
ROUND FOUR
this round is the last round I believe, unless there's just 2-4 forms I cannot choose between, and then we'll have a tie breaker round to determine the winner. Since we're nearing the end of this competition I'm going to give you more a little more freedom with the form but there will still be limitations. There is no real prompt but there are some things I'd like to see you do with your forms. First and foremost, I do want to see character development, this is very important. Also keep in mind your original personality for your character, and be consistent with your other forms, straying from what you initially had too much will likely deduct points. For what I want from you in this round, I want to see what is in this viscet's future. Is it bright, is it grim? Is there a war, is it peaceful? What does their future hold and how does that mold or change them if at all? It's up to you how where their path might go, but give me a glimpse of what may be in their future. You can depict this how you will but it must their future setting of some sort. You'll have about 1000 words to tell me what their future holds. You can also have either 800 extra words OR 4 art pieces. The word extra does not have to be about their future / can be anything you want. The 4 art pieces can be any type of art (including comics and animations). As always prettying up is fine, but no neon or brightly colored text.
*remember to keep your form consistent throughout the competition. and link your 3 other rounds' forms in your round 4 form. do not edit any of your previous rounds' forms.
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Prompt: A Glimpse of Their Future (1000 words max)
Extra: words (800 max) [b][i]OR[/i][/b] art 4 pieces (can be any art including comic, animations, etc)
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It had started with the commotion outside of her cottage.
Angry voices had filled her sleepy ears and bright, orange light warped shadows into beastly shapes before her bleary eyes, and for a moment, she was brought back to her years as a kit, when such surroundings had shaken her to her core and made her wail for the mother who had long since abandoned her. For a moment, she had been crippled with the past’s fear, letting it sink its fangs into her heart.
Then, she remembered her age. She remembered Jean, the betrayal, the anger, the outrage, her seclusion and her independence and her heightened hatred--
And then, she was back to the present, and iron-willed again.
Malloria’s ears pinned back as she rose and swung her door open, her violet eyes flickering to the center of her doorway in frustration--and then her frame stiffened while a sickeningly sweet smile crested her muzzle. Oh, dear.
“Well, Judith, how long has it been since we’ve last chatted?” she purred, the icy cold glare she received from the brown-furred Keita standing next to Judith barely making Malloria bat an eye. “And little Keita, too. Why, I think you were just knee-high last time I saw you. Haven’t you grown into a precious little thing-?”
“Cut the chat, Malloria. We know what you’ve been up to,” Keita spat, lashing her tail in clear distaste. “Since when has an illness remedy carried a side effect that renders the patient permanently disabled? Since when has a love potion caused deadly obsession for the target? What’s wrong with you!? You’re sick-!”
“You’re ruining the good name of white magic,” Judith interrupted coolly, her furry, leopard-like tail brushing against Keita’s flank to cool her blazing outrage. “We just thought you may want to know that your village doesn’t quite appreciate the lies you’ve been feeding them.” Angry looks followed Judith’s words, as if she and Keita had swayed her people that easily. Oh, what a beautiful little pair of fools they were, being so hopelessly ignorant. They couldn’t help it, she supposed.
Malloria, however, was smart. She’d always been smart, she liked to think; she knew when to be up front, when to play the victim, when to play dumb -- and the middle case was the perfect decision, considering the unsure looks on most of the crowd’s muzzles. Oh, how wonderfully she could play a fickle instrument like the heart. Her expression, once pleased to see ‘old friends’, crumbled into a disbelieving expression, her ears flat against her head.
“Why would you accuse me of such a thing?” she wailed, tears springing to her eyes at just the right moment. “I just--I just wanted to make everyone happy! I tried-- I’ve been trying so hard! I’m just not at my full power here, and-” She broke into a cacophony of sobs and broken sentences, as if years and years of guilt and stress finally came tumbling out of her, her head bowed in shame. “I-”
“Oh, shut up,” Keita snorted, her fur puffed out in a clear show of aggression -- but Malloria’s performance had swayed quite a number in the crowd, just as she’d expected.
“How dare you!? Lori has lived here for most of her life, and now some strangers come in and start ruining her good name? How do we know they aren’t the liars here?” a white-furred male snarled, glaring accusingly at Keita.
“You know what? You’re right. Malloria has been nothing but sweet to my son ever since he lost feeling in one of his hind legs. She brings him fruit when he’s not feeling well.”
“Are we really going to listen to a couple of jokers like these? Look at the yellow one! She won’t even look at us!” Keita had long since turned to stare at the crowds in disbelief, as if she were taken aback by how quickly the crowd had turned against herself and Judith.
“W-what? But you all…!” Her voice was thin, as if nervous to be facing a group with such anger directed at her now, instead. Judith’s amber eyes narrowed at Malloria, whose tears had thinned while a smug gleam had entered her own purple eyes.
“...fine.” Judith spoke softly, her tone unchanging as she finally turned to face the crowd behind her. “Don’t say we didn’t try to warn you when things go awry.”
“Oh, bogus, you fake witch! Get out of our village!”
“Go on, get! Both of you!! You’re not welcome here if you’re going to be threatening our enchantress!”
A rather grim expression crossed Judith’s muzzle as she nosed Keita and led the younger female toward the edge of the town, casting Malloria a final silent leer before they both fled, evading the lingering glares seeping into their pelts. Well, that had been a problem easily solved.
Sniffling, she blinked her tears away with her head still lowered as the crowd turned back to look at her -- and several of them trotted forward to press against her fur and comfort her, murmuring small words of encouragement.
“We know it’s not your fault, Malloria. It’s okay; Sammy has really gotten used to that bum leg. It’s better he’s alive rather than in a grave from that illness, right?”
“I always thought Daniel was a bit of a creep anyway...I guess that love potion just did the detective work for me. Ha!”
“You’ll always be our beloved enchantress, okay? Don’t worry about that. We all trust you.”
“Th-thank you all,” she sniffled, nuzzling into the masses of fur that sent nothing but shudders of disgust down her spine -- but she smiled and warmed the hearts of her pawns as to reassure them that she was ever their ally, bidding each of them a good night before they departed, and she was granted time alone. Finally.
Curling up in her nest, she growled at the stench of the villagers in her fur. She couldn’t help but wonder who had brought her to the attention of the likes of real white-magic witches like Judith and Keita; someone bragging about her, or someone with concerns? Her mind functioned smoothly to try and remember any uncertain expressions after the two had been chased out. Vivian had looked queasy, but that was from guilt. Lenny was outraged that Malloria was even questioned...Henry had had a distraught look on his face...but no one in her mind stood out. In that case, it must have been a casual discussion that came up. Disappointing, but nonetheless, it was good that her villagers were doing nothing but speaking highly of her. That meant she’d played her matronly part well.
Judith and Keita had been entirely correct, of course. Malloria, being a witch who dipped her paws into the realms of both black and white magic, could certainly give her blessings without a kick. But honestly, where would the fun have been in that? Her ‘mistakes’ only gave her leeway to show her pure, unadulterated grief and frustration toward her own ‘lack’ of power, which in turn only made her villagers thicken their trust in her. Love her more. Feed her undying, pretentious little soul with more and more leverage the more they traveled and told others about their beloved enchantress who cared so much about the folk who lived with her. Why, she was surely a name known quite well by now, even by those who had never even seen her. More sympathizers for her cause now that Judith and Keita, two among many white witches who had watched her leave as she was forced from her home as a child, had dared to step foot in her realm.
Tail twitching, her eyes dragged over to Morrie, who lay curled in the corner with his green eyes watching her rather timidly.
“Oh, darling, you’re right,” she hummed, laying her head down while soft sparks surrounded her nest. “I ought to start planning. I can’t be evil in the eyes of everyone,” she purred, “but I can certainly decide when I want to play rough.”
She knew that white magic was already being questioned because of the tales of Malloria’s real blessings; true stories of magic and benefitting illness recovery were being shot down and losing believers quickly, because with Malloria, the famous enchantress, those who were cured of illness had a less life-threatening backfire afterward. Her magic was not doubted. She was no longer the one alienated, no longer scorned like her old home had done to her.
This had just gotten the ball rolling, really. Now that she had one village entirely on her side, rumors would spread like wildfire again, and her puppets would move all their own without her guidance anymore. She’d tuned them so finely that she could just see it all now--
In her mind’s eye, she fantasized the best of the best being kicked from their homes, made a mockery of as they fumbled to prove their worth. Witches who showed their power without a consequence would be accused of consorting with demons for flawless ability, and hatred for the authentic white witchcraft would bloom. Keita would cry. Judith’s calm and unnerving resolve would shatter.
Maybe, then, some of those who knew of Malloria, the little girl they’d cast out, would feel remorse for what they had done. Maybe they’d come crawling back to her, beg for forgiveness, wallow and plead like they weren’t ants beneath her. Oh, how sweet it would be to crush them there, watch the hope and desperation drain from their faces...it was almost too good to imagine. All the while, the malevolent forces defending her would give her more strength. More ability to crush her enemies while she used nothing but her smooth words to urge her sympathizers on, ever escalating until her name became something feared by those who had ever wronged her, and something like a blessing to the ears of those who loved her. She would rise to somewhat of an idol, the name of a hero and a saint. Someone who gave back and never gave up on herself, despite how many times she had failed. A pure-hearted enchantress.
Meanwhile, the puppeteer would sit back and watch her little show with pride of what she had achieved; in just a few years, she would become something loved, something cherished. Others would finally feel for her what she felt for herself, and no one else.
Malloria’s eyes slipped back shut with a pleasant smile crossing her muzzle. Her pelt itched with anticipation already; to think--soon, her power would be unmatched. Soon, she would be invincible.
Soon, others would finally learn what happens to those who wrong Malloria.
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