For him I want to see a personality OR story, is he wild OR domestic, and art.
If personality, 250 word max. Story is 700 word max. Art is 3 pieces max. Art can be ordered and of any form; quality over quantity. This will end just over 3 weeks, Friday December 19.
Alchemi wrote:Username: Alchemi
Equid's Name: Brom
Age: 7 years
Height: 14.3 hh
Gender: Stallion
Wild/Domestic: Domestic
Story: (Word Count: 700)
The cold wind and fury of the night storm that had not yet blown itself out was problem enough. It tugged at Brom’s lines and soaked his pale dappled coat to the skin. Even as he stood waiting for his race his body trembled from the cold. In his mind he thought of how miserable this day was. He could feel the dread rising in his chest and in his bones he knew that something bad was about to happen.
On the over head speaker a loud voice cut the dreary silence that had fallen over the equids and their drivers. It called out names and race orders making all of them shift uneasily in their harnesses. Brom chewed at his bit, He was known for being the most settled at races but today something nipped at him. LITTERALLY! Next to him stood a frail finicky looking filly. Her brown eyes were wild with fear and her ears were pressed flat to her neck as she nipped angrily at the equids harnessed around her. Brom had never seen this feisty creature before and he knew why.
He felt a gentle tug on his lines and lifted his head in preparation. To his dismay he spotted the driver of the young filly also gather her leads and urge her forward. As he walked he angled his head so that he could watch her beyond his blinders. She tossed her head bitterly and stomped her feet as she walked. How dare her drivers treat his races as though they were a place to bring their finicky to train. He snorted his frustration and chose to ignore her, he had to focus on the race.
They reached the starting line with no incident, the light cart that trailed after him felt weightless on the harness. He had been king of this race track since he was just four and he planned to remain king until his legs could no longer bare the cart. He had never lost and the thrill of standing next to all of these excited and nervous equids knowing that his muscular form was far superior to theirs was exhilarating.
Next to him her heard a squall and felt someone crash into him. He knew it must have been the new filly without having to look. For most horses the anticipation while waiting at the line was enough to drive them mad with nerves, but Brom was calm and even after the filly bumped him he felt calm and unflustered. All he did was listen, ears pricked and ready. When the sound of the starting bell echoed in his ears he exploded off the starting line. His heart beat matched the thundering of his hooves and the wind against his wet coat was forgotten and heat filled his legs and shoulders. He felt so alive when he was pulling the cart that to him nothing else in the world mattered. This was his kingdom!
Brom paid little heed to the equids around him as he charged to the front of the pack. Although the wet sand bellow his feet tugged at the cart behind him a little more he barely noticed it. He made the first corner with stunning grace for such a balky stallion, But there was suddenly an urgent tug on his lines steering him away from the inside rail. WHY? He thought furiously, he always moved to the inside rail after the first turn. He ground his teeth against the bit defiantly and at first did not listen. A decision he realized he could regret for the remainder of his life as the full weight of the fear crazed filly slammed into his inside shoulder.
He stumbled and tripped. His front shoulder that had taken the blow seemed to cave under his weight and he rolled nose over tail across the packed wet sand. The cart slammed into his back sending an explosion of pain up his spine. When the world stopped tilting Brom flailed his legs in the mess of twisted tangled harness. His body hurt but his pride hurt more, in the distance he watched the remainder of the competitors still running. He had lost.
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