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Name: Rosa
Gender: female
Gender for breeding purposes: female
Owner: memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=800375

This viscet ties into the literature theme that's been going around. The poem Annabel Lee was Edgar Allen Poe's last poem. It's very sad and honestly, it breaks my heart. I drew a crown on this Viscet because of the first quote below. The clock is to represent the second stanza given. Their love is eternal and not even death could stop their clock from ticking. The rose represents the angels envy for Annabel's beauty that they can't compare to. Lastly, Mint Chip helped me with the eye color. Mint pointed out that gold would help represent heaven, which is a strong theme in the poem so I chose to go with that because of its meaning. To win this Viscet its simple, you have to make me cry. Write or draw something sad about/ involving this Viscet. Poem's are welcome too.

Rules: You can add extras but theres a 700 word limit. Artwork is allowed too. You may make it pretty, I love prettying up.

End Date: 8/17/17 (extensions can be given)

Mutations: none

"It was many and many a year ago,
In a kingdom by the sea,
That a maiden there lived whom you may know
By the name of Annabel Lee;
And this maiden she lived with no other thought
Than to love and be loved by me." - Edgar Allen Poe, Annabel Lee

But our love it was stronger by far than the love
Of those who were older than we—
Of many far wiser than we—
And neither the angels in Heaven above
Nor the demons down under the sea
Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee; " - Edgar Allen Poe, Annabel Lee

The angels, not half so happy in Heaven,
Went envying her and me—
Yes!—that was the reason (as all men know,
In this kingdom by the sea)
That the wind came out of the cloud by night,
Chilling and killing my Annabel Lee. " - Edgar Allen Poe, Annabel Lee

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Write or draw me something about this Viscet that is sad. (since the poem was sad I want to see the best angst you can give me.)

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[little_light]

drop, been too busy to fill out lol.

[Thebattleangel]

dropping

[jolteon]

mark!

[Unleashed Squiid]

Mark

[moonlit.]

Mark

[cyberdragon725]

*Used my limit but still open for stubs*

Username: cyberdragon725
Viscets Name: Abra
Gender: Female
Gender for breeding purposes: Female

Write or draw me something about this Viscet that is sad. (since the poem was sad I want to see the best angst you can give me.)

Fire at her feet, she fell in defeat
A martyr who'd reached her end
While the world slowed around her,
She thought back to where it'd begin

Reflecting her time, She recalled her egg
And the miracle of life inside
The day that it hatched
A child she could guide

She remembered her son,
With his eyes so bright
as he made his own path.
she wept as he faded from sight

No longer would he know a mother's embrace
She'd forever be missing from the years of his life
An emptiness he can never fill
Stabbing and tearing like a burning knife

This was all she could see
as her world turned black
and her chest slowed and stilled
he watched as her limbs went slack

This was not the end, however
For she still had a price to pay
For the light had blessed her family
And the dark would take away

So she was left, forever roaming
A timepiece ticking seconds that passed
A crown on her brow, for the fallen Queen
As the throne was inherited by the last

Come to me, Listen closely
For I have a story to tell.
Of a queen, a prince, and a crystal throne
And a shimmering Kingdom which fell.

He was seen as a menace,
The bane of the town,
A being so unlike the rest,
Who's light could never be found.

Yet she could always see
The viscet he could be
If given the opportunity
Of all the hatred, he'd be free.

She taught him compassion
Of a heart to be kind
To fight the corruption
And protect his just mind

Still she knew it would come
With shadows always near
And the smile she wore
Remained tainted with fear

Though a heart of gold,
She held deep within
She could never outrun
The weight of her sins

It came, biting, tearing her heart
With the town ablaze, flames eating the sky
She told him to flee, remember her story
And fought, knowing she would die

The first guardian, she heard them cry
Claiming hers and act of glory
Yet never they know, that her selfless act
Forever left her in purgatory

[LazyWolf]

Username: LazyWolf
Viscets Name: Annabelle
Gender: Female
Gender for breeding purposes: Female
Write or draw me something about this Viscet that is sad: Annabelle's parents both died when she was very young. They left her with a necklace with a small gold watch on the end. This is her most treasured possession. And as a child she was always an outcast. She would often go around and try to ask why everyone avoided her, but all the other Viscets would run off, afraid of her. After awhile she just gave up on trying to get a family or a single friend. She spent most of her time running from orphanage to orphanage. Eventually she just never went back to one. She was all alone on the streets until she adopted a small kitten who was also abandoned. She and the cat became very close and never separated. They are now very happy together living who knows where.

[illumié]

Things happened and ran out of time ^^ that's ok, best of luck to the winner!~

[~Teya~]

Oh wow ;o gorgeous