Re: Parrapup # 71 - Gotta Go Fast - Open!

Postby Xhat » Sun Aug 10, 2014 1:40 pm

Beatnik wrote:Alright, so I think this one will be ending soon? Do any of you need more time? If so, I can give a few days, but otherwise, I'll go ahead and judge later on tomorrow?

    Could we possibly have a little extension?
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Re: Parrapup # 71 - Gotta Go Fast - Open!

Postby Rhys~ » Sun Aug 10, 2014 11:13 pm

Well,i don't need extension
but if other people need it,then i'm fine with waiting c:
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Re: Parrapup # 71 - Gotta Go Fast - Open!

Postby Beatnik » Mon Aug 25, 2014 2:46 pm

Ny<3 wrote:
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Username: Ny<3
Name: Flyn
Gender: male
Age: 14 years
Likes:
Sunny days Music deserts
running fast rain meeting friends
Dislikes:
noise bulling sadness helplessness stormbeing alonecoldness

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Flyn is an optimist and happy Parrapup. He loves to run and to feel the wind in his fur. The desert is Flyns home and there is all what he wants. He worms up really fast and makes frinds really easily. But sometimes hes a bit arrogant and he has a bit too much self-confidence. That brings him often in difficult situations, but with his charm, his skills and his cleverness he can always save the day. Flyn is a big music lover and sometimes (when hes sure that hes alone) he sings loud and happy. When hes sad or unmotivated music helps him to come to a good constitution.

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other (pictures etc) belongs to their rightful owners!
Thanks for all and good luck everyone:3


I just want to say first that I really love the song chosen. I'm listening to it now and it is such a creative choice. Otherwise, I love your form and I think it's good up to now, but more info would be nice to elaborate on his likes and dislikes! The art though is very cute and i love that it is of him singing. Biggest issue though was that you do not have the main thread marked. You DO have the nursery marked, but the main thread is the official adopts page. You can find it by clicking the link under the drawing that says "Based On"

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name
"My full name is Akua Isoba Lusala Ndiaye, but I just go by Akua."
gender
"I am a male. Isn't it obvious?"
song
Circle of Life - Elton John




















I ɪs ɴ ʙʏ sʟ, s, ʀ ʜʏsɪʟ xʀɪʏ ʜ ɢʀ ʜɪɴɢs ʀ ʜɪ,
ʙ ʙʏ ʀғʟɪɴ, ғʀ ғ ʜʀʀ, ɴ ɢɴ.

~ Mʀs Tʟʟɪs Cɪʀ


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Akua is a kind-hearted, level-headed parra. He is athletically built, but
doesn't always enjoy physical activity. In fact, he tends to hate it and
avoids it as much as possible. He is a loyal friend, and great at keeping
secrets since he has many himself. Whenever someone needs help, he
will usually be there to lend a helping paw. Unless, of course, he simply
dislikes the person. He is stubborn at times, usually in arguments, and
has trouble seeing others' sides during problems. He also will not change
his views easily, and that can cause many problems for him.


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Friday, May 13, 1994
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Taurus - The Bull
April 20 - May 20

Taurus zodiac signs and meanings,
like the animal that represents
them, is all about strength, stamina
and will. Stubborn by nature, the
Taurus will stand his/her ground
to the bitter end (sometimes even
irrationally so). But that's okay
because the Taurus is also a loving,
sympathetic and appreciative sign.
The Taurus is very understanding and
when we need someone to unburden
ourselves to, we often share our
deepest fears with the Taurians of the
zodiac. Taurians are very patient,
practical and efficient, they are
excellent in matters of business and are
also wonderful instructors/teachers.
Although initially they may have their
own best interest at heart, they are
ultimately & endlessly generous with
their time, possessions and love.

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The Dog
10 February 1994 - 30 January 1995

Dogs are loyal, faithful and honest
and always stick to their firm codes
of ethics. However, this Sign has
trouble trusting others. It's generally
quite trustworthy itself -- except for
the occasional little white lies the
Dog tells in order to make things go
more smoothly. The Dog makes a
wonderful, discreet and loyal friend
(despite any white lies) and is an
excellent listener. This Sign tends to
root for the underdog and its keen
sense of right and wrong makes it duty
-bound to the core. The Dog's mantra
seems to be, Live right, look out for the
little people and fight injustice whenever
possible. Dogs can also be rather dogmatic,
too. They don't go in for light social banter;
instead, they go straight for home,
expostulating on the topics that are most
important to them.

Metal

Diamond


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What's your favorite color, number and letter?

What are your hobbies?


Not really, no. More of a passtime. What do you like to
draw?

Okay. So, what's your favorite thing to write about?


That's interesting, you've got a pretty diverse writing skill.
Backtracking a little to your favorites, why?




Okay then. How about relationships with others? Do you
have a crush on anyone? Have you ever fallen in love?
What's your relationship with your parents like?




So you're pretty independent. Wasn't it lonely?


Would you consider yourself social, then? Or do
you still like to be alone sometimes?

That's always a good thing. So you do enjoy the
company of your friends?

Right. Moving on. Do you have any fears or phobias?


Alright. So, what exactly are those phobias?




I have one last question for you.
What is your favorite way to say goodbye?
Akua's answers
"Color: blue. Number: 13. Letter: Z."

"I like to read, write and draw, though you probably don't consider
reading a hobby. Do you?"

"Thought so. Well, I like to draw animals and sketch others parras."


"I mainly write fantasy and science fiction, but I also write romance
on occassion."


"Why? Well, I've always loved watching the clouds drift through the
sapphire blue sky, so that's why blue's my favorite color. The
number thirteen is because most people find it unlucky, but it's my
lucky number, and the letter 'Z' doesn't really have a particular
reason. I just like it."

"I'm pretty sure that's more than one question, but I'll answer them
anyway. No, I don't currently have a crush on anyone and I've never
fallen in love. Don't really plan on it either, but that might change.
As for my parents, I never really knew them. I was orphaned when
I was younger and have lived on my own ever since."

"Of course it was. However, since then I've met other parras and
made quite a few friends.

"There are times when I prefer to not be around a ton of people
and other parras, but I do consider myself pretty social."


"Yes. I'm pretty sure I just said that."

"Actually, yes. I have Astraphobia, Autophobia, Claustrophobia,
Coimetrophobia and Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia."

"Astraphobia is a fear of thunder and lightning. Autophobia, the
fear of being alone, Claustrophobia, the fear of tight places.
Coimetraphobia is the fear of cemeteries, and
Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia is the fear of the number 666."
*shudders*

"Sayonara."


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Art by me.
Phobias found here.


It's really cute the way you wrote out the interview, and I like the song quite a bit. My biggest issue would be that most of the details can be quite unoriginal: drawing, reading, and such. They are just fine if you can back them up with more details, but can become repetitive when you judge/see them quite often. Also, with your green text near the top, it becomes just a little too hard to read by just looking at it. Another thing pointed out to me by a judge was that the interview was very back and forth, and possibly could have been formatted better.

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Hello there - my name is CeselSpeaker. I'm currently a non-owner
but I am hoping to make this cutie my first. I fell in-love with
her the moment I laid my eyes on her. I wish good luck to the
other entrants, and thank you for giving me the chance to get
her.

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'Hayako'
[Hai-ak-oh]
Hayako is a feminine name of Japanese origin that means
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Hayako is a laid-back prankster and cheater who manipulates
her way through most things in life. Always with an ace up her
sleeve, it's almost impossible to beat her at any game - weather
it be a simple argument, or a game of cards. One things for
certain, if you'd want to win some cash, it's best to bet on her.
She can tend to be a little stuck-up at times, not having that
many friends and prefers to be alone - though, that doesn't
mean she doesn't have a soft side. This side of her is kind
and caring, tending to tread lightly around those she loves
to try not to hurt their feelings - but she rarely lets this side
show.

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I loved the small and short personality given since it gave a good over/sneak peek view of the character. The art is absolutely adorable to me and I can't stop looking out how squishy and shiny it is. I do like the fact you made the Parra a cheater since puns are amazing to me though can be over the top. Usually I hint at puns if I think it would be cool in a contest to be used. Overall, well done: Short and sweet.

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Username ;; I'm Xhat, it's a pleasure to meet you!

Name ;; This is Kasi, pronounced 'Kaw-see'.
If translated, Kasi roughly means 'speed' in Swahili.
Gender ;; In terms of gender, Kasi is female.

Personality ;; Intuitive - Mature - Finicky - Patronizing
Intelligent - Stingy
Song ;; I Just Wanna Run - Downtown Fiction

A Tale Under the Sun ;; "Sometimes life
throws challenges at you, but I was fast enough
to dodge them." - Kasi

Art in the Savannah ;; Sitting on a Rock - by me


You seem as if you already have a plan for this parra~ I must warn you sometimes xhat, you hide things in your form, and one of my judges completely overlooked it. Just be careful on using it sometimes! Still love your writing as usual though because it is wonderful.


The winner is Cesel! It took so long for me to decide because I really like xhat's story, but I also loved the art for Cesels. It mostly came down to the fact Cesel had all three extras done and xhat had only two.
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Re: Parrapup # 71 - Gotta Go Fast - Closed

Postby Xhat » Mon Aug 25, 2014 4:07 pm

    Congrats CeselSpeaker, take good care of Hayako~ <3
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What a beautiful Duwang ~
------------------------ Chew

hello! it's me: your friendly neighborhood
xhat. i'm obsessed with writing both fan-
fiction and my own original work!

my main fandoms right now are jojo's biz-
arre adventure, lord of the flies, kekkai
sensen, danganronpa, and pokemon.

i'm always looking for a good roleplay! i only
do semi-lit and lit roleplays. pm me if you
have something you'd think i'd like! right now
i'm interested in fandom roleplays.

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---------as pretty as this town.


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Re: Parrapup # 71 - Gotta Go Fast - Closed

Postby Rhys~ » Mon Aug 25, 2014 4:31 pm

Omg
thank you so much!

I'll take good care of her! <333
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