Re: Parrapup #205*

Postby Bleating Ram » Mon Feb 23, 2015 1:43 pm

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Re: Parrapup #205*

Postby xFrizzySmoothiex » Mon Feb 23, 2015 1:53 pm

Good luck everyone! c:
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Re: Parrapup #205*

Postby fairy king » Mon Feb 23, 2015 2:35 pm

Bleating Ram wrote:Username: Bleating Ram
Parra's Name: Leo
Parra's Gender: Male
Song: Boring by Pink
(Up to 3 extras):
-Personality: Despite having a strong sounding name, Leo is not a strong guy. He tends to be on the softer side and avoids any kind of confrontation when he can. He is a happy parra who enjoys trying to cheer others up and brighten their days. He's friendly and kind, but also a little on the nervous side, at least in large areas where it's crowded all the time. He's afraid that something terrible will happen. Even though he might seem happy and innocent, he's not, he enjoys teasing someone he's interested in and playing hard to get, making them work to try and win his affection, even though more than likely they already have it. He enjoys a good chase, and he looks at personality and such, not at what someone has, because it bores him to listen to all the things a parra has instead of hearing about the parra themselves. It's rare that you'll see him upset or sad, probably because he has a tendency to hide when he's upset.
-Likes: Strawberry flavored anything and strawberries themselves, playing hard to get, sunny days and nice days where it's kind of raining but not a whole lot, cupcakes, feeling safe and secure
-Dislikes: Being touched by strangers, sometimes he'll have breakdowns when they do, lemons, mud, extremely busy areas that are super noisy and loud all the time


Well first of all, I love the thought that you put into the Personality! I really like to see someone working hard to create a nice, developed personality for their character. I also think that the personality seems to fit pretty well with the looks of this parra. However, I'm not too sure how well the name fits with this parra and the personality that you've given them, and the personality was a bit hard to read. I had to read over it twice to understand what you meant. Overall, its a nice form, just some simple things that I didn't quite agree with.


chihiro.fujisaki wrote:
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Her song wrote:Wanna join me?
Come and play!
But I might shoot you,
in your face!

Bombs and bullets will
do the trick...
What we need here,
is a little bit of panic!

Do you ever wanna catch me?
Right now I'm feeling ignored!
So can you try a little harder,
I'm really getting bored!

Come on, shoot faster
just a little bit of energieh!
I wanna try something fun right now,
I guess some people call it an-ar-chy!

Let's blow this city to ashes
and see what pow-pow thinks,
it's such pathetic neatness,
but not for long 'cuz you'll get jinxed!

    username:
    "my username is gundam.tanaka"
    name:
    "her name is Junko"
    gender:
    "Female but identifies as male."
    personality:
    "She lacks self-confidence, is extremely nervous and
    very quiet. She keeps her hair long as she thinks she looks prettier
    that way and a lot more attractive. She often wears coloured contacts
    as she feels her eyes are ugly."
    history:
    "she was born to three parras, loving parents to her and grew
    up a relatively normal parra, until she hit her rebellious teen
    phase, in which she dyed her coat and mane but she also realized
    that she wanted to be referred to as by male pronouns
    during that phase. she gained the nickname 'Miss Jackson'
    after a notorious parra who was known for thievery when she
    started stealing from different places herself.she's only recently
    moved on past this phase."
    likes:
    "she loves the outside, she also loves to sit down and read a
    good book over a cup of tea. she loves romantic dates and
    happy rooms. she likes cats and squirrels and sheep and
    horses."


I like that you included a history! Those are always fun to read. And the song you gave them was interesting, I really enjoyed it, especially when comparing it to the looks of this parra. But one thing that I couldn't get over was the fact that you said they identify as male, but used feminine pronouns throughout the entire form. I really liked your form, but I couldn't get over those pronouns. I also would've like to see a bit more of a personality, since it was somewhat vague.


.TheWinterSoldier. wrote:Username: .Joker.
Parra's Name: Lotte
Parra's Gender: female
Song:
Personality: Lotte loves everyone, and everybody loves her. One of her greatest gifts is her general acceptance of everyone. She is upbeat and enthusiastic, and genuinely likes almost everybody. She is unfailingly warm and generous with her friends, and generally treats everyone as a friend. However, once crossed, she is likely to make a very strong and stubborn judgment against the person who crossed her. She is capable of deep dislike in such a situation. Lotte is definitely a spontaneous, optimistic individual. She loves to have fun. The entire world is a stage. She loves to be the center of attention and perform for people. She is constantly putting on a show for others to entertain them and make them happy. Lotte would love nothing more than for life to be a continual party, in which she plays the role of the fun-loving host.


I love the name Lotte, It always makes me think of Charlotte from princess & the frog, and I think her and this parra are fairly similar in looks. I also think this is a nice, well thought-out personality, and it's pretty cute. However you didn't put a song, so I'm not even really sure if I should be judging your form since that is a required section, and I also would have loved to maybe see a little bit more for her? Without the song it just seems a bit empty.


Nui Harime wrote:
Mirror, tell me something

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Username:
Ruby Rose

Parra's Name:
Aphrodite Lockheart

Parra's Gender:
Female

Song:

Mirror, Mirror

How does she feel about herself?:
Aphrodite is quite lonely, and self-conscious. She styles her hair up, to feel prettier.
She only has a few friends, because she can be rather rude, and difficult to be around.
Even her friends tend to stay away from her, as she is quite bossy.
She doesn't understand this however, and thinks
everyone thinks she's ugly


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Tell me who's the loneliest of all


I really like the form decorations on this one, okay? Because decorated forms are always so lovely. And the name definitely fits with the theme of this parra! Although I'm not so sure I like the personality. Its just that its pretty vague. I would have liked to see a little more work put into developing her, and I don't particularly like the broken character for her.


Kage the shadow wrote:
    Username:
    Kage the shadow
    Parra's Name:
    Elizabeth Rosa
    Parra's Gender:
    Female
    Song:
    All Men Are Pigs
    (Up to 3 extras):
    "You shouldn't always trust you're gut or your first love," a beautiful parra sighed. Her hair laid in a messy curly bun as she looked at you with fire filled eyes, you look around trying to find an excuse to leave but ended up finding none as she sat next to you. "I know I may seem odd and out of it but I just want you to know something young one." She sighed taking a breath before talking in such a sad yet determined voice. "By the time I was your age I'd give anything to fall in love truly, that's all that I could think...I'm only telling you this because life can do terrible things." Her voice was in a sing song tone and you listened carefully, "one day I met him, the most cruelest of things. We laughed aloud truly and shared everything, but he didn't accept me and this I couldn't see. I was there for him always but never realizing a thing, one day they came to me and told me to sing. I was crushed and heart broken but it was left unseen, as he laughed aloud realizing I had wanted to be by his side for an eternity. I stood there tear stricken watching him leave, he said girl can I tell you a terrible thing. I've decided I'll leave and it will only be weeks until you're by yourself singing the most saddest of things...." Your eyes soften and you scoot closer comforting her... (Not finished completely but if I do win I will ^^ the song is based of off Terrible Things by Mayday parade.))


I really like your little story/personality for this one. It's unique, well written, and fun to read. However I would have liked to see a bit more than just a broken love story for her. Because even though she's valentine's themed she shouldn't only be the girl that got her heart broken, since that's not what anyone is. Also the sound of the song doesn't quite fit with the sound of Elizabeth in the story.


Lilloa wrote:
Who are you
to judge the
life I live?
I know I'm not perfect
-and I don't live to be-
but before you start
pointing fingers...
make sure your
hands are clean!
It is better to be
hated for what
you are than
to be loved for
what you are not.
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ImageI am Lilloa , owner of two parras , Cynthia and Amethyse ,
and i am willing to have
this parra as my
third parra.
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though she likes being called Felicia.
Her name is pronounced as fei-lee-chee-ta rose-sett-tee-na.Image

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Image ポロっと合唱『ミュージックミュージック』 // Music Music - Nico Nico ChorusImage

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Image Felicia is a imaginative idealist, guided by her own core values and beliefs. Possibilities are paramount; the realism of the moment is only of passing concern. She sees potential for a better future, and pursue truth and meaning with her own individual flair.

Felicia is sensitive, caring, and compassionate, and are deeply concerned with the personal growth of herself and others. Individualistic and nonjudgmental, She believes that each person must find their own path. She enjoys spending time exploring her own ideas and values, and is gently encouraging to others to do the same. Felicia is creative and often artistic; she enjoys finding new outlets for self-expression.
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Felicia 's love for singing came from her mother.
One day , her mom was singing a song near a
flower field , and Felicia heard her mom singing ,
with a beautiful and graceful voice , then , she
followed her mother's steps and singing has become
a hobby for her now.
♥drawing♥
Felicia loves drawing to share her imagination ,
she can draw wonderful and beautiful art simply by
just imagining and drawing what she imagines
♥sakura viewing♥
Felicia loved sakuras when she was small.
The beautiful sakuras , falling down from the tree ,
Felicia just loved viewing sakuras.
Even her room is filled with sakuras.Image

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Image What Felicia would say to her friend
You're never alone, I'm always near,
When you're troubled, down or blue.
All you have to do is call me,
I'm always here for you.

It doesn't matter where I'm at,
It doesn't matter when.
When you need someone to talk to,
I'm here to be your friend.

If you need someone to hold your hand,
or a hug to say I care.
If you need a shoulder to cry on,
for you I will be there.

So never think you are a burden,
when the weight gets to be to much.
You might find if look hard enough,
a good friend could be the right touch.

You're never alone, I'm always here,
through the good times and the bad.
I'm always here to be your friend,
I don't like to see you sad.Image

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Hello there!
As you know , i am Lilloa ,
nice to meet you!
I am willing to get this parra , as it has a wonderful design uvu
I am hoping to win , but good luck everyone!


Again, I like the decorations. I also like the poem that you put in there, and the personality is really nice! I would really only suggest to maybe add a bit more to the personality, as it was a bit short. I like the sound of the song, too, but I'm not sure what it means because I don't speak fluent Japanese just yet, and there weren't English subtitles. I'd just like to know the lyrics.


Xhat wrote:
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The first duty of love is to listen.


              Username; Xhat.
              Parra's Name; Valerie, meaning "strong".
              Parra's Gender; Cisgender female.
              Song; A Spoon Full of Sugar - Mary Poppins


The name is really nice, and I like that gif you included, but I would like to see more development in the character since there wasn't much. I also think that there are some songs that would fit this parra a bit better than the one you chose. It just isn't connecting for me.


flurry ♥ wrote:
• Hello there! I'm Flurry, a Parra-loving, non-owner •

My username is flurry, but I prefer to go by flur. I am a non-owner, and dying to be a part of this community. Parrapups are a species I
have loved for a long time, longer than you could know. I have tried out many times, but, as of this moment, I have never won a Parra
Pup, so, I am deeply hoping that I can win this stunning girl that you have designed. I love the whispy hair, and the maroon-ish design!

• So, what have you named this stunning, little girl •

The name I have chosen for this beautiful Parrapup, is Rochelle Tiffany Court. I have chosen the first name Rochelle because I think it
truly is one of the most stunning names I've ever heard. Tiffany, as a middle name, again, because, it is one of my favorite names. For
her surname, I have picked Court. Mainly because it sounds regal, elegant, and graceful. Her nickname would be Tiff, and to her close
friends she would go by Rocky, an abbreviation of Rochelle. Only to her close friends, as they know her true energetic and happy self!

• And, would you mind me asking about her gender •

Rochelle Tiffany is definitely a female Parrapup. Not just because she has whispy blonde hair, or a maroon-pink colour scheme. I have
chosen the female gender for Tiff because her character screams femininity at me. I have big plans for this girl, emphasis on the 'girl'!

• the song that represents this beautiful young lady •

The song I think fits Rochelle Tiffany the best, is Little Me by Little Mix [x]. She is very quiet on the outside, yet she's bursting with an
intense and bubbly energy on the inside. I feel as if it captures her perfectly, and encompasses her entire personality, in a short song!

• on the outside: ladylike - serene - formal • on the inside: spritey - spunky - bubbly •

Rochelle Tiffany is a very quiet and polite Parrapup when you first meet her. She always says please and thank you, and will not speak
out, unless someone else directs a question, at her. Tiff hates to standout, and is very publicly awkward. She hates it when Parras say
something in front of a large group of people, and, she tries to avoid stuttering, which almost never works. This version of Tiff, repels
most possible friends. But, for the ones that penetrate that shell, she is bubbly, spunky and spritey! She is always cheerful, and, loves
to make other smile. But the second a spotlight is shinning on her, she turns back to stone. Serene, calm, and the epitome of ladylike!

• What is this perfectly amazing lady aspiring to be •

Her dream, is to juggle to two jobs, of a model, and, a baker. She would own a small bakery named Fraises et Cannelle. In French, It's
meaning is Strawberries and Cinnamon. She would choose this name, because she specializes in strawberry tarts, and, cinnamon buns!
she is known throughout her town for her amazing cooking skills, and often has bake sales every Sunday on the corner of her block, on
Monroe Drive. She always adds a tiny and perfect, curl of whipped cream on her tangy-and-sweet tarts, and uses only the best quality
of soft-and-crumbly crust. Her cinnamon buns use brown sugar, her secret ingredient, so, they aren't overpoweringly sweet, like most
cinnamon buns. She uses her own homemade royal icing, made from the finest grains of sugar, eggs laid freshly, by her own chickens!
These three, unexpected-by-most business partners, go by Flo, Peanut, and Gazelle. Flo is a snow-white friench-hen, while the others
are a soft, creamy brown. They lay white eggs with speckles of grey. Tiff origionally bought Peanut and Gazelle and then she hatched
Flo from her own egg, about two years and three months later. Well, lets get back on track. She aspires, to become a model, because
her friends convinced her to try out for a small private class about modeling, just studying, no real modeling, and, she was top of the
class! She studies photography, and, although she prefers to be behind the lens, perusing her hobby of photography, modeling, is fun!


I can tell you put a lot of work into this, and I love the idea of the Bakery! It sounds super cute, and so does she. I love the fact that she has chickens so she can have fresh eggs in her bakery, and the fact that her friends are the ones to have convinced her to be an aspiring model is really great. The only thing that I don't particularly like is how much detail you put into the sections that don't really require detail, such as the username and gender sections. It also seems almost as if you were just trying to fill space when giving your reason for her name, because it was a bit repetitive, and sort of boring. The rest of the form was lovely, you just drew some things out a little too far, is all.


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Username
The Batter

Parra's Name
Viviette

Parra's Gender
female

Song
Valentine - Electric Swing Circus

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Personality traits-
Musical || Viviette is definitely a musical parrapup! Much like other parras, she enjoys singing to others of her kind, but she loves it so much that she just does it for fun, even if there is no one around to hear her! She is talented, but can get herself in quite a predicament as she sings so much, she is often left with a sore throat, making her unable to sing and leaving her quite grumpy. Her musical talent makes her a very bright and vibrant parrapup, and makes her a bit easy to get along with. She is quite the lover of swing music!

Artistic || As an artistic parrapup, her artistic skill comes from decorating, mainly. From decorating homes, cookies, or even sticking stickers on something, she can make it look lovely! Doing this makes her have a keen eye, and she can keep an eye out for things in need of a little touch up, or a complete makeover.

Bossy || She doesn't have completely good qualities! She can be a bit bossy, and somewhat sassy. Sometimes these traits get the best of her, leaving her a bit unable to make quite the best of friends. But, very rarely will she ever be bossy or mean to her friends and family!

Family-Oriented || She's definitely a family parrapup. She loves fledgelings, and she loves to be around her family members and friends, as all of her friends she considers family. Although it is a bit hard for her to make friends, when she does make them she is quite loving and friendly, making her well known throughout the parra community for her loving nature. She makes sure to put her 'family' before her, making them the most important people in her life.

Cultured || When in her home land, France, she's definitely in a place where she's truly comfortable. At home, she takes her culture into her home. She may exclaim french phrases at times, and when angry she rants quickly in french. Its quite amusing to watch, actually.

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Art by my very lovely girlfriend Zacharie <33333.


I love everything about this, really. The name, the song, the personality; its all so cute and everything seems to fit her so well. The art is super cute and seems to show off her personality as well. And I like that she loves to sing. The only thing that I'd say I don't really like is the bright, almost eye-burning colors that you've used for the text. Other than that though, I have to say I really like it.


Byteme wrote:Username: Byteme
Parra's Name: Toulouse
Parra's Gender: Male
Song: The last five years: I can do better than that
Extras(Up to 3 extras):

Personality:

Toulouse is one of the more peaceful children of his family. He can take many things with grace and usually, he truly, does. He was born with the finer attributes from his families gene pool, and is genially aware of it, whenever he waggled his little rump, and his tiny curly tail infront of his brothers, or dances by with his dainty little feet. He is not one of the clumsy ones.

Much to the dissaproval of his second youngest brother, who works hard to try to be just like he is-- and his older brother, who, in his perfect state, knows you should not flaunt it- because he is going crazy within that state. Toulouse is one of the more eased children of the Turiel family. Unlike his eldest brother, who appears perfect but has no way of escape, nor his youngest brother who's given up, Toulouse truly does have it easy. At least, much easier. He walks the gentle step, and talks the elegant, blue blooded, talk.

His strongest, worst fault comes in his need to shake the balence once it is perfect. He has his prized self, and just about whatever perfectly owned private place he needs, but... there are other needs, there is a certain need. A need he can't help. Once times change, and ease, things become boring. Toulouse is loose, he needs to feel the shake of the ground beneath him, and the flurry of conflict, danger, anything and everything. Toulouse needs something that isn't oh-so-perfectly and well done, with the easiest of breaths, he has a way with trouble and it's every habit.


History:


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I like how long the personality is, it means that you put some thought into it, and I love to see thoughtful personalities. But it was a bit hard to understand. I liked the song and thought that it fit pretty well with his personality, but I also would have liked to see that history written out, because I love to read histories.


Frozenlily25 wrote:Username: Frozenlily25
Parra's Name: Racheal
Parra's Gender: Female
Song: Wine red-The Hush Sound

(Personality): Charming| Stationary| Friendly| Calm| Fashionable| A bit Picky| Loyal| Creative


I prefer to see descriptive personalities, rather than just traits, but what you've written is still really good, and it seems to fit pretty well with the looks of this character. The name is alright as well, but I do prefer less known names, just because they interest me a bit more. In all, it would have been nice to see a bit more, but what you've got here is really nice.


Minneu wrote:

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Username:
Minneu
Parra's Name:
Pippi
Parra's Gender:
Female
Song:
I'm So Lucky.


I love the pixel, and the name is really cute, but other than that there really isn't much to judge.
I'd like to see a bit more put into the form.

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And now that all of the judging is out of the way, I'd like to announce the winner of this beautiful parra,
The Batter!
I really loved everyone's forms, in fact I was stuck between three of them, but Fluffy and I both agreed that The Batter deserves this girl.
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Re: Parrapup #205*

Postby ririan » Mon Feb 23, 2015 2:39 pm

Congrats! , also , thanks uvu
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らの記憶を掠わないで / xea cover

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Re: Parrapup #205*

Postby Bleating Ram » Mon Feb 23, 2015 2:50 pm

Congratulations c:
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Re: Parrapup #205*

Postby the batter » Mon Feb 23, 2015 4:53 pm

oh my gosh, thank you so much!!
aha, im so excited <3 this is my last parra anyway, and im so glad it was this special girl!
thanks again!
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Re: Parrapup #205*

Postby xFrizzySmoothiex » Mon Feb 23, 2015 7:01 pm

Congrats and take care of that lovely parra c:
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Re: Parrapup #205*

Postby totems » Mon Feb 23, 2015 10:08 pm

Congrats!
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Re: Parrapup #205*

Postby ArizonaT3a » Tue Feb 24, 2015 9:59 am

Congrats Batter!!

And thanks for the little mention, her story would've eventually lead up to her theme song but I just didn't have enough time for myself to finish it. ^^;
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