Wolves: The Shadow Forest Pg. 1 by ~Loki~

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Wolves: The Shadow Forest Pg. 1

Postby ~Loki~ » Tue Jul 05, 2011 11:36 am

Page one of my commic strip.

Krysti thinking: So alone... so alone...
Tucker: Krysti?
Krysti: Yeah?
Tucker: Watcha doin?

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Re: Wolves: The Shadow Forest Pg. 1

Postby Shark-salad » Tue Jul 05, 2011 11:44 am

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Re: Wolves: The Shadow Forest Pg. 1

Postby i-m-snek » Thu Jul 14, 2011 4:22 pm

Aw. So sad. Can't wait to see what happens next :D
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Re: Wolves: The Shadow Forest Pg. 1

Postby Meredith's Whiskers » Fri Jul 15, 2011 7:43 am

It looks awesome!
I've got the girl that makes me wanna live
And she's got the hear that makes me wanna give more
Now I've got amore amore amore, I've got amore amore amore
She gives me amore amore amore, I've got amore amore amore
We've got the whole world together
We've got our whole lives to spend together
We've got all our time to press our lips together
We've got our whole world forever
Drawing pictures in the sky
Swearing we could fly
Knowing others would die
Just to be you and I
Amore, OH!Hello

Catching Your Clouds Taylor Swift OH!Hello Sleeping With Sirens All Time Low
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Re: Wolves: The Shadow Forest Pg. 1

Postby Celozon » Fri Jul 15, 2011 7:48 am

One piece of advice, when doing comics where they are talking people tend to read the top-left words first then going down to bottom right. With the 3rd panal many would read it with Krysti saying 'yeah' then reading the oother one saying 'Krysti'. It would work better if you had Krysti saying 'yeah' on the right side of her body.

Otherwise this is looking wonderful, I'll be bookmarking this. :)
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Re: Wolves: The Shadow Forest Pg. 1

Postby ~Loki~ » Fri Jul 15, 2011 5:07 pm

Thanks for the nice comments!

@noleah, thank you for the advice, it is greatly appreciated! I will change that when I get time. :)
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Re: Wolves: The Shadow Forest Pg. 1

Postby omigono » Thu Aug 18, 2011 9:24 am

next please!!!
me and Blue-Eyes are sisters please don't ban us AND YES WE DO TRADE OCCASIONALLY!
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Just send over a fair trade and we'll see what happens. :)
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