[Mint Chip]

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name; Nebula
gender; male
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I'm not certain what inspired this

Quick contest/Pseudo-FCFS - I'll only be accepting the first 10 completed forms.

what is a pseudo first come first serve?
it's a regular contest with a quick/short restriction so it's like a first come first serve but more people can enter

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name;
gender;
what does this viscet remind you of?
short story;

-all things in the form are required
-what does this viscet remind you of is whatever you'd like it to be. there's no right answer but I'm looking for creativity.
-short story has to be a minimum of 300 words long. but a maximum of 700 words.
-no editing your post. editing will disqualify you, sorry. c:
-prettying up is allowed (but may slow you down)
-good luck and no extras!

Ending once I've received 10 completed forms.

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[T h e M a r t i a n]

name;

Capricorn

Cap for short.

gender;

Male

what does this viscet remind you of?

A nebula or suprnova. Almost a mix of both if I am being honest.

short story;

"Cap, no." The sweet voice echoed in his ears as he went to leap upon a small cricket, yet flipped right over. He looked up at the older viscet, whom he called mother. Small tears formed in his eyes from the flip he had done, which to him hurt quite alot. His mother chuckled softly, before she scooped him up. "You see the stars?" She asked, curling up in a clearing beside him. He nodded, looking out over the expanse of the sky. "They are as countless as the sands of the beach." She said. "There are groups, you see, that form these shapes, and each shape has a story." She said to the baby. He tilted his head, and then nestled further into his mother's flank.

"One of them is Capricorn." She said, nuzzling the baby as he tilted his head the other way, obviojsly confused by why one had his name. "You are named after it, my Cap." She said with a small chuckle, and then he smiled, urging her to continue. "Anyways. He was once a trickster, who loved to mess around with anything that crossed his path, and the others didn't like that." She said. Cap nestled his head in his paws. "However, one day, his friends fell under attack from a monstrous beast, threatening to end them all. Using his trickery, he subdued the beast, and saved his friends." She said to him, drawing her tongue over her son's head.

"You are destined for great things, my Cap. It is written out in the stars." She said, as both she and Cap turned their attention to the stars. She turned her attention back on her baby, and then curled around him. "Sleep well my son." She said to the baby viscet, feeling him soon fall asleep, before she lifted up, tears sliding down her cheeks, shining like the stars that glistened up in the sky. Then, she vanished like the fog on a sunny morning.

story length: 330 words

[-Shaded-]

name;
Trenton

gender;
Male

what does this viscet remind you of?
Later tag arena!
(Oml, help me)

short story;
I roll on the ground and made sound effects as a shot the person behind the wall with a laser. Their pack glowed so they ran off to their base. "Pshh too easy" I spin my lazer tag gun in my hand but as I let my guard down I felt a harsh vibration coming from my jacket. "Heh got you" a feminine voice snickered and ran off.
-time skip-
"Trent! You got shot by a girl?!" Dulce silently screeched ," um yea, that's what the computer told me." Dulce looked at me dumbfounded, "Tsk, You were even camouflageing too..." Dulce shook his head in disappointment, "and I thought you were actually good at this" dulce spun on his heel and turned to leave but I grabbed him, "Dude I will get her back and destroy her!"
"Good job pal, now get back in there and win this thing!"
-And that is when the rivalry began-

[doglover947]

name; Star Dust
gender; female
what does this viscet remind you of? Glitter falling through the air.
short story; Star Dust ran with all her might to meet her friend Tucker, they've been friends since forever. Tucker has had a crush on Star Dust ever since the first time he saw her. He never told her. But the thing is Star Dust has always known. After school Star Dust began to walk home when tucker all of a sudden ran of the play grown to where she was standing. "May I walk home with you?" Tucker asked excitedly " Sure if you want." Star Dust said shyly. They both began walking once again. He suddenly spoke while looking at his feet. ( They are still walking ) "I was wondering If you could help me with something?" " There's this girl I like in our class!" Tucker said while blushing. "I don't know if I should tell her my feelings for her." Tucker now looked at Star Dust strait in the eyes. " What should I say to her?" "Well this is what I would do if I liked a boy, I would tell him my true feelings for him." Star Dust said while blushing wildly.
"What if she just thinks of me as a friend?" Tucker said wildly " You'll just have to ask her, but honestly I think if this girl doesn't have feelings for you then have her as a friend." By the time they got to her house it was already dark. " Well bye Tucker!" Star Dust said with a small shy wave.

[k a w a i i]

name; Galaxy
gender; Female
what does this viscet remind you of? This viscet reminds me of an old username I had, GalaxyGurl, since it has stars on it.
short story; Galaxy came from a shooting star, and landed through the chimney in my fireplace on Christmas eve. She was upset because she couldn't find her mother. I decided to take care of her, because I didn't want her to die. She was the sweetest little viscet and she helped me make children's dreams come true.

[clouds-move-on]

Saving my idea for future stuff! Thanks for the mention and congrats to the others. c:

[.Space.Unicorns.]

name; Ramona

gender; Female

what does this viscet remind you of?; She reminds me of the the pinwheel galaxy , weird right? Due to the small specks and swirl type things that are covering her coat she looks very similar to that galaxy. Her colors are similar too, and overall it makes her look very stunning.

short story;
Ramona sat inside her house lazily laying under the warmth of her blanket when a sudden flash of boredom hit her. This wasn't an uncommon thing for her, considering she was slightly bi-polar and would be lazy one moment and completely hyper the next. She quickly sprung out of her warm blanket and stood up, getting a slight head rush from doing so. Ramona was now in a new conflict, it was night and she had no idea what she wanted to do. There wasn't much you could do on your own on a Friday night so she let out a small sigh, but then perked up as a new idea came into mind. The girl grabbed her blanket hurried outside, slightly shivering as the cold air hit her. Soon she adjusted to the cold climate and made her way to the long grass that laid messily in her yard. She sprawled out over the grass and laid out her blanket on top of her for warmth and let out a content noise. Ramona looked up to the sky and spent the rest of the night admiring the beautiful blanket of stars that covered her. The girl spent countless hours just looking at the sky and making small wishes as little shooting stars passed by. This was something she never got tired of doing, even though she got bored of almost every other activity. The sky was always changing, she thought it was cool how nothing was ever the exact same. How no matter where you were always looking up at the same sky as someone else even if your miles apart from them. Sure it could be slightly scary sometimes not knowing what was out there, but that whole topic sort of just draws her in even more. Without even knowing Ramona drifted to sleep surrounded by the most comforting surroundings. The soft curly green grass kept her comfortable and the dull gray blanket kept her warm, this was certainly the best place to be. (337 words)

[KatLove]

Good luck everyone!
Sadly i cant write ;-;

[Gallifrey]

name; Amelia
gender; Female
what does this viscet remind you of? A nebula forming in deep space and the birth of a new galaxy. Snowflakes that have caught the light and now glow it's same color.
short story; It was cold....I could feel nothing but the snow covering my body, freezing me to the bone. Alone, I waited, hoping someone might find me. Hoping they'd save me from his pain. It was getting colder, I was going to die. Laying in the snow, I closed my eyes, prepared to let death take me. The first sound I became aware of was that is rushing water. It was soothing but, if I could hear water, than I must be alive. I shot up quickly, looking around and trying to check the state of my body. I was in a hollowed out tree, on the floor were warm blankets of animal hide and feathers. Poking my head outside, the sun was shining and birds flew overhead, no snow was anywhere to be seen. So, it had been a dream them. I didn't know weather to be relieved of terrified. It had been many years since I'd had that dream. Ever since Kirin had found me and adopted me into the pack, my dreams of dying alone in the snow had practically stopped. I do still remember that day sometimes but it's normally not so vivid. Perhaps, I should visit our shaman and see if he can give me some answers. Walking out of my warm den, I head for the grey-furred shaman who's sitting on a flat rock near the western side of the river. Our territory is in a hidden meadow, surrounded by river on all sides. Once I reach the shaman, I sit down quickly, offering him the feather of a blue bird. Our shaman loves feathers and often uses them in his rituals. He says that the feather of a blue bird is one of the most potent and works well for dream divination. I sure hope that is true. Perhaps, with this feather, he can figure out why this dream is plaguing me once again.

[kayyye]

name; Pixie (Pix)
gender; Female
what does this viscet remind you of? A galaxy or the Cheshire cat.
short story; Pixie was different. She did what most didn't dare to do. She went into the "haunted woods" in the night. Pix didn't understand why people were afraid. Everything seemed so peaceful. The sky was full of bright stars, it was a beautiful shade of purple and everything was just how it had always been. This was her happy place, this was her home.

Pixie had a secret hideout in a small cave on the shore of a small lake. She had become friends with most of the animals and had often shared her cave with them. Suddenly, things started to change. People had become so afraid of the forest that they had begun tearing down the forest slowly. This couldn't be happening. Pix was awakened by the feeling of an earthquake, though thats not what it was. She went out of her cave to see what this madness was. She saw that people were rioting to remove the so call "haunted woods" and they wanted to replace it with a shopping mall. Pix had no choice but to stop the construction. Pix ran as fast as she could to make it to the workers before they had done more damage. "Stop!" Shouted pix, "Stop the construction, stop!" "Who is this?" said a bystander. "Are they hurt?" said another. Pix notice her appearance was rather sloppy with leaves and twigs stuck to her fur. "My name's Pixie, or Pix for short if you'd please" Pix said as she pulled the rubbish out of her fur, "You can't tear this forest down, it's my home." "Listen Pixie," "Please call me Pix." "Err, Pix, this place is haunted and the people are frightened as for the ghosts that live here, it has to be take down." "There aren't any ghosts!" Pix shouted with anger, "This is my home and you can't tear it down, animals and friendly creatures live here, they are all my friends." The construction workers were not intimidated by Pix's looks, because of her color, they continued to go back to work. Pix growled and had no choice but to fight back. The people started to realize how much Pix cared for the forest that she was defending. "Wait! That Pix person is right!" someone shouted. "Yeah! This is her home after all!" "Wait, what?" Said one of the construction workers rather upset. "You can't tear down my home, it's not only mine, but it's also the animals." Pix said in a caring voice to gain sympathy. "Please, spare my home" The crowd started to chant, "Save Pix's home, Save Pix's home!"

The construction was eventually stopped and the forest was no longer deemed "haunted". The forest was later named after Pix, called Pixie Woods. Pix did it, she saved her home.