Re: Makoatl #253

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Sat Jan 24, 2015 10:54 am

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Re: Makoatl #253

Postby Novi » Sat Jan 24, 2015 11:21 am

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username; dazme
name; Ludwig Hertz.
gender; Male.
accessories; A green cloak
with a skull broach tying it together,
and two gauntlets, each with a leather
strap holding them to his arms.


One Last Fight
personality; Ludwig, or Lutz, as he's commonly referred to as, is a spiteful being. It seems that he hates everyone and everything, and in all reality, that's the honest truth. He was overtaken by greed and a lust for power at a young age, and did whatever it took to gain more and more power - even if it meant crushing or killing others in order to get there. He was ambitious - very much so. Of course, this would eventually lead to his downfall...



relationships; with Alaric- Lutz absolutely hates Alaric with a burning passion. These two were allies in the war*, and when Lutz went psychotic with power after murdering their general and taking over their squadron, Alaric refused to join Lutz in his power-hungry rampage. This led to a bloodthirsty battle, where Alaric lost sight in his left eye, and Lutz earned his scars/sutures. To say the least, because of this, if the two see each other, they won't hesitate to get into a fight.
with Claude- Ludwig is on somewhat good terms with Claude. Although Claude is hesitant to join Lutz's side, the two get along surprisingly well, and share the same outlook on life. If only the Kelpie wasn't so close to Alaric...
with Maverick- Even considering the fact that Maverick was taken in by Alaric, Lutz sees Maverick as a son. These two can commonly be seen around each other, Maverick talking to Lutz and Lutz just listening calmly. This irritates Alaric to no end, so Lutz finds any reason to be around Maverick.
with Nandalia- Lutz sees Nandalia as an ally, even though the girl hates him. Honestly, he can't see why Maverick has taken such a liking to her. Sure, she's a pyromaniac with good looks, but other than that, she's just a pest. But maybe she could be of use to him...
with Quintessa- Okay. NO ONE can be so happy all the time. This sort of freaks Lutz out, yet it annoys him at the same time. Quintessa isn't afraid of him, for some odd reason... It's creepy. But maybe, just maybe, the girl's enthusiasm can accomplish so much... Maybe she has hidden potential that could help Lutz achieve his goals... Or maybe she's just an idiot. Who knows?
theme song; Lorde - Everybody Wants to Rule the World

about me; Hello, Pagan! I'm Dex, a transgender male in the United States who enjoys reading, writing, drawing, and animating. I'm currently in the process of making a comic/animated series, but enough about me.
why i want him; Right off the bat, I'm just going to say that Lutz seems like a very captivating character. His story has so much potential to be amazing, and I'd love to be the one to write it. I already have so much planned for this guy, to be honest.
His design is gorgeous, as well. I've always had a thing for brown, messy-haired characters, and a Mako like that is just awesome. Although I usually don't like things such as stitched-up mouths in designs, it really works here, and I feel I could make that into a very interesting story. His scars tell so many tales that I can't help but want him.
Aside from his amazing design and concept, Lutz brings so many ideas to me. I can easily see his story splayed out in front of me, and I want nothing more than to write out that story, or even make it into a comic. I want to be able to call him mine, and be able to show the world that fantastic story that he could surely provide. That is why I want Lutz.
usages; Obviously, Ludwig's story would be written out. On dA, of course; I wouldn't want to scar any child's mind with the story (as some parts will be gruesome), so it'll be safely put on dA with a mature content warning just in case. I might even make it into a comic... But if that's the case, it will still be uploaded only on to deviantART. Again, I just want to play it safe.
I'd also like to make a short little animatic with Lutz, set to his theme song. It would include Alaric, as it would illustrate his backstory, and it would be uploaded to YouTube. Lutz would also be drawn almost constantly. He would constantly interact with my other Makoatls, and I feel they could make interesting stories of their own.
Role-playing is a must. I want to develop Ludwig's personality as much as possible, so I'd be sure to flesh him out to be believable via RP's. And if you'd like, I could give you links to where I'm using him, so you can watch how he becomes developed. And if I am unable to care for him, I'll be sure to contact you so we can find him a better home. I just want to care for him, and if I can't give him that, I don't see why I deserve to keep him any longer (should I win him).

*In Alaric's backstory, he joined a war and gained PTSD from it
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Re: Makoatl #253

Postby Shoe. » Sat Jan 24, 2015 11:28 am

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Have to try out for this babe, I mean look at them. ;A;

Pffffff I was wondering what happened to the thread. XD
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Re: Makoatl #253

Postby ilya » Sat Jan 24, 2015 12:09 pm

Username:Dark Silent Wolf
Name:Maven,also goes by Mave
Gender:Male
Accessories:Maven wears always an FBI card,received from his past job.On that card says 'department of investigation,special agent Maven Eilam'When he goes outside is wearing a black scarf,sometimes to hide his stitched mouth and sometimes because of the cold weather.
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Personality:Mave is that strange guy you'll see standing in the shadow or staring at you,his eyes starting a sense of fear deep in your bones,like they are showing a life story,but not a good one.After an incident,Mave haven't socialized with anyone since then.It wasn't a tragedy,because he was not very talkative before.(will extend)
What happened with his tongue?:Maven has worked for FBI and was a special agent,very devoted to his job also.After he solved some chases,he got some mental problems,like headaches and visions.He lost his tongue in an important mission,also a dangerous one.
*sorry,I really wanted to add this extra.hope I kept it appropriate c:*
Occupation:For now,Maven is not working for anyone and not doing anything for his living.He can not eat,due to his stitched mouth,inside of him something is missing,so he can't feel the hungry.
Even if he's not talkative,Mave is walking quite a lot in hyper populated places,behaving like a normal person.He likes to study the personality of other people,following them sometimes.One time,he followed a girl and then she asked him what he wants from her,then he just left.Next day,that girl was missing.The coming of Mave was like a warning for what's coming next.
Where he lives:It's a formal house in Shoreditch, London, UK,given by FBI as gratitude for his services
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Re: Makoatl #253

Postby MenheraCollie » Sat Jan 24, 2015 7:07 pm

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Re: Makoatl #253

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Re: Makoatl #253

Postby Guest » Sun Jan 25, 2015 2:28 pm

Due to the topic kinda lending to rule breaking, the contest for this bab has changed!
Please read the first page for the new contest!
Please do not mention any kind of self harm or gore/torture/etc. Thanks!
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Re: Makoatl #253

Postby yuketsu » Sun Jan 25, 2015 2:35 pm

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Re: Makoatl #253

Postby HanniBun » Sun Jan 25, 2015 4:12 pm

As pretty as this bab is, going to pull out. Good luck to rest <3
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Re: Makoatl #253

Postby hopegracecatdog » Sun Jan 25, 2015 5:17 pm

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I was not always like this.....
May 1
I set my beloved ship towards the red sea a cursed part, but we are sent into exile by the queen for piracy. But that was to be expected we all knew she was going to do that and the king of Spain want our heads for one million.

May2
My crew and I are very superstitious I do not want them to fall for story's and coward in front of the British ships. We may be pirates but we have more than enough honor than the queen.

May 3
the British ships make sure we cross into the red sea nothing has happened to us but I worrie.

may 6
the sea has not been so kind we have lost 3 crew members we search for land as quick as possible

The cursed island

I have decide that telling my story in journal form was the best way to start it know we go in memory.
The island was eerie. The sea was angry and gray my crew could not see where we where going to dock. The night was cold and the wind blistering only the bits of moon showed us the way. We hit rock hard my crew and I saved what we could, my girl went down and the sea was her watery grave.
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It was still stormy what was left of my crew went into the cave. As we went deeper into the cave we realized it was more like an abandoned city. Telling them we should be fine and that all would be well. That was not the case we were battered betrayed and sorrowful we lost many and my ship my beloved ship was gone with some crew members. As we walked deeper into the cave we saw gold! Superstitious as we where we had had so many losses that my crew did not care we slept and when we wake we would take the gold and try to find a way off the island. The storm stopped outside it was still night.
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while my crew slept I was to keep guard I am the captain. My gut told me something was not right but the crew was so tired. At midnight something peculiar happened. Singing filled the cave I tried to wake my crew up but found my voice could not reach them. Gasping I drew my sword only to find myself face to face with a demon, it laughed a cruel laugh My crew now under the spell of the demons voice. I begged the demon to let them go he laughed and with a thick ear raveling voice he said "Would you be willing to swap me something for them?" I could not believe it they where my family, I vigorously nodded and before I knew it I was knocked out.

The deal
I slowly woke up, my head swinging back and fourth. I soon realized I was on a ship....MY SHIP! I was so happy I stood up my mouth hurt, I tried to say ow but nothing came out. My hands flew up to my face realizing I could no longer speak! How could I run a ship with out my voice!?! The moon was high above me. Understanding what I had done salty tears ran down my face soaking into my wounds. My ship and my crew they where back but where not back at the same time. My crew had turned into ghosts my ship back.

we continue to sail but we are no ordinary ship or crew.

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