[Quillington]

Small writing contest!
Young deer, full of fear
Why the cold look?
Your ice glare is like that of a crook
Young deer, full of fear
What have you seen?
What has hardened your gaze to be mean?

Sorry, went a bit overboard. The prompt is, what has this deer seen that has changed it? No prettying of the form required, I'm looking purely at writing. No word limit, I love reading long forms and stories!

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[b]Username:[/b]
[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]What has it seen?:[/b]

End Date: July 1st

[Ill]

Username:
Cojinxleafbelle
Name:
Dearest
Gender:
Female
What has it seen?:
"What have I seen? Things cold and mean." Dearest snapped as she trotted along a twisted path through a deceased forest. Talking to herself had become a habit of hers; she had no one but herself to talk to, after all. "My name makes no sense anymore..." She hissed under her breath, sitting down to take a rest. "But then again, it was my choice to change it..." She sighed, looking around the forest, her ice cold gaze studying the surroundings. Dearest then sat down, looking at her hooves. "I lost everyone I cared about, and this word... Dearest... is the word that reminds me of all the memories I have of them..." She sighed. "And it's also what they called me as their lives were stripped away..." Her eyes seemed to turn colder. These terrible events had made a once warm and loving Aghavilla Deer cold and hateful. "It's all I remember... "Run, run, run, my Dearest!" mother cried, "Save yourself...Dearest..." father died, "DEAREST!" brother wailed, "D-Dearest..." sister flailed. Never did they call me by my real name, so I refuse to use it." Dearest spoke through gritted teeth. I will find the one who stole them away, and I promise you. They. Will. Pay." She hissed in anger as she began making her way through the woods once more.

[quitting,,]

I need this one
Reserve because I love writing and have a good idea omg

[fluffypancake]

Marking, I think I have an idea.

[Ember the Wolf]

Username:
Name:
Gender:
What has it seen?:

MArk

[Quillington]

Congrats Cojinxleafbelle!
The deer is yours! You may gift or keep.

Username:
Cojinxleafbelle
Name:
Dearest
Gender:
Female
What has it seen?:
"What have I seen? Things cold and mean." Dearest snapped as she trotted along a twisted path through a deceased forest. Talking to herself had become a habit of hers; she had no one but herself to talk to, after all. "My name makes no sense anymore..." She hissed under her breath, sitting down to take a rest. "But then again, it was my choice to change it..." She sighed, looking around the forest, her ice cold gaze studying the surroundings.
WIP

[Ill]

Thank you! I'm still gonna finish that story though o3o