Re: Nursery Batch #172 - Top Child UFA

Postby mellifluous » Sat Apr 02, 2016 5:53 am

    I'd very much appreciate an extension ^^'
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Re: Nursery Batch #172 - Top Child UFA

Postby opti-mism » Sat Apr 02, 2016 10:07 am

    Here as well! A few days would be fantastic omg
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Re: Nursery Batch #172 - Top Child UFA

Postby Beatnik » Sun Apr 10, 2016 4:36 am

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Re: Nursery Batch #172 - Top Child UFA

Postby Omosky » Thu Apr 14, 2016 12:40 pm

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Name:
Spook

Developing Power:
The effect appearing that his body does not reflect nor absorb light, seemly to let it pass through; aka transparency. It really has to do with his fur. His magic allows it to bend the light around himself, and thus makes it seem as if he's disappeared!


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"Can you see me?"
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"Oh... Okay then."


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Spook can't help but to feel like a nobody. Hardly anyone notices him anyways. Even his own name was a joke of how he seemed to just suddenly appear from no where.. He usually gets blamed for sneaking up on other parras, but honestly it's his magic going haywire and he doesn't mean to scare anyone. Any strong, distressing emotion seems to set it off. Once he's calm though it does like wise. As much as a joke the name is, Spook treasures it as is something given to him by his father.

He doesn't resent nor hate Ryder and Noodle. No, that is directed at the unknown. The unknown of if there are higher powers or not. Spook believes that if it's true, then that they are cruel beings for the irony they've given his family. While he is sure his sister would like to be able to see, he would like to be noticed, and yet their father is too busy due to his sister's blindness to even notice when his magic sparks.


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Always counting him as part of her family, whenever Dots is around the lower islands she makes the effort to always include Spook. Spook loves this bubbly parra for her unlimited kindness.


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Much a big brother figure, Pine helps to steer Spook's internal feelings to outward deeds. He has taught Spook a few handy skills and how to apply them, as well as how it feels to help others. Spook found this quite an inviting outlet. Still needing encouragement though, Pine is happy to be there when Spook needs a little push to ask others if they have anything he can do for them.


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Dots' son and a friend non-the-less. Spook often finds his feelings hurt by Kiton's careless words. Spook knows that his friend doesn't mean to hurt him, and so he tries his best to shrug things off. Every once in a while though Spook feels a need to actually bring something to Kiton's attention. Uncomfortable at first, Spook is slowly getting more comfortable speaking up about things.


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Dots' will sometimes ask Spook to watch her daughter. Spook loves this as it makes him feel a bit closer to Ryder, as it's what he does for Noodle. Regardless, Gouyen loves to mainly sit and read. Occasionally a few wise words will leave her beak and they'll be exactly what Spook needs to hear at the moment. Having quite a strong effect on Spook, he can't put his appreciation into words well enough to tell Gouyen how thankful he is for her insight.



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Re: Nursery Batch #172 - Top Child UFA

Postby Ph.D » Sat Apr 16, 2016 6:50 am

Good luck everyone :>
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Re: Nursery Batch #172 - Top Child UFA

Postby Evils » Sat Apr 16, 2016 9:50 am

Good luck everyone!
I am secretly rooting for someone.
I just forgot to say I had dropped out. > v <
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Re: Nursery Batch #172 - Top Child UFA

Postby mellifluous » Sat Apr 16, 2016 1:30 pm

Good luck
I didn't get to work on my form anyway but I'm fine with how it turned out
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Re: Nursery Batch #172

Postby Beatnik » Wed Jun 15, 2016 6:38 am

Ph.D wrote:
Spook
Though she's always been rather scarce she tends to appear in
instances, often sneaking around behind the furniture hoping
not to be noticed. Her being more of a typical cat, always
there but not 'around', while her brother's like a puppy, always
enjoying the attention and greeting others at the door. Spook
believes Ryder has always thought of her a little ghost, quiet,
timid, and humbling most of the time, jumping at the slightest
shadow but other times rather uncanny, odd and in general spooky.

Despite being a rather serious and introverted individual when
she's having fun or their close family is visiting she can be quite
light hearted and rambunctious.When Ryder is to busy helping
Noodle with one thing or another she does tend to wonder off.
Although Spook enjoys being around her family she spends more
of her time wandering than at home some days.

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Username:Ph.d,
I'm the current owner of one parra with the name Bleak, who was a myo by Zach.
For my form I've created a story to describe relationships and such, along with some art and small direct paragraphs explaining more on each person <3 The story starts after developing power and continues throughout my form. I would like to apologies for any disorganization ahead of time, I noticed that the individual sections on each parra in her family seem a little out of place as they are not part of the story but more for clarification of their normal relationship. I haven't made many large forms like this before and in general I am a fairly scattered person so again apologies for any 'disturbances in the writing or if the coding doesn't fit your monitor.


Developing Power: More on Spook, as my story is currently I don't believe it represents her average behaviour very well, as it takes place in mostly a rather exciting and joyous time, nor does it mention much about a power. So I thought before it starts I'd give a more personal in detail description to clarify a little more about her.

Spooks power(s) are sort of scattered and she clearly doesn't have much control over them nor does she intend to, as of yet. First off Spook will eventually learn that she is not by fault causing the nightmares in which her and Noodle have had throughout the first few years of their lives in which will continue on for an indefinite amount after she discovers it, more on occasion as they grow older. This is because of the growing hatred she had when they were very young, the leftover negativity built itself into a self destructive mess, the nightmares. Although Spook doesn't sleep much so its not something she'll realise for a long time.

Spook also is sort of opposite of her brother, she's a little larger than many of her siblings, going to most likely be a little larger than the average parra when she's older.

Her third seemingly oblivious to her 'power' would be a strange way in which strength and gravity seem to be affected by. Spook often finds herself with the ability to jump higher or fall much slower than other parras. This is most magical thing Spook really has about her, the ability to affect her body weight and strength along with others. Although she only seems to have little sprints of this every so often as a child as she grows older if she really tries to work toward it Spook would be able to in a way allow for other flightless parra's to fly, something that has been many of her relatives dream for a long time. This makes it a lot easier for her to jump around in the tree's or to jump across crevices and maybe one day rivers. But for now it seems only to be a bit of luck and effort, she has little idea of this magic.

I chose Ghosting by mothermother as Spooks song as I found it fitting to both her name and inspiring for her story. Back in the time when Spook hated Noodle she was sort of a monster, cruel and taunting. She'd brake things and have fits, sometimes running off for weeks or longer before someone went to find her. This forced Ryder to have to remove her from Noodle, since he realized this was the cause. Camniel was the best they could think of, so for a few months the sour baby stayed there. This was shortly before she came to realise Noodle was not so bad, Azrael and Hadriel made her realise that nobody was intending to cause her harm and that her family truly cared. When she finally came back to Ryder's she was very quiet, not quite the living hell she'd been before. Aside from the nightmares, in which Ryder never learned about, the house had returned to peace. If I were to add another song I might say infinitesimal also by mothermother, since it also seems to fit that story^ along with Spook sometimes believing that she has not effect on anything.

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Noodle
When they were a few years younger Spook had a strong
hatred form against her brother. Not only did he seem to
be the favoured of the two but she also blamed him for
forcing Ryder to change himself. Solemnly did she speak to
him for the longest time before she began to understand he
was not as awful as she thought. What changed her opinion?

When the nightmares began she would wake in panic, feeling
to awful to wake Ryder so she would sit and cry by herself.
Eventually one night she woke, she was hearing crying in her
sleep and thinking it was another nightmare she shook it off, as
she was becoming used to them. But she realised it was Noodle
who she found to be having the same nightmarish horrors in his
dreamsas well. The only thing he could see is what was in his
dream and imagination, making it all the more terrifying Spook
imagined.They began to bond over the instances and comforted
each other through many nights. Though Spook began to block
out the nightmares Noodle seems to still have them, and she
continues to try to help him through many sleepless nights.
After she began talking to Noodle she found they shared many
interests and realised he had no control over his blindness nor
did he force Ryder to change, as Ryder truly loved his kids and
wanted to change for them.

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Spook still worries about his blindness when they go on adventures but it makes her feel real awful when they leave him behind with their fathers so sometimes she'll drag him with her to help include him. They all kind of get protective of him when he's around since he's smaller but they have just as much fun with him there.

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Story time
Your just a kid. That's what Spook had been told when she asked complicated questions, which was often.
The previous day Spook had found a rather exciting but worrisome thing about herself. It had brought light to her eyes about how odd her situation was.

She had woken that morning with tired eyes, she felt anxious about something but wasn't completely sure about what it might be. Nothing wrong, but simply she felt unsettled. Maybe it was from lack of sleep, as per often Noodle would wake up real late and start wailing aimlessly, something Spook stopped understanding after hours of sleep lost. When they were younger she'd have the same nightmares but unlike Noodle she never quite took them as harshly. Or maybe she did, but she grew out of it and eventually she believed that they were gone and forgot whether they ever happened to her or whether they still did. The whole night she had spent up codling her sibling with burning eyes, she often did this to prevent her father from having the extra hassle, she hated him falling asleep throughout the day, worried he might hurt himself. Sleeplessness and an active daily life doesn't work to well, Ryder was already so worn out that he might not even wake to the shrill cries from his children and someone always had to take care of Noodle, always.

Spook stretched out across her pillow, pushing Noodle with her foot in hopes of waking the sleeping log. But as expected no amount of optimism would wake that kid, he wouldn't wake till after Ryder came up singing sweet songs. She was going to lay her head back down but realised she felt much to restlessness, a soft breeze blew a chill through her soft fur as the early morning light peaked through the brush outside and through the window nearby. Slightly agitated by this she removed herself from her warm pillow,stood and shook off the sleep.

She went to go put up her hair, but when she looked in the mirror she was reminded of her most debilitating problem, a blurred face reflecting back at her, she went back to her beside to fetch an old pair of racked up wonky glasses. Her most dreaded part of the morning routine. She was disgusted by the feel and look of the broad lensed things in which hunkered on her face with the most displeasing appearance. she let a sigh as she brushed up her hair into its usually messily pinned up appearance. She had been doing this for as long as she could remember, she had never thought she might be able to cut it short and was to awkward to ask Ryder for help anyways. But she still hated how it was always everywhere, hanging in her face making it even harder to see than usual.
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story time
It was odd for her to be up before Ryder, but it was most definitely an odd morning. Spook went down to the kitchen and began a breakfast for the family. She smiled as she worked, knowing Ryder would be relieved of the task and the stress. When Ryder woke up Spook was setting the table. He smiled ''I thought I heard someone up'' and gave her a little hug as thanks before asking whether or not some old Mickey mouse cartoons would be a good idea while they had the wonderful breakfast Spook had made for them. Excitedly she agreed and began setting up the old film while Ryder went off to go wake his other baby.
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Ryder, father
Personally little Boo quite enjoys when her father pumps up the radio and the two of them dance around the kitchen while Ryder cooks up some sort of meal to share with his kids. It makes her happy to see Her father take time to relax. She hurts to see how much he has changed himself for her and her sibling, probably more than her being upset about how much time Ryder spends with Noodle over her.

Other times when Noodles up she tends to wander off but whenever he's fallen asleep and Ryder's resting on the couch she'll crawl over and snuggle with her father, some time to just relax and laugh at black and white cartoons Ryder's kept from his childhood.

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story time
As Noodle joined Spook on the couch with a good pile and began to munch down the phone began to ring. Spook went flying for it but Ryder beat her to it and raced back to the kitchen, concealing the speaker as he whispered into the phone. Odd their dad was. After they finished their both delicious and nutritious breakfast and shut off the television they sat for a moment hoping to hear what Ryder was talking about. Listening closely the kids couldn't even make anything out, but when Ryder rushed back into the room he exclaimed that him and Razz had something important to do, he would pick them up from Camniel's house later that afternoon while Razz picked up Aech. They gave him hugs and watched as he ran out the door. Spook waited for a minute, confused and considering what they were going to do before she let out a gasp. She shrieked with fiery at Noodle forgetting his hearing was amplified, something about the adventure day being today! Noodle was dragged back into the house to gather supplies before they rushed out the door to head to Camniel's to meet with Aech, Azrael, and Hadriel, siblings of theirs.
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Razz, father
Spook is always entertained by Razz's outgoing
and straightforward personality. Though she
rarely see's her step/half siblings on his side
she'll often visit the tattoo shop and sit with
Aech watching as Razz creates intricate works
for his clients, sometimes even give moral
support some customers getting tattoo's as well.

Outside of the shop they don't see each other
quite as often but when they do she finds Razz to
have the most engrossing things to say and takes
great fascination in his words.

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Aech
Spook honestly doesn't care to much about appearance, though she still tries to be conscious of his insecurities about his appearance and tries to be careful when talking around him. Whenever she goes goes to Razz's they'll sit and draw, Aech being a much more developed artist sort of teaches Spook. She's learned a lot from him a in general respects his art and him as a 'person'.

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Camniel, father
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While Camniel seems rather aloof and it is common for him to
be off doing other things when she visits, Spook still find comfort
in knowing her dad's there.When the kids are really pumped for an adventure or something they'll often plead and beg for treats,
Dromiane and Camniel often giving in to make something for the
kids. Dromaine being the oldest of Cam's children tends to
care for the younglings and sort of teach them when she visits,
which is often. Spook almost feels more at home at Camniel's than
her other two fathers homes but can never seem to stay more than
a few nights.


Never is the house quiet when Spook and her siblings are there, they run around playing all sorts of intricate games, often 'forcing' Camniel and Dromaine to also join them in the fun.



Azrael and Hadriel
Whenever Spook knows that her brothers from Camniel's
house are coming over she gets quite excited,leaping around
and tentatively watching through the front window for them to
arrive. While Hadriel appears rather meek they tend to be very
heroic like a gentle giant in Spooks eyes, especialy when they
stand up for Azrael when they're bullied. On the other hand
Azrael seems to be a rather interesting, excitable and
opinionative individual, much like their fathers.Most definitely
some of her best friends.
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''Yo welcome to the dark kids club!''story time
They sat in the corner of the yard in a little wooden fort. Though she had been at Camniel's less than a week earlier she had very much so missed being around. Her sibling and half sibling always made her excited to come over, and her father Camniel always trying his best to make her feel welcome as well. Every few days or so she would either make the short trip through the forest and across a bridge to visit them or they so lovingly would come to Ryder's house and play. Often Noodle would come along, even Ryder would sometimes stay the whole time the kids were at Camniel's. This afternoon she had come with Noodle, as Ryder had told her he was rather busy with something else, a soon to be revealed surprise but she still had no idea what that meant. Spook couldn't imagine what their fathers had thought up that was so important they couldn't spend time with their children so close to their birthday but didn't consider the thought much more as she ran off to join the other kids in the backyard. Aech was already there with Azreal and Hadriel, sketching out some plans for their travels.

Today was an adventure day and this was quite exciting. For the past few months the 5 had been exploring a small cave on a side of an old inactive volcano protruding precariously near the edge of Camniel's island. He never thought the kids would get into any trouble so he let them roam freely through the brush and hills. Today would be a little different from their usually travels as they were planning an overnight expedition, they would be creating a fully rendered map of the inner cave much like they had been doing around the rest of the island on previous days.

The kids gathered themselves and decided for the best excavation they would need to start the journey as soon as was possible. They rushed inside and up the stairs to finish packing supplies. They grabbed a few packs and concluded that their was simply not enough foods rations, so they headed down to request some extra snacks to keep their stomachs from rumbling. Dromaine, Camniel's oldest child, laughed as she pulled a tray of cookies from the oven. Their eyes lit up at the smell reminting from the small oven. She told the kids it would be a moment before the she could package the goods but in the meantime she suggested they talk about the expedition. The kids quickly pulled out a map to explain what they had found and where it was. ''Oooh, is that a map?'' questioned Camniel after listening to them blabber about it for a moment. They all nodded ecstatically and continued explaining the trip.
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''Its going to be longer than any of our previous expeditions of the cave! We'll be sleeping over the night so that we don't lose track of our progress.'' Spook chirped happily. Camniel smiled for a minute before remembering something, ''its good Ryder called to say him and Razz won't be back to pick you up till morning then''. It took a moment before Spook remembered that her father was originally going to pick them up at noon. Heh, always good to avoid mishap! She gave an awkward smile and all the kids got hugs from Camniel and Dromaine before journeying out.

The trek through the forest was wonderfully exhilarating, birds chirped and the air filled them with a happy warmth. Spook knew that this would be much more interesting than any trip they had attempted before, they had no idea what they might find. Careful not to let Noodle get dragged behind while they tromped through thick brush playing and talking throughout the whole trip. Eventually the humid air and hot sun got to them, a brake was most definitely needed even without it being scheduled. They all stopped around a rock on the shaded side on a small waterfall him. Cookies were handed out evenly and everyone took a break to relax before the journey continued.

Mud, streams and thick foliage blocked their path, but with each obstacle a solution. By the time the kids reached the cave the sun had begun to touch the tips of the highest trees, daylight lost. Quickly they began plotting out camp, where it went made all the difference in how their travels would go. If placed on mucky ground the tents might get sucked in but if they placed it to far into the bush in on the wrong patch of ground bugs might invade their food. Eventually they found the right plot, soft enough dirt to get the pegs in but not so soft that it would cause a depression in the ground if they were to stand on it, along with being the perfect distance from both the mouth of the cave and the jungle woods.
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Once the area had been chosen setting up camp was quite easy for them, Aech laying out the maps, Avrael testing the equipment, Noodle and Hadriel putting up the tents and Spook placing their beds and wondering off to collect extra firewood. Spook thoughtfully gathered dry twigs and other shrubbery carefully packing it in every way she could. The trip back was much longer than the trip she had traveled out to collect wood, although each step she took seemed oddly lighter than the last, the wood not straining her so much as slowing.

When Spook returned to camp the five collectively gathered together and headed off into the dark abyss, anticipating what they might find. Hours and hours running around exploring, every so often the kids jotted down a note or two and continued down the seemingly endless tunnels. Some tunnels were extremely narrow, other broad with echoing seemingly constant.

Once the kids felt they had a good grip of where everything in the basic was they gathered together, well accept for a rather scary looking ravine they decided to call the 'dead zone' on their maps. The next step had to be a game of hide and seek, if you are caught then you join the hunt, no better game to play in a cave such as theirs. Hadriel started as it, quickly catching Azrael trying to gather himself into a small divot in the wall, and then Azrael finding Noodle, who was hiding amougnst some smooth crystals which ahd built up from time spent dripping into shape. Spook soon joined them and finally Aech was caught in the shadows of a loop tunnel, sneaky kid.

After everyone was found the kids headed back to eat and rest for the night, daylight was gone and there wasn't much more to explore. Spook found her place after having a few bites, squishing herself into the soft bedding as the moonlight began to peak through the trees.

Later in the night Spook wakes, much as usual to Noodle tugging on her tail, For some odd reason she feels rather terrified but without a clue...
Unsure of what to do now Spook knows she won't get to sleep for a long while, so instead of just waiting out fear she suggests that they take a walk in the cave to help shrug it off.

The cave floor cold and damp sends shivers up Spooks spine as she walks, carefully checking that with each step her brother is still beside her. Even with all her thought absorbed Spook notices something, a sort of shine. Blindly she pulls Noodle towards what she is unaware is the 'dead zone'. ''Noodle, look at that!'' blankly Spook suggests a most wonderous sight to Noodles, a shine of colour on the far opposing wall. If only they could make way across the ravine, walk on air perhaps? Hah.

Being the sort of kids they were nothing could make them give up that wonderous idea in their mind, no time to head back and get the others to help. Spook looked into the deep abby's, what kind of wonders would lie at the bottom considering what she could see at the top. The gap between the walls of the earthy divot weren't that far apart, if she could be lowered...Immediately Spook knew what they were going to do, Noodle would grab her tail, they would have to be quick since he was not the strongest but she was sure if he held her tail she would be able to retrieve it.

Carefully she lowered herself into the pit, just out of her grasp. Just a little bit more...
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Expecting a loud thud, horrified Noodle braced himself. But instead of falling thousands of feet Spook had fallen onto a small weak slab sticking out the wall. Relieved to hear this Noodle calms a bit, still rather concerned with the situation I imagine. Carefuly Spook stands, Nausea tore through her head, causing her to collapse again, causing the rock sledge to slip around. It shook with every movement, if she lost her grip of waddled around their would be no escape.

The nausea seemed rather overwhelming, but as it got worse the rock seemed to wobble less and less, so she focused on the sick feeling, slowly she seemed to have weight lifted off, perhaps if she timed it right.. A leap of faith could end her life or save it. Spook gathered her strength, the world spinning viciously around as she leapt, clawing the soft dirt with all she could bare, her arms barely gripping the surface of the cave ground as Noodle filled with panic attempted to pull her out. Spook pushed herself over the edge and tightly hugged her brother, ''Dad won't hear this.'' She stood and shook off the dirt before realising the time they had spent in there, before Noodle could ask about the crystal she pulled him back through the swirly tunnels to the camp, a few hours of sleep would be worth the while.
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'Wake up!' Hadriel seemed in a sort of rush, it was early morning but they wouldn't have much time to get back. Spook slumped up and hurriedly gathered up her and Noodle's things, knowing she would probably have to carry him most of the way. The kids sped down the trail, a sort of race it was to see who could get back first.

When they got back they were greeted happily by their three dads, everyone getting hugs and excitedly exclaiming how their trip had went. Spook and Noodle left out the risk they had taken for the rock, it clearly wasn't important... heh. Before the kids realised it they were dragged off to Ryder's, the door was slowly opened before an explosion of excitement and colour burst from the household. It was the kids birthday after all, why else would their fathers spend so much time away from their kids, aside from getting together their birthday party! All their relatives their clapping and smiling, lots of hugs and excited chatting. What a most wonderful few days <3.
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Here would be an image of them at the party with everyone C: (I don't believe I'll have time to do this tomorrow but I'll try)
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I hope you appreciate my efforts, I wont be able to work on this again tomorrow most likely so this is it I suppose.
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I was unsure about use of Jern's pup as I don't believe I have any way to contact them nor did I want to use them without knowing what they were intended to appear like/name and so on, so I would like to give anapology for that. I also wanted to thank Tart, GotSalt, and Bettalong for helping me with my form and to being able to get a better idea of everyone's personalities, thankyou so
much.(Betta being the one who helped with my form while art and GotSalt were more helpful about parra personalities)
I would also like to mention that all art featured in my form was created by me using Oekaki. Also a last mention of her power to clarify, she has the ability to change the weight and movement of objects in a way, if that makes sense?



Out of all the entries, I thought this one had the most effort put into it and altogether a nice addition to the family! There were other powers that I thought were more interesting, but despite cool ideas, the follow-through with this one had a lot put into it.
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Re: Nursery Batch #172 - Top Child UFA

Postby Evils » Wed Jun 15, 2016 9:20 am

Congrats Ph.D!!!!
I was rooting for you!! <33
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