[Ill]

Good luck everyone! I never got the chance to pretty my form but I wouldn't have won anyway ;u;

[Loadingconstella]

Goodluck~

[poqqi]

Good luck everyone c:

[doktor monty]

has a winner been chosen yet?

[winkatuck]

has a winner been chosen yet?

Pretty sure there will be a bit of a wait on this one as previous designs have yet to be judged still.

Please be patient while they catch up with things c':

[izauura]

Alright the wait is over! The results are in!

@ vordic. // I loved the art on your form it was really, really nice. Your coding was really nice too it’s simplistic and I personally loved it. But the personality for me seemed a bit cliché and kinda stereotypical for what you were going for? Which is fine but there just wasn’t enough depth for me to really see past that. His personality as I said seemed kinda cliché from what I could read and there just wasn’t enough for me to really understand anything about Jason as a character. And there wasn’t enough substance for me to really understand how his Bipolar disorder, depression, and insomnia really affected him. I wanted to know more about how these illnesses affected his mental state and how it affected his day to day life. There was a lot of potential there just too many unanswered questions.

@ Cojinxleafbelle // I love the whole concept as a BAMF for this character and I loved what you were going with. I absolutely adore that song too! It fits with what you were going with. I also really love how you had him talk, the attitude fit perfectly with what you were going for. I personally loved how you had him explain his legacy how it starts off kinda nonchalant and then slowly gets darker and more intense. I was also a huge fan of the short story continuing off the “legacy” part of your form. I wish you had gotten to complete it because I crave more. But I will say this I would’ve loved to see a bit more development in that aspect of him. I woulda loved to see more of what was spinning through his head. Maybe a bit more of his past to understand more of how he felt about the disappearances and how it affected him.

@ ~ M a y a ~ // As I have watched SPN, I do get the reference but I would’ve really liked to see more originality in the character in the sense that you made the character your own. Not made it so same-y to the character on the show. I would’ve also loved to see more of the personality and less of the Zodiac. But I loved what you did with the personality as a whole it was really nice <3

@ BurningSnow // I really liked that you made the character female. It was good switch up from reading all the forms putting this character as male :’D. I love what you put for their “average day”. It really let me get a taste just before diving into your form. I also loved your song and your explanation for it. I absolutely adore the personality how you let me into the life of Moto while explaining to me who she was as a parra. I adored that. I absolutely loved the explanation behind her hair cut it made me smile. But I will say that it kinda seemed like I was reading big walls of text I would’ve loved if you would’ve put something in there to break it up further art or big text words or something just to make it less long to read.

@ Gajeel Redfox // I loved the dynamic you put in place between Koharu and his mother. That really brought a smile to my face to just show let me into the life of this parra and to understand the struggles and why he is the way he is. My only real problems with this form was that I really wanted to know more about Koharu.

@ Niketa // I was really hoping someone would use an Eminem song honestly. I love that you did that song but it really didn’t fit with what you put for his “Average day” section. I wanted to know more of how the two tied into each other. I also wanted to know more as to why “Pistanthrophobia” was one of his fears. Who caused him to be so distrustful? What happened??

@ B l a z e. // I couldn’t find the song you picked so I dunno what to really do about that but I love what you did with the average day. But I really felt like everything was blurring together after reading it a while. The walls of text were really bothering me. And this really didn’t seem like an average day, especially the deeper I got into the story it was an extended period of time not an average day.

@ Xhat // I really loved that you included more parras, it really added more dynamic to your story and I was genuinely loving it. It didn’t feel drug out or like I couldn’t breathe. It flowed really nicely but I do have to say that it didn’t seem too much like the average day. I dunno I just wouldn’t be talking to the same people face to face every day ya know? I also really enjoyed your song and art ; v ;

Honorable mentions :: Xhat & BurningSnow





And our winner is…. Cojinxleafbelle! God we had quite the time trying to pick from these three forms. But we made our decision and I hope you love Al! Zach and myself really loved this form :’D

There will be no RUs for this parra. Also if you wish for an in depth critique please feel free to pm me!

[Ill]

wHAT
I SERIOUSLY EXPECTED TO LOSE-
OMG thank you ;o;

[winkatuck]

Congrats Cojin I loved your form and your song especially <33

[Xhat]

ahhh congrats! your form was quite amazing! ovo
and a super small thank you for the honorable mention. B)

[poqqi]

Congrats Cojin.

Thanks for the mention, I was about to order art, but I decided against it since I didn't really think I would win this anyway ;w;
The forms were great guys! See ya next competition cx