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Postby Rabbit » Fri Nov 06, 2015 3:01 pm

Okay, I've been thinking about putting her up for adoption for awhile now, as I've had some issues with her (that i'd rather not talk about), which have made it difficult to really connect with her. Plus, I think others could love her more than I can.

This will be a different sort of contest! Instead of simply being "impress me" or just "art", I wanted to give more people a more equal and better chance of winning, even if they don't have a lot of practice in one field or enough funds.

Notes:
- She is currently single, so nothing there c:
- Art and previous info: http://xerberus.weebly.com/jaime.html
- She's bred twice, although I've disconnected her previous family from her (you're free to "connect" them again, though, but you'd have to ask the owners of her "kids".)
- Her previous name was Jaime, but you're more than welcome to change it! It won't affect judging at all c:

Form:
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Username:
Name: (Allowed a SHORT explanation/meaning)
Gender: (sex must remain female, sorry!)
One quote: (no explanation allowed-- be sure to credit who said the quote!)
Song: (Can be a random song, or a song that you think represents them! SHORT explanation/meaning allowed!!)


How it works:
So, I decided that I wanted to do a point-based system for this.
Now, there's multiple ways you can earn points, so don't feel like if you can't do one thing, you can't stand a chance!
Because there's a point system that can slightly vary according to how someone sees it, I will be asking a few people for help judging certain ones, so I'll try my best to make this as fair as possible!

You can do ALL METHODS!!

Method One --> Art!
Of course, there's always art.
Here's the catch! There's a limit of 5 pieces of art! (I'll raise it if enough people hit the limit~) It has to be by you, though! You're free to do a collab with someone, though, but at least 50% of the drawing has to be by you (so don't just be like "i'll draw an eye" and they do the rest pls)
For each piece you do, it will be "worth" a certain amount of points, according to what's in it.

I should probably mention that you're allowed to order art or get art by others, in your form, but it just won't count towards your point score 'v'

Basic Points:
+ 1 point :: Headshot / bust
+ 3 points :: Fullbody
+ 10-40 points :: Animated (depends on complexity, like blinking vs walking. Feel free to ask about this.)
+ 5 points :: Coloured
+ 10 points :: NEATLY shaded (Not too harsh on this, just show some effort c:)
+ 20 points :: Scenery background (something like a field, forest, etc, not just a solid colour or gradient/pattern!)
+ 7 points :: per extra fullbody Plumerian
(will add more if I think of any! Feel free to suggest some c:)

"Extra" Points:
These will be a bit more "biased", as it requires opinions! Don't feel too pressured on this
+ 1-10 points :: Creative pose
+ 1-15 points :: Amount of detail
+ 1-10 points :: Uniqueness (i.e. colours used, textures, theme/style)
+ 1-20 points :: Personality



Method Two --> Writing!
Here's the writing part! There's different sections, with a word limit in each (well appreciated if you put the word count at the bottom). You're not required to do every part, or even the parts in order-- that's up to you! You can also write in different ways, like in a poem or story-- no bullet points, though!
Pick one from each!! Be sure to tell not only what happens, but the personality of the Plumerian and how that situation effected them.

Section 1: Prompt (75 word maximum)
- Most Distinct (positively) Physical Trait (something that's really noticeable, but in a positive way)
- Secret Personality Trait (a little secret side to them!)
- Relationship with Animals (how do they feel about animals?)

Section 2: Getting Deeper (200 word maximum)
- First Memory
- Most Prized Possession
- Least Favourite Activity (what do they hate doing?)
- Meeting a New Friend (can be a made up character or an existing Plumerian-- be sure to ask permission!)

Section 3: Hidden Secrets (300 word maximum)
- Guilty Pleasure (please stay CS appropriate!)
- Worst Fear
- Ultimate Weakness

I'll be grading these on a scale of 1-10 for each, 10 being the best, 1 being the worst, in each category.
Categories are:
- Uniqueness/Creativity
- Flow (how well does it go together)
- Personality (how much personality does the writing show (not tell))
- Diction / Grammar / Spelling (I'm not gonna be too picky, don't worry!)


Method Three --> Compliments!
Alrighty, here's where it gets fun! So, I've wanted to do a little something different, to promote compliments and nice things in the community. You'll be getting points for each well-written compliment/response to a user, in the community!

You'll get +2 points for each compliment! There's a maximum of 50 points earned from this, total!

Counts if:
- Specific to a user:
Something like "nice art", wouldn't count! Now, something that would = "Nice art! I really love how your style compliments the markings of the Plumerian!" Basically something that would take more than 5 seconds to think/write 'v'
- Isn't "cookie-cut":
Don't say the same thing to each user! Try to be unique!
- Is nice:
This should be explanatory-- just be nice! That also means don't be passive aggressive, either.
- Can be responses from the FC!
You're more than welcome to link to things you've said in the FC (after this has been posted) that counts! Just link me to the post, and change the text to say the response! (Ex. [url=URL HERE]Response Here[/url])



Method Four --> Guessing Game!

Alright, this one is simple!
Just guess these with what you think is the answer!! There is most likely more than one correct answer for each!

You can get +1 point for each correct answer! For questions asking for more than one answer, you get +1 for each correct answer. (ex. the first question asks for two, so for each one right, you get one, with a total of 2 possible points for that question)

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[b]Two nicknames/usernames I go by:[/b]
[b]My Plumerian's Names:[/b]
[b]How did I get my first three Plumerians (the ones I currently own, not including Jaime):[/b]
[b]How did I get my first Plumerian:[/b]
[b]What's the number of all Plumerians I own/used to own:[/b]
[b]Which two of my Plumerians are related?[/b]
[b]What's the colour of my phone case?[/b]
[b]How many clubs am I in at school?[/b]
[b]Do I RP?[/b]
[b]What's a video game I play?[/b]
[b]Three websites you can find me on:[/b] (CS doesn't count!)
[b]Three of my CS Friends:[/b]
[b]User ID on my FR Account:[/b]
[b]Name of My Main OC:[/b] (I have more than one)
[u]Favourites:[/u]
-Shape:
-Food:
-TV show:
-Book:
-Animal:
-Art Form: (like theatre, visual, musical, etc.)
-Instrument:



Ends: 12.5.2015
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Re: { Jaime for Readoption }

Postby IrkenChu » Fri Nov 06, 2015 5:20 pm

Username:
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Name:
Cerulean Aqua May
(She goes by Aqua though)

Gender:
Female

One quote:
"I understood myself only after I destroyed myself. And only in the process of fixing myself, did I know who I really was."
~Sade Andria Zabala


Song:
Paranoid by Alana Grace
This song is pretty much Aqua in a nutshell. The song speaks of the fear of your trust being misused and even seen as a weakness, and in a way can be a song about being abandoned or the fear of that happening. These are things that Aqua struggles with greatly, so not only is the sing as soft and soothing as she is it also holds a message that speaks to her on a personal and mental level.

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Most Distinct Physical Trait
The first thing you may notice about Aqua is her different colored eyes. As much as the plumie seems to dislike her "weird eyes" as she puts it, but unlike herself most others find them very cool, and even beautiful. To Aqua's dismay she will forever be stuck with her eyes, but that is just fine to all of her loved ones.
(62/75)

Most Prized Possession
Aqua's most prized possession would have to be her gold heart locket necklace. The reason it is so dear to her heart is a somewhat cliche one. The necklace was given to her by her ex-mate Sprocket, she has worn the necklace ever sense it was given to her on their 1 month anniversary. Even though to most it may seem a bit odd to still wear something that was given to you by an ex, but in all honesty Aqua is still in love with Sprocket. Yes, she was the one that had originally ended the relationship, and though her reason behind the break up may sound like an excuse it is completely true. Due to Aqua's thoughts and fears getting the better of her she acted on her instincts and pushed away the man she loved before he could do that to her. As much as she regrets that now she will forever wear the necklace in hopes that they may meet again and start back where they left off.
(172/200)

Worst Fear
Aqua is a very timid and shy soul, so it is not a surprise that she would have a wide range of fears, Though if she would have to pick her most feared one it would have to be loneliness. Yes, whether it comes as a shock or not Aqua's number one fear is being left alone. The fear isn't so extreme that she needs to be with someone ever second of the day it's more along the lines of not wanting to be on her own with no friends of family to keep her company.
(96/300)


Responses 1-2<3



Two nicknames/usernames I go by:Lord Xerberus and Xerberus
My Plumerian's Names:Crow, Cedric, Teagan, Kale, Sora, Sashimi
How did I get my first three Plumerians (the ones I currently own, not including Jaime):Saying something awesome about sushi, a custom raffle, impress me
How did I get my first Plumerian:Saying something awesome about Sushi<3
What's the number of all Plumerians I own/used to own: 7 or 8?
Which two of my Plumerians are related?Teagan and Kale
What's the color of my phone case?Purple?
How many clubs am I in at school?4?
Do I RP?Yes
What's a video game I play? UnderTale
Three websites you can find me on: Flight Rising, Deviant Art, and Weebly
Three of my CS Friends:Sosona, SheWolf, and Beta??
User ID on my FR Account:26048
Name of My Main OC: Taze<333333
Favourites:
-Shape:Star
-Food:Pizza
-TV show:Doctor Who
-Book:Warriors series(t many to choose from ;v;)
-Animal:Fox
-Art Form:Theater
-Instrument:Piano
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Re: { Jaime for Readoption }

Postby Foxy The Pirate » Fri Nov 06, 2015 5:20 pm

Username: Foxy The Pirate
Name: Lullaby ((if it's not taken??)) She looks as she is calm, and a sleepy bab.
Gender: Female
One quote: "Take a deep breath. Get present in the moment and ask yourself whats important this very second." - Greg McKeown
Song: Goodbye to a World- Porter Robinson
Method 1: Art
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All by me

Method 2: Writing
Section 1:A secret side to Lullaby is the jealousness along with anger. Managing to pent up annoyances and bothersomes, she can manage to just let it out unintentionally. As for the jealousy, she hides it well but it usually manages to show in her face expression. At times, anger can really take over her entire body and screams at herself. She can scream and rip cloth apart, but never do that around one of her friends. (75/75)
Section 2: I'm using aviate's Heru, He is in his 20's, he is suppose to be grown. If I need to fix this please pm me.
As Lullaby awoke, her mind a foggy wasteland for the time being, she began to try and think of things to do for today. After a series of thinking and falling in and out of consciousness, Lullaby decided she would head to the park, after all, there might be some others there to meet. Getting on some decent clothes and curling a soft scarf around her neck, she headed out. The air was crisp along with a small cold breeze that would pass by every one and a while. Soon after arriving at the entrance of the park, a boy caught her eyes. Of course never the one to speak the first word, a flash of a small smile and a wave caught their attention. She headed for a bench to sit, softly patting the seat beside her. "Well hello there." the warm voice said then continued, "I'm Heru, what might your name be?" the guy looked into her eyes. "Oh, I'm Lullaby. Lovely to meet you Heru." A small blush was already arising. She was too shy to speak much, but they managed to talk for about an hour. "I have to dip, we should meet again!" Heru sparked. ((200//200 words))
Section 3:"Kitty!" a small voice beckoned. Plumies run straight past the small box in front of your local store, but one seems to come to a screeching halt. It was a small blue girl and you could just see her picking something out of that strange box. She's holding a small floof ball that you can only assume was a kitten. She sits, playing with it and petting it, giving the tiny thing kisses on the forehead and hugging it close to her neck. One other plumie had came back, seeming like they were asking the little one a question. All she did was turn around and hug the cat. The blue starts to come towards you, a clump of black in her paw and happiness in her eyes. "Can we keep it, pleaaseee!" she wimpered and wiggled. Well, can she?
As you can assume, this is her absolute weakness and has been since she was just a baby. Any ball of fur that meows just melts her heart, making her crumble under their faces and spoiledness. Any cat on the street that is alright with her touching them, comes home with her to quickly be found a loving home. These balls of fur really take the wind out of her though, buying treats and food for any cat she sees along with never being seen without some cat treats in her pocket. Some of her friends worry about her obsessive behavior with cats, but sometimes she is tricked into doing things because of a cat picture or video they show her to persuade her. There are so many cats in the world, and Lullaby is very sad that she can't meet all of them, but is always happy when she finds one more a loving home. ((296//300))

Method 3
first responses!
second responses!
Third responses!
Fourth responses!
Fifth responses!
point count: 50?? That's up to you <33

Method 4
Two nicknames/usernames I go by: Xerberus, Lord Xerberus
My Plumerian's Names:Crow, Cedric, Teagan, Kale, Sora, Sashimi
How did I get my first three Plumerians : Saying something awesome about sushi, a custom raffle, impress me
How did I get my first Plumerian: Saying something awesome about sushi.
What's the number of all Plumerians I own/used to own: 4-8?
Which two of my Plumerians are related? Teagan and Kale
What's the colour of my phone case? Blue?
How many clubs am I in at school? 3?
Do I RP? yes
What's a video game I play? Pokemon
Three websites you can find me on: Flight Rising, Deviantart, Weebly
Three of my CS Friends: Soulfirewolf, Sosona, Beta??
User ID on my FR Account: 26048
Name of My Main OC: Fanta
Favourites:
-Shape: Circle
-Food: Pizza?
-TV show: The Walking Dead?
-Book: absolutely no clue
-Animal: Tiger
-Art Form: Theater
-Instrument: Piano or Guitar

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Re: { Jaime for Readoption }

Postby Rabbit » Fri Nov 06, 2015 5:21 pm

Foxy The Pirate wrote:mark <3 probably doing method 3.
when does this end exactly ;v;


pfft you can do all methods if you want!
and adding one now <3
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Re: { Jaime for Readoption }

Postby Snowseph » Fri Nov 06, 2015 5:23 pm

Possibly entering? If not, I will just watch this. qvq
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Re: { Jaime for Readoption }

Postby NE0N-UMBR30N » Fri Nov 06, 2015 5:25 pm

Omg herro first baby<33333
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Re: { Jaime for Readoption }

Postby Lilelith » Fri Nov 06, 2015 6:28 pm

Aaa, little cutie <3
Mark or maybe, if I find time, I tryout for this bae <3
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Re: { Jaime for Readoption }

Postby GressgrinAST » Fri Nov 06, 2015 6:59 pm

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Re: { Jaime for Readoption }

Postby DragonGlitch » Fri Nov 06, 2015 11:09 pm

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Username: Believix
Name: Jaime | "I love"
Gender: Female | Straight
One quote: “Be yourself;
everyone else is
already taken.” - Oskar Wilde
Song: Titanium - Madilyn Bailey
If someone brings her down,
she just gets right back up.













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Everyday when Jaime comes
home from work she often stops
by the ocean to see if she can
find any marine life living out there.
She stops. She hears a noise in the
far off sea. "A dolphin?" She
questions herself curious.
She glances around and
finally spots the mmammal.
"Come here little guy!"
She tried to get him to
come to her. As that
happens, a spider
and a mouse come
running by.
"Eeeek!"


{75/75}














- Marine Bioligist
- Loves Turtles and dolphins
- Fun to be around
-Loves the sea as it's calming



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Re: { Jaime for Readoption }

Postby Hawky<3 » Fri Nov 06, 2015 11:17 pm

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