by Beatnik » Mon Sep 29, 2014 3:47 am
Alright! So I have decided that out of the two forms, I think I preferred preferred Penumbra's. They were both stories about him being a teacher, but when I read through Koi's, I felt a bit uncomfortable with the dialogue. I spent some time in Britain and Scotland, so I feel you just chose the wrong accent/dialect to use on one of my contests. Maybe next time for a Scottish accent, cool down the usage of mate. nwn""
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