[koi97]

No, I'm fine! Can't wait to see who this cutie will go to though!

[stabbrielle]

I would love a little one so I can finish this artwork

[Beatnik]

Also for just a tip, if there was an explanation on your forms of how the 'prettying up' on the pseudo works (Makeup; stains; etc.) that would be a good booster.

[Teleo]

Do any of you need extensions? =w= I won't be allowing any new forms, but i can give some extra time for the weekend.

I kinda need one, if it's not too late... x3x

[stabbrielle]

My form is complete. The doodle didn't turn out the way I wanted, so I'm not adding it. :-P

Good luck everyone. I hope she goes to a good home where she will be spoiled with love and affection.

[Novi]

meep, good luck guys ; v ;

[Beatnik]

Alright, it's now 12:12 am for me, so I'm going to close this. =w= Should be a ru at least since I would like to get my 5 pseudos out.

[koi97]

Ah good luck to you all! I can't wait to see who this beauty will go to!

[Beatnik]

Username: CyrCryKun
Name: Kilian, meaning "small and fierce" in Irish.
Nickname: "Tiny"; his mother gave him this nickname when he was young, because he was the runt of the litter. However, if you call him this, you will certainly regret it.
Sex/Gender: Male.

Doll me up

Reference Sheet: Drawn by me
Description: I wanted to keep the same basic color palette, so there aren't really any different colors. However, I did make some major changes to the design, in terms of accessories/scars. For starters, I gave him a purple collar with teeth sticking out of it, and a bird skull attached to the front (as this character that I've made is in reference to the Warrior Cats character, Scourge). Next, we have the glove on his right paw. This glove has long, hooked blades attached to it; perfect for fighting and catching prey. His feathers are messy, and cover his eyes in some parts. He has a long, jagged scar running from his left eye to his right cheek, which has permanently blinded his left eye. There's also a scar on his rump, one on his lower right side, and two on his right shoulder. As far as non-genetic markings go, he has a darkly-colored, upside-down triangle on his right cheek, and the tips of both ears are the same dark color. He has three bands of this color on his left leg, while his paw is the same dark color. However, I took the pinks of the palette and used them as a natural gradient in between the bands. Kilian also bears a long, dark stripe running down his back to the upper half of his tail. Please note that I did not use any colors different from those used on the palette for the design itself. The only colors that are different from those on the palette are those of the accessories.
How the Markings are Possible: Nobody really knows this, but he markings are actually stained on. Kilian got an unknown substance splashed onto him while he was out walking one day, and only managed to get so much off before it dried. No matter how hard he tries to get the rest off, the stain would not come out. It's permanent, and to this day, he still loathes how he looks.
Basic Overview of Personality: Kilian is a fearsome gang leader, who is known for his trademark clawed glove. He is a born leader, and strikes fear into the hearts of many, despite his small stature. He's reserved, for the most part, and won't attack without reason. However, if you manage to get on his bad side, you will regret it. He can be rather sadistic and twisted when it comes to fighting, and shows no mercy. He shows no signs of remorse; not to women, the elderly, or even children. He believes that everyone dies for a reason; therefore, it does not matter how they die, or if they are taken before their time or not. He's very prideful, and will not hesitate to attack if you injure his ego. He is easily agitated, and will most likely give you a few scars if you get on his nerves. Contrast to his fierce personality, since most are afraid of him, Kilian is extremely lonely most of the time. He just wants a friend, but many are too scared of him to try and befriend him.
Art: "You Could Be Happy" - by me
"Welcome, New Guy!" - by me

Looking at just the basic form without the extras, I can tell you that I love the name; however, the first thing that striked me was that you scarred the Pseudo. Generally, I"m not very into people purposefully starting off with huge body scars in a form. Blinding generally bothers me as well.
After looking at the rest of the form, I thought you did a rather good job of explaining everything you could about the pseudos markings. You explained what the markings were at least. I only have problems with the collar and the two socks(?) One of them is the glove with the claws, and I'm not sure how well that would work when pseudos already have claws. I'm not sure if they other one is a sock or not, but it just seems a bit odd? I did giggle at the way you styled his feather mane though, cause I could only imagine depressed feathers for no reason.
All in all, it was a rather good form and pretty simple to read, but I'm just not sure how I feel about the way you dolled up the character.

Name: Dollia (doll-E-ah) Gender: Female

♥Lacey garter at the tail base♥
♥Heart marking on her neck♥
♥Heart shaped hair decals throughout her mane♥

She has small heart shaped decals placed randomly throughout her hair.
They are all nice and shiny and in various pastels.
They differ in size, but none are bigger than a quarter.

Dollia has a tiny heart marking
near where her neck and
head meet.
It is a darker pink color.

Her garter has a
baby blue base with
a pastel pink bow
in the middle.
Around the base of
the garter there are
tiny hearts cut out.
Along the edges of
the beloved accessory is
pristine white lace.

Form by T-ushii.Sorry it's so late, I only had time on the weekend.

I really think the idea of the accessories is rather well done, but it's hard for me to clearly picture it. You showed effort, but maybe not as much as a few others did. //w\\ The big thing that bothered me was the color of the text; it made it very hard to read.

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hopeful owner;; captain awesome

name;; Nadia

gender;; female

marking designs;; XXX
* disclaimer * the two blue feathers are not her natural feathers.

marking explanation;;
I thought long and hard about a concept for this girl's markings, and through all the thinking and scraps, I knew for sure that I wanted one thing: to keep it simple. I experimented with many different pallets. At one point venturing as far as a light limey green (thank gosh I decided against that). In the end I settled on this plum red kind of color. I love the way it looks on her creamy base. It pops but it's subtle enough to add a sense of simple elegance, the exact character that I want Nadia to have. The markings are made of a paint like stain that she found in the forest. Probably made from crushing flower petals. After having applied the elegant pattern so many times it had become permanently tattooed on her creamy colored scales. The color blue is something that I wanted to incorporate somewhere. Dusty blue is my favorite color. It's the color of the sky. It's the color of my mom's eyes. It's also the color of my baby blanket (which I proudly still own and sleep with today). I chose to put it into feathers because I see feathers as being something very precious to pseudos. They are used to attract potential mates and ward off competition. The feathers would be something highly prized to a pseudo. Although these two feathers do not originally belong to Nadia, she would treat the with same tender carefulness that she would treat her own. Above all I wanted to design markings that I would fall in love with, and I am proud to say that I have. She may not be as doll-like as you were expecting with the competition, but to me she is perfect. I want to take the time to thank you for this competition, Beat.

personality;;
Meek and mild are the first things that come to mind when one thinks of sweet Nadia. She's soft spoken, generous, loyal, and tries to keep on the good side of everyone she meets. Unfortunately, being friends with everybody often gets Nadia into a sticky situation when two friends fight. She always seems to be torn between the two and often struggles to the point of breaking down herself when trying to hear out both sides of the story, so when it comes to drama she tries to avoid it as much as possible. That doesn't mean she isn't there when someone needs her. Nadia is always the first to lend an ear when someone needs it; wether it's just discussing the weather or listening to a sobbing rant, Nadia is there to listen. Another thing about Nadia is that she wears her heart on her sleeve. She's very honest and upfront about her feelings, especially when it comes to her romantic relationships.
On the other hand, Nadia is often very naive and could easily be manipulated. This comes with being so trusting. Nadia knows she can't believe everything someone tells her, but she's always willing to give them the benefit of a doubt. Also, sadly, the pressure of listening to other's issues is heavy on Nadia's shoulders, as while she's busy hearing everyone else out she never truly gets to let off some steam herself. To her, it's not the proper thing to do to let your sorrows weigh down someone else.

Your explanation of the design was well done and rather sweet seeing as how it seems that you will definitely take care of this pseudo if you get her. Whenever I judge, my biggest worry is if people will take good care of the adopt. In this case, I don't think you will falter. Similar to the form Cry made, I do really appreciate knowing the designs are made by a staining. You explained a little in depth that she used flower petals to gain the color, and I really like that idea. I also imagine she smelled pretty good for a few days.

:~:Username:~:
:~Koi~:

:~:Name:~:
Shiro
~Japanese for White~

:~:Sex/Gender:~:
Female

:~:Doll me up:~:
The non-genetic markings.

Shiro's non-genetic markings are a form
of tattoos mixed with staining. As a child,
she loved swirly like markings along with
the color gold. Throughout most her childhood,
Shiro would put on hold paint into the design
she wanted, and when she created the design
you see today, she feel in love with it. Through
her years, the paint started to stain her body.
She saw this and was beyond happy. Later on,
she had a professional darken in the staining and
make it pop out against her pale color. The reason
it was gold because of her child hood love for
steam-punk items and clothing. She wanted the
color to match her obsession, which she did, and
she is very proud of the markings she has today.

Shiro loves to wear steam-punk gear.
She wears an old styled dress shirt with
a black and dark red vest. She also wears
a golden cravat with that. Shiro also wears
leather bracers on her front legs with the
buckles being gear like and straps wrapping
around them. While wearing this costume, Shiro
may add earrings and other items. Shiro also
has a long duster she can add to the outfit and
a top hat with steam-punk goggles around the
hat that she can wear. She also puts trinkets
on around her tail of different sized gears.
Shiro can also be found wearing gloves with
gears on the back of them. Shiro also has a
silver pocket watch she has with her outfit.
All the buckles and straps are styled to fit the
steam-punk theme she has.

:~:Personality:~:
~Hyper~Bubbly~Hot-headed~Witty~

:~Hyper~:
Shiro is hyper, and makes
it hard for her to focus. She can focus,
but it takes a lot of hard work to get her
to focus. Shiro mostly focuses on dressing
herself up as a steam-punk dragon, and is
often seen dashing about trying to gather parts
to add to her costume. She will bug others for
items she will need, and also loves to run around.
When working, you will see her pace around a lot,
and she can never seem to sit still, always shifting,
or trying to speak. Her hyperness has gotten her
into a lot of trouble, but she never seems to care.

:~Bubbly~:
Bubbly is another word
that can easily describe her. Shiro loves to
smile and be happy. She is hardly seen being
upset or hurt. With her bubbly trait, Shiro
loves to make others smile, but she is not
over bubbly, she just hate being depressed
or upset. She finds no need to be as long as
she has something to look forward to the
next day.

:~Hot-Head~:
Shiro is stubborn and can be
slightly temperamental, always jumping
head-first into many problems, which can
lead to many downfalls on her part. She is
quick to act, which can cause her to end up
with the blunt of the force. She can also be
hot-headed towards her friends if they try
changing her mind on something.

:~Witty~:
Shiro is also rather witty, but at
certain times, she can be dense about many
things. Shiro is smart, but thanks to her being
hyper, she can't focus very well, and most things
can fly over her head, but it can also help her
when coming up with witty come-backs and
playfull banters to start up with her friends.

I think the most defeating part of your form is the drawn design. I can't tell if all of those are markings, or maybe if one of the marks is supposed to be an accessory of sorts? I think the character is pretty well drawn out though, yet it seems to be a common personality, so it didn't redeem many points form-wise.

Username: Euphoria.
Name: Akem
Sex/Gender: Agender.
Theme Song: Four Walls
wip

You didn't get much done, but I really love the drawing you did for the pseudo considering I can kind of assume what the markings are? However, there still isn't much information to tell me much more on your form. ;w;




Alright, after long consideration over my two favorite forms, the winner of this Pseudo is Captain Awesome. However, I really appreciated Cry's entry, so I want to award them a RU. Your form really inspired me to do a certain design! ;w; Just tell me if you want a different mane color and I will begin some work on it!

[Novi]

I'd love a RU <333 Could the mane perhaps be black, with a white streak at the front?