entry 2 - apricot dun frame overo by song&storm

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entry 2 - apricot dun frame overo

Postby song&storm » Sun Jun 05, 2016 1:07 am

    Second entry for this comp!
    really had fun with the markings ^_^
    apricot dun frame overo - ee/Aa/Dd/nO

    first entry

    Comments/constructive criticism appreciated!
    Lines by EmberWolf.
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Re: entry 2 - apricot dun frame overo

Postby MonoCerva » Sun Jun 05, 2016 1:48 am

There's just a little nitpick detail I noticed. The overo on the inside of the leg is possible but it would be leading in from the outside of the leg, not directly in the middle. The front leg looks fine. It's the back that bugs me a little bit.

But this design is absolutely beautiful! You did a great job :D
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Re: entry 2 - apricot dun frame overo

Postby song&storm » Sun Jun 05, 2016 2:11 am

Hmm I guess I overlooked that one, thank you for pointing it out, I'll try to fix that soon ^^ I'm glad you like it though!

edit: I fixed it (hopefully), I hope it looks better now!
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