Re: Makoatls #241+#242-Thunder and lightning brothers

Postby Katie_monkey » Wed Dec 31, 2014 7:31 am

I'm trying out for #242
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Mako Name;; Chaos
Mako Gender;; Male
Partner;; N\A
What do they think of their brother?;;
Chaos thinks that his brother is just the coolest makoatl ever, and wants to be cool just like him. Sometimes he even makes paper horns and runs around pretending to be him. He likes to try and follow his brother without him noticing sometimes. At some times his brother is annoyingly overprotective though, usually when he's trying to prank someone or adventure somewhere cool, like by the ocean when its storming, or near a cliff.
One extra;;
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Re: Makoatls #241+#242-Thunder and lightning brothers

Postby Froas » Fri Jan 02, 2015 1:05 pm

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Re: Makoatls #241+#242-Thunder and lightning brothers

Postby .kestral » Tue Jan 06, 2015 5:45 am

I'm trying out for both!
Username;;
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Older brother's name;;
Turmoil
'Oli'

Younger brother's name;;
Disarray
'Ari'

Gender;;
Both are male
Their relationship;;
Turmoil and Disarray are as close as two brothers can be, Oli knows his little brother will never grow up, he knows he will always need someone looking out for him, even as an adult he will appear to be a child even if he doesn't act like one. Oli loves being able to take care of Ari, they are all each other has, all each other have ever had and it means there bond has gotten stronger and stronger over the years.
Ari doesn't mind being looked after, he looks up to Oli and see's him as his idol. Ari often gets bullied because of his small size and intelligence, he knows Oli will always be there for him, will always have his back when things get hard. He knows his brother gave up school and college to earn money to pay the bills, he knows what else Oli gave up, including a relationship just to look after him.

In the heart of it the two couldn't live without each other. Ari keeps his brother grounded, keeps him happy and gives him all the advice he could need. Oli keep his brother safe, keeps him fed and comfortable. They don't have the happiest of lives, they live in a horrible, damp home, but for now thats all they need, because they have each other.

One extra;;
*Note, as we are allowed to give them minor powers I imagine Turmoil and Disarray having opposite powers. Turmoil negates electricity, he basically turns it off. Disarray creates small sparks when he is angry or scared, they run across his body zapping people. Oli is obviously immune and his power helps settle his little brothers.

Now, onto the actual extra.

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A piercing scream tore through the night followed by the gentle sound of someone shushing. The scream dampened immediately into a soft, heart wrenching sob. Turmoil gently lay his hand on his brothers shoulder as the smaller one shook with almost silent tears. Beside them lay a small fluffy mouse, still as death, its body growing cold. Turmoil pulled Disarray closer allowing his soothing presence to dampen his brothers tears.
"Don't cry Ari" he muttered softly under his breath as he stood, lifting the featherlight child with him. The younger Mako didn't struggle, hanging limply in his brothers arms , his head buried in his shoulder.
"It died Oli, they always die, why can't I stop it" he said softly, his voice barely a whisper. Turmoil closed his eyes and shook his head as he carried his brother back towards there house.
"Your getting better, you just, its when your angry, its an accident. You know it is" he said as he gently pushed open there front door, lowering Disarray onto the sofa. With a sad, pitiful look on his face the younger brother looked up, his white eyes were glassy as he used the back of his hand to wipe away the tears.

"Why do you stay with me Oli,I just put you in danger" he said softly shuffling up to one end of the sofa as his brother dropped down on the other holding two glasses of milk. Disarray accepted the milk gratefully and took a sip waiting for an answer. Oli sighed and shrugged thoughtfully.
"Your my baby brother, whether I wanted to or not I could never leave you. Everyone else did, I refuse to be like them" he said kindly as Disarray met his eyes. Disarray sighed rubbing his hand worriedly over his hair.
"But...but you had everything going for you. You had college, you had Alayne, why was I worth it?"

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Re: Makoatls #241+#242-Thunder and lightning brothers

Postby valour » Fri Jan 09, 2015 5:30 am

I'm trying out for #241
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Mako Name // Catatumbo
he prefers to go by Cata though
named after this phenomenon

Mako Gender // Male

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Username // minke
I'm currently the owner of
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Partner // none

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What do they think of their brother?

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Re: Makoatls #241+#242-Thunder and lightning brothers

Postby Sixbane » Sun Jan 11, 2015 2:09 pm

This will end in about an hour (50 minutes); at 10 PM EST

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Re: Makoatls #241+#242-Thunder and lightning brothers

Postby chromatic. » Sun Jan 11, 2015 3:00 pm

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I'm trying out for both!
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The two brothers are basically inseparable meaning you will almost never find one without the other as you cant have lightning without thunder being to far behind The older brother often takes up the role of protecting the younger brother while the younger brother would often get into trouble at times as is more mischievous than the older brother but Corentin loves Sorren regardless. They tag team in just about everything including relationships as they will often flirt at the same girl and are pretty darn good at it as well as they use their lightning powers to make their teeth shine.
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The two brothers are secretly a tag team of assassins. One of them, most of the time the younger brother, will approach their target in a sweet matter and lower their guard so that the other may attack. At the start of the attack the younger brother would roar which sounds alot like the rumble of thunder then the older brother will come in and create a bright flash with his lightning powers. When the flash ended their target would be motionless on the ground dead. In order to protect his brother Corentin usually strikes first before his brother to keep him out of harm.
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Re: Makoatls #241+#242-Thunder and lightning brothers

Postby Sixbane » Sun Jan 11, 2015 3:10 pm

This one is closed for judging~

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Re: Makoatls #241+#242-Thunder and lightning brothers

Postby Sixbane » Sat Jan 31, 2015 7:04 pm

Sorry for the delay!
These two will both be going to~
Qualeo

Though i usually don't enjoy 'trying for both' forms in lieu of team forms; I felt you wrote these two with wonderful characters;wonderful skill;and lots of thought.

I really adored reading their personalities,and loved the story you wrote with them, Good job /u/~

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Re: Makoatls #241+#242-Thunder and lightning brothers

Postby Loadingconstella » Fri Feb 06, 2015 12:15 am

You, Sir, are one very lucky duck! Congrats on you win!
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