GOS - Neris Staff Litter - bronze buckskin by NeriHyuga

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GOS - Neris Staff Litter - bronze buckskin

Postby NeriHyuga » Sun Oct 12, 2014 3:07 am

I couldn't believe my eyes, as i looked out to the see and saw a guardian tail that wasn't like every other i have seen so far. I couldn't wait and maybe miss this one, so i called for Sonnensturm, my first Guardian foal and the quickest from them all. I got on his back and he rushed forward, the way i showed him.
After some time, he got a strange feeling, it gaves him the creeps, so that he began to shake his head like crazy. I felt sorry for my little sweety, to make him go forward, he really hated to move on. But i couldn't stop either, i got the same feeling like he got, but it was more... intense, more like calling out for me.
So i putted my trust into the GoS that had the hardest and biggest band of friendship with me. I felt that he wanted to make my wish come true, to see this strange GoS that he feared so much. And then we saw it... not that we really saw it, it was under our feets, deeper in the water and Sonnensturm couldn't plunge into the wet, because of me. In the moment i saw this shadow under us, i thought it would be a great white... but it was to big for a shark... more like a orca. It was a real monster, but the form of the shadow showed me, that it was a GoS, the biggest GoS i every saw.
It seemed like it looked at us from below, just like a shark looked at his prey before he shoot himself out of the water like a torpedo. I never, really never thought of a GoS that could be a real killer, a hunter, a carnivore. But at this time... i knowed, the sice wasn't the only monstrous thing at this guardian. I felt like a little sheep that looked in the eyes from a approaching wolf. Sonnesturm felt the same, i could sense his fear, i felt the shivering of his muscles under me.
But it doesn't attacked us. Actually, it wasn't more then some minutes, but it felt like hours, hours of fear and despair, knowing that we couldn't flee, we had no chance to escape. Then... the shadow vanished. In this moment, i knowed, he wasn't going away, he immersed himself deeper. He acted like a shark! It was just a matter of time, that he would attack us from beneath. I did that, what i would do when a shark attacked us. I gave Sonnesturm the sign, that he could immerse himself too. It would be suicide, to be at the surface and to let the enemy attack the soft belly from the GoS.
My guardian did like i said and ducked deeper into the water. I couldn't saw anything, the saltwater burned in my eyes and it was hard to keep them open. But what happened then, was just like a wonder. The acting we did, saved our lifes. Sonnensturm just ducked deeper and deeper and then we saw it. It looked at us, like it would say: "What are you doing here!?", it seemed confuse, that we approached it after it felt our fear the whole time.
In this moment, we wheren't his pray anymore, or should i better they, her prey? She couldn't feel the fear anymore and lost her hunting sense because of this and because of her being confused. The same time, again, couldn't belive my eyes. She was so big and i never saw a GoS like her before. Her mane was incredible long and waivy, her fins were great, she had more fins like any other GoS and her whole body was covered in strange, old markings, but the biggest difference was, that she had dragonscales all over her body. Just her belly was free of this protecting scales. Sadly, I couldn't look at her any longer, because after she calmed herself again, she plunged deeper and out of our sign, this time for sure.
In this moment, i knowed, she was an ancestor. She wasn't a new breed of Gos, no... she was one of the oldest GoS ever, older then any GoS in this days would ever get. I don't know if she was one of the prime mothers, but when i think of one, i would believe it wouldn't look much different.
I never saw her again after this, but i know, she is there... somewhere deep into the ocean.

Now i want to share this rare GoS with you!
To get her, you need to think of something yourself! You can add all you like, music, story, art, poem, picture, anything you want. Show her something she would be impressed from, go an impresse an ancestor!


Fuscontidox wrote:
Username: Fuscontidox
Name: Denarius Kahleesee - from game of thrones kahleesee apparently means queen in one of the languages they made and Denarious (also known as Kahleesee) was the mother of dragons, since this girl looks like a dragon I saw fit :3
Gender: Mare
Age: 675 years

Extras::

Personality:

Denarius is a feared ancient, those who have met her know that she is an above power, she is protective and has been mistaken as an attacker due to her passed habits that had driven away people from the Bermuda triangle for centuries, she is very wise and knows the troubles between life and death


Art:

Image

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History/Story:

the winds tossed over the ocean as the storm brewed above the waters and even below the surface, lightning struck across the blackened sky like a match stricken across the rough surface. Snapping like a thousand branches, the only light that bloomed among the waves of a frantic sea. The sky spun, lifting water into a cone of wind, the lightning struck again, fire spiraled towards the ocean, laying itself deep into the depths of the Bermuda triangle. The fire was desperate as it reached the ocean floor, beginning to sizzle away, its oxygen seizing, with its last flicker, it laid a rock of scales upon the floor, sealing a kiss upon it and resolved.
The storm ended, leaving but a trace, the rock below warmed, become a prime subject for the sea life to visit, until it broke one day, oozing a magma liquid into the ocean and revealing an amazing creature that had been scarce among the waters of the Bermuda triangle. A Guardian, her pelt covered in scales and resemblance to a dragon present, she became the "Bermuda queen" always warm as the water boiled around her.
Many times she had been challenged for the sea in which she had ruled and protected, and every time, she had concord, she was a terrifying beast, and yet gentle to everyone who had ever been in her presence.
Humans had one day become present in her waters when she had been in her naïve years, trying to harvest the sea life she protected, she had surfaced and traveled towards the ship at which she was curious of, the smell was rancid and burned her innocent nose.
She had made an effort to be noticed by those aboard the ship, those with strange appendages, who seemed to fear the water, unable to live in it without dying if they fell from the ship.
After time of being spotted, the creatures aboard the ship had become cruel, attempting to impale her scaly flesh with sharp metal, she feared them for much of her time in the Bermuda waters. Her rage towards their actions grew with every moment she remembered the creatures, with every time she had found a ship in her waters.
Her anger over flowed and began to change her scales, as many of them took the color of black, in a moment of pure fury, she had flipped and drowned the boats to the ocean deep, watching them all parish as she felt they deserved, the smell of them made her recoil with discussed as it seemed to always have. After she had over turned ships, she became resentful of what she was doing, as the passed few ships seemed to be different than the first handful, the smell had been sweeter, much more innocent then before, she watched the people fall, she watched them drown, the smallest of them had made her stomach flip about, as she knew she was killing these innocence, these children who had not known of her coming.
So she sunk deep, fleeing to the deepest of the Bermuda waters, where she promised never to surface again...
But we all know, that her promise couldn't be kept forever, now could it?


Poem:

Guardians
There was once a time when
They ruled our Earth
All the land was owned by them
The mighty beasts of Dragons.


Rulers of the seas and oceans
Kings of the Sky and Sun;
Queens of the Stars and Moon
They were the Guardians of the Earth.


Then came Man
Demanding and commanding
Driving them from all their dwellings
Into dark caverns to lie in.


The Dragons took flight as freedom was theirs
Where to, no one knows - but
Don't the Sun and Moon still rise?
Don't the waves still wash upon the shore?


If they had left our Earth for good
There'd be no sunlight
There'd be no rain:
Nothing would live again.


Until the day they decide to wake
To leave all Earth in the hands of
Man, always will the Dragons be
The Guardians of The Earth.


~ ©1999 Jess C Scott


Foals:
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Re: GOS - Neris Staff Litter

Postby Fuscontidox » Sun Nov 02, 2014 1:52 am

Cant wait to see :D

EDIT::

Username: Fuscontidox
Name: Denarius Kahleesee - from game of thrones kahleesee apparently means queen in one of the languages they made and Denarious (also known as Kahleesee) was the mother of dragons, since this girl looks like a dragon I saw fit :3
Gender: Mare
Age: 675 years

Extras::
Personality:

Denarius is a feared ancient, those who have met her know that she is an above power, she is protective and has been mistaken as an attacker due to her passed habits that had driven away people from the Bermuda triangle for centuries, she is very wise and knows the troubles between life and death

Art:


image.jpg


image.jpg


History/Story:

the winds tossed over the ocean as the storm brewed above the waters and even below the surface, lightning struck across the blackened sky like a match stricken across the rough surface. Snapping like a thousand branches, the only light that bloomed among the waves of a frantic sea. The sky spun, lifting water into a cone of wind, the lightning struck again, fire spiraled towards the ocean, laying itself deep into the depths of the Bermuda triangle. The fire was desperate as it reached the ocean floor, beginning to sizzle away, its oxygen seizing, with its last flicker, it laid a rock of scales upon the floor, sealing a kiss upon it and resolved.
The storm ended, leaving but a trace, the rock below warmed, become a prime subject for the sea life to visit, until it broke one day, oozing a magma liquid into the ocean and revealing an amazing creature that had been scarce among the waters of the Bermuda triangle. A Guardian, her pelt covered in scales and resemblance to a dragon present, she became the "Bermuda queen" always warm as the water boiled around her.
Many times she had been challenged for the sea in which she had ruled and protected, and every time, she had concord, she was a terrifying beast, and yet gentle to everyone who had ever been in her presence.
Humans had one day become present in her waters when she had been in her naïve years, trying to harvest the sea life she protected, she had surfaced and traveled towards the ship at which she was curious of, the smell was rancid and burned her innocent nose.
She had made an effort to be noticed by those aboard the ship, those with strange appendages, who seemed to fear the water, unable to live in it without dying if they fell from the ship.
After time of being spotted, the creatures aboard the ship had become cruel, attempting to impale her scaly flesh with sharp metal, she feared them for much of her time in the Bermuda waters. Her rage towards their actions grew with every moment she remembered the creatures, with every time she had found a ship in her waters.
Her anger over flowed and began to change her scales, as many of them took the color of black, in a moment of pure fury, she had flipped and drowned the boats to the ocean deep, watching them all parish as she felt they deserved, the smell of them made her recoil with discussed as it seemed to always have. After she had over turned ships, she became resentful of what she was doing, as the passed few ships seemed to be different than the first handful, the smell had been sweeter, much more innocent then before, she watched the people fall, she watched them drown, the smallest of them had made her stomach flip about, as she knew she was killing these innocence, these children who had not known of her coming.
So she sunk deep, fleeing to the deepest of the Bermuda waters, where she promised never to surface again...
But we all know, that her promise couldn't be kept forever, now could it?


Poem:

Guardians
There was once a time when
They ruled our Earth
All the land was owned by them
The mighty beasts of Dragons.


Rulers of the seas and oceans
Kings of the Sky and Sun;
Queens of the Stars and Moon
They were the Guardians of the Earth.


Then came Man
Demanding and commanding
Driving them from all their dwellings
Into dark caverns to lie in.


The Dragons took flight as freedom was theirs
Where to, no one knows - but
Don't the Sun and Moon still rise?
Don't the waves still wash upon the shore?


If they had left our Earth for good
There'd be no sunlight
There'd be no rain:
Nothing would live again.


Until the day they decide to wake
To leave all Earth in the hands of
Man, always will the Dragons be
The Guardians of The Earth.


~ ©1999 Jess C Scott
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Re: GOS - Neris Staff Litter

Postby Soph6297 » Sun Nov 02, 2014 8:27 am

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Re: GOS - Neris Staff Litter

Postby Queen Vivane » Sun Nov 02, 2014 8:38 am

*Screeches* THAT FEATHERING AND THAT HAIR

Neri my dear friend you have outdone yourself with beauty. I will most definitely be applying <3
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Re: GOS - Neris Staff Litter

Postby NeriHyuga » Sun Nov 02, 2014 8:51 am

ouuuh thank you guys x33 the other ones are so great this time too! i can't wait to see the GoS from the other artists x3
and now i finished the story ^^ it's longer then i wanted it to be xD but i couldn't stop writing, althought writing a story in english is very hard for me.
hope you have fun with her x3
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Re: GOS - Neris Staff Litter

Postby Queen Vivane » Sun Nov 02, 2014 9:52 am

Hello monsta He...Hello monsta.
I just wanna be your friend.
No-one wants to get hurt today.
No-one wants to get hurt today
Hello Monsta -TheRPGMinx BoyInABand and Markiplier

Username: Queen Chrysalis

Name: Erised (Prounced Ere - sid)

Meaning of the name: Erised is basically desire backwards. A very clever trick I learned from the written works of one J k Rowling. Definitions for Desire from google search. "a strong feeling of wanting to have something or wishing for something to happen." "strongly wish for or want (something)"

Gender: Mare

Age: 675 years

Personality: Erised is a very playful GOS, enjoying playing shark with some of the smaller members of her species just to give them a bit of a fright along with teaching them to be wary of the sharp mouthed fish. She's a strong independent GOS who spends most of her time roaming the ocean and learning what there is to learn. Erised has a kindness in her heart which is displayed so little due to her rarely seeing anything other than things that lurk in the depths of the ocean. She is rather awkward around her own species as it is rare for her to see others as they do dive into the depths as she does. Erised may be an ancient perhaps even a prime mother but that never stops her from having a good time and doing what she wants. If there was an award for practically being forged from stubbornite, Erised would mostly win with ease because she is stubborn and I mean horribly so. Erised stumbles a little when meeting new GOS or people, she tends to stare at them which unnerves some more than others.



Prime mother? What does that mean in reference to the GOS?: When mentioned in the story describing the very first encounter with this mare it was said that when imagining a Prime mother. They wouldn't look much different from this mare. I imagine a Prime mother is one of the founding mares of the GOS species. Average horses have founders of their line and even their entire breed. So why would the same not apply to GOS?

Theme Song: Thomas Bergersen - Into Darkness

Strengths: An iron will, certain kindness, she's an extremely powerful swimmer, is one of the biggest GOS currently alive and knows a thing or two about using her scaly body for defense.

Weaknesses: Babies. Particularly GOS and sea mammals such as Sea horses, whales and dolphins.

Habits: Watching her feathering swish around in the water. It amuses her greatly

Fears: Being forgotten


Likes: Baby animals, fish, coral, music


Dislikes: Octopi, sharks, seaweed,


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Food: Salmon

Place: The Caribbean

Song: Secret Police - Hatsune Miku

Fish: Flying fish!

Plant: [Sun Coral]

Sea Mammal: Seal

Season: Spring

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Re: GOS - Neris Staff Litter

Postby HorseFan21♞ » Sun Nov 02, 2014 10:37 am

Ohgod a GoS ANCIENT.

I feel honored. :lol: Neri really projected that really magestic and old feel with this drawing!! :D
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Re: GOS - Neris Staff Litter

Postby NeriHyuga » Sun Nov 02, 2014 10:42 am

HorseBones13♞ wrote:Ohgod a GoS ANCIENT.

I feel honored. :lol: Neri really projected that really magestic and old feel with this drawing!! :D


thank you x3
when i finished it, she doesn't had markings because i couldn't think for fitting ones
but then i thought that she looks to "young" and when i played kingdoms of amalur and wandered off in the incredible ruins of this game i got the idea of making her markings that fit an ancestor x3
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Re: GOS - Neris Staff Litter

Postby HorseFan21♞ » Sun Nov 02, 2014 11:57 am

NeriHyuga wrote:
HorseBones13♞ wrote:Ohgod a GoS ANCIENT.

I feel honored. :lol: Neri really projected that really magestic and old feel with this drawing!! :D


thank you x3
when i finished it, she doesn't had markings because i couldn't think for fitting ones
but then i thought that she looks to "young" and when i played kingdoms of amalur and wandered off in the incredible ruins of this game i got the idea of making her markings that fit an ancestor x3


Well that certainly went well. ;) Alright I'll stop spamming this and try to decide which to try out for first XD
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Re: GOS - Neris Staff Litter

Postby Astraela » Mon Nov 03, 2014 6:03 pm

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Age: 675 years

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