Aloιѕ Trαɴcy wrote:Yes, More development for a villain character is needed. Such as Brokenstars past, and Mapleshades. Scourges as well.
Aloιѕ Trαɴcy wrote:Yes, Brokenstar is actually very well developed. I wont spoil anything about it though. Its a great book though! What character do you think needs the most development? Because even Tigerstar has great development
Aloιѕ Trαɴcy wrote:Yes, More development for a villain character is needed. Such as Brokenstars past, and Mapleshades. Scourges as well.
Aloιѕ Trαɴcy wrote:Pretty much to sum up Brokenstar, he turned evil because his foster mother neglected him and hated him, he never knew his real mother and he knew that his foster mother was not his real mother. He wanted to be the most powerful cat in the forest to show his foster mother he was powerful and could do anything he wanted to. He regretted killing all of the cats, and when he met Tigerstar and realized he was not alone in his struggle and he teamed up. He then found out right before his death that Yellowfang was his mother and his entire life flashed before his eyes and he was sorry for everything he had done. He went to the dark forest and trained many cats, and in the Last Battle he saw Yellowfang and he greeted her with tears and sorryness. he was then killed again by Yellowfang.
I just wrote a story XD
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