by Kora L. Cifer » Fri Jun 19, 2015 11:14 am
Who won is mako?


Ruvel wrote:
"See the thing about you, that caught my eye, Is the same thing
that makes me change, my mind. Kinda hard to explain, but girl,
I'll try. You need to sit down, this may take a while. You see, she
sorta looks, just like you. She even smiles, just the way you do.
So innocent, she seemed, but I was fooled I'm reminded when
I look at you, but, You remind of a girl, that I once knew. See
her face whenever I, I look at you. You won't believe all of the
things that she put me through. This is why I just can't get with you."
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by Sixbane » Sat Jul 25, 2015 8:59 am
First off-im INSANELY sorry for the wait /A/ Family drama and irl problems kept me from judging this - its no excuse, but i feel very bad about taking so long.
There were lots of lovely forms and stuff to read though-and I wanted to make sure i thought it over a lot and was as fair and unbiased as possible as I looked at the thought and effort put in quq/
This one will be going to
Nizoluv
The work you put in was obvious- (That music scared the heck out of me when i went to your form xD)Though im a little iffy on the science experiment thing normally- (I love it as a scifi/mutations geek myself, but its real overdone) you did a great job of it. The physical attributes you included were accurate- and obviously well considered. I also appreciated the notes on their extra fat/ air sacks helping to explain their origins. Though the story was quite harsh, it was well written and made sense The sheer differences between the heads were lovely-
But above all,What really caught my attention,-the development in the personalities were wonderful. Expressing how three different individuals may react uniquely to such a horrible situation was extremely insightful, and I found myself able to understand and sympathize with them all.
I would also like to give a mention to these two- They were also wonderful forms I adored.
I'd give RUs-but really this mako is so specific (with its unique multiple heads), that I'm not sure how to go about it- i'd have to make them with one head but then it would ruin all your ideas
kdougfang
-I really appreciated your origin story- in simply the scientific and accurate part of it. Being totally normal- and growing up with a difficult condition. I also appreciated your note on his heart problems, It was well developed and thought out. Looking at it as a typical character- yet mixing in the mythology and lore with the stories he likes to read.
reshi
good thing i have allstate
Your form was wonderfully charming and appealing- I loved the writing style, the subtle tiny jokes- the vain head obsessed with grooming itself. This one was a close one. The involvement of humans, its story- and I especially adored the references and use of the Pompeii eruption.It was unique- and it clicked very nicely. I would have been able to read his story all day.
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by NizoLuv » Sat Jul 25, 2015 10:18 am

I could cry ;o;
Thank you so so SOOOOOOOOOOOO much Sixbane!
And wHOOPS sorry i forgot to put a warning on my post ha
im a terrible person that likes to cause my characters pain so i can smooch them and spoil them and make them all better.
eventually I'll be sure to finish up their past and then find them some buds<3
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