[Goreamir]

Moiety... one of two equal parts. She didn't know this when she adopted the name. All she knew was that she needed one. Moi was told that she was born with her lovely, brave, strong sister. She believed it. Out of all of her mistakes made, this was the worst. Had she had any sense like Fury she would have known something was wrong. But she didn't see through the windows, even when they were wide open. Unlike the name she chose for herself, he was not one of two equal parts. She was nothing. That was what she was told. That was what she believed. When she was young, she had been whipped with strands of horrible words. She had no idea how many lies were weaved into them. But her life was in much more vivid detail. Some parts were like dessert, given to you to make you feel better after a horrible event. But some were more like a sour apple. If you pick the wrong one, you end up with shreds of the horrible thing stuck in your mouth for long periods of time. It can make you embarrassed to speak. Afraid to stand up for yourself. Fearful of what lies beyond the box that you are throttled in instead of cradled. But The Man would soon learn that Moi's tongue is different from others. It never forgets the bitterness, never forgives it, but doesn't let it drive her down. Instead, it picks her up. Soon The Man would learn. At least, that's what Moiety was told.


Stuck


Stuck. That was the first word Moi thought of when she tried to describe the cave she was in. She was only six at the time, along with her larger, more powerful sister. Moiety didn't feel envious towards her, however. She felt happy that her sister was the one liked the most. She didn't know they were only being used, but soon she would learn. Her and her sister were walking to where The Man had called them from. Moi looked around at her surroundings, and had to catch herself before she gasped. Fluttering around was a lost bright blue butterfly. They rarely made themselves into the cave, and when they did The Man usually smacked them until they burst into brown blobs. But Moi knew that since he was busy, she could see at least a glimpse of the outside world before it was demolished. The butterfly was aware of the danger, and whenever The Man even flinched, it flew up as high as possible. Moiety made sure that she didn't give any clues to where the butterfly was when this happened, and as she took a seat on a rise in the cold stone, she made sure to catch a glimpse of The Man. He was staring at them down his long pointed snout, and n=snorted with dignity (if he even had any) when Moi smiled at him. She didn't understand. Did he not like her? But as soon as she finished that thought, the straight man cleared his thought and glared at her and Fury. "You," he said, using what he always called Moi. "Get your hair out of your eyes so I can see them." Moi made a small clicking sound with her teeth as she brushed away her curly hair, but stopped when The Man shot her an angry glare. As soon as his gaze on her was off, she slowly moved her eyes to view the butterfly. She ignored his voice as she though of what it would be like to fly. A simple, happy life. Free from the laws that bounded her to land. The butterfly seemed happy... happy until The Man smacked it against the wall. Moiety let out a small scream as a dark blue bead of goo dripped onto The Man's hand, and tried hard not to bite her bottom lip. It wasn't gross at all, but Moi guessed she had to do something to keep The Man from figuring out where she was looking. "Why'd you do that?!" She whispered a little too loudly. The Man snarled at her and strutted up. "No. BACKTALKING!" He hissed though his clenched teeth as he roughly slapped her little face. She cried out in pain, steaming tears streaming down her reddened face. Her eyes were swollen shut, and now the tears flowed more slowly. Her head was making throbbing sounds and it was impossible to hear, except for the time she heard Fury shrieking in rage, then in pain as well. How can he be so mean without caring? She whimpered in her thoughts. She knew this was wrong, but she couldn't bare to feel the feeling of needles piercing every inch of her skin and fur. This was so far the worst pain she had felt in her life. She would soon feel even worse, but then she didn't know that. Then it was only the present, no future, and only six short years of a lonely, painful past. She knew she couldn't stand to be here anymore. That in another year of this cave might make her crazy, but there was no point in standing up now. It would bring nothing but a bloody face and guilty yet uncaught maroon splattered hands. For now she would hold on. She had to. Letting go meant death... or worse.

WIP

[Little Fish]

congrats ^^

[Qualeo]

Extended for FOURmore days. Only extension. Pleae ue your tie wisely..

A few tips :

I enjoy reading. So stories are my favorite things. I love reading the history and relationships portions the most. dont worry about art other than meetig the inimum requirements.

[squints]

an early good luck to you all!!
i'm not sure if this is close so my bad if it isnt but, good luck!!

[Miavinn]

School caught up to me so I wasn't able to finish my form ;-;
However, I would like to wish good luck and congratulate the winner.
Please love them dearly and treat them accordingly

[Qualeo]

Winners

Sorry for the wait guys - between classes and work I've had little time to judge. I was honestly stuck between forms but I think I've made up my mind now! It was really tough - ot just to pick a winner but to let the gal go. I will admit that I wanted to keep her with all my might - but I also knew I would't use both of them equally. I'm excited to announce our winner - hopefully in the future the winner would love to rp with me? haha.

Winner of the KIA

Momotarou

I thoroughly enjoyed the character you built up - especially with her even higher ambitions than the mystical man. Wanting to become divine? How fun!! Though I did have trouble deciding if the little video you made actually met the requirements - after all it was technically only one thing. However, there were multiple pieces of art so it did technically count. Possibly something for others to consider n future competitions? I really did enjoy the character you built up and hope you use this character to the fullest! As usual, I ask that if you ever feel disconnected that you return her to me to be readopted out again. I don't want her to become trade fodder or passed around to the point where I can no longer track her. I'd enjoy a rp in the future between us and the kias so maybe? haha! Enjoy your character <3


Runner-up

Now this was difficult. However, as a RU kia has been returned to me, I will be giving him back out through this cotet. Same rules apply - only return him to me, don't trade or gift away! Our RU winner is.....

shadowhawk6776

I really loved your character, and while the form was more on the simpler side, I felt it expressed her amazingly. Had more been added to it and such- mostly in the writing portion - you would have likely won! I felt I needed to reward you for your unique character with this kiamara - due for aging and revamp

[squints]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
woW
am i in a rly good dream bc that's what it feels like wHOAAA
ok, so I didn't actually believe Kephri was mine until I saw Rivkah's skype message and I kind jumped out of my skin
I shouldve asked if the video was alright, but I'm really glad you ruled it as fine. :')
Kephri is by far one of my favorite characters ever created, in the top with Ra, and I cannot begin to express how much she means to me
despite being super busy i'm so pumped to start rping, so let me know whenever if you're interested!!! <3<3
(that goes for anyone!!)

and congrats to Shadowhawk!!!!
what a precious babe you've got <3<3<3

and to anyone else goodluck in future comps!! Your forms scared the heck outta me ;v;<3<3<3

kephriiiii <3<3<3

[GressgrinAST]

Aww, man. That's three days of my life wasted when I was writing and I didn't even get to post it xD. But I guess your form was as good as they come! Congratulations! If I get a kiamara, I'd really love to roleplay with you. c:

[Arche]

Congrats!
Feel free to use the piece of art I had c:

[mars]

I'm a bit sad that I never got to finish my form, school got in the way again even with the extension :C
HOWEVER,,,,,
I'm extremely glad that these two babes went to such great homes!! You guys put so much effort into your forms, you definitely deserved to win and I'm so so //so// glad that you guys did. Congrats so much <333

I know that you guys will take amazing care of these gorgeous babes, I can't wait to see how you end up developing them over time - I'm definitely going to be keeping on eye on them ;v;
And if either of you would like to roleplay, my kias are always open! Feel free to hit me up whenever :"D