Re: Halloween Finchling 3

Postby sonya; » Thu Nov 06, 2014 11:09 am

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The small Finchling looked around, where is it? He had dropped his flashlight in an abandoned building. He heard his Finchling freinds snicker outside. With a sigh he continued forward in the darkness. He'll show them, their was nothing to be scarred of.

As Tobias shuffled around in the hallway he stopped. Was someone crying or chirping? 'Alright guys... you got me. Come on out.' His only reply was the pitter patter of tiny paws and a skittering on the stone floor, the crying and chirping seemed to follow it. 'Come on... I'm serious guys! Cut it out!' Again, only chirping and skittering. A bright light came into view as he continued forward. Their in front of him was a little bright purple finchling with a lime green spot on her back. Tobias eyes widened.

'C-Clara?' He whispered. When the little finchling turned her head to look at him he gasped. Black stuff dripped from her face. Her face looked as if it was melting. 'Tobias... help me!' came the scream from her opened beak. Gurgling noises soon followed after and more black ooze poured from her mouth. Tobias turned to run, but everything seemed to be in slow motion. The black liquid caught around his ankles. All of a sudden he was on the floor, the black goo disappeared, his chest rising and falling fastly. The light dimmed and he was once again consumed in blackness.

A long time ago, his little sister went missing and was pronounced dead. Every day he had believed it was his fault. What he had just witnessed must have been a clue to his sister's death.

{ Don't know if I was right but this story had about two hundred and sixty sum words in it :3 Good luck to all! }
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Re: Halloween Finchling 3 DATE EXTENDED

Postby .Fluffy. » Sun Nov 09, 2014 3:31 am

due date was extended for a week <3

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Re: Halloween Finchling 3 DATE EXTENDED

Postby sonya; » Sat Nov 15, 2014 10:07 am

Freindly bump! :3
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Re: Halloween Finchling 3 DATE EXTENDED

Postby MenheraCollie » Sat Nov 15, 2014 12:26 pm

Good luck everybody (:
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Re: Halloween Finchling 3 Winner - Bleating Ram

Postby .Fluffy. » Mon Nov 17, 2014 1:34 pm

For all those who finished I was split ;; so I ended up letting a friend help me decided <3
The winner is : Bleating Ram

C: we both though your story was sweet and cute <3 but at the same time spooooopy xD

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Re: Halloween Finchling 3 Winner - Bleating Ram

Postby Missing✖ » Mon Nov 17, 2014 2:01 pm

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Flinching name: Felix
Adopts gender: Male
Small 500 word story:
Felix was a explorer in his eyes he love for the air to breeze thorugh his soft fur. An for one day to fly high than anyone in his village have flow before. Felix had thing for chase the woodland creature that walk in his path for fun never harmful, he play with them untill they fought back. He has 6 friends that mix with his very outragous personality,and to try keep out of the elder's hit list for bad little ones ( no food for a 3 days is like 3 years to felix). Elders have many rules that Felix tries and Do break on a daily basic in his life. one being is chasing the woodland creatures in the forest for games, and that never stop their.

Felix broke many low rules with friends and people thought felix was a bad influes to the younger ones in village. Also when i cam to flying lesson he was deturmen to fly and become the best and gaurd the village. But no one believe him but his friends thats all he needed were them. He had parents but some time ago in a battle against another clan they to some people whent down with honor but leaving a pup behind.Morning were long and night were cold, short and with wind that cromes from the west,however; during times of good spirit they light lamps, torches, and small airbloons for those who died in the war. Felix goes to the highest tree or rock to watch the yellow dots float away ( they make for a great mental picture).

Felix does have his down time is when his perents birthday it hurst more, becuse they had the same birthday as one another. Felix would shy away but hes never to far from anyone in the village ,just quiet. Instead of chasing the woodland creatures he watch them fly , leap, and dance in the wind also giggling to each other. Sometime on theses day Felix thinks the trees talk but in code to keep the little ones from freaing impossible. Rolling in the grass was Felix stress releas, becuase running was in his blood and watching the fireflies fly up in sky ease his pain of loss. Felix friend's would Surpise attack him to make him laugh they do that for hours and hours untill felix would smile again to be his old self.
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Re: Halloween Finchling 3 Winner - Bleating Ram

Postby Bleating Ram » Mon Nov 17, 2014 3:37 pm

o: eep!! My fax for like 5 minutes --> O-O oh my gosh thank you so much!!! ^-^ my first finchling -cuddles the lil nugget- thank you so much!!
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Re: Halloween Finchling 3 Winner - Bleating Ram

Postby MenheraCollie » Mon Nov 17, 2014 6:25 pm

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