sit down you must be confused "
"a-h yes I am, where am I,why am I here, who are you, how do I get home?"
"well to start wit whats your name?" she asked
"its umm its my name is. whats my name!" he cried
its alright my dear one I am Flora or some call me The lost one if you would like I will call you Amissa Unus. i found you collapsed and wounded on the forest floor"
"what happened to me?" asked Amissa Unus
"he found you"
"He?" Amissa Unus questioned
"he is the one of the forest feeding off young ones and lost ones, you must be careful"
"come, I have something to show you"
Flora lead Amissa Unus from the dimly lit room, down many stairs and into a large room, this was the first time Amissa Unus had acutely seen Flora she looked to be a young Lady, with dark fur, and a reddish mane with feathers plated into her hair. many scars littered her body. She dashed over to the far corner and grabbed a small box it had tiny engravings on it they looked like symbols of some kind. Flora opened the box and inside was a tiny charm in a vine.
"this my dear one, Amissa Unus were there amulet everywhere you go, it is very powerful it only speaks truth it will guide you and keep you safe. a thought you must still be careful" Flora put the amulet one Amissa Unus's neck, it glowed a very pale blue. he heard whispering listening in he tried to focus on one voice what was it saying, he couldn't tell
"what are they saying" he asked
"their telling you the truth" Flora informed him
after many years of Amissa Unus living with Flora
Amissa Unus woke up on a rainy day he was thinking what he would do with life
who was He?
how was he to survive being hunted?
and why did Flora give him the amulet?
Amissa Unus's thinking was interrupted by a sudden *scratch,scratch, scratch, tat, tat, tat*
"FLORA! Whats going on!" he screeched
"Amis Come with me, QUICK!"
she lead down the stairs to the room where he first saw Flora, everything was so different Amissa Unus was much older he could barely remember his real parents and now his life was flashing before his eyes
the door crashed to then ground, then with a horrible *tat,tata,ta* he heard them flooding in though the door.
"Amis, I may not be able to make it out with you, Amis take these" she said handing him a bow and some arrows
"RUN" she yelled pointing to a very very small trap door
Amissa Unus obeyed jumping thought the tiny door slamming the hatch behind him.
running down the passage way looking be hind him
he had been running for what seemed like hours
he had to rest
he sat him self down, and waited he waited for Flora
was this it?
would he never see Flora again?
What were they?
will they get thought?
are they all gone?

but he was asking him self all the wrong questions
he should have been asking:
when will they get in?
when will they get to me?
she's gone isn't she?
when should I start running again?
should I be waiting?

*Pita,pata*
swinging his head around he saw something coming towards him. quickly he scooped up his bow and arrows
aiming for it
almost letting go he hear
"wait!" it was her Flora was alive
he dropped his bow and came running up to her,
"Run!" she said
and thats what they did more running
they ran for a very very long time
he thought he could see an end to the tunnel
he could!
when they got to the end Flora lifted the hatch just a little, peeking out she didn't see anything
"come on, I think it safe" she exclaimed
they both rushed out thought the hatch

outside of the tunnel it looked like dawn
although it was hard to see thought the think canopy of trees


that dawn Flora taught Amissa Unus to use his bow properly and when the sun came up that day they slept
Amissa Unus was awoken at night by a strange noise
"Flora" he whispered
"Flora!, wake up, were not alone"
Flora jumped but alert and looking around
"Amis get your bow and be ready to fight"
a strange figure appeared form the bush

"Nova?, is that you?" she questioned

"Flora!" Nova came up and hugged her
"Ive missed you so much my friend"

"me to" replied Flora

"who's this?"

"Well Nova I recused Amissa Unus form him"

'you can call be Amis" said Amissa Unus

"Why do you both look so frightened?" Nova asked

"WHAT DO YOU THINK!,WE JUST CAME OUT OF A SECRET PASSAGE WAY, OF COURSE WE WERE GONNA COME ALL THIS WAY PICK SOME FLOWERS AHHHHH WHAT DO YOU THINK!, HE CAME AFTER AMIS WE ALMOST DIED!" she yelled

"Flora, I-i didn't know" Nova said shaking

"come we should get moving you two come back to my place for something to eat and rest, then I will accompany you both to Mother oak' she told them

They walked for only a few minutes until they retched Nova's shack

"ok, Flora you can sleep here" He said pointing to a small bed

"and you Amis can sleep here, one the couch, I don't have any other beds" He pointed to a very very large couch

Amissa Unus snuggled down under the blankets Nova gave him
he whispered a song his mother use to sing to him:



As the stars shine down
The lone wolf of the town
Howls to the moooon
I have roamed alone all my life
and my only wish is to have a pack of my own

slowly Amissa Unus drifted off to sleep

"Amis my dear its time to wake" said Flora

"wh-a-at?" he replied slowly and reluctantly Amis got out form under his blankets
suddenly it hit him this wasn't home, he was being chased by a killer or something
any day could be his last.

they sent off traveling later that day. after a few hours of walking they came across a large oak, it looked like someone was living there, so they knocked on the old oak a door opened and a deep middle age voice boomed "what do you want!" the voice said
we were just wondering if we could stay the night we've been walking for hours. "who are you!" the voice said
Flora introduced every body
"oh Amissa Unus, so your the one with "magical powers"" the voice cackled
"im Tiger, you can stay the night but thats all"
"thank you tiger" said the three
Amissa Unus wondered around the small oak house, he heard a small voice humming he thought he recognised it
he followed the humming until he found a Girl about his age he saw stiching something together.
the girl turned around and said
"Kyia is that you?" she said neveosously
"hmm who?" questioned Amissa Unus
"KIYA IT IS YOU" she yelled excitedly
so that was my name thought Amis
he suddenly recognised the girl
"Cindy?"
"yes thats a me"
"ohh Cindy I've missed you so much, also I am Amissa Unus now"
"why are you here" he asked
"Tiger found me at the edge of the forest, he promised me that if I went with him we could kill Tiko and we'll be king and queen of the forest ruling everything. crushing our enemies" Cindy imitated bitting down on a viscet's neck
"Cindy?"
"yes?, Amis"
"you weren't like this"
"so!, Who cares!,...I've changed" she said proudly
"do you like the new me?"
"Cindy, i don't know who you are, obviously the old Cindy is gone" Amissa Unus turned away and walked out to the main room

Tiger lead the three to there beds, they all settled down to sleep.
Amis was restless he couldn't stop thinking about Cindy
after a while Amis got up and went out to the back yard, there was a large swing to the right of him, he couldn't see who was on it but he was pretty sure it was Cindy, she was sitting with her head down, sobbing.
Amissa Unus felt horrible so he walked up to Cindy and sat with her on the swing, She turned her head away from him
"Cindy" he said
"maybe you changing was for the best"
"remember when you were such a wimp you would never try anything"
Cindy giggled, and hugged Amis
"you know, I missed you more then you missed me" she whispered
they sat on the swing for most of the night, finally Amis when back to bed and feel asleep

In the morning tiger bang them breakfast, they all ate quickly they said there goodbyes
just as they were walking away Cindy yelled
"Wait!,I'm coming with you"
she said goodbye to Tiger
and followed the three

Cindy already knew that this wasn't the last time they'd see Tiger...

[Parasitic Rat]

if you want me to be completely honest I did not even read the usernames of the people trying out. i may have caught sight of it without realizing it but if I didn't then it is purely a coincidence that i picked red wohlf as the name of the legend when the person below me's username is redwolf466. i swear I didn't mean for that but if there was more time before the end date i would have changed it the name to whateved else i could think of.

Username;; ~Prophecy~
Name;; Aatu
Gender;; Female
Name Meaning;; Finnish form of a german name that means noble wolf.

Extra;;
The morning of September 28th was filled with small gusts of wind and a slight chill in the air. Kelsey walked to school that morning with confidence. She had done her research and was proud of the project she had completed the night before.
Kelsey was young, very young. She had just started third grade only a month ago at age eight years old. This was the first big project of the year for her english class, and she had to research a legend or myth. Kelsey was one of the first to claim a topic, and she chose the small local legend, "Red Wohlf."
Kelsey volunteered to go first, because even though she was a shy kid, Kelsey was proud of her final project and couldn't wait to show off how good it was.
Kelsey started off the PowerPoint presentation she made.
"The story I chose was Red Wohlf!" Kelsey estatically squirmed as she watched her teacher, Ms. Kelley, write that down on the grading paper.
"In case you were wondering, yeah, I spelled Wolf right! The name comes from the.. uh... or- ori- origin... of this lllll.....local legend! The guy who first en-encountered Red Wohlf was not able to spell well so when wrote down his experience he spelled it "wohlf" instead of "wolf" soooo yeah! that's why it is spelled like that!" Kelsey looked to her teacher for approval, and when she got the approval, she moved on to the next slide.
----------------------
Kelsey explains the "Red Wohlf" Legend, which is like bigfoot.
One day a homeless man had been walking thorough the woods, and caught sight of something. It seemed to be at least 6 feet tall. At first he thought it was a human, then Bigfoot, but he caught a glimpse of the face, at it was indeed like a wolf. He ran around yelling that he found a new species, a red colored wolf that can stand on its own two back feet. Reports told him to write down his experience for the paper, and he spelled wolf as wohlf, so he referred to the creature as "the red wohlf." Everyone deemed him crazy, but more people said they thought they saw the same red wolf-creature lurking in the woods. Soon it became a local legend, and since not many actually believed it like they didn't believe in bigfoot, noone took it that serious. There were plenty of fake claims of sighting and attacks for attention, including one where a man put fake bite marks and cuts onto himself to make it look like he had been mauled and came running out of the woods claiming Red Wohlf attacked him. Many people were afraid until reporters said it was fake.

Red Wohlf is Aatu. She roams the woods near Kelsey's home and sleeps in an abandoned barn. Later in the story Aatu meets Kelsey and the two have some fun. Kelsey starts coming back to the spot she found Aatu and Aatu learned to wait. Aatu learned to respond to the name Red Wohlf, but was later given the name Aatu by Kelsey, who had heard the name because she met a dog at the park with that name. The dog's owner explained the meaning to her. Kelsey and Aatu become great secret friends. Yes, secret. Every time she visited Aatu, Kelsey claimed that she was going to her friend's house to play. In reality, Kelsey doesn't have any friends yet and has noone to play with. Plus, she is nearly an only child, only having a problematic few month old baby-brother, who isn't much fun, and parents who aren't super involved anymore as they are taking care of said baby, who always seems to be sick.
---------------
Kelsey is an eight-year-old girl who lives on an Earth in which viscets have not been yet discovered, and they are very rare. The viscets on Earth are a bit smaller, and range from around 6.5-7 feet on average. Not many viscets exist in this world yet, and they know how to hide well. Compared to other animals, they have amazing problem solving skills and rational thinking. If I were to win and could continue the story of Aatu and Kelsey, later along the line Aatu would be discovered and examined for a while. Aatu would be taken away and put in the local zoo for showing. He would be a world-wide craze. Soon after, two or so more viscets would be discovered, and once humans realize that the viscets have only been super gentle and afraid, the people would start to protest and try to get Kelsey's friend back. Aatu and Kelsey are reunited.

Winner!~
I liked the name, and the story was well written, as well.

Thank you everyone for entering ^^

[dzo]

Thank you so much <333