Belldandy Adopt #93 by Violet Stormbringer

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Belldandy Adopt #93

Postby Violet Stormbringer » Fri Dec 05, 2014 10:36 am

My first Belldee with major edits! Has a fancy hairdo and some even fancier wings~

This one is based on a fallen angel.
He/she can't fly at all, even with their aura, as they were cursed! Why were they cursed? Only you can tell the story!

The wings occasionally have feathers that will fall out. As the feathers fall, they slowly turn red, eventually becoming entirely that color. However, the wings themselves will always be pure white.

I personally see this one as female, but you can choose any gender. c:

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Extra can be anything *except* a story. Art, poem, song that best suits it, or even their favorite food. Anything you can think of. xD
Of course, you don't need to write 1000 words. All forms of writing are accepted, but I really want to see good forms! I very much like this Belldandy so I expect him or her to go to a good home. ;u;

If you decide to do an Extra, depending on what it is it can count greatly towards the form, so don't worry if your writing isn't as up to par. c:

Ends on December 12th.
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Re: Belldandy Adopt #93

Postby altiora » Fri Dec 05, 2014 10:38 am

:N A M E:
* Vi?
* Vi.

:G E N D E R:
* Biologically
* female.
* They/them
* pronouns
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If you were to once, once, look in cotton darkness that soaked up light like a black hole with gravity- then maybe you did it often. Maybe you would often find, in the darkest night – that wasn’t that dark with the nightlight of the moon above – feathers and soft wing beats in the root hollows in trees that would sooth and drown you softly with heavy eyes and foggy thoughts; and perhaps you would go to sleep – whether on the bed of thorns and sticks or in a cave of shivering blankets over your shivering head – and then you would find sweet dreams with a taste of tea in your mouth.
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A hush of crows shush over a mush of humans that laugh drunkenly and without a care as they wave clumsy limbs around themselves like ribbons on a moving pole. They would not see the ‘Habaaran Socotada’ as they would call it in their language. They would not see it any more than an eyelash; an eyelash floating away from loud noises that remind it of memories forgotten in the top layers of the mind – like the memories of irrelevance gone through transport across a boundary of doors – and they are not allowed to be remembered.
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Curious minds attract the ‘Proklet’, while chaos and violence and despair repulses the ‘du khách’. All words more sense than not to the ‘egún ti rin ajo’, excusing both the mutterings that originates from alphabets of swirls and dots and lines and calligraphy, as well as the first language that has been forgotten. The ‘gitunglo’ has habits of frequent opening and closing of clipped wings when confronted with worry and nervous and frustration. But it is and will always be the ‘rin ajo’. And it will always be ‘maleït’.

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Waking up in a strange, dark place would be scary for someone who has knowledge of the world or the capability to imagine it. But the unknowing creature on the floor stirred and looked up and didn’t think anything at all; for without any experiences, how can you draw from them to react? We are all started as blank beings, empty canvases, and this canvas had not a stain on them.
“Remember when we went out to that picnic? That’s right, he did…”

Ahh, there it was. The first taint. The first experience. Though it wasn’t the usual mother and father cooing sound, or the docters calling out – usually – if it was a boy, or a girl, or boys or girls or something else entirely. No, it was a whisper, an echo, a surreal identity hidden from the winged Belldandy. But the Belldandy didn’t understand the words.
“They requested another one of your kulturní peří umění – is that how you say it?”

The unknowing Belldandy on the floor understood some of that. Cultural feather arts? Was whom this voice was talking to an artist? Their ears were up and there bells ringed as their head moved. They observed the fragile bell, wings fluttering it curiosity. Something new; cold metal on their fur.
“I can’t believe it. Just idiots. So I told them…”

The voices faded into the back of the thoughts of the Belldee as, for the first time, they encountered a new conundrum. What did they do now? What action do they take? Maybe they should try to get out?
“I heard what you did; are you sure that was the right decision?”

Curious wings fluttered up and down; feathers were knocked loose and turned red like rust on iron as they touched the ground. This didn’t intrigue them; what did was the thought of flying. Could they fly?
“When you said; ‘I wish I would just forget’ did you mean it?”

They didn’t know much. Did they know anything? But it seemed instinctual, muscle memory perhaps, to try to run… jump… fly-
“You were right. I- I did try. I’m sorry. I won’t tell.”

The first, sharp sting of pain – on the front right fetlock joint. The Belldandy hiccupped in shock and didn’t understand what it was at first; but pain is instinctual, so eventual y they started to ignore it and focus again.
“-ink, you know? I love you dearest, little explorer of mine.”

Focus again. Think again. Try again. They needed to do that, right? They wouldn’t succeed if they didn’t try.
“I heard a rumour- did you know? It wasn’t you , righ…”

But it didn’t work to fly, and they really didn’t want to risk having that pain again; their whole leg ached softly with weight on it. So what else could they do? Looking around, there wasn’t much to see, until they spotted a branch – loosely leaning from the ground to the crack above them.
“-eed a light, just strike a match – they won’t know-”

It was hard, most of all, to get on the branch; it moved with each move they made, to the left, to the right; a see-saw they didn’t want to be on, if they knew what see-saws were. But they tried, and they tried hard.
“Are you okay? They told me-”

The brightness almost blinded them; they had been in the dark, in the hallow of the tree for so long, they couldn’t see in front of them- not until their eyes focused.
“Did you free it‽ Are you alright?”

They felt their first taste of defeat and misery, and subconsciously their wings dropped down to hang by their sides, making them struggle to stay balanced before they began their inevitable fall to the ground. The hole was way too small.
“Abyss’s aren’t that dark, I swe-”

It didn’t hurt as much to land as before. They landed on their side, and it was quite a strong ache, but the Belldandy preferred it to the sharp edge of when they landed awkwardly on their legs. It had started to hurt more then, though, and sitting down the Belldandy refused to let the strange liquid in their eyes drip.
“Was it the right choice?”

Suddenly there was a large thumping sound, coming in beats of twos. A strange creature… walked by.
“Answer my letters, please…”

Fright. Terror. They shrunk back away from the noise as it went past.
“Don’t panic, alright? It’ll be fine.”

Dislodged dirt fell down from the hole above them. The belldandy stared at the strange white material that fell with the dirt, cautious. Panicked.
“It’ll be alright.”

What was it? It was cold and they shivered as they walked towards the falling feathery dust-like white particles. The sound of the creature was in the distance. The Belldandy’s first opinion was of
how beautiful the fluff looked in different lights,
“Leave everything behind. I’m sorry.”

And the first laugh when one tiny piece landed on their nose and melted in the warmth.
“I’ll remember you.”

The light was bright above now. The whiteness reflected it. Was it big enough?
“It’ll make it so you can’t understand us! That isn’t fair! Come home!”

Should they try again?
“Your journal? But you love that thing! Oh…”

Maybe if this time they had something to help…
“Fine!”

If the twigs were piled up at the base…
“I know what you did and this won’t make it go away!”

Stable enough?
“I don’t condone what you’ve done, but this is wor-”

The Belldandy climbed closer, closer to the light, easier now.
“Don’t punish yourself-”

Suddenly the branch moved, and they would have called out for help but they didn’t know how, and just made a squeak.
“Why can’t-”

But no. She could do it alone.
“You- I-”

It wobbled. She had one more choice. Step off now, save the pain…
“Vi x x”

Cold light swallowed them, and they thought that Vi was a nice sound to call themselves.


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Re: Belldandy Adopt #93

Postby ellyenchanted » Fri Dec 05, 2014 10:42 am

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Re: Belldandy Adopt #93

Postby space cactus » Fri Dec 05, 2014 10:46 am

dropping out u v u but good luck to all you people!
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Re: Belldandy Adopt #93

Postby rottenmutt » Fri Dec 05, 2014 10:52 am

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Re: Belldandy Adopt #93

Postby clastlog » Fri Dec 05, 2014 10:52 am

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Angie is a quiet and rather shy Belldandy and is not good with big crowds. She is more of an introvert and keeps to herself. Angie was never one for socializing because in every conversation she tries to have, someone just has to bring up the same topic over and over. Why do you look like that? Are those wings real? Are you cursed or something? Again and again they ask, never seeming to stop their raging curiously. So Angie gave them all a simple answer, 'I was born this way'. Even though deep down Angie knew it wasn't true, she still wished it was that simple.
Why he/she was cursed:
Angie doesn't enjoy talking about her past, it just brings back unwanted memories. But it seems she has no choice, Let's begin. Angie was just a newborn when she was given away to a new owner. That's where everything fell apart, it turns out that her supposed 'Owner' was a mad scientist. Angie didn't understand that the dark red pellets she ate everyday were why her fur had started to turn red. But that wasn't the end of it, one day her owner took it to the extreme. Late at night Angie was sleeping in her little cage, it seemed to be about Midnight and she was dreaming about tea. Then she heard a odd rattling sound and opened her drowsy eyes. A hand reached into her cage and picked Angie up, she didn't struggle and instead knowing it was her loving owner nuzzled the hand. She would soon regret that small act when the scientist put her into a star like shape surrounded by candles. Angie didn't understand at first being that she was so young but soon wished that she had run. A violent chant echoed through the room, Angie curled up into a small ball shaking from head to hoof. Then a flash of red light and nothing but pain, Angie yelped falling onto her side and began screaming. Something was ripping through her back, all she wanted was for it to stop. The chant intensified and wind whooshed around the dark room. Angie gave one more painful yelp before using to the last of her strength to stand up and bolted to the door. A harsh demon like cry split the air as she escaped from the room, never looking back. Angie will never forget that day, that's the day her life had changed. Angie rarely speaks of it, but if you pry hard enough and she trusts you.. She'll make sure you understand her pain that she has to live with day after day.
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At the root of insanity
Is having too much time on your hands--
Too much time to think--
Too much time to remember past hurts
And to wish things could be different.

Too much time spent alone,
Staring at these four walls
With too much time to think,
To remember past hurts
And to wish things were different.

Got to rid myself of this insanity.
I'll busy myself with a flurry of activities
And seek the companionship of others.
They´ll tell me time heals all wounds,

But for now I'll still cry--
When I have too much time to think
And remember past hurts,
Wishing things are different.

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Re: Belldandy Adopt #93

Postby LauraK » Fri Dec 05, 2014 11:05 am

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Re: Belldandy Adopt #93

Postby Violet Stormbringer » Fri Dec 05, 2014 11:11 am

Quick update!

With the removal of eyes, the curse description has changed.
"This one is based on a fallen angel.
He/she can't fly at all, even with their aura, as they were cursed! Why were they cursed? Only you can tell the story!"
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Re: Belldandy Adopt #93

Postby SnivelGriff » Fri Dec 05, 2014 11:25 am

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Why he/she was cursed: Res with the idea that she was spreading nightmares
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Re: Belldandy Adopt #93

Postby Novi » Fri Dec 05, 2014 11:26 am

Username: Cados
Name: Procel - a fallen angel who can speak of hidden and secret things.
Gender: Male.
Brief Personality: Procel is a secretive Belldee, always keeping to himself and staying off to the side. He's rather quiet, refusing to speak to anyone, and seems to always be brooding on his own. He has a sense of self loathing, and because of this, often insults himself. Very regretful, due to his mysterious past, he oftentimes tries to change his ways. Most of the time, while trying to do this, he comes off as insane - Procel has been seen talking to the walls, sometimes screaming at them tearfully to "take them back! Take these damned wings back!"
The one thing that seems to make him happy, however, is children. Young Belldees are, for some reason, drawn to him, and follow him around like lost puppies. Not that he minds this, of course. In fact, Procel likes being around children. He'll sit down and tell stories to them, and oftentimes acts as a second father for them. It seems the reason that he does this is linked to his past. He reinforces into their minds to never talk to strangers, and if he sees a stranger trying to hold a conversation with the little one, will react aggressively and act very protectively. But don't get him wrong - he's not doing this because he hates everyone, or because he's insane. He's doing this because he wants what's best for the children. Most importantly, he doesn't want them to end up like him.
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Why he/she was cursed:
Story (1000 words) wrote:Several years had elapsed since I'd been found on the cold, hard concrete, my wings all but broken. They took me in - treated me as one of their own. But I could never forget what had happened; the reason why I was here in the first place. It all started with the one secret I refused to share. The one that nearly got me killed. The one that got me kicked out of paradise.

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"Procel! Procel, darling, come quickly, now! We'll be late if you don't!"
Mother glanced over to me impatiently, a warm, gentle smile on her face. She chuckled lightly as I - a boy of no more than six - bounded out of my den, racing over to her and giggling wildly. "I'm here, Mother!" I squealed delightedly, barely able to contain my excitement. "May we go now? Please?"

Mother simply laughed and nudged me along, walking at an easy pace. I trotted along a little ways behind her, beaming and flicking my tail slightly in eagerness. Today was the day we got to go to town - a rare treat for commoners like us. Mother spoke quietly to me as I skipped behind her. "Now, now, Procel dear, you must behave while we're out. Remember - if you misbehave and others see..."

"They'll think commoners are lowly, ignorant creatures and will refuse service to them," I said back softly, the message clear in my head. Mother had taught me from a young age that if I were to act like a hooligan in front of those of the higher class, merchants and business owners alike would think of all commoners as idiotic cretins that had no sense of morality, thus refusing to offer their wares to them. It sounds foolish now, but back then, it made perfect sense.

As we trotted along the road, I heard a soft, raspy voice. I turned my head to look back, but saw nothing. Rolling my shoulders back in a shrug and passing the sound off for my overactive imagination, I continued on with Mother. But soon after, I saw a figure dart through the woods that aligned the path to town. I squeaked lightly and looked to Mother, but she walked right along, as if she heard nothing. I gulped - this wasn't normal. This wasn't normal at all.

Soon, we arrived at the town gates. We entered the bustling city, where the scent of bread and other goodies greeted my nostrils. Mother stopped in front of a clothing store and told me to wait outside and behave. I nodded my head in response, and off she went. Gazing around in awe, I soon noticed a dark, shadowy figure outside of town. It appeared to be a male Belldee - strange. He didn't look like any Belldee I'd seen before...

He glanced over to me and gave a gentle, scratchy laugh - one that I recognized immediately. It was the voice I'd heard back on the trail! My own curiosity getting the better of me, I darted after the Belldee, ignoring the stares that everyone was giving me.

I exited the city, glancing around feverishly in search of the male Belldee. Just as I was about to give up hope, I saw him standing there, hiding behind the thickets and trees. A small, coy smile appeared on my face and I hesitantly padded towards him. I saw him freeze, his muscles tensing as if he were about to make a bolt for it. I tried to reassure him calmly - I didn't want this stranger to leave, for some reason...

"It's okay, Mister," I said quickly. "I won't hurt you! ...I don't think I could, even if I tried..."

The Belldee glanced over to me curiously, and, after a moment of staring, stepped towards me. "Who are you, little one?" he asked meekly.
I beamed. "My name is Procel! What's your name, Mister?"
Instead of answering my question, the older male pondered over my reply. "Hmm... Procel..." he glanced over to me once more and finally asked, "Say, are you good at keeping secrets?"

Bewildered at such a strange question, I nodded vigorously. "Uh huh! Mother says it's no good to share something someone else wants to keep secret."
He smiled warmly at me and walked forward slowly. "Would you like to make a little deal, then? If you say yes, though, you must keep between us, young Procel..."
I grinned widely and, practically bouncing with excitement, said, "Yes! Yes, that sounds fun!"

The male chuckled at my eagerness and said quietly, "Alright, alright... Before we begin, have you ever wanted to fly?"
I squealed with enthusiasm, beaming. "That sounds like a lot of fun! Could I, Mister? Could I?"
He laughed heartily and nodded. "One more question, son: would you like it if you and your mother could live like royalty?"

I gasped. This had been the one thing I wanted most, ever since I'd first figured out the concept of commoners and nobility. "Yes!" I squeaked happily, hopping up and down. "I'd really like that, Mister!"
He grinned once more and motioned for me to come forward. "Well, son, if you really want those things that badly, all you have to do is get your mother from the store, and I'll take care of the rest..."

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I did as he told me to, like a good little boy. Mother was confused, and I was excited. I didn't know of the male's wicked plans. I did as he told me to, and before I knew it, we were splayed across the concrete, the carriage screeching to a halt to check on us.
Mother and I awoke in a white, white room. I don't really remember much after that - all I know is that someone asked me what the man offered. Fearing he would get in trouble, I said nothing. After that, I was separated from Mother, and pushed into this hell, my wings useless.

I got what I wanted, but at the expense of my happiness.

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