[conquest;]

i don't need an extension c:

[.starfish]

I need an extension!
Please don't close it now!
I have no way of doing art until after Sunday
Maybe end it middle of next week?

[koegami]

i'll probably just need today/ tomorrow at the latest to finish
if thats alright with you; so an extension would be nice please
and thanks

[Beatnik]

unless i have at least 3 votes soon, this closes

Pachoo extends and Judges: 2
I end it and judge now: 2

[rochester.]

Extension, please.

[Aethyrr]

I don't really need an extension. Whoever didn't finish either didn't care or forgot while all others hurried and worked hard. It's unfair to those who actually finished. But if it's an extension, maybe one day. Like tomorrow judging

[Beatnik]

Kk, since we have no tie-breakers, I will start my judging by doing something I've always wanted to do: I am going to go through each post at a time and give feedback. To me, this seems like proper judging. I will skip over unfinished posts.

[Beatnik]

I changed my mind, I just can't keep away <3

Oaĸenѕнιeld


Gaius Octavian


Male


Tavi's passion is to make arrows. Not many people do that, but he thinks it's really interesting. He makes arrows out of thick, oak wood, goose feathers and a stone arrow-head. He finds and makes each part himself then sticks them together with sap or another kind of sticky substance. He doesn't use the arrows for anything specific, but he sometimes gives them away. Most of the time he keeps them as his own treasures. It's an odd hobby to others, but it keeps him calm and happy.


Tavi was always the one to go on adventures and get into trouble. They called him quite the little troublemaker often. He would always get into things he wasn't supposed to like it as some game. He would wander around far beyond his home often as well. He could never sit still in one place for too long or he'd get fidgety. So hyper would be another way to describe him. Although he adventures away, he always came back because he couldn't stand being away from the things he knew well for too long. He grows attached to many things easily, creatures or objects. Tavi was on the creative side compared to everyone else. While they sat, he daydreamed about what he could make. He could make just about anything out of any resource he found.



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Tavi has a close relationship with Zuma here. They met one evening when Tavi was exploring the jungle where he lived. He found Zuma when she suddenly fell on him from a tree. They were friends ever since. Both of them go on the same adventures together, as both love to travel the world. They will only separate for a week or two, but they don't leave each other easily.





Lazy art is by me.
Lazy dividers by me.

1. There's a bit too much fancy font for my taste. I usually prefer one for big titles or a name to start the form. owo Haha, plus you used 'Name' twice. This won't take away though, I'm not going for coding.
2. I really like the passion, it's different and isn't stereotypical. nwn
3. Personality is a little one sided on the good side, not so much the flaws, but once again, it can only add to your form since I didn't ask for it.
4. The relationship section is cute, as well as I like that you have a green and yellow pair. It's uncommon sometimes for people to choose colors that don't match or compliment each other.
5. I really like the art: You must have paid very close attention to the stripes since most of them are there!

[.starfish]

Well good luck everyone
I didn't know exactly when this ended so I'm on vacation with no wifi on my comouter.
I hope she goes to a good home!

[Beatnik]

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conquest; | brendan | male | catching & observing geckos

likes//
geckos
the outdoors
spicy foods
getting dirty
adventuring
being a hero
sleeping
marshmallows
campfires
exploring
company
iced tea
nature

dislikes//
staying inside
video games
cold weather
swimming
being alone
books
the zoo
chocolate
most sweets
popsicles
authority
coffee
night time

personality//
Brendan is a very outdoorsy kind of dragon. He despises staying
inside for a long period of time, accept for when sleeping. He
prefers the shelter of indoors when it is dark outside, as odd as
it seems. The dragon is afraid of the dark.
His one true passion is studying geckos. He loves to document
all of the different species he's found in a journal that he keeps
around him at all times. He has had a love of the little lizards
since he was small. He's not even sure what caused the particular
fondness to them, but nevertheless, he will spend hours on end
searching for one.
He's also very silly. Brendan has a child-like nature that most would
find annoying. He loves to make jokes and cause others to laugh if
they aren't in a good mood.

1. The coding is very nice and clean, but your borders are very colorful and a bit too bold. They draw your attention when you are reading. It's fine though, I don't judge off coding! owo/
2. You neatly put all of the required information at the top.
3. separating the needed info from the added is very nice to look at.
4. The likes are a bit repetitive. They could be simplified such as: nature, going outdoors, and adventuring = "Adventuring out possibly in more rural places, but anywhere will do!" With the coding you used though, what you did is appropriate! Maybe next time though, find more different interests!
5. Personality isn't exactly personality, as much as it is a Bio. owo I see this happen all of the time though. Sometimes I have to do it in competitions to keep up with everyone else. =w=" So besides that, it is well written and the color isn't eye burning.
6. The dislikes are similar to the likes.
Final note: the art doesn't exactly match the passion. It's very nice looking art, but I would have preferred art showing what the passion is, and it looks more like he's trying to shake its hand/claw/little gecko phalanges. I won't mark you down for it though since it's still matching the passion!
Questions: He collects geckos. Where does he keep them? Or does he only document them in a book?