Stars #495 - closed! by allynabean

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Stars #495 - closed!

Postby allynabean » Thu Oct 08, 2020 1:34 am

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for this kid, tell me whether or not they like swimming, and why!
if they like swimming, where's their favorite place to swim :0?
ends Oct. 14th, 11:59pm EST

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Name: stormstride
Gender: female
Rank: patroller
Clan: falls of eden
Description: lilac ticked tabby with low white and hazel eyes
Age: 17 moons
Edits: scars, claws [nr], minimal fur edits, ear tufts [c]
Owner: Vivika
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Postby Lex. » Thu Oct 08, 2020 2:11 am

Username: Lex.
Cat Name: Lynxbane
Gender: Male
Rank: Warrior
Clan: (cc)
Age: 53 moons
Prompt:

This cat really dislikes the water! Here's why,
It all started when he became a warrior. He was mentored by the greatest warrior at the time, Frostclaw. He was a big cat, and a great deputy. Lynxbane had big paws to fill being Frostclaws' apprentice. Lynxbane was also responsilbe for contruction within the clan, like rebuilding the dens, and keeping drafts out of the nursery. There weren't many apprentices at the time, so that job stuck, and he was solely in charge of it. It wasn't very fun, but he didn't have much of a choice. The leader at the time, Darkstar, wasn't doing so well. In his old age, he was very frail, and 2 of his lives dropped like flies in the past leafbare due to greencough. The clan knew he wasn't doing well, and to be frank it was obvious that Frostclaw was getting worried as well. Frostclaw spent most of his waking hours with the sad excuse for a leader, tending to his sore through and coughs to help the current medicine cat.

Lynxbane knew all this because he was ordered to build a shelter over the entrance to Darkstars' den, to keep the natural elements out. It was the rainy season, so there was bound to be downpour any day now. When the rain did come, it came mercilessly, and it didn't leave for days. The river was beginning to flood. This river passes right behind the camp, just below, in fact. Lynxbane tried his best to redirect the water with the help of one of the newest warriors, made a warrior just a moon before him. Sorrelstripe and Lynxbane created a ditch next to the river, which aided their cause a little bit, but it was already too late. The river water was overflowing, and quick. It was time to evacuate.
In groups of 6, the cats left the camp, fleeing to the moor. However, some cats lagged behind. Darkstar and Frostclaw were struggling to get out. Frostclaw looked awful, and was very clearly starting to become as sick as his dear leader. The raging water tugged at their paws. Darkstar, tired and cold, looked at Frostclaw. He simply said these words. "I must go, I will see you in the stars, old friend." He let go of Frostclaw's tail, knowing the sacrifice he needed to make. Frostclaw in show, started to run to get him, but Lynxbane grabbed his tail. "We have to go, Frostclaw. He willingly chose to save us. Hurry, before we really get stuck."
And so they ran to the moors and met the clan there.

The clan was tired. A queen had just kitted in a tree, and one kit was nearly lost to the flood as well. The poor clan had to live in old badger sets, which stunk. The medicine cat was frantic, a litter of kits to care for and a sick deputy. It was clear that Frostclaw wasn't going to get much further either. So, he called a clan meeting.
"I have a new deputy to appoint today. In fact, a new leader. I think we all know, it's going to be impossible for me to continue. With this greencough, and without my friend." he paused, and coughed. "By the power invested in me, as your leader, I hereby appoint Sorrelstripe, to be your deputy."
The clan cheered her on, but inside they were all grieving their leader, and Frostclaw. He wasn't going to make it to the waterfall cave, where the leaders recieved their nine lives. He and Darkstar were the same age anyways, it would be impossible for him to lead. So as the entire clan suspected, within 5 days, he left the mortal plain to join his dearest friend, Darkstar.
Sorrelstripe, now the leader of a band of sad, soggy cats, made her journey to the waterfall cave as soon as possible, leaving Lynxtail in charge.
He sat a ways away from the clan, nearing the edge of the forest. The water, it didn't reach them anymore. The storm died down after a while. The flood left him all scratched up, giving him battle scars. A battle of the mind. It had a big effect on Lynxbane. An impressionable young cat, now terrified of the water, and the monster hiding in it.

(big clan backstory :0)
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Re: Stars #495 - open!

Postby SilentMelody » Thu Oct 08, 2020 4:22 am

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Re: Stars #495 - open!

Postby Griffin Torrens » Wed Oct 14, 2020 12:44 am

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Re: Stars #495 - open!

Postby Vivika » Thu Oct 15, 2020 11:27 am

    Username: Vivika
    Cat Name: Stormstride
    Gender: Female
    Rank: Patroller (future lead patroller)
    Clan: Falls of Eden
    Age: 17 moons
    Prompt:

    The waters beckoned. Tossing and turning, tendrils pulling her under. She couldn't breathe, she couldn't--

    Her eyes flew open. It was dark. Too dark. The crash of waves against the shoreside sent her rolling. She swallowed a hiss as her leg connected against the side of a rock. Images flashed through her mind: white, frothy waves against towering rocks… Her chest tightened.

    “Storm?”

    Her gaze flickered to the direction of the voice. Blue eyes met hers, gaze steady. Soothing. A familiar stranger; one she owed her life to. It came back now -- the events of the past few days. Letting out a shuddering breath, she tried for an apologetic smile, "Elaine. I didn't mean to wake you."

    The elderly she-cat drew close. "Nonsense, young one." She pressed a comforting nose to Storm's flank, before sprawling out beside her in the sand. "A night terror?"

    “Just... flashbacks,” she murmured, shaking her head. “Memories.”

    "Do you remember anything else? Since your arrival?"

    She blinked. "I-I'm not sure." Her eyes flicked to the waters lapping at the shores. She shifted close, until the cool waters could just slide over her paws. "The waters. They have something to do with it… "

    "How do you feel about it?"

    Her jaw parted. "I…"

    Tossing and turning, tendrils tugging her und--

    She pressed her paws into the cool sand. She feared it. The waters had brought her to this foreign world, dragged her body across jagged rocks, before throwing her onto these shores… It was hardly the worst of it. The worst was the barrier she found herself slamming against. The hidden scars that cut deeper than the fresh ones marring her flesh from knowing she couldn’t remember. Her memories had been shattered -- her past, her identity -- taken. Snatched by the waters.

    A weakness she tried to fight. To remember something. Anything. Nothing ever came of it, save for surfacing that deeply-rooted fear and hatred of the tides that had stolen something so precious.

    But was that all? She paused, frowning. No. There was something else. A pull, she couldn’t deny whenever the waters lurched close. A connection? The cool waters against her paws seemed to answer for her. Much as she ignored it, the pull was there, ever-present, tying her to the seas. Perhaps…

    She rose to her paws, hesitantly, eyes locking with her target. Her heart was already racing -- what was she thinking? Heart in her throat, she waded into the waters.

    Her breathing quickened. The waters swarmed, covering her paws, before they crept to her chest, wrapping her into a silky embrace. It was familiar. Too familiar. The brush of water against her pelt, the spray of salty seas in her nostrils, the roar of the oceans in her ears. Almost like she'd done it hundreds of times before.

    Were there answers that lay within these waters?
    There was only one way to be certain.

    Swallowing, she remained in her position, and let the waters rise. Rise to surround her as if she were one of their own. She closed her eyes, relaxing. Letting go.


    Waves washed over her, pulling her under. She was sinking, sinking, sink--- then release. She surfaced, gasping. Where was she?

    "Storm!" A grey tom with a grin that lit up the skies. Something stirred within. Who was he? An acquaintance, a friend-- Her eyes locked with the tufts just atop his ears. Ones that mirrored her own. A brother?

    "You coming to the meeting? Or you gonna swim like some haunted fish to scare the newcomers?" The tom shook his head, huffing as he paced along the narrow path. It was flanked left and right by waters -- like a bridge, a passage. The Broken Passage.

    Her heart skipped a beat. She was in a memory. Her memories.

    “...right, you’re on patrol. ” He seemed disappointed. “No, no, it’s fine. I just…” She leaned close, soaking in the steady cadence of his voice, the teasing grin. “...I don’t know why you like it here. The water’s freezing, Storm. So many rocks ~ stars, I’m not sure how you don’t hurt yourself.”

    Pieces clicked. She liked… swimming? In this place?

    He chuckled, “You must be part fish.”

    His voice faded. The memory fading as she slipped beneath the seas. Beneath the place they called the Broken Passage ~ a place that resonated with her soul.

    He was calling. Screams shattered by winds and waves. A storm. A vortex of voices and snippets of conversations all swirled into one. She tried to pick out the one voice, the one thing she needed.

    The waves crashed.



    “Storm?”

    Her eyes flew open. Dawn had arrived, the soft glow of the morning filtering through-- a gentle nudge from the she-cat brought her back around. The question. Right, how did she feel about the waters?

    “It’s… complicated.” A hate-love relationship. Born out of love, but muddled with fear. Past her adored the waters, adored swimming-- her favorite place to swim being the passage to scare newcomers. But present her? Her stomach lurched at the thought of facing them, but she and the waters were one. She couldn’t fear them, much less shun them. What was stolen from her had been returned. Returned by the thieves themselves. The waters were a place of loss, of discovery, of love and fear. “Elaine…”

    It wouldn’t be easy, but she was ready. Ready to face what the tides would throw at her.

    “I know how to get home.”


    // complicated relationship with swimming and a backstory snippet?? and ahh, i enjoyed writing for this bb. best wishes to whoever wins this gorgeous kitty! <33
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Re: Stars #495 - open!

Postby allynabean » Fri Oct 16, 2020 2:52 am

    this is closed, i'll judge asap!!
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Re: Stars #495 - open!

Postby allynabean » Fri Oct 16, 2020 7:48 am

    oh man, all of the entries were so so good!!
    however, congrats to Vivika! your story was so wonderfully written, and the character and backstory you gave stormstride were incredibly intriguing- i'd be excited to follow more of her story!! enjoy your new cat <3
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Postby Vivika » Fri Oct 16, 2020 9:08 am

    Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed
    her story, ahh. It's so sweet of you to say
    & I'm excited to develop her further! <33
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