Hello! This cat
does have a pupil edit, but does not have unnatural eye color; sclera color doesn't count, and the inside of their eyes is just orange ^^
Unfortunately the white on the back feels just a bit too stripey to work as is. If you edit the markings to be thicker, with more rounded connections between markings and less stray marks (sorta like these but if they had less white:
x x x), you should be able to keep the general concept there still! I made an
example of one way this could work, but you're more than welcome to try out other ideas you feel fit your concept better (and you can reach out on Discord to have them checked quicker if you'd prefer)
And finally, the face markings don't need to be a tattoo ^^ Skin pigment will change with fur pigment, and the skin color you have on the paws / the rest of the face could work as the skin color for the white fur, leaving the mask markings as the skin color that pairs with the red fur