Re: Staff Kiamara

Postby .Toboe. » Mon Dec 01, 2014 1:38 pm

ZEN
THE BOY WHO CLIMBED TOO HIGH

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.Toboe.----------Zen

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Male-------------25

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April 24-------Taurus
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-PERSONALITY-

"Oh, ah, an about me type thing, huh? Aha....I've never been very good at describing myself...

I suppose the easiest word to describe me would be 'introvert'. I'm not very energetic, or social. I do a lot of thinking...a lot of observing...a lot of reading. Oh, and a lot of napping! That's another thing I've been called, lazy. I like to recline and watch life pass by at it's own pace, I suppose that's kind of lazy in it's own right. My life is pretty slow moving when I have my way, and that's the way I like it. Of course, now that my tail is the way it is, it's a lot easier to pace myself.

I enjoy indulging in some of life's simpler pleasures. Eating, dancing, sleeping...I'm a very easy man to please. I work best with people who are similarly simple in their desires, or people who are reasonable and willing to work with me on the things we don't exactly see eye to eye on. Gender doesn't really matter to me, whether it be friendship or a relationship...as long as we go together well, I can try to make it work.

Enough about that, though. You really wanna know why my tail is like this don't you? Let me tell you the story...
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B E H I N D
--H I S--T A I L

It all started with a simple sentence

"Betcha can't climb that tree!"

One sentence with words that alone are so harmless, but the actions they describe can have major consequences

The one facing such consequences is a young kiamara, no older than 15. He and his best friend went out on a walk to enjoy the summer sights and sounds, and naturally they would want to take the opportunity to have some fun. The kia's names were Zen and Wendy. The friends walked around the park, enjoying the good weather and good companionship. Zen flopped down onto the grass and stretched out, giving his fur a little shake. Wendy sat down next to him, her tail twitching with impatience.

"Hey, Zen don't you think it's a little boring just sitting around like this? This is our youth, man! We gotta reach out and take it by the horns." Wendy exclaimed to him, putting a paw on his head and mussing his hair up

"Wendy, stop it!" Zen whined as he pulled away from his older friend's paw. "I'm happy just sitting here and relaxing. We've played a ton this summer, why can't we take it easy once in a while...?" Zen had never been a terribly active kia, preferring a nap on a bench swing to an exciting ride on a giant amusement park swing. His friend Wendy, however, was bursting with energy. Often people wondered why they were such close friends when their personal interests differed so much.

"Because it won't last forever! We're losing daylight, burning time! So much to do so much to see!" Wendy had gotten up and was running around in a small circle to illustrate her point.

"So what's wrong with taking the back street?" Zen said with a chuckle, quoting a song that neither of them really liked, aside from liking to laugh at it. His joke earned him a cuff around the ear from Wendy.

"Come on Zen, just get up and go! Huuurk--" She grunted as she tried to pick him up. Zen was heavier than he looked, Wendy knew, but she didn't think he was this heavy.

Zen rolled his eyes and stood up on his own "Fine, what do you wanna do?" He asked with a small yawn.

"Hmmmmm..." His friend was looking around, trying to determine what would be the most fun. "Ah! I got it! Zen, look over there." Wendy lifted her paw and jabbed it in the direction of what she'd seen. Zen followed her gaze to find a positively massive oak towering up into the sky. Wendy looked over at him with a mischievous grin and a glint in her eye

"Betcha can't climb that tree!"

Zen stared up at the oak, daunted by it's size. She didn't want him to climb up to the top of this, did she...? Zen shuddered at the thought. But at the same time, he knew that if he didn't at least climb it a little, she'd never let him hear the end of it, and would probably do it herself to show off "....Ok. I'll climb it. But only to the first branch!" He said, running over to the tree's trunk.

The tree itself was a lot more daunting when you were looking straight up from the bottom. Zen almost got cold feet. Even that bottom branch was a good 8 feet up in the air. But at Wendy's constant urging, and literal pushing, Zen got his claws into the tree and got to work climbing up. It took him several minutes to climb all the way, as he went slow and steady to avoid losing his grip, but he made it to the first branch, and hoisted himself over onto the thicker part of the branch that connected to the trunk directly

"See! I can climb a tree even this big!" Zen called down to Wendy on the ground, feeling rather proud of himself. Despite his fear, he showed his friend he could do dangerous and exciting things too.

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Wendy seemed impressed "Nice work, Zen! Heheh, you look just like a big monkey~" She said with a giggle.

Zen looked over to his tail, curled around the branch for extra stability. He thought on what she said, quickly realizing this was the perfect time to show off to her. If he could really knock her socks off, maybe she'd let him take a peaceful nap in the sun.

"Oh yeah? I look like a monkey, huh? Well I can swing like one too!" Zen grinned, and let himself drop forwards over the branch, only hanging by his tail. This was his near fatal mistake

"Ooh ooh aah-- AAAH!!" Zen's tail made a sickening snapping noise, and he lost his grip on the branch, falling to the ground below face first. He blacked out due to intense panic before he hit the ground. Wendy had to drag her friend's limp body to the nearest hospital.

"Don't worry buddy. I know you can't hear me, but you're gonna make it..." She mumbled to him, feeling guilty. Eventually they made it to the doctors, and Zen was treated for his injuries. It took him a few hours to wake up

"Nnh.....? What...happened, where am I?" He asked groggily, hooked up to several machines to make sure he was breathing and getting fluids. Wendy was there by his bedside

"You're at the hospital. You....fell out of the tree and hurt yourself really bad." She told him solemnly. Zen looked down at himself to take note of the damages. He had braces on his legs for sprains, and a cast around his foreleg for a badly broken bone. He sighed and winced in pain as he tried to move.

"I shouldn't have tried that stunt...I'm so stupid." He said with a small chuckle, looking over at Wendy and giving her a look that said he understood that she didn't mean for him to be hurt, and that she didn't need to say anything. An unspoken apology went between the two friends. It was then that Zen realized he couldn't feel his tail.

"What happened to my tail...? I can't feel it. They didn't have to--" Wendy stopped Zen before he could finish

"Just...look under your blanket" She said. Zen did as she told him, and saw his tail laying there limp, but otherwise just fine. He wondered why he couldn't feel it if it was seemingly uninjured. The doctor came in at that moment to answer his question

"Oh, Zen, you're awake. That's good, we were worried." She set down some files and began to explain his condition to him. He had broken bones in his right foreleg, and sprains in his back legs, which wouldn't take long to heal, and he would be able to walk in due time. But when she got to the condition of his tail...

"I'm afraid you won't be able to move your tail ever again."

Zen stared at her in confusion. "What? What happened to it??" he asked in a panic. He'd seen kias who didn't have the use of their tail, and he didn't like the idea of that.

"You dislocated it, badly. We weren't able to pop it back into place, it's too difficult to perform on a tail without potentially damaging your tail worse, or your spine. You won't be able to lift it naturally, you'll have to move it using outside help. Of course, your balance and back legs will be hindered severely. You don't be climbing any more trees, that's for sure." Zen frowned at her little jab at how he was injured, but didn't speak up. "However, you should be able to live a somewhat normal life, so I wouldn't worry about it. Plenty of creatures live without tails at all." The doctor smiled and patted his head gently "You'll be ok."

Zen sighed and laid back in his hospital bed. Even if he could live a normal life, it would take a long time to adjust...

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A R T

Up in his tree - Anthro Zen Ref - Zen Icon
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A--D A Y--I N--M Y--S H O E S

ZEN'S DAY PLANNER

"I have a tendency to be a bit forgetful, so in order to remember my weekly appointments and other little things I have to do, I made myself a basic schedule for the week. If you're interested, I can show you..."

-MONDAY-
"Mondays are mostly spent being active after a lot of relaxing over the weekend. I have a pretty full schedule this day."
7am Breakfast
8am Cleaning the apartment
9am-5pm Work at the grocery store
5-6:30pm Yoga class
7pm Dinner
10pm Bedtime

-TUESDAY-
"Tuesday is more laid back than Monday. I don't work at the grocery store tuesday, instead helping out at a daycare center."
6am Shower
7am Breakfast
7:30am-4pm Daycare center work
6pm Doctor visit
8pm Dinner
10pm Bedtime

-WEDNESDAY-
"On wednesday I go back to work at the grocery store, as well as doing my first of two physical therapy sessions."
7am Breakfast
9am-5pm Work at grocery store
6-8pm Physical therapy
8:30pm Dinner
10pm Bedtime

-THURSDAY-
"Thursday I don't have any sort of work because my physical therapy wears me out, so thursday is the day I restock on the necessities and take some time for my hobbies"
8am Breakfast
10am Shopping
2pm Sewing club
4pm Book club
7pm Dinner
10pm Bedtime

-FRIDAY-
"Friday is my last day of work for the week, as well as yoga class and another checkup to make sure my physical therapy isn't affecting me badly."
7am Breakfast
9am-5pm Work at grocery store
5-6:30pm Yoga class
8pm Doctor visit

-WEEKEND-
"The weekend is generally a couple days to hang out with friends and do what I please at home. There are only a few scheduled things to do, like my second physical therapy session on sunday and a shower on saturday, so I didn't bother to make them a base schedule when there's so little to do those days. Breakfast and other usually scheduled things to do are done really whenever I find the time, and may not happen at all. By experience though, my bedtime on saturday tends to be past midnight, and goes back to the normal 10pm on sunday."

"Any timeframes on the schedule that are blank are free time where I can do what I like, be it TV, or arts and crafts, or reading, or a trip to the park...it could be anything, and it seems silly to schedule myself free time. Now that you know my schedule, maybe you could stop by sometime when I'm free. Thanks for showing interest!"


D A N C I N G--W I T H--D E A D--W E I G H T

Dancing was always his passion. Zen took joy in the precise steps and the prancing and leaping that he could throw himself into without a care in the world while he danced. He particularly enjoyed songs with a strong beat, ones that would make his feet tap without him even thinking about it. Songs where dancing came naturally were by far Zen's favorite songs, and he would dance to them day in and day out

That is until the accident.

Soon after he returned home from the hospital, Zen found that even just walking was a struggle sometimes. Moving his back legs was a stiff and difficult process, and running was out of the question. His tail was too heavy, and continuously tripped him wherever he went. So naturally, when Zen tried to dance, it was a disappointing affair destined to failure.

Zen dragged himself over to the couch in his apartment and laid down, elevating his tail. "What kind of life is this...I can't move right, I can't dance...Why did I have to be so overconfident?" He lamented after another attempt at dancing had gone awry. "They said my movement would correct itself in time, so why isn't the therapy working?" Zen had been going to the hospital twice a week to walk on a treadmill and work his legs. It was a form of rehabilitation, a way to get his legs working properly again, so that his movements would be less stiff unnatural. However, it was taking much longer than Zen would have liked.

Zen grumbled and hauled himself off the couch again, standing in the middle of his living room "I'm going to learn how to dance like this if it's the last thing I do!" He proclaimed and jumped awkwardly, accidentally slamming his tail onto an end table and knocking off a plate and a cup of coffee "....whoops."

And that was when Zen began to dance. He would practice his steps every night, no matter how destructive, no matter how tiring, no matter how painful. He was a kia with a mission. At first, it was very painful and difficult. For months and months Zen just couldn't get his steps down and would slam into his furniture with every awkward movement. But as his rehabilitation schedule continued and his legs began to loosen up again, Zen found it was getting easier to try to dance without injuring himself.

Over those months of awkward, painful practice, Zen had somewhat learned how to dance to avoid smacking things all over the place with his tail. He knew how to move his hips in such a way that the dead weight would move only a bit from side to side, how to jump just high enough that his tail wouldn't rise with him and then slam into things like a mallet. Zen was finally seeing success.

Not only was his dancing method making himself happy, but it was helping along his rehabilitation. His legs would move more smoothly with every passing day now, and once he could move without his legs catching as he walked, he was ready to go out and dance in a public setting.

Zen stood in front of the entrance to the local dance club, looking a bit apprehensive about going inside "I'm going to be badly out of place...what if someone bumps into my tail...?" He mumbled quietly to himself, going over every possible negative situation in his head. It took him several minutes to go inside, where the music was making the floor vibrate with it's sheer volume and the strength of the bass.

Zen wondered if he had made the right choice to come here. The music was loud, the dance floor was crowded....he wasn't sure if he would even be able to begin dancing. But the tune of the music playing was so catchy, and the beat so bumping that he couldn't help but sneak his way over to the dance floor to practice his craft.

~Baby, it's time to make up your mind~

Zen's feet were almost moving on their own. He found that he couldn't control his urge to move now that he was here, and that all his worries had melted away now that he was in the groove. His tail gently swung with the sway of his hips and the fluid movement of his legs, but didn't hit anyone in the process. The place he had chosen was good and open, and as people began to take notice of his style, they began to step back and watch.

Eventually, Zen was dancing alone in a large circle of other kiamaras, who curiously watched him dance with the dead weight of his limp tail swinging from side to side. Some chanted for him while others stared in awe at his unusual but mystifying movements. Zen was in his happy place and barely noticed the crowd until the end of the last song in the set, and the crowd went wild.

Zen looked around all the enamored kiamaras who were cheering and applauding him for his dancing, and he felt his skin flush hot under his fur. He was a bit bashful about being the center of attention, but he was so glad that things had worked well. Zen was finally moving past the limp weight that was now his tail, and more importantly....

Zen had found his passion again.

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Re: Staff Kiamara

Postby Miavinn » Mon Dec 01, 2014 1:40 pm

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Re: Staff Kiamara

Postby peppermintleo » Mon Dec 01, 2014 1:44 pm

Reserving! UGH I dont care it isnt a full out impress me, I can manage in 5000 words
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Re: Staff Kiamara

Postby huskyhiccups » Mon Dec 01, 2014 1:46 pm

dropping out :c
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Re: Staff Kiamara

Postby NE0N-UMBR30N » Mon Dec 01, 2014 1:48 pm

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Re: Staff Kiamara

Postby Beta. » Mon Dec 01, 2014 1:49 pm

Omg it's so pretty ahh *^*
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Postby yeena » Mon Dec 01, 2014 1:49 pm

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        {{ my last memory was leaving those inconsiderate rutts behind. -----

        ( the tale 1 ) as concealed as it should have been.. it wasnt. the truth spread like a wildfire to a pine forest, the truth of a baby.. and the parents were top rulers ( that or just very popular ) so everyone came to crowd the baby boy born. eyes closed and mouth gaping- he had little bits of short fur on his puny form. he was scratching at the air- tearing for the comfort of his mother's soft fur. once finding it though ( a rabbit helped him i think ?.. rabbit or squirrel.. ) he was immediately sleeping. claws and paws buried in his moms warm curve-in of her stomach. what was weird was he wasn't even nursing first, just sleep and personally.. his mother found this unsettling ( fear of a laaazzyy baby ? ) yet there were no suspicions then- about his tail at least. he had been a baby, they wouldnt have any idea that their baby boy had no feel in his tail- they thought it would curl to the side or be skinny and long when he was grown because from the way he slept with it.. but his tail was still a skinny, short furred nub. but even so.. maybe if they had noticed that what was going on with his tail was unusual they couldve helped. over the years he grew and his tail turned from the shrt-furred nub to a generous length that was fully sheathed in fur.. yet it stayed flat but his parents- only slightly alarmed but nonetheless still believing that he had a bit of hope, did nothing. it was only when he was thirteen that they asked him to raise his tail- he tried for an around a few minutes, already knowing the truth that it wasnt gonna move to his command, and with all of that he couldnt- didnt raise his tail. his parents- almost disgusted and ashamed, they told him to get out, any kia that had a problem such as this didnt deserve to live to them, although after leaving he tried again making sure he really couldnt ( they made him doubt himself ) - for if he could he was going to rub it in their faces yet of course he had no adue with raising his tail.

        ( deeper explanation ) further research told he was born with a numb tail at birth- with that he could have helped his tail while growing up, if he had lifted it with his parents when he was at age six, if he kept on doing it through age ten then he would have a nice lifting tail yet since no one suspected something nobody helped him and so since he had been dragging it on the ground for fourteen years of his life he lost full control and nerves in his tail. numbing it to where he couldnt feel it from base down. the thing was he was born with congential insensitivity in his tail, yet it was barely developed then so he had a chance of removing that and flexing his tail- getting maybe a small bit of feel. although since he did nothing with his tail and simply dragged it around for so long it only worsened the insensitivity, since no muscles or nerves were being worked he was slowly losing his tail.

        ( the story 2 ) he glared as his tail was dragging on the ground- flaring his nostrils and flipping his ears left and right, this stupid tail ! he whipped around at the thing he claimed as a " tail ", his parents never had noticed this yet he had found out he couldnt lift his tail at all. whipping his head around at the sound of rustling leaves he snarled at the sound of approaching footsteps- baring his teeth and jumping around- tail swinging uselessly with each bounce he made. suddenly from behind him came the voice, " son calm your fur, its only me and your father. " a soft sweet devilish voice cooed. turning and looking over his shoulder he saw his mothers dark fur and hair- a larger, fuller body next to her; towering over him and his mother. his father. hissing he narrowed his eyes, " and so it makes it right to sneak up on me ? i heard you of course yet you didnt call out telling me whom you were.. at all. " he grit out- the fur around his neck standing up straight making him seem like a lion. " shush son, it is so fine. we did no harm.. yet we come with a question my dear if you dont mind ? " his father questioned but before he could answer.. " and you may not have any no's. " his mothers she-devil voice spoke- fiery jade eyes glaring down at him. " fine. i have no choice do i ?... what do you want ? " he snapped hissy about being disturbed when he was about to be getting a nap in the sun... or even simply a huge debate about how stupid his tail exactly was.. arguing if it was stupid or plain outrageous with himself... " lift your tail. " his mother hissed, leaning down towards him and making him snap at her- angry at being told so rudely and really not in the mood, yet he instead lifted his rump into the air ( throwing his front paws forward and arching his back- him finding this humiliating ) and tried to lift his tail- yet it stayed limp and bent, hugging the dark black earth. " lift. " his father said sternly and he twitched before snarling out in a large-rage, " I AM LIFTING YOU IDIOTIC FLEABAGS ! " he shouted waving his rump ( the tail just swaying with each swing ) and again having no luck in raising his limp tail. both parents look at each other with wide eyes before his mother spoke, her jade orbs narrowing down to killer slits with each word she hissed, " get out of our sight. you are a disgrace, you are rude and deserve no one to care for you. " once done and now listening he rose up, looking at them both, ears twitching against his skull in a now-silent rage. " really ? REALLY ? fine... " he paused, simply to let out a low growl " be it. i will not come back and i will not be found dead. " he hissed swinging around with no other words, his tail almost hitting their black coal noses. he was leaving behind astonished parents for they had thought he wouldve begged to stay yet.. he seemed to have no care. no worries, about leaving them despite being a fourteen year old. he stomped through the woods, each crunch and snap of leaves ( probably more were being snapped and crunched by his tail ) being heard above the silent forest.. all until they faded away.. probably for forever.

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      xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxi cant decide
      xxxxxxxxxwhether you should live or die
      xxxxxxxxoh, youll probably go to heaven
      xxxxxxxplease don't hang your head and cry
      xxxxxxxxxxxxxxno wonder why
      xxxxxxxxxxmy heart feels dead inside
      xxxxxxxxxit's cold and hard and petrified
      xxxxxxxxlock the doors and close the blinds
      xxxxxxxxxxxxxwere going for a ride


      xxxxxxxxxoh i could throw you in the lake
      xxxxxxxor feed you poisoned birthday cake
      xxxi wont deny im gonna miss you when youre gone
      xxxxxxxxxxxxoh i could bury you alive
      xxxxxxxbut you might crawl out with a knife
      xxxxxxxxxxxand kill me when im sleeping
      xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxthats why


      xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxi cant decide
      xxxxxxxxxwhether you should live or die
      xxxxxxxxoh, youll probably go to heaven
      xxxxxxxplease don't hang your head and cry
      xxxxxxxxxxxxxxno wonder why
      xxxxxxxxxxmy heart feels dead inside
      xxxxxxxxxit's cold and hard and petrified
      xxxxxxxxlock the doors and close the blinds
      xxxxxxxxxxxxxwere going for a ride

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        ----- so this is how he responded to your question.. stomping and cursing ? sorry, he's pretty aggressive and stuff with questions. he's just protective and defensive about himself, to be accurate, you wont get anywhere with.. words coming from his side. he doesnt speak. usually.. his words come from watching his movements. now, if you could sit on that rock ill happily explain his code of moves for you. .. well for starters saw how he stomped his paws ? well its most noticeable by others, which is why he gets even more angry. one could say its because he is restless and doesn't sleep at all and what he does to not think about being tired or having no sleep is he will stomp his paws. it doesnt do much.. just keeps him occupied. another reason which is the true reason is because he gets annoyed or upset with anything and everything easily and he is used to having childish fits.. of which is resulting in him stomping. a word of advice is that, if he's stomping around, pace-stomping or just stomping in place.. its best not to approach him- youd be lucky to get away in tact.. or without missing ears. okay so, that was only the start.. if you want to read him, watch his ears also. they can say a whole lot. they are always perked, at least from what ive seen, and always shifting or flicking them around.. when they are simply perked, he is just on watch.. often he'll be relaxed and hes in a relaxing state or mind, itd be wise as to not try and sneak up on him while hes like this.. you could end up with a few long scars. now next, for when he just has them flicking around it can mean two things- one he is watching out for trouble or anything, listening, and then second if he is very angry or very close to being irritated.. again, as such when he is resting, it is best not to mess with him.. unless you want to have a pissed-off bill on your hands.. also it could mean hes already angry and so yeah.. its still not best to mess with him. next is when he always seem to be sniffling.. its the second most often noticed thing people see. i haven't exactly coded this one out but i have two vague ideas.. one is that he is simply on guard, which is almost a warning along with his ears.. another is that he has a cold he cant cure. his nose is certainly running often.. so im assuming the latter is correct but as said i dont know much and until further research.. we only are staying at those two ideas. now a rather common move is him growling at everything.. it simply means to leave him alone. he can be seen doing this when someone approaches.. it usually makes them flinch and slowly walk away.. just leave him be if he growls, you may regret it if you do bug him. one of his weird traits is.. having his fur always spiked, fluffed up. this is often mistaken as him being " fluffy " and said people have gone to the E.R because of this. when his fur is spiked ( which is almost always ) it means he is prepared to attack you.. it also means he is the one to be dominant. nobody usually questions this ' fluffy ' fur.. they know better, and if they do ask.. they must not have learned anything from his nasty glares when they had been walking up. then we have the last idea of his personality.. his mute voice. he never speaks. this almost always is what sets other people away from him, what gives him a bad idea to others. we think he could be mute.. perhaps from an incident when he left his family or that he does have a voice yet he never speaks.. at all. with that all being covered.. we are indeed done with coding out his actions.. now hopefully he becomes more clear to you, easier to understand at the least.

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        well. back for more ? or you were able to survive my walls of text ? either way im back down here to tell you his personality ! above was his list of actions and possibly the only reactions you would ever get from saying anything. for a start with his personality you may or may not have come to notice he is really emotionless and stoic. he has his mastered poker face of which doesn't let him reveal anything.. besides his snarls and growls that he sends to many people.. also with his glares. many people get very annoyed with his stoic face and having no expressions to what they say.. once getting thoroughly annoyed they will tell him and he'll simply growl and if they don't get the fact of ' i don't care ' then he'll take away his stoic-ness and for once speak.. yet it won't be nice words.. it'll be " i really don't care what you did, what happened, i don't give two rats tails ! if you could leave me be in peace i would love it. " and then the other person will likely leave, angry and maybe scared slightly. away from his poker face he does and all of that he is rather short-tempered and will easily lose it to some people ( or most people ). he doesn't ever seem to be able to grow a fond liking to anyone.. he often just walks away from people once they get annoying and if they follow he'll snarl at them and then start to run away, his tail flying out behind him like the limp thing it is. his short temper is an easily found trait and many people dislike it for him but he.. doesn't care. at all. next trait is he is very rude, whether it be you get him talking or its his actions. he'd happily shove his way through a crowd, not help a kid reach a toy on a shelf they cant reach in a store, and he does not care for the ' respect your elders ' so he doesn't care for letting an older person go first. as for words, when you get him to talk it's often to tell someone off.. and believe me on this, he would make a sailor blush at his words. he has a very foul tongue.. and it could be anyone he's talking to. including a very young child. next is he is very, very, defensive. about everything.. although its often about his tail. when someone asks about it he turns into a glaring, snarling mess. he hates when people look over at his tail when he's not ready to tell them about it.. some people could be first meeting and what they first ask about is his tail.. it seriously pisses him off to no end. next thing that he hates is when people ask about his sexuality.. he'll answer yet when people hear they always get either upset, or disgusted. he doesn't like when they get upset because they turn into whining messes and saying ' oh but your perfect ! ' and trying to woe him... that just really pisses him off and he'll snap out ' oh but your so needy and desperate ! ' and.. then they hate him but again, he doesn't care. now when they get disgusted he's done. no more. he gets raged and will start to spike his fur up, full blown. ' so what if i like guys ? call me gay, call me a dumb mutt, call me whatever ! i just don't like girls, whats so wrong ? it wasn't like you could get someone like me to like you anyway. ' he'll snap out and if its another guy.. he'll just walk away, if they decided to get upset and its a male he'll consider trying to like them. his last trait is he is rather self-absorbed. he likes to put in his sentences, ' its not like someone like me would help you anyway.. ', ' ... im better at that then you.. ' although with these since he doesn't talk he won't openly act self-absorbed. its more like he'll maybe be looking at himself in a mirror often times, open calls as in talking he's just a silent mouse.. well unless someone ticks him off and he lets it slip that he is really into himself when he's talking.. other then that. nope.

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        well everyone has dreams right ? so does bill. a large one.. ( you might want to consider him in anthro form, with his tail, for this part ) you might not believe him but since he was only three he's had a passion for baseball. he loved how the bat would feel in him baby hands and he could only imagine how it would feel to run bases.. but as he grew up so did his tail. it grew heavier at least, this prevented him from being able to join in any baseball games. many kids didn't like him.. ( he didn't like them either ) so he always would climb a tree and watch.. this baseball liking soon became an obsession and he started to skip school to run off into a field besides his house.. there he would make up imaginary bases and start running. at the start he could only run to base one as his tail would slow him down and stop him there. he would be a panting mess.. that was until he started taking it one step at a time, as he would run only one base for weeks at times. after getting to the point of where he was barely winded he started to work to running to the next base, him on the first day collapsing. it was becoming aware to his parents that he was cutting classes and he was also becoming suspicious.. as he now took showers everyday yet he had also cut back on eating. they.. punished him accordingly yet after the first few weeks they gave in- he wasn't going to stop cutting classes.. he wasn't going to stop anything no matter what they tried on him. mine as well let him enjoy himself. although for him, through each punishment brought and unnecessary tiredness which did dent his ' training ' but he worked himself harder and he seriously felt dead after those weeks of training... yet while in those weeks of trainings he advanced to running every base without being more then just a bit winded.. and when he did complete all of running he was rather proud and celebrated with some sleep.. but since then, he has left his parents and baseball has been pushed away.. and he has a very harsh attitude so it does prevent him from finding a chance to join a team.. but it is still a minor dream to join a team..


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      Re: Staff Kiamara

      Postby cakepopcat » Mon Dec 01, 2014 1:56 pm

      definitely trying
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      Re: Staff Kiamara

      Postby glassesprotag » Mon Dec 01, 2014 2:30 pm

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      this looks terrible on mobile but i don't care anymore
      mobile users (me) can suffer
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      Re: Staff Kiamara

      Postby Kaitlynizer » Mon Dec 01, 2014 2:46 pm

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      A little foreward from the writer;;
      Hello and welcome to my form!
      I hope you enjoy reading this, and thank you
      to everyone (mainly TheOne&Only Vapor)
      who has helped me with my form, I really
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      for this kiamara, Please note the following;
      - 1/5 art pieces
      - 1,158/5000 words (extras)
      - Coding is at 125%
      Thank you for reading,
      -Kaitlynizer

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      username;;
      Kaitlynizer
      name;; Collin Whitefeather Pennbrooke, always called by the nickname of Cole.
      gender;; Cole is a male.
      why is his tail droopy?;; --told by Cole's point of view-- (1,065/2500 words)
      I blinked. I hadn't heard that question in a long time.. what happened to my tail...
      It all started on a harsh winter night in December. I live in a snowy area with my tribe,
      filled with twenty two other kiamaras, although we are all very distant from each other
      and pretty much only were linked by name. I was completely alone, wandering
      around in the forest when I collapsed on the icy ground. I had just run away from
      my family... "Go outside Collin!" my mother screeched at me. I flattened my ears,
      "but momma, wha- what did I do wrong? please don't send me away again" I cried,
      blinking back tears. She glared at me angrily, "You know how scarce food is for our
      family! How dare you steal food from your father and I! Your father is sick you
      miserable creature". I cowered closer to the ground, a single tear silently rolling down
      my cheek, it had only been a scrap of fruit and a deer bone. Hunger pains jabbed at
      my stomach as I crawled back outside, into the freezing cold. I scampered further
      into the snow, staring back at the cave where my parents were. I was too young to
      understand just how broken she was.. My dad was sick, she had lost another pup and
      the only surviving kid had been me. I wasn't anything special. I talked. I ate. I smiled.
      But nothing seemed to replace her devastation about losing my brother; and now it
      looked like dad was going to be dead too. I remember the day when we buried both
      of them, she had covered them in pine straw and slowly walked back into the cave
      and didn't move for days. I was no comfort to her. Eventually I had just given up trying
      to help mom. I didn't know what to say or what to do, and she'd just shove me away
      and growl at me when I tried to talk to her. There's only one memory I have of us
      being happy together. My brother had just been born, and I had been born minutes
      before. She had smiled us, and cuddled us together next to our dad and called us by
      name. "You'll be Collin, and you'll be Cole" She had said, naming me Collin and him Cole.
      Cole had died a few weeks later, as the runt of the litter. I love him even now, which
      is probably why his name has stuck with me all these years. Anyway, there I was, lying in
      the snow. My eyes flickered damply, my pelt littered in snowflakes and ice. That's when
      I saw something in the distance. It looked like water, and I was extremely dehydrated.
      I needed to drink, and my body seemed to acknowledge that. I gradually made my way
      over to the lake and finally I reached it. I dipped two tentative paws forward but nothing,
      there was no water. I whined out loud and that's when I slipped. The impact of the slippery
      ice against my chipped, weak pawpads sent me sliding full force into the center of the lake.
      All was silent for a treacherous moment. I heard a loud CRACK! sound and then I was
      underwater, looking up at the water above my eyes. I couldn't breath. I gasped for air,
      desperately needing oxygen, knowing I had to get back to the surface. Somehow I
      managed to grab a slick shard of ice and pull myself up but it flipped over on me. My tail
      smacked the side of the frozen lake beside the small opening with a sickening crunching
      sound as I blacked out... I woke up the next day. How was I still alive? Why am I alive? I tried
      to move my paws, and they wiggled in response. I tried to stand up but I immediately fell
      back down; my balance was off. I blinked twice in confusion and then twisted my head
      around to look at my tail. It looked intact but I couldn't feel anything. I forced myself
      to dig a small pit in the other snow nearby and just sat there inside, shivering. I didn't
      remember who saved me, or if I saved myself, but a few days afterwards I found out.
      They had appeared in front of me calmly, they looked ragged and scruffy, with
      outlandish looking bones hanging in loops around their neck. Their sunken eyes
      glowed subtly as they stared at me. Their fur was in patches and stained silver
      from the cold. "I am part of the ones who saved you". I tilted my head at them,
      confused. "What do you mean, part of the ones?" I had mewed, staring at them
      bleakly with glazed eyes. "Yes, little one. You see, I once held the ice spirits in me
      but they have passed into your body because you fell through the lake. They saw
      you were true and kind, and saved you by passing freely, without magic, from
      myself to you. That's why your tail has it's droop. The spirits are staying inside
      you and they want to stay close to the snow where they once lived on. But do
      not be fooled by them, for they were cursed to stay here and have only escaped
      through the cold, they are tricksters who only do generous things on occasion, or
      when it benefits them". With that, the ragged traveler had left me there, and my body
      unwillingly gave in too sleep as I watched them stroll away. Eventually some other
      kiamaras found me and adopted me into their family; gave me my feathers, and loved
      me. From them I got part of my name, the 'Whitefeather Pennbrooke' part. I grew up
      with them before I set off to make my own home. Later on, I found out that I couldn't
      leave the area, the snow tied me to this place, and soon I realized that I had never
      wanted to leave at all. It might be the influence of the spirits on me, or the fact that
      this place was my home. No matter how horrible it could be at times.. I still bear the
      marks of my crash into the lake.. my paws are still numb from the freezing water,
      which causes me to be a total clutz when walking around. I still wonder about
      that old kiamara, I wonder where they went, why the simply left, if they liked the
      spirits; if they talked to them like I did, or what their name was. Even if I never
      learn more about them I will never forget them, and I won't forget my family...


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      likes;; cold weather, nice kias, music
      dislikes;; not being able to understand things,
      mean/rude kiamaras, when nobody listens to him at all, the spirits

      theme song;; x
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      personality;; --told in a third person point of view--
      intelligent, sentimental, emotional, clumsy, grumpy when provoked
      // intelligent - Cole is extremely intelligent, he spent a lot of his older days reading and
      learning, and generally could tell you about what he knows without having a notice ahead
      of time. He's very smart and often finds himself thinking about the philosophical side of life;
      usually with the spirits pestering him and explaining why his theories are wrong.
      // sentimental - Four spirits whispering in your head and your bound to go a little weird in
      the head, its nothing personal. Cole is a tad sentimental. He gets attached to items, objects
      and rather, places and often sort of lets his emotions latch on to it. Things from places that
      help him remember memories, or small trinkets that he likes and immediately sets to the side
      and buries in a secret spot in the snow... where he holds his dearest collection of, well.. junk.
      // emotional - Colllin leans toward the emotional side of things, despite the whole gender
      difference in hormones and personalities. He's quite good at "reading" people, because it's
      amazing how from someone's body language and words can explain what their thinking. Cole is a
      sweet heart and always tries to cheer someone up despite some of the spirit-voices telling him
      to do otherwise.. some of them aren't always kind..
      // clumsy - With frozen paws that act like he's stuck in the iceage 24/7 how could you not be
      clumsy?! Even emotionally he's a tad clumsy, tending to confuse details with one another and
      when trying to relay what he means, he might slip up with his words.
      // grumpy when provoked - When Collin gets annoyed or upset he starts using loads of sarcasm;
      this tends to happen often when he ends up losing an argument in his mind (often scoffing at the
      spirits and their annoying old-fashioned ways), or in real life when certain kia's won't leave him
      alone.

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      Their Story;; --told by Cole's point of view--
      "W-Who are you", the thought echoed inside my mind, as I felt the spirits slowly begin
      to speak to him in their mind. "Not 'you'! Us!" Seraph hissed, causing me to flinch slightly
      and trip over my paws as I walked. "Quiet Seraph! Now you, Eckeeir tend to Flisden's
      needs. This is a new host, we cannot wreck it. Our old host barely survived this bickering".
      I could hear them in mind.. There seemed to be four of them, Seraph, Ecleeir, Flisden and
      Sef. I rubbed my head with one paw, despite knowing them for weeks I still wasn't completely
      used to them speaking,"I barely know anything about you.. where did you use to live?
      Why were you cursed? Why did you and that strange kiamara help me?" I asked. I could feel
      the thought bouncing around inside me until one spoke again. Suddenly my head ached even
      more and I slowly felt their voices merge into one, "This is our story" they said in unison as
      I winced. "We all used to live in a huge castle, far before that lake formed and covered us up.
      We had so many servants", they sighed. "But it was all for not. We were thieves of a sort, and
      a long, long time ago we had stolen a iron fork" the spirits said, continuing their story. I burst
      out in a fit of laughter as I heard that they had stolen a fork. I mean, a fork? That's how
      creative they got? Some thieves! I could feel the spirits' mood shifting into rage. "We saved you!!
      Do not treat us with your insults! We needed a new host and you needed life! It was for our
      benefit not yours!!!" They screeched, causing a earsplitting sound that echoed around me. They
      huffed and took a deep breath, "Anyways, what we didn't know was that the iron that had made
      it had been stolen from the gods, the greater spirits, the almighty ones. We had been tricked
      into stealing it from a rich maiden who had been traveling in a strange caravan. We were not
      wise to notice the signs and when the gods came looking for their weapon, they discovered it
      had been melted into a fork. They thought that we were guilty. With a flick of their knives
      and a ancient spell they cursed us to live on the earth forever. In the snow where we had
      pillaged and robbed all the townsmen and women. Those townspeople are free, while we rot
      in this horrible body. We formed a attachment to the snow, and soon began to want to stay
      there, which is probably why the bones in your tail droop and cause your tail to hang close to
      the snow.. Far before that though, the gods had realized that without something tying us to
      the ground we could roam freely and haunt who wished, ah those splendid times of torture
      and sentimentality we caused... Even in death we were tricksters of a sort. But we went into
      hiding, living scarcely, fearing for our lives as the cowards we were". I could feel the harshness
      in their words and the twisted sense of reality they had lived through as they spoke. It made
      my brain hurt. I felt like I was going to split open into a thousand pieces as they continued
      speaking. "But those foul things found us and gave us to that old kiamara who they trusted,
      and thus we were held.. Eventually we found you, you despicable creature, a decent host
      who had fallen into the land of our old home. We spoke to that kiamara who was turning
      old as we were slowly eating off of his life's energy; call it a little revenge; and we
      decided to switch hosts. So in other words, we saved you. That's it" They finished,
      separating into different voices again.. "Still on occasion we take pity on some, but only
      when its good for us. You should be grateful" They said, speaking to me again. I closed my
      eyes, thinking to myself, not to them, but just to me. A small message - it's okay Collin, you
      can deal with this. You like the snow. You'll be okay. Your alive.
      You have to live for your little brother, the real Cole...

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