[KathrynKat]

This is my First up for adoption now... I may have over done it with the dirt, but makes this adoptable a little more exciting don't it?

I need you to come up with a story for this mare, and please... not to long I tend to not be the biggest fan of reading much.
The Story is mostly for you, but still must be something I could judge!

Owner: Azteca.
Horse Name: Cassidy 'Cas'
Gender: Mare/Dam
Breed: ?
Colour: Palomino paint
Height: 12.2hh
DOB: Unknown, but born 2007 or 2008.
Story about this mare: It was terrible, I couldn't get away. Here I was, trembling with fear caught in the wire mesh fencing! I couldn't move. Every move I made it hurt me, sending a shiver down my spine. I decided to whinny for help hoping one would hear me and come rescue me. 15 minutes passed and no one came so I decided to whinny once more. Yet again no one came. I thought it was over I thought this is where its all gonna end. I decided to lean against the wire mesh for a little bit of support so I don't collapse, it was stupid of my to try and jump the mesh. It was obviously a lot taller than me, yet typical me tried it anyway. When will I ever learn.

As soon as I started to fall asleep my ears twitched to the sound of shouting and The clatter of horses hooves cantering towards me, i stood upright and stared right at the humans and their horses. i was afraid for what might happen next
Suddenly the horses came to an abrupt halt and a human jumped down off the Palomino mares back. I whinnied softly in hope that they were here to rescue me. The human said in a calm voice "Hey girl, we're not going to hurt you we just want to help you" and she called for one of her friends to come with a large pair of fence cutters. As I saw the cutters I lowered my head out of fright and the human sensed it and she gently lay a hand on my muzzle. "You're very mucky girl! I think we need to give you a bath when we get you back to the yard" she said yet again in her calm sweet voice. She then passed me a sugar cube and I whinnied in delight as I sucked on the cube happily.

Suddenly I heard a loud SNAP and the wire had been cut! I was free from the mesh! I shook my head and flicked my tail as I lingered in the freedom. The female, who I now knew as Pheobe slipped a halter on me and I instantly didn't like it, but I knew I could trust pheobe so I let her do it and I just thought that I would eventually get used to it. And all was good as I trotted away with Pheobe and all the other Humans and Horses back to the yard to get a shower and lay down for the night.
Other: sorry its long..

Skills:
Agility: Unknown
Dressage: Unknown
Jumping: Unknown (May not pass 3 Dots)
Note: This mare has fear of heights, and will rarely lift her feet from the ground, as for her only way around is the feel of the Earth. She might be a perfect Dressage Pony if you ask me, but she will not be a good jumper (aka can't pass 3 Dots).

[Azteca.]

Owner: Azteca.
Horse Name: Cassidy 'Cas'
Gender: Mare/Dam
Breed: Unknown
Colour: Unknown
Height: 12.2hh
DOB: Unknown, but born 2007 or 2008.
Story about this mare: It was terrible, I couldn't get away. Here I was, trembling with fear caught in the wire mesh fencing! I couldn't move. Every move I made it hurt me, sending a shiver down my spine. I decided to whinny for help hoping one would hear me and come rescue me. 15 minutes passed and no one came so I decided to whinny once more. Yet again no one came. I thought it was over I thought this is where its all gonna end. I decided to lean against the wire mesh for a little bit of support so I don't collapse, it was stupid of my to try and jump the mesh. It was obviously a lot taller than me, yet typical me tried it anyway. When will I ever learn.

As soon as I started to fall asleep my ears twitched to the sound of shouting and The clatter of horses hooves cantering towards me, i stood upright and stared right at the humans and their horses. i was afraid for what might happen next
Suddenly the horses came to an abrupt halt and a human jumped down off the Palomino mares back. I whinnied softly in hope that they were here to rescue me. The human said in a calm voice "Hey girl, we're not going to hurt you we just want to help you" and she called for one of her friends to come with a large pair of fence cutters. As I saw the cutters I lowered my head out of fright and the human sensed it and she gently lay a hand on my muzzle. "You're very mucky girl! I think we need to give you a bath when we get you back to the yard" she said yet again in her calm sweet voice. She then passed me a sugar cube and I whinnied in delight as I sucked on the cube happily.

Suddenly I heard a loud SNAP and the wire had been cut! I was free from the mesh! I shook my head and flicked my tail as I lingered in the freedom. The female, who I now knew as Pheobe slipped a halter on me and I instantly didn't like it, but I knew I could trust pheobe so I let her do it and I just thought that I would eventually get used to it. And all was good as I trotted away with Pheobe and all the other Humans and Horses back to the yard to get a shower and lay down for the night.
Other: sorry its long..

[KathrynKat]

IDK how I can end this :<
Only 1 form, and it's not complete.
Any more Entrants?

[KathrynKat]

UPDATE

[landofmakebelieve]

Owner:
Horse Name:
Gender: Mare/Dam
Breed: Unknown
Colour: Unknown
Height: 12.2hh
DOB: Unknown, but born 2007 or 2008.
Story about this mare:
Other:


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[KathrynKat]

Owner: Azteca.
Horse Name: Cassidy 'Cas'
Gender: Mare/Dam
Breed: Unknown
Colour: Unknown
Height: 12.2hh
DOB: Unknown, but born 2007 or 2008.
Story about this mare: It was terrible, I couldn't get away. Here I was, trembling with fear caught in the wire mesh fencing! I couldn't move. Every move I made it hurt me, sending a shiver down my spine. I decided to whinny for help hoping one would hear me and come rescue me. 15 minutes passed and no one came so I decided to whinny once more. Yet again no one came. I thought it was over I thought this is where its all gonna end. I decided to lean against the wire mesh for a little bit of support so I don't collapse, it was stupid of my to try and jump the mesh. It was obviously a lot taller than me, yet typical me tried it anyway. When will I ever learn.

As soon as I started to fall asleep my ears twitched to the sound of shouting and The clatter of horses hooves cantering towards me, i stood upright and stared right at the humans and their horses. i was afraid for what might happen next
Suddenly the horses came to an abrupt halt and a human jumped down off the Palomino mares back. I whinnied softly in hope that they were here to rescue me. The human said in a calm voice "Hey girl, we're not going to hurt you we just want to help you" and she called for one of her friends to come with a large pair of fence cutters. As I saw the cutters I lowered my head out of fright and the human sensed it and she gently lay a hand on my muzzle. "You're very mucky girl! I think we need to give you a bath when we get you back to the yard" she said yet again in her calm sweet voice. She then passed me a sugar cube and I whinnied in delight as I sucked on the cube happily.

Suddenly I heard a loud SNAP and the wire had been cut! I was free from the mesh! I shook my head and flicked my tail as I lingered in the freedom. The female, who I now knew as Pheobe slipped a halter on me and I instantly didn't like it, but I knew I could trust pheobe so I let her do it and I just thought that I would eventually get used to it. And all was good as I trotted away with Pheobe and all the other Humans and Horses back to the yard to get a shower and lay down for the night.
Other: sorry its long..

I not ended this... so grats sorry

[Azteca.]

Ah! Its fine <3 thank you