[grifforik]

Alrighty ladies and gent's, this baby will be a PPS, it is a surprise adopt and will grow once a winner is chosen!
Now, to win this baby I wanna hear a short poem or nursery rhyme based on this baby or viscets in general, no more than 300 words total! it may, or may not have mutations >.> (extra points for making the poem up yourself!)

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make sure you give credit to the Author if you did not write the poem or you will be disqualified. I'll be checking each poem so please make sure you're not disqualified for something so simple.

username: funderful;;
name: belianova
gender: female

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Mutations:
Ear edit - Doberman - Uncommon
Docked tail - Rare

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[SmileChild]

Username: smilechild
Name: anna
Gender: female
Poem/Rhyme:

Flower gleam and glow,
Let your power shine.
Make the clock reverse,
Bring back what was once mine

Heal what has been hurt,
Change the fates design.
Save what has been lost,
Bring back what was once mine

(Since shes abandoned ^^)

[Lady_Novianti]

Username: EclipseRose
Name: Sovana
Gender: Female
Poem/Rhyme:

Little drops of water,
Little grains of sand,
Make the mighty ocean
And the pleasant land.

Thus the little minutes,
Humble though they be,
Make the mighty ages
Of eternity.

So our little errors
Lead the soul away
From the path of virtue
Far in sin to stray.

Little deeds of kindness,
Little words of love,
Help to make earth happy
Like the heaven above.

by Julia Fletcher Carney

{Last two lines like her being abandoned then Adopted}

[jumu]

Username: Lioth
Name: Hyrum
Gender: Male
Poem/Rhyme:
The sun rises in the east
Only to set in the west
The sky gets brighter
Only to get darker

Sometimes life goes up
Sometimes life plummets down
Sometimes you don't know what to do

But just remember
That no matter who you are today
Tomorrow
And every day
I love you for you

[cyberdragon725]

Username: cyberdragon725
Name: Riley Thatcher
Gender: Male
Poem/Rhyme:

By:cyberdragon725
Running, Running, faster now,
A wondrous world awaits to wow.
Many colors all quite bright,
To turn the darkness into light.

Racing fast, at the speed of sound,
To race the darkness that is bound.
Will you win or will you lose?
There is only one who is free to chose.

The final battle, now has come,
The dark already has taken some.
The battles rage on to start a war.
The darkness fights to destroy our core.

If no one steps in then all is lost.
Will you fight and at what cost?
For this battle is waged, at the very start.
Found deep inside each viscets heart.

Now that you know, what would you do,
If the battle was fought inside of you?
It's your choice to make, so choose it wise.
Will you face it on earth, or take to the skies.

The greatest choice and the hardest strife,
Is the battle of death and the struggle for life.
Whether you win or lose it all,
Remember one day your going to fall.

You'll never know how hard I try,
I'll never just let my life pass me by.
So, It doesn't matter how high you can climb,
Let's just keep taking it one step at a time.
(211/300)

[Blackbirds]

Username: Noxyum
Name: Lehky
Gender: tbd
Poem/Rhyme:

As the sky falls upon this world
the sun shall seek the darkness
and one shall stand to save the
innocence and light

(I created this poem myself!)

[legendari]

Username: legendari
Name: tba
Gender: tba
Poem/Rhyme:

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[stormzien]

Username: tigerblue
Name: Crunch
Gender: male
Poem/Rhyme:

Led so hot
Hot hot leg
Leg so hot
You fry and egg

Written by 4chan- reddit

[Vluwu]

Username ;; BluKitty53
Name ;; Sovia
Gender ;; Female
Lullaby ;;
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Deep in the meadow, under the willow.
A bed of grass, a soft green pillow.
Lay down your head, and close your eyes.
And when they open, the sun will rise.

Here it's safe, and here it's warm.
Here the daisies guard you from every harm.
Here your dreams are sweet, and tomorrow brings them true.
Here is the place where I love you.

Deep in the meadow, hidden far away.
A cloak of green, a moon beam ray.
Forget your woes, and let your troubles lay.
And when again it's morning, they'll wash away.

Here it's safe, and here it's warm.
Here the daisies guard you from every harm.
Hre your dreams are sweet, and tomorrow brings them true.
Here is the place where I love you.
-
Jennifer Lawrence - Deep in the Meadow (Edited lullaby)

[funderful;;]

username: funderful;;
name: belianova
gender: female
poem/rhyme: word count: 300/300; written by me

hush, hush, don't you cry
may your paws leap and fly
i'll be here waiting for you
but first you must wait anew

the sky is shuddering
the ground is shaking
please stay here, my dear
i must run and fear

i hear a 'bang' so i must run
danger is hear, and isn't fun
you must wait, for i can't stay
i promise i'll return by the light of day-

...

she is gone, i'm afraid
she has reached the tip of the blade
she held your candle for too long
her love has burned your song

daughter of night, blood-stained flower
awaken! you hatch at the darkest hour
i pity your weak soul
so please, listen to this lull

found deep in the arms of a meadow
you are cradled in the roots of a willow
you shake, but i hold and admire you
for your shell is reflecting the night's hue

hatch now, my dear
stop trembling in fear
i want to heal your heart
grief is a sad work of art

as you grow, you'll feel sublime
powers shall bloom over time
your pelt is a mystery, shaped by shadows
and your eyes are striking, sharpened by arrows

but please, do be careful
your time alone won't be blissful
follow the trail, find your way
run with the wind, and smile for another day

time is a phase, and age is an illusion
your growth shall run into a collision
but that is okay
for your youth is made of clay

i must go, my time has run out
your essence must return to it's hideout
my body is fading
but my spell is masquerading..

...

where is she? i need her!
i miss the soft touch of her fur..

but i hear voices in my head.