by PerfectWorld » Wed Nov 26, 2014 5:09 pm
and the winner is....
jay bird
your form was the one I felt had the most effort to it. It was a tough choice and other forms certainly almost pegged me, but in the end Im a sucker for art, good coding and effort, so congrats!
honorable mentions..
Master of Nightmares - Loved the content of your form! The art was nice too<3 I felt there was more effort coding wise and length wise in the other forms though, so they ended up winning. Tips for next time is to have more refined coding, and more writing.
♠Trollish♠ - I really loved your story! No critiques for this form xD Only reason you did not win is because I can only pick one winner, and I felt Jay bird put more effort into her form and had more versatility. But very well done! Best of luck in future forms.
Whisky - Loved the song you chose and your content! At times you were a bit repetitive however and I didn't feel a lot of depth to the character in terms of unique qualities that define them from other parras. Nice form though! Very close.
other forms..
Ryuuhou - not enough content
bambi boo - next time try putting more art that has more of the parrapups details and colours
coradrawa - the story was nice but could have been more unique, try incorporating more quirky elements to your form to make it stand out. Art would have also been nice, and more clean coding.
B l α z e. - more art writing, some art, and a more creative base for your form would have went a long way. I really like your idea of quotes for extras, but try to beef up your form next time.
SnivelGriff - I loved the art, but adding more writing and information would have helped.
Kage the shadow - Awesome coding job, but more info and art would have pushed it further.
Lilloa - next time try beefing up your form and bulking it up
hellohihi - cleaner coding and art would have improved your form, as well as more content
Bananer - nice art! More content would be needed
ToastingCinnamon - not enough content
FoxerOwl - unfinished, more content and art would have helped
✝ Jesus Freak ✝ - very cute art! More content needed
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For anyone else who is going to be posting, please be mindful to be well mannered. I do not tolerate bad sportsmanship/bullying in my competitions. If your not going to say anything nice, then do not say it at all. Congratulations or saying to the winner is free or not free to use your art is fine, but be respectful of course! vuv
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by FoxerOwl » Wed Nov 26, 2014 5:30 pm
...unfinished? -checks my form- ah, I was finished unless extras were required -- just no art or coding as I didn't have time >w<
but that's okay! congrats to jay bird, you are a very lucky person! c:
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